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Old 06-20-2015, 01:41 PM   #652
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Nice work...but what's with the added dialogue (and profanity) on 14?
EDIT: Oh...reading skills. Come on, Jeff....
Just wanted to give the story a little extra spice, Mr. Mom! Be glad Andrew Modeen isn't running this project, otherwise the whole thing would be littered with f-bombs and gory violence!

To be honest, I don't even remember what I wrote.
EDITED AFTER READING ISSUE: Oh wow, I must've been in a rotten mood while working on that part.
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