I Have Failed...

[ferret]

I was going to put this in the funny toy pics thread but decided it deserved its own. it in the style of a comic strip... And well, it's not so funny. i'm a beginning photographer, and I'm sorry some of the pics are out of focus. Comments would be appreciated. hope you enjoy :)

EDIT: UPDATED WITH DIALOGUE

http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd132/ferret_gt500/AATMNTFIGHTSHREDDER1-1.jpg

http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd132/ferret_gt500/AATMNTFIGHTSHREDDER2-1.jpg

http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd132/ferret_gt500/AATMNTFIGHTSHREDDER3-1.jpg

http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd132/ferret_gt500/AATMNTFIGHTSHREDDER4-1.jpg

http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd132/ferret_gt500/AATMNTFIGHTSHREDDER5-1.jpg

http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd132/ferret_gt500/AATMNTFIGHTSHREDDER6-1.jpg

[Kunoichi_Haruko]

These pics need captions. The decapitations need an explanations. ;) I sort of like some of the blurs-- makes it seem action-packed.

[Masked Ninja]

Whoa, bummer for Leo. I was going to say he didn't strike me as a suicide kind of guy, but then again... in this situation I can totally see it.

I do like the blurs and extreme closeups - they make it feel like stills from a movie or animation instead of still shots of toys. :D That one shot of Mikey manages to make his stupid grin actually look like a horrified grimace.

It takes a couple read-throughs to understand, but I almost think that adding dialogue or sound effects would kill it. All in all, I like it. Nicely done.

[ferret]

By blurs I meant the way everything is blurry in the wide shots... But I guess they seem to work. :) I updated the thing with dialogue, so thanks for the suggestion. Thanks everyone who responded:D It was a lot of fun to make!

[Voltron]

Shredder can kick your head off? Now that's talent!

Leo can think without a head? I'm even more impressed.

[BubblyShell22]

Wow! Great creation, Ferret! Poor Leo! I feel so sorry for him. Awesome job on this.

[triplexxx]

I wonder if Donatello would've felt that way after he slay Shredder in SAINW had he not returned to the present, undid that future, and reunited with his brothers.

[ferret]

Shredder can kick your head off? Now that's talent!

Leo can think without a head? I'm even more impressed.

Lol yeah... he did have spikes on his shins.

Leo never actually lost his head, though I imagine he broke his neck...

I wonder if anyone noticed the typo "so where my brothers" instead of "were"?

Thanks for all the responces :P Keep 'em coming! :D

[cowabunga14]

Good stuff, ferret! I like the narration and the gritty feel you gave this. Keep it up!

[ferret]

:gasp: You mean... Do more? I didn't even think of doing that but its a great idea... Maybe I should. :)

Heh heh maybe I should have Splinter out to have revenge on Shredder's closest relative, Karai!

[Slap-Happy]

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