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kaiokanex3
06-06-2012, 12:06 AM
http://soundcloud.com/tcfbgang/i-wanna-waffle

thoughts.

Jester
06-06-2012, 12:17 AM
http://soundcloud.com/tcfbgang/i-wanna-waffle

thoughts.
http://t2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcToW6cU6hKn9nFI-estEqSyAkM6XcbXeN2PTl-tic-75N5wBn2Kp_8YAaX-Ug

Master Splinter
06-06-2012, 06:29 AM
http://t2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcToW6cU6hKn9nFI-estEqSyAkM6XcbXeN2PTl-tic-75N5wBn2Kp_8YAaX-Ug

I don't care if it's trolling this is great. Here is my constructive feedback. The second artist to rap, he needs to bring his vocals up. Compared to the first artist the levels are much lower. Your interlude also needs to be brought up, it's hard to hear. Lastly, at the end the beat rises up and then fades out. The rise up throws it off, just fade out.

All in all though this is great. Makes me want a waffle, and I actually had awful pancakes last night.

-ms

kaiokanex3
06-06-2012, 09:27 AM
I don't care if it's trolling this is great. Here is my constructive feedback. The second artist to rap, he needs to bring his vocals up. Compared to the first artist the levels are much lower. Your interlude also needs to be brought up, it's hard to hear. Lastly, at the end the beat rises up and then fades out. The rise up throws it off, just fade out.

All in all though this is great. Makes me want a waffle, and I actually had awful pancakes last night.

-ms

LOL , thank you. & thats pretty ironic & amazing that you had awful pancakes last night

Master Splinter
06-06-2012, 10:39 AM
LOL , thank you. & thats pretty ironic & amazing that you had awful pancakes last night

I know and I actually thought about making waffles instead. 8)

-ms