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Originally Posted by Krutch
Gave this a read this morning.
Neat concept! Story marries well with the art style as well.
Panel layouts were easy to follow and thoughtfully laid out.
The writing and dialogue definitely evokes the feeling of reading a bunch of 80s indy comics (the art also helps in this) I recall reading growing up.
If I had a gripe, it'd probably be it lacks a little heart. For 9 pages, you basically have a Devil saying "Hi, I'm the Devil", soldiers shooting each other, and then your four lead characters talking about how they plan to kill humans. It's a pretty cold place to begin with.
But all in all, I enjoyed what I read and it looks quite slick and polished  Keep it up man! |
Thanks a bunch, glad you enjoyed it!
Here's an image with heart
Marston in a field of flowers:
