Not a bad start but please check your grammar.
Because you use "Your" (as in "you own it, it's yours") Where it should say "You're" (Short for "You are") and you use "Their" (As in "It belongs to them, it's theirs") where it should be "They're" (Short for "They are")
Also don't forget that a name should be written with a capital letter, April, Donnie, Leo, Raph, Mikey.
Trust me, if you want people to take your work seriously, put in some effort to get your grammar right.
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