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oldmanwinters 10-04-2011 08:43 AM

Master Splinter in "Nothing to Fear"
 
http://pre07.deviantart.net/18e6/th/...rs-d4bhrza.jpg

http://oldmanwinters.deviantart.com/gallery/33022088


At long last, my first Ninja Turtles fan comic is ready to launch! Over the course of October, I'll be posting all 12 full-color pages of the story inspired by my previous piece, "Splinter's Worst Nightmare." It's newly christened title is "Nothing to Fear." October was the perfect month to debut this for the public, since it certainly has some Halloween appropriate vibe!

Story Description:
Master Splinter's rigorous mental discipline in the way of Bushido is about to be put to the ultimate test! While meditating in the secret sewer lair of the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles, some of his most feared adversaries from the past suddenly converge upon him at once! Who is responsible for this home invasion? And how will Splinter ever escape from this horrible surprise?

Seeing how this is my first attempt at doing something so ambitious as a comic, I do appreciate comments, compliments, and even critiques so that I can improve my artistic skills. Over the last couple of months, I've learned basic competence in how to color digitally in Gimp.

EDIT:
You can now download the whole comic (with bonus content) in CBZ format!
http://www.mediafire.com/?5astup2vkmafrd0

Donnie 10-04-2011 09:27 AM

Looking forward to reading this, winters!

oldmanwinters 10-04-2011 10:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DonnyTMNT (Post 879864)
Looking forward to reading this, winters!

Believe it or not, you might not actually have to do much reading!

Since I am a novice at the comic book medium, I've decided to avoid the challenge of making room for word balloons and worrying about dialogue. This comic won't feature much text, but it will advance the story through careful layouts and artistic poses that suggest energy and motion. I've tried to play to my strengths and sidestep my weaknesses.

Jester 10-04-2011 03:28 PM

Crap...I have to pay $1.25? Ok, winters, where do I send the money. ;)

Looks promising. :D

oldmanwinters 10-04-2011 03:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jester (Post 879944)
Crap...I have to pay $1.25? Ok, winters, where do I send the money. ;)

Looks promising. :D

PayPal is acceptable! :tpizza::tanime:

I thought about giving my cover a barcode to complete the illusion, but I realized it would be too hard to make one up and I didn't want to steal one from a real comic. Plus, I hate barcodes that cover up key aspects of the cover art.

EDIT:
I guess making a barcode isn't really so hard after all!

How's this?
http://www.barcodesinc.com/generator...&xres=1&font=3

Stingray69 10-04-2011 05:12 PM

Looking good so far

Jester 10-04-2011 05:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by oldmanwinters (Post 879951)
I guess making a barcode isn't really so hard after all!

How's this?
http://www.barcodesinc.com/generator...&xres=1&font=3

And it'll fit right under the "Has Splinter's Worst Nightmare..." text. :D

oldmanwinters 10-05-2011 03:07 PM

Page 1
 
Here's the first page:

http://oldmanwinters.deviantart.com/#/d4bwc01
http://pre06.deviantart.net/7fc1/th/...rs-d4bwc01.jpg

I didn't really put much thought into the backgrounds of the first page, so that's why the last panel looks a little strange with the full grey backdrop.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jester (Post 879974)
And it'll fit right under the "Has Splinter's Worst Nightmare..." text. :D

Heh, I actually decided to edit the cover image and shift the text lower to make better use of the space.

oldmanwinters 10-06-2011 10:02 AM

Page 2
 
Alrighty then, here's the 2nd page. The action starts to get underway when the Mousers make their entrance! Can anybody guess what piece of official TMNT art inspired that first panel?

One of my goals with this comic was to end each page on a bit of a cliffhanger. The first four pages are dedicated to introducing the first three threats to Splinter's life:
http://oldmanwinters.deviantart.com/...ge-2-261998629
http://pre11.deviantart.net/c40d/th/...rs-d4bzjfp.jpg

oldmanwinters 10-07-2011 07:54 AM

Page 3
 
Things go from bad to worse for Master Splinter! Say, what's a rare breed of tiger doing in the New York city sewers anyway? Who or what could have led him here?

And doesn't that yellow jumpsuit in the last panel look familiar? Uh oh...

http://oldmanwinters.deviantart.com/...ge-3-262143266
http://pre12.deviantart.net/6142/th/...rs-d4c2n1e.jpg

CyberCubed 10-07-2011 10:37 AM

Mutated cat April makes a return? :p

Donnie 10-07-2011 12:47 PM

I like it! I can see what you mean concerning conveying Splinter's emotions without using words - good job in doing so!

Master Splinter 10-07-2011 01:01 PM

This is great, cannot wait for the rest... I am curious though what does the Winters & Powder on the cover mean? Did Powder help out in some way?

Keep on truckin!

-ms

Andrew NDB 10-07-2011 01:11 PM

Not my cup of tea but fun to see.

oldmanwinters 10-07-2011 03:13 PM

I appreciate all the feed back, folks! I get encouraged by positive feedback but I also invite constructive criticism as well. The next page will be up sometime this weekend.

Quote:

Originally Posted by CyberCubed (Post 880649)
Mutated cat April makes a return? :p

Eh... could be! :tshifty:

Quote:

Originally Posted by DonnyTMNT (Post 880658)
I like it! I can see what you mean concerning conveying Splinter's emotions without using words - good job in doing so!

I accepted that as an artistic challenge. I figured there's no reason to burden down a story with poorly written dialogue and unnecessary word balloon clutter if the art and layouts can do the job on their own merits!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Master Splinter (Post 880660)
This is great, cannot wait for the rest... I am curious though what does the Winters & Powder on the cover mean? Did Powder help out in some way?

Keep on truckin!

-ms

Your compliments are most appreciated, MS!

Apparently you must have missed the piece that inspired this project:
http://oldmanwinters.deviantart.com/...olor-199450042

Without Powder stepping up to the plate and volunteering to color it back in March, I likely wouldn't have gotten the excitement to see this project through to the end! I drew the original piece so that it had the format of a wrap-around comic book cover, and I just decided to use it as such for the actual comic.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Andrew NDB (Post 880662)
Not my cup of tea but fun to see.

Andrew, coming from you that statement means a lot. I hope that good art can always be appreciated. Thanks for stopping by and for leaving a comment!
P.S. Nice rhyme with that comment too, intentional or not!

oldmanwinters 10-09-2011 06:54 AM

Page 4
 
Page 4 is up! Things just keep getting worse for poor Master Splinter!

http://oldmanwinters.deviantart.com/...ge-4-262459115
http://pre04.deviantart.net/0a95/th/...rs-d4c9eqz.jpg

CyberCubed 10-09-2011 09:31 PM

Seems to be all aspects from various episodes. The Mousers from episode 3, Cat-April from Season 2, and is that tiger the one Creepy Eddie summoned from the dreamworld to attack Splinter in that Season 6 ep?

oldmanwinters 10-09-2011 11:35 PM

Page 4 took some trial and error in order to get the layout right. You can check out my first two drafts here:
http://oldmanwinters.deviantart.com/...outs-262459061

Quote:

Originally Posted by CyberCubed (Post 881205)
Seems to be all aspects from various episodes. The Mousers from episode 3, Cat-April from Season 2, and is that tiger the one Creepy Eddie summoned from the dreamworld to attack Splinter in that Season 6 ep?

Good guess on the creepy Eddie tiger, but that one was actually of the saber-toothed variety. Also, I don't think Splinter ever encountered him.

The tiger in my comic is supposed to be the same tiger that was featured in "The Cat Woman from Channel Six," or at least one similar enough to him. However, catwoman April won't be the last threat to show up in my story! Page 5 should be up by Wednesday at the latest.

CyberCubed 10-10-2011 12:04 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by oldmanwinters (Post 881228)
Good guess on the creepy Eddie tiger, but that one was actually of the saber-toothed variety. Also, I don't think Splinter ever encountered him.

Creepy Eddie appeared in the lair and met Splinter which is where he summoned a tiger to go after him. Raph/Don return from the pizza store and throw two slices of pizza in the tiger's eyes.

Splinter thanks the turtles for their, "Pizza marksmanship."

Luzmagica 10-11-2011 06:30 AM

Cute!!!! Just discovered it! I enjoy it!!! :tlove: Great work!!! :tthumbsu::tthumbsu::tthumbsu::tthumbsu::tthumbsu:


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