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Old 09-16-2012, 09:42 AM   #42
Donnie
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Based on PL's thoughts, will we be adding/editing anything?

I know it's a pain to deal with re-uploading, but it probably wouldn't be a bad idea to at least fix the broken text bubbles. There was also a part I noticed that was confusing during the Saki/Businessmen scene. One of the bubbles points to a character who isn't saying the line.

If you don't want to, MS, it's understandable. Just curious if we were going to capitalize on any of PL's critiques.
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