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Storm Wolf
08-21-2002, 03:10 PM
The Lone Wolf's Song
The lone wolf trail
The one I run
No pack nor mate
This trail is no fun
Eyes filled with fear
no beast to be seen
No wolf was there
To lick my wound clean
When the hunter came
And put a bullet in my head
It wont be long now
I'll soon be dead
No pack nor mate
My future looks bleak
As I lay in the snow
Tired and weak
I take one last look
I start to cry
Now it's time for me to die
I close my eye's
take one last breath
And slip silently
Into a lonely death
-Tiger
ok whatcha think it was my very first one soooo be nice. :P
angryash
08-21-2002, 03:53 PM
that is so wicked i wish i was as good a poet as you
Wow, nice. Man, I haven't done poetry in such a long time...
azure turtle
08-21-2002, 07:00 PM
Ooh, coolness! I like it. I never liked writing poetry (we were forced to in a few English classes I took... ugh), but I like reading it. Strangely enough, one of my favorite poets is Robert Frost. :anime:
Nturtle
08-21-2002, 07:33 PM
Wow!! very good!!! Especially for a vegitarian such as myself!! I can't write serious poetry only silly stuff :goof:
Storm Wolf
08-21-2002, 07:52 PM
lol....actually this one came outta nowhere, usually when i am made to write it's not so good.
Little_Ebony_Filly
08-22-2002, 10:12 AM
good job cuz lol opps i was made to say that u know the elephants did it lol j/k it is good
angryash
08-22-2002, 10:56 AM
i ll tell you somthing you auto start a book if you have any moore like that
Little_Ebony_Filly
08-23-2002, 10:06 AM
i have one to cuz u got to read it!! it is called love lol ttyl,lylas came up with it last night by
Storm Wolf
08-24-2002, 10:57 AM
hmmmm......i have a collection of all my favorite poems already but not one of my own......sooooo.
Little_Ebony_Filly
08-26-2002, 10:01 AM
hey every1 read mine (yes cuz i am making stuff on urs so ppl see mine :evilgrin: ) plz go check it out. it would mean so much to me
The Angel Queen
11-24-2002, 02:43 PM
yeah great poem ! it is better than the other 2 and they are good poems 2 ! 8)
Kingkapong
11-24-2002, 05:52 PM
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Storm Wolf
11-26-2002, 09:41 AM
hehe....this was one of the first poem I ever wrote about two years ago!
The Angel Queen
11-26-2002, 02:54 PM
that was a long time ago !! guess you got a reason to have not shown me this one ! :wink:
Storm Wolf
11-26-2002, 02:56 PM
Yeah....thats when I used to hang out with your sister a lot....back then I had only saw you like once :P
The Angel Queen
11-26-2002, 03:37 PM
yep i know !
that was back when you didnt know what a sweet little angel i am !
Storm Wolf
11-27-2002, 08:44 AM
ROTFL! :lol: Angel!......Hhahahaha!
*stops laughing*
oh....you weren't kidding? :P
The Angel Queen
11-27-2002, 03:13 PM
ha ha ha real funny tiger powers !
it is kinda funny of how we keep up with all these thing that we talk together in ! what we got like 8 different coversations goinig on between us plus the notes we write back and forth in class that we keep up with and dont get confused about ! its easy ! :lol:
Storm Wolf
11-28-2002, 07:26 AM
I'd just like to inform you that your brain is kicking in....don't be scared....I know how much time you spend trying not to act smart but.....it didn't work.
The Angel Queen
11-28-2002, 12:00 PM
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
your realy are funny Tiger powers !
but dont worry i wont get scared ! and if i do i'll just throw things at you !!! :evilgrin:
Storm Wolf
11-29-2002, 07:59 AM
:o Hey why me!!! It's your brain! :o
The Angel Queen
11-29-2002, 02:31 PM
you would make good target practice !!! :evilgrin:
throws water balloon at Tiger Powers :evilgrin:
Storm Wolf
11-29-2002, 03:19 PM
EEP!! :o
*ducks the water balloon*
But I didn't do anything I swear!
*scurries behind a rock*
Oh....and just to let everyone know this poem has been copywrited and is going to be published in an upcoming poetry book due in winter 2003...it has also made it to the semi-finals!! so cross your fingers and wish me luck I'm going for the grand prize baby! :D :D :lol:
The Angel Queen
11-30-2002, 03:11 PM
how much is the grand prize ?
throws another balloon at Tiger Powers :evilgrin:
Storm Wolf
11-30-2002, 08:33 PM
10,000.00 in cash....
*ducks*
hehe you missed :P :roll:
The Angel Queen
12-01-2002, 11:30 AM
just to let you know i am your friend and want you to win !!! so if you win you should share the cash with me !!!! 8)
*snickers* Have they required you to buy the book yet? Watch it if they do.
The Angel Queen
12-01-2002, 01:19 PM
what book ?
*points up* The poetry book. I entered a poetry contest once and made the finals. They said I would be published in the book, and have a chance at the $10,000 prize. My friend was also a finalist. Well, the letter said we would have to BUY this $50+ book. I couldn't afford it, but my friend bought it. When she got it, my poem wasn't in the book.
Not saying all contests are like that, but some are.
The Angel Queen
12-01-2002, 01:47 PM
they cant force you to buy a book that is stupid :|
That's how they fund their project. It's like a lottery. The money people pay to buy their copy of the book goes to pay for printing and the prize money. You don't pay, you can't play. It is a business after all.
The Angel Queen
12-01-2002, 03:17 PM
i guess i wouldnt be able to play then cause i sure woulnt pay for a book that im not gonna read!
i like reading poetry just not poetry books
FreshRazz
12-01-2002, 05:31 PM
Gotta love poetry... It's the wicked stuff. Congrads on that poem you'd be good in them contests. Hey if I can win you can!
Storm Wolf
12-02-2002, 09:26 AM
no...they don't require me to buy the book....besides I'd be waiting an awfully long time the book won't be published untill winter 2003 :P I'm just happy it's made it that far...I't gives me a bit of pleasure knowing I'm at least a deccent writer. :D
The Angel Queen
12-02-2002, 03:53 PM
FreshRazz that is a cool avatar !
Storm Wolf
12-06-2002, 09:19 AM
just to let you know i am your friend and want you to win !!! so if you win you should share the cash with me !!!! 8)
Yeah.....Sure :roll:
The Angel Queen
12-06-2002, 05:15 PM
but we are best friends !!!! almost sisters !!!! so i should get 75% of what you win !!!!! :tangel:
walks up to tiger powers with an inoscent smile and pops a water balloon on her head!!! :tangel:
Storm Wolf
12-06-2002, 09:30 PM
*pulls the wet hair out of her eyes*
Sister....yeah....thats scary...I could only imagine what you do to your sister! :roll:
The Angel Queen
12-07-2002, 11:48 AM
me !?
Im a sweet little angel !!!!! :evilgrin:
Storm Wolf
12-13-2002, 09:02 AM
I'm sure your sister would beg to differ.....
The Angel Queen
12-13-2002, 03:41 PM
no she would tell you that im the sweet angel that i say i am !! :wink:
Storm Wolf
12-16-2002, 09:33 AM
no....I asked her the other day and she said you were a vile, evil creature....and you were terrible to her!
The Angel Queen
12-16-2002, 05:13 PM
shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! people aren't supose to know the truth !!!!!!
Storm Wolf
12-18-2002, 07:56 AM
*whispers* Oh sorry.....I won't say that anymore.......
The Angel Queen
12-18-2002, 03:32 PM
he he !!! i know a secret !!!
The Angel Queen
12-27-2002, 02:51 PM
:sleep:
Storm Wolf
12-29-2002, 07:45 PM
*yawns*
and what secret might that be?
The Angel Queen
01-09-2003, 02:53 PM
I forgot ! :embarass:
Storm Wolf
01-10-2003, 06:58 AM
yeesh....you sure forget alot! :roll:
The Angel Queen
01-10-2003, 06:00 PM
yeah well what can i say im a blond at heart !!! :lol:
Storm Wolf
01-11-2003, 12:59 AM
hmmm...yep I would have to agree.... :P
The Angel Queen
01-11-2003, 10:14 AM
I try !!
Storm Wolf
01-11-2003, 09:24 PM
I brt you do! :roll:
The Angel Queen
01-13-2003, 04:51 PM
well you just won that brt cause i do try !!!! :evilgrin:
Storm Wolf
01-14-2003, 06:43 AM
ooooo...I won the brt....what do I get?
The Angel Queen
01-15-2003, 03:03 PM
and you win.........................................drum role .................................................. ...........................this usedgarbage can with a months worth of garbage still inside !!!!!
The Angel Queen
01-21-2003, 05:15 PM
arnt you gonna claim your prize ??!!!
Storm Wolf
01-22-2003, 06:59 AM
err....
*takes the garbage can*
hey this one has a hole! :x
The Angel Queen
01-23-2003, 03:04 PM
well if your not happy with that then tou can have this 10 day old / moldy / smelly / slimy bolony sandwich !!!
Storm Wolf
01-24-2003, 11:08 PM
mmmmmm....yummers!
Tokka-B
01-24-2003, 11:10 PM
I think I can sum this discussion up in one emoticon: :roll:
The Angel Queen
01-30-2003, 02:27 PM
while your eating that i will have this fresh , crisp , salad !!! (with blue cheese dressing !)
Storm Wolf
01-30-2003, 04:01 PM
*chews on a big chunk of juicy deer meat* :evilgrin:
The Angel Queen
02-02-2003, 02:40 PM
what did i tel you about eating bambi !!??
Storm Wolf
02-02-2003, 06:17 PM
*grins evily*
oh...but he is sooooooo juicy and tender! :evilgrin:
The Angel Queen
02-06-2003, 02:28 PM
oh but i have a very sharp knife in my hand and Bambi is telling me to use it on you !!!! :evilgrin:
Storm Wolf
02-06-2003, 04:47 PM
*takes a chunk off Bambi and runs*
The Angel Queen
02-06-2003, 05:22 PM
*chases after Tiger powers swinging knife at her*
Storm Wolf
02-07-2003, 10:07 PM
*runs faster* :o
R-iZZy
02-08-2003, 12:13 AM
why does it seem that all of ur conversations end up in food? :tpizza:
Storm Wolf
02-08-2003, 07:41 AM
to tell the truth...my family is all about food....that and half the time, I'm writting this during my lunch period! :lol: :roll: :tpizza: :tpizza:
The Angel Queen
02-09-2003, 01:49 PM
yeah i mostly write this during luch period at school exept on the weekends !! and i love food !! notice my signature !!!
azure turtle
02-09-2003, 02:38 PM
I love food! Food Network rocks! Iron Chef is the coolest thing ever. :anime:
The Angel Queen
02-09-2003, 03:28 PM
i've watched that show a couple times ! i don't know what channel it is on so i don't catch it alot !
Storm Wolf
02-09-2003, 04:44 PM
I never watch cooking channels....food can become addicting and frankly I'm trying to quit :roll: .....key word is trying................. :P :lol:
The Angel Queen
02-09-2003, 05:35 PM
well im not trying to quit just eat less !
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