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ZariusTwo 12-01-2012 09:48 AM

Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles (OT)- The Fan Audio Scripts
 

A project that spent three years in development hell has finally come to fruition.

For a long time now, I've been attempting to develop stories based around the original TMNT Fred Wolf series, the project took on the form of a comic, then a novel, and finally after some major plot abandonment/retooling, returned as a ten book series of novellas

I hope you enjoy them, as a regular reader or as a performer. There's quite a lot in them for everyone


Original TMNT Cartoon Fan 12-01-2012 11:54 AM

Season 4
 
So you're using season 4 (Technodrome in Dimension X, season 3 has already happen with that dinosaur cave in the Earth's underground).

I've been waiting for years for something like this! :)

ZariusTwo 12-01-2012 02:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Swedenfan 1982 (Post 1027748)
So you're using season 4 (Technodrome in Dimension X, season 3 has already happen with that dinosaur cave in the Earth's underground).

It's set after Season Ten and Turtles Forever

Original TMNT Cartoon Fan 12-01-2012 02:54 PM

Shredder
 
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Originally Posted by ZariusTwo (Post 1027828)
It's set after Season Ten and Turtles Forever

So that's that "other shredder"? When will the other stories be published. Would be nice to just add next time when the stories are set.

ZariusTwo 12-01-2012 03:02 PM

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Originally Posted by Swedenfan 1982 (Post 1027834)
So that's that "other shredder"?

I'm not one of those people that like to disavow Turtles Forever just because it didnt synch up with their preffered perception of the old show, to me, it's canon.

I fully intend to explain away all the odd characterisations in TF with a few lines in the next episode. I'm also explaining how April and everyone got back on their feet.

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When will the other stories be published. Would be nice to just add next time when the stories are set.
I don't have a timetable for the eps. My plate is pretty full right now, I have a TMNT fanfilm script to continue work on, and I also write other fanfics for FF.Net based on other interests I have. I have to begin major retweeks on the second episode also, so they'll be "done when they're done". I was fortunate enough to have free time to finish this one up.

ZariusTwo 01-15-2013 10:08 AM

I have now begun novelizing "So Long, No Thanks For All The Fish" for Fanfiction.net. Updates will be daily.

Jephael 01-15-2013 11:17 AM

Interesting endeavor. I like the story so far! Maybe someone could do an action figure play with it or something.

Original TMNT Cartoon Fan 01-15-2013 11:33 AM

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Originally Posted by Jephael (Post 1042353)
Interesting endeavor. I like the story so far! Maybe someone could do an action figure play with it or something.

That boy in the story doesn't have his own action figure yet. :)

BubblyShell22 01-15-2013 03:38 PM

I read your story, Zarius, and left my reviews. Maybe you could post a link to FF.Net so others can view it as well. It's really great so far though.

Blossombrooks 01-15-2013 04:13 PM

I second what Shell said, it's really good and i'm sure others would like to read it. Left you a review too (BrookeT). :tgrin:

ZariusTwo 01-15-2013 04:29 PM

Thanks Bubbly and Blossom. Much appreciated. Expect some more chapters tommorow (having the script makes the process of novelizing much faster)

Bubbly, I've already given the link to the FF.net version of the story in the first page (see the "read the novelization" option)

BubblyShell22 01-16-2013 08:13 AM

Ah, okay. I didn't see that. Thanks for telling me.

ZariusTwo 01-16-2013 09:10 AM

No problem. Thanks for your reviews and pointing out some of my typos on the story.

ZariusTwo 01-17-2013 08:15 AM

Right, I've taken the fan audio script down for the time being. I just felt that my novelization of the story was a far more polished product and I'd like the script to reflect that more, so I'll be rewriting it in the future. Sorry folks.

The good news is I've just about finished work on the novel, and it will be completed later today.

BubblyShell22 01-17-2013 08:34 AM

Awesome. I just read the latest two chapters and loved them. And no problem on pointing out mistakes. It's what I'm here for.

Coola Yagami 01-17-2013 10:20 AM

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Originally Posted by ZariusTwo (Post 1027712)

A project that spent three years in development hell has finally come to fruition.

For a long time now, I've been attempting to develop stories based around the original TMNT Fred Wolf series, the project took on the form of a comic, then a novel, and finally after some major plot abandoment/retooling, returned to a script format to serve it's newest purpose: As an audio drama script!

Overall, I plan to write at least ten of these, a full "season" so to speak, split into two waves. The first episode is a 50-minute "primetime special", with the remainder of the episodes being 25 minutes in length like a standard episode of the old show.

Due to FF.Net's flippant rules and regulations regarding fanscripts, I've taken to posting them on Deviantart until further notice. In time I may "novelize" the scripts to give them some kind of prescense on FF.net, but I'd rather they be read in this form first.

People keen on TMNT audio dramas or just plays in general should feel free to use these scripts to their hearts content, I hope you enjoy them, as a regular reader or as a performer. There's quite a lot in them for everyone

Episodes

"Wave One" (Eps 1-5)


1."So Long, No Thanks For All The Fish"
(TEMPORARILY DOWN FOR REWRITES)
(Read the Novelization here)
2. "My Seer, My Secretary" (in development)
3. "Raphael Counts 'Em All" (in development)
4. "The Lotus and The Sun" (in development)
5. "Mutants and Miracles" (in development)

...... read a bit of it... instantly turned off by the story starting off with 'penis-size jokes'. Yeah, I know it wasn't that... but all the suggestive dialogue... just no dude. Bad! Bad! Bad! No pizza for you! Keep that kinda stuff out of the OT-type Turtles.

Jester 01-17-2013 10:34 AM

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Originally Posted by Coola Yagami (Post 1043190)
...... read a bit of it... instantly turned off by the story starting off with 'penis-size jokes'. Yeah, I know it wasn't that... but all the suggestive dialogue... just no dude. Bad! Bad! Bad! No pizza for you! Keep that kinda stuff out of the OT-type Turtles.

This. You tend to get after people who go too high violence with the FW Turtles, why go so blue with the humor?

ZariusTwo 01-17-2013 11:14 AM

And the novel is complete. I'm pretty thrilled about that.

As for the humor...well there WAS a prostitute joke in the old show once, heh heh. Don't worry, I'm behaving myself on the other stories I'm doing.

BubblyShell22 01-17-2013 04:00 PM

Congrats, Zarius. I just reviewed the last two chapters. Are you going to put the other scripts into novel form as well? That would be cool.

Refractive Reflections 01-17-2013 06:00 PM

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Originally Posted by Coola Yagami (Post 1043190)
...... read a bit of it... instantly turned off by the story starting off with 'penis-size jokes'. Yeah, I know it wasn't that... but all the suggestive dialogue... just no dude. Bad! Bad! Bad! No pizza for you! Keep that kinda stuff out of the OT-type Turtles.

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Originally Posted by ZariusTwo (Post 1043204)
And the novel is complete. I'm pretty thrilled about that.

As for the humor...well there WAS a prostitute joke in the old show once, heh heh. Don't worry, I'm behaving myself on the other stories I'm doing.

LOL, I don't mind some of the implied humor because the OT did do that a few times. I know you are referring to the "Donatello's Degree" episode where Irma says that she's not "that type of girl" when Donatello tells her to wait for a group of guys to pick her up.


There were other examples of this implied adult humor too:

"Leonardo the Renaissance Turtle": Lex arrests Leonardo and April for jaywalking and the Lex robot asks if they have any "final words" she says "Yes, but they're not appropriate for television."

"Plan Six from Outer Space": Michelangelo becomes frustrated that they can't find pepperoni throughout the entire city for his pizza. Raphael comments, "Who knew there would be such a sausage shortage??" He breaks the 4th wall and says, "...And don't ask me to repeat that again."

"Menace Maestro Please": The Turtles attack Bebop & Rocksteady at a costume closet and both Bebop and Rocksteady fall into a box with either half of a donkey costume. Leonardo remarks, "Oh...so that's what they have in common." ;)

So I don't mind the suggestive, implied humor because the OT had that, it's just that we as kids didn't pick it up on our radar. As long as the fanfic doesn't have blantant and explicit adult humor then its fine for me at least.


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