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Little_Ebony_Filly
08-23-2002, 06:59 PM
Love
Love it's a 4 letter word.
Why is it so important?
I ask myself
Maybe because people need it bad.
They want it or
Because it feeds their soul
Or maybe because they can't live with out it?
So as I sit here and ask what is love?
Can you answer me?
Love is not something you can see
Touch or taste but you can feel it
So I sit here and say to my self
Why do I have to be in love with you?
Why do you have to hurt me the way you do?
Can you answer me?
Are you in"Love" with me?
Love maybe a 4 letter word
But it is very important to all of us.
So can you answer me this? when I ask you
What is love to you?
Some can and some can't
Some have felt it some have't
All I have to say is love is something awesome
But it can hurt you in many ways.
So please ask you are self this are you in love?
Is Love just a 4 letter to you?



tell me what u think be eays 1st time and came right off my head :D :wink:
popkornLT
08-23-2002, 07:05 PM
That's really good! I like it.. right it for anyone special?? Only thing... *cough* um... *cough*.. don't mean to say anything negative or anything but... *cough*... *clears throat* .... love is 4 letters.. *gulp* but again.. really good!! :)
Little_Ebony_Filly
08-23-2002, 07:14 PM
no ur right
i just caught that lol ty it is ok but that u very much no for anyone but i was thinking of my b/f and his name is 5 letters lol
Little_Ebony_Filly
08-23-2002, 07:16 PM
That's really good! I like it.. right it for anyone special?? Only thing... *cough* um... *cough*.. don't mean to say anything negative or anything but... *cough*... *clears throat* .... love is 4 letters.. *gulp* but again.. really good!! :)

u r sooooooooo right don't be scared it is ok any mistakes tell me plz
azure turtle
08-24-2002, 01:05 AM
Aww... A nice poem, Lil' Filly! Just a little hint: you can edit your posts in case you find any mistakes with it. ;)
Little_Ebony_Filly
08-24-2002, 04:10 AM
i know that is what i did lol i had a 5 letter word but changed it
Tinselcat
08-24-2002, 08:36 PM
pretty!! i likes poetry. oooooh, little filly, do you have any poetry you want me to host on my website? i'm looking for people's poetry to post, obviously. so far all i have is a few by myself, and a couple by published authors. that goes for everyone, ya hear? you write poetry? i post it!! (don't be shy...)
Storm Wolf
08-24-2002, 09:16 PM
ohhh.....you can host my poem if you'd like just make sure to give me credit!
Little_Ebony_Filly
08-26-2002, 09:54 AM
yeah if u give me credit u can but i want to see that u do ok b/c i did it by my self all on my onw :D