Who's read Tony Day's Turtle Turncoat Comic?

[oldmanwinters]

What do you think of the story line so far?

[Dane E5R]

Great art. Bad dialogue.

[Kali]

There's a discussion of this comic here: http://www.thetechnodrome.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=8619

Please continue your discussion there.

[cqb101]

Great art. Bad dialogue.

Yep. The art is godly but the dialogue could use a lot of work. He could also use a few grammer lessons.

[Jester]

I've edited the comic a little....if anyone can spell out the grammar mistakes....cause i suck too...can't spell....so help me and i'll make the changes....it fun for me

[oldmanwinters]

I've edited the comic a little....if anyone can spell out the grammar mistakes....cause i suck too...can't spell....so help me and i'll make the changes....it fun for me

Hey Jester, can you post some pics of the edited comic?

[Machias Banshee]

There's a discussion of this comic here: http://www.thetechnodrome.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=8619

Please continue your discussion there.


Yes, please do so...