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persephohi
03-21-2003, 03:17 PM
Okay, so it's not a HUGE redesign, I just changed a few things and streamlined her a bit. I always thought she was rather cool, and when my Turtles obsession reared up again I just started redesigning old characters for the sake of fun. Her origin got a little makover as well, but that's neither here nor there in regards to the picture. ;) Feedback is appreciated as I'm pathetic and need love. Vindicate meeee! http://www.gamers-forums.com/smilies/cwm/cwm/face45.gif

http://www.geocities.com/deadpool69612/ninjaraclr.jpg

--Bevin[/url]

CookSux
03-21-2003, 03:19 PM
BTW the BBCode is [URL] instead of [LINK].. and I can't see it yet... stupid geocities.

persephohi
03-21-2003, 03:21 PM
Yeah, I just got the code thing. Sheesh, too many codes to remember. *brain fries* Yeah, I hate Geocities, but I'm poor and can't afford to buy my own server yet. Blah. What helps, though, is copying and pasting the URL, for some reason. Dont' ask me why.

--Bevin

Kali
03-21-2003, 03:29 PM
Geocities doesn't allow direct linking of images. Many free sites don't. I know, I've got a couple sites on Geocities myself, you always have to copy and paste images.

Of course, now I'm getting a transfer overload error, so I'll check back later.

Donatello02
03-21-2003, 03:50 PM
WHOA That's a cool Ninjara!

kyabetsu
03-21-2003, 03:53 PM
damn. that's hot stuff. i'm MOST impressed.

oooo... funky....
:D

CookSux
03-21-2003, 03:59 PM
Hey, that's pretty good. Her face is a little too wolf like tho, but not bad not bad. Bigger boobies would look nice too :roll: The brown however does look a little too saturated for the picture, but then again it could just be me.

Dontebell
03-21-2003, 04:22 PM
nice pic.
hey can you draw her with raphael?

cqb101
03-21-2003, 05:24 PM
Cool pic........

Jephael
03-21-2003, 05:35 PM
That is very nice artwork. Kinda looks like one of the egyptian characters in #32 of the original Mirage series

persephohi
03-21-2003, 08:55 PM
Donatello02, Kyabetsu, cqb101-- Thanks! :)

CookSux-- Thanks, and yeah she looks a little wolfish but I really don't draw animals so I just kinda fake it instead of looking at references like I should. I'm lazy. ;)

dontelbell-- I'm actually just finishing one that I rather like. I'll post it when I get to my scanner. :)

Jephael-- Sadly, I don't have that issue. I need more of the old Mirage stuff, I only have the four compilations of the first issues and then another compilation of some later issues that involved the leech guy.

Thanks for the responses, everyone!

--Bevin

Shadow
03-21-2003, 09:07 PM
she reminds me of the egyptian dog images you see in artifacts from old.

HorseTechie
03-21-2003, 09:18 PM
Oh, I like this style of Ninjara too. Dos have that egyptian styling, come to think of it.

And... I think her boobs are fine. If they were any bigger, she would have to worry about nicking one (considering the pose she's in). j/k! :wink:

Leo656
03-21-2003, 10:19 PM
Y'know HT, sometimes I wonder just which of us is more screwed up. :P

Not that that's a BAD thing, mind you.

CookSux
03-22-2003, 01:17 AM
I think the reason it looks so "Egyptian" to you guys is because the head looks like the Jackel's head... and she needs some boobs, to look somewhat more asthetically pleasing. Regardless, it's the head that throws everyone off. It's a perfectly good head, but I can't see it being a female's...

Kali
03-22-2003, 04:52 PM
Wow, I like the style. The head does look a bit jackal/Egyptian-ish to me, and it does throw the aesthetics off a bit. But other than that, the composition and coloring is great.

Nickokapo
03-22-2003, 05:50 PM
I agree, she needs boobs! :P or you could leave them out too, that way people would actually check the whole drawing and not just that :lol:
Well as i said in the other drawing i like how ninjara looks :D she seems a bit skinny but that's just me.
Good job :thumbsup:

persephohi
03-24-2003, 01:48 AM
You men and your boobies. :roll: :lol: She does actually have some, it's just difficult to tell with her arm placement and the coloring job I did. I'll make sure you see them in the next picture. ;)

Getting a lot of Egyptian comments so I think it's time for me to hit the drawing board and modify her a bit. Been doing WAY too much kitsune research for people to be thinking she's some kind of Japanese jackal or something. :P Thanks for all the feedback, guys, it's a big help.

--Bevin

Duke
03-25-2003, 01:03 AM
Nice drawing but i'm with the others who thinks she looks alot like an egyptian jackel and she does need some boobs. But other than that its a very well drawn pic.

persephohi
03-25-2003, 02:18 AM
I'm so tempted to draw her with shockingly disproportioned boobs now it's not even funny. :D But I will work on the things people have mentioned. ;)

--Bevin

CookSux
03-25-2003, 02:22 AM
Haha we're not talkin about exaggerating body parts, it's more like making her look feminine. BTW anyone thought that Ninjara looked kinda cute in the issue where Future Don and Raph came in through the time portal in the Future Shark Trilogy?

Kali
03-25-2003, 07:13 AM
I'm so tempted to draw her with shockingly disproportioned boobs now it's not even funny. :D
*snicker* Reminds me of how some people commented that boobs on reptilian girls isn't realistic, but on the other hand shouldn't fox-girls and such have mutiple pairs? o.O? I couldn't resist drawing a comic about it. XD

kyabetsu
03-25-2003, 07:23 AM
if you're gonna call for the whole "correct anatomy for the animal"... uh... then ninjara, though many pairs of teats she may have, would be COMPLETELY flat-chested except if you intended to have her nursing/whelping fox kits.

and just for the record, I LIKE the amount of boob in the Ninjara picture. She's a trained warrior! She's got a thin build to boot! Muscles and low body fat generally mean that a girl's NOT got too much breast meat. She's ripped and whip-thin and wiry. You can't be a butt-kicking, dangerously bad-ass mo-fo without MAD MUSCLES.

Besides, amazon warriors were rumoured to cut OFF their bow-arm-side breast so they could draw and fire a bow and arrow accurately without getting all that female crap in the way. Talk about hardcore.

So yeah, if you're looking for a "Pillowy Soft" Ninjara, boys, i'd suggest you buy a plushie. I think the athletic build looks good on her.

Kali
03-25-2003, 08:00 AM
Besides, amazon warriors were rumoured to cut OFF their bow-arm-side breast so they could draw and fire a bow and arrow accurately without getting all that female crap in the way. Talk about hardcore.
That's something I never really understood. I mean, I'm okay with a bow and arrow and I'm a D-cup. *scratches her head* 'Course, I think I would use a guard/reducer if I took it up again.

Though I agree, female warriors and athletes, for the most part, tend to be light in the bust area. If you want a curvy, feminine (not to mention dripping wet) Ninjara, that would be my latest work of "art". :lol:

Bah, who needs realism. :D

kyabetsu
03-25-2003, 09:46 AM
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

now that i can post my pictures directly to the BOARD, you'll NEVER get rid of me. :evilgrin: :evilgrin: :evilgrin: :evilgrin:

anyways, here's some FOXY fan-service for all y'all who said, "We want boobies!"

http://pic6.picturetrail.com/VOL144/1002116/1866820/22245383.jpg

my god, it's SO OUT OF CHARACTER, IT HURTS.... but yeah. if Ninjara was FEMININE. and owned a latex dress... mmm. rubber. uh. yeah. i'm done now. bye.

HorseTechie
03-25-2003, 10:32 AM
Besides, amazon warriors were rumoured to cut OFF their bow-arm-side breast so they could draw and fire a bow and arrow accurately without getting all that female crap in the way. Talk about hardcore.
That's something I never really understood. I mean, I'm okay with a bow and arrow and I'm a D-cup. *scratches her head* 'Course, I think I would use a guard/reducer if I took it up again.

Though I agree, female warriors and athletes, for the most part, tend to be light in the bust area. If you want a curvy, feminine (not to mention dripping wet) Ninjara, that would be my latest work of "art". :lol:

*lol* I was about to jump in and say this too, but you gals (unlike those testosterone driven men) picked up on what I was hinting at! :P But hay... I'm proud member of the tiny titty committee, so I shouldn't be talking. :goofygri:

*sees Kya's offering* Whooa yeah... there's some hooters for ya'll! ...Reminds me of this one time a fanboy asked Kevin to draw a pic of april with 'big eyes' (Kevin's slang term) and thus he draws these two big circles, with a little stick person head, arms and legs sticking out inbetween. :lol:

CookSux
03-25-2003, 10:34 AM
Ahaha ^ BTW when I was talkin about the boobage, I wasn't talkin about crazy tig ol' bitties. I'm talkin about moderate enough to tell that it's a female character. Sure the legs do it just fine, but women aren't completely flat chested... and if any are, I feel sorry for them.

Kali
03-25-2003, 10:46 AM
LOL, Kya! Heh heh, well, they did ask for it. :P

Actually, speaking of gender indentification, the waist-hip ratio is more of a "standard" than the chest. The "ideal" (ideal as in healthy, fit, able to bear healthy children) woman's waist-hip ratio is 3/4, if I remember correctly, while a male's was 9/10. The chest is just more obvious to some people.

Deepflame
03-25-2003, 11:10 AM
Whoah! Just realized I hadn't left any comments, kinda strange, checked by several times :|

But basic, it's what the others say, egyptian style blah blah... Nevertheless, it's way cooool ;)

@Kyabetsu: Aagh!! That's scary! Keep it away!! <dies, kinda>

persephohi
03-25-2003, 02:48 PM
*dies laughing* http://smilies.jeeptalk.org/otn/realhappy/xxrotflmao.gif

Nickokapo
03-25-2003, 02:56 PM
ROFL :lol:
That's quite disturbing, i thought boobs would make her look more feminine, but not 2 frickin' huge balloons :lol:
Ugh...HOW CAN SHE WALK WITHOUT FALLING DAMNIT http://smilies.jeeptalk.org/otn/realhappy/xxrotflmao.gif

kyabetsu
03-25-2003, 04:03 PM
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
silly boys! i drew her w/ BEYOND MORTAL 'MOUNTS OF CLEVAGE b/c i was just teasing w/ y'all!! i think that the calls for more breast-meat were the funniest dang things! and for the sake of humor, i was more than happy to oblige. silly silly men.

At least us fangirls don't demand that artists give the guys the equivalent of tube socks down their pants!!

i really do believe she looks best as Persephohi drew her original. i like the snakey, wiry, whipchord, kick-ass, fangy-fangy look on her.

but yeah. i imagine that my Ninjara (Queen of Balloons) prolly walks the same way Jessica Rabbit does: VERY CAREFULLY. heh.

"I'm not BAD-- I'm just DRAWN that way." --J. Rabbit.

Nickokapo
03-25-2003, 09:50 PM
:roll: I just thought she'd look more feminine if she had a set of, yknow...but obviously you guys thought im some kinda sicko.
Well then since everything here's either black or white and there's no gray i guess i'll have to draw my own version of ninjara :ohwell:
See why i stick to drawing males now? :P
PS: i usually dont draw the lower part of the body because i suck at it, but when i do there's no need to draw "tube socks down their pants" ( :lol: ) it looks natural if you dont, because, there's this thing called underwear yknow :P
Unless i gotta draw em in underwear...but i dont.

Apple Cat
03-25-2003, 10:14 PM
---delete this

Nickokapo
03-25-2003, 10:16 PM
Your definition of hot differs a lot from mine o.ô i wont deny its well drawn for a joke pic tho.

Shadow
03-25-2003, 10:51 PM
very well drawn kya! but doesn't she look like she belongs on jerry springer or something now? :lol: expecially with the rubber outfit?

I can see it now: Next time of Jerry: Ninja's with implants and their fettish for rubber!

:lol: :lol:

Duke
03-26-2003, 12:50 AM
Ahaha ^ BTW when I was talkin about the boobage, I wasn't talkin about crazy tig ol' bitties. I'm talkin about moderate enough to tell that it's a female character. Sure the legs do it just fine, but women aren't completely flat chested... and if any are, I feel sorry for them.

Agreed. Big enough to make her look like a female but not huge. Although LOL @ kya's pic.

Nickokapo
03-26-2003, 08:45 AM
:roll: That's what i meant too, kinda like what she looks like in archie.
Here's what i mean:
http://www.angelfire.com/linux/sitehpwnage/NinjaraHasTeatsOMGCallTheCensoringParentsAssociati on.jpg
I'll do a separate thread for that one, just wanted to show what i meant

Kali
03-26-2003, 09:30 AM
BTW, guys, we, or at least I don't think you were "sick" or anything because you thought she'd look better in a higher cup size. Truth is, in Archie, she did have boobs. It was just the fact that all of you said that she needed boobs... I thought that was funny.

Don't worry, we fangirls have our own fan service demands. I, for one, am still rooting for a Raphael shower scene in the new cartoon when they do "The King", based on the Donatello one-shot.

Nickokapo
03-26-2003, 09:41 AM
I just thought you guys took my comment in a wrong way :goofygri: i guess i'm just too used to the archie version of her, either way ill be more careful on what i comment next time :roll:
And yes i was going to mention most fangirls not needed to ask other artists to re-draw the males' pants since they draw their own pics of that kinda nature :P but decided not to, its not that i think that's wrong either, its there if ya wanna look at it good, if not, not, i just didnt wanted ninjara to have breasts so she would look "hot" or whatever, i thought it'd look more feminine or something, i guess i didnt express myself well enough.

CookSux
03-26-2003, 09:49 AM
I don't think they got wangs to begin with... and where would it sprout from? :dead:

Nickokapo
03-26-2003, 09:59 AM
Some say they got in inside the shell but...i'd rather not go there :sweatdro:

HorseTechie
03-26-2003, 11:09 AM
No..no..no... take it from this science major, male turtles keep their package in the base of their tail. It's 'sheathed' away inside, much like how cats n dogs keep it up.

Hence the reason why I pity the poor Turtles in certain universes who are without a tail. :wink:

Nickokapo
03-26-2003, 11:25 AM
So people confusing the turtles' tails with penises in the mirage comics were partly right? :blanksta:

Shadow
03-26-2003, 12:19 PM
Don't worry, we fangirls have our own fan service demands. I, for one, am still rooting for a Raphael shower scene in the new cartoon when they do "The King", based on the Donatello one-shot.

kali...i think you and i would pretty much root for anything where raphael is wet. :evilgrin:
For example when he got a way from baxter and hun in the way of invisibilty...and jumped off the boat...I was like, "wow raphs wet...too bad he has to flee for his life...other wise...he and some cutie-pie fan girl might have enjoyed that moment!" :evilgrin:

kyabetsu
03-26-2003, 01:25 PM
lol. thanks, Apple Cat... and Shadow... heh. my speciality is pictures from "THE TMNT CHARS. JERRY SPRINGER EXTRAVAGANZA."

ask Machias or Kali. I DO like drawing the characters "true to form" but there are SO many artists that do that. So yeah, i also "play" w/ them: in drag, chibi style, parodies of 1950's sitcom stereotypes/chars., ... yeah so my turtles/chars. prolly need therapy by the time i'm done drawin' them. but... heh. it's FUN!

and yeah, i'd be QUEEN of the HYPOCRITES if i was calling you guys "sick" for the boob-demands. I hope you really don't think i think you're perverts or something. I'm with Kali. It was the NUMBER of boob requests that had me laughing.

it's ALL in good fun. i was MORE than happy to draw it, and i'm glad so many of you got a chuckle out of it.

persephohi
03-26-2003, 02:18 PM
LOL! My, what an interesting direction this thread's taken. :lol: I hope that no one thought I was calling them sick for wanting boobs on her (which I swear she actually does have), I don't think that at all. As for that picture, just think of it as she has some major support going on. Heck, ladies, I think most of us can agree that when you're doing anything athletic, you want there to be minimul room for movement, there, that can hurt. :sick: So just think of it as her being taped, or something, if that helps. In the meantime I'm working on some pictures of her in better poses, which might help ease the "boobage" controversy. ;)

--Bevin

Nickokapo
03-26-2003, 02:37 PM
That's ok :P
I just thought "hmmm...something's missing here" :lol: but again, im used to the archie version of ninjara, that's all, i should've shut my mouth.
And yes, this thread has taken another direction it seems :P

persephohi
03-26-2003, 02:52 PM
Naw, you're fine, I really don't mind criticism (in fact I encourage it, provided it doesn't go overboard) and I appreciate that people cared enough to comment at all. :)

--Bevin

Jarrah White
02-17-2004, 11:02 PM
I know this is a really old topic but,



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