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Brandatello
07-20-2011, 01:55 PM
i am a college student studying graphic design and i have done some neat things in my first year of college.
This one is unfinished as of today it needs something but i cant figure it out..

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/050/f/2/g_is_for_explosions_wip_by_brandatello-d39x0dj.png

This one i wish was a little cleaner but i sketched it and inked it and live trace is not the best sometimes soo yeah..

http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/050/6/5/billie_joe_armstrong_stylized_by_brandatello-d39wzua.png

this is a playing card i did completely in illustrator..im happy with it but my teacher nitpicked it..

http://th06.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/050/c/3/billie_joe_armstrong_the_king_by_brandatello-d39wvzb.png

i will post more if you guys want to see some more..

pl212
07-20-2011, 10:01 PM
I would have to agree with your teacher lol
Heres what I see that needs to be fixed:

• The white border should be even on ALL sides.
• The heart should also have the same spacing all around it.
• The top of the K should be aligned with the red.
• It seems too busy maybe you can find another solution.

but overall its a nice concept :D
sorry for the critique but I like helping, im also a graphic designer.

Brandatello
07-20-2011, 10:07 PM
thats exactly what the teacher said but im too stubborn to change it...lol
your fine as a future designer i like critique that's exactly what i made this thread for...so thank you!

Spitfire
07-20-2011, 10:31 PM
Ah I did an assignment like this, in high school though. I like the style you're doing. The card isn't bad. My issue with it is the cut out around the K and heart looks awkward. The clean straight cuts seem out of place with all the rough design around it. I also agree a thicker boarder at the top and bottom would help.

You have a blog or a DA page with more of your stuff on it? Here's mine. I got some old wallpapers on there and some new graphics I just did for my band.
http://spitfire666xxxxx.deviantart.com/gallery/

Brandatello
07-20-2011, 10:45 PM
heres my da but i havent put alot of designs on there yet.
http://brandatello.deviantart.com/

pl212
07-21-2011, 05:32 PM
thats exactly what the teacher said but im too stubborn to change it...lol
your fine as a future designer i like critique that's exactly what i made this thread for...so thank you!

Lmao! yea i know what you mean, it's like when you like something, no matter what anyone tells you, you still dont want to change anything about it lol

Brandatello
07-22-2011, 07:02 PM
added some new stuff to my da i dont want to keep posting full size images here so if you want to see it go to http://brandatello.deviantart.com/

Brandatello
03-09-2013, 08:26 PM
Heres something i designed for the nick tmnt show. some of you may have seen it on my DA page. also is a t-shirt i designed for a contest for a radio station.