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Old 04-12-2011, 02:18 PM   #21
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Dude, that is a fantastic improvement!

I see you also rendered some of April's pockets and jumpsuit details, as well as the clothing folds. Your overall progress has been fun to watch over these last few years.
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Old 04-12-2011, 02:20 PM   #22
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this time around, the texture attempt is with toon render. I will render again with texture from the actual show..
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Old 04-12-2011, 02:24 PM   #23
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this time around, the texture attempt is with toon render. I will render again with texture from the actual show..
I think April's proportions are just about perfect. I think the face still needs some fine tuning however. I think the chin looks a little too big and wide. It doesn't need much work, but it may benefit from a slightly more cone-shaped design.

EDIT: or maybe egg-shaped. I can't really express it. Maybe experiment with some slightly largely eyes too, as those will benefit animation.
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Old 04-12-2011, 03:34 PM   #24
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Slightly Bigger Eyes...Slightly modified face. April on right has colors sampled from the first episode...
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Old 04-12-2011, 03:39 PM   #25
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Slightly Bigger Eyes...Slightly modified face. April on right has colors sampled from the first episode...
Man, that's almost spot-on from the cartoon! The colors are terrific!

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You might wanna add a zipper seam down the front of the jumpsuit and perhaps some seams around the shoulders.
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Old 04-12-2011, 03:49 PM   #26
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Whoa, thats some really amazing work. April looks pretty good, love how awesome donatello looks.
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Old 04-12-2011, 04:08 PM   #27
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this time around, the texture attempt is with toon render. I will render again with texture from the actual show..
Sorry wasn't making fun of u. It jst reminded me of an acid trip is all

I think u did an amazing job though, really top notch work.
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Old 04-12-2011, 05:32 PM   #28
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The models are cool, the animation is great and the fact that you have done the intro complete is impressive.

However the actual final images you are showing us can be improved a lot by tweaking the rendering options (and maybe the lightning). Are you using Ray Tracer? Kinda looks as if the Ray Tracing option is off...
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Old 04-12-2011, 09:30 PM   #29
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The models are cool, the animation is great and the fact that you have done the intro complete is impressive.

However the actual final images you are showing us can be improved a lot by tweaking the rendering options (and maybe the lightning). Are you using Ray Tracer? Kinda looks as if the Ray Tracing option is off...

I am using Mental Ray.. Unfortunately, I never got beyond basic rendering and lighting. These are all the standard options with nothing changed..




The latest changes. Now only the arms look like they could use a tad bit of work..

Next up, getting an improved color scheme that works for the Technodrome

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Old 04-12-2011, 09:35 PM   #30
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One thing on April's shoulder jumpsuit seams...

According to the model sheet, it appears the seams should be located below her shoulders rather than above them. I'm guessing it wasn't a consistent thing in the show, but I think it looks a little better like this:
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Old 04-12-2011, 09:37 PM   #31
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Not to sound like a letch, but did they remove April's cleavage from that model?
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Old 04-12-2011, 09:38 PM   #32
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Not to sound like a letch, but did they remove April's cleavage from that model?
Nope.

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Old 04-12-2011, 09:41 PM   #33
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Pretty neat.
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Old 04-13-2011, 12:46 PM   #35
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Final April changes to shoulders....

Now that April is done, What is wrong with Krang? What can we do to make him more show accurate?


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Old 04-13-2011, 01:52 PM   #36
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A few minor changes...what's wrong with this model?

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Old 04-13-2011, 02:30 PM   #37
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Check this out!

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This one's great.
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Old 04-13-2011, 02:32 PM   #38
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This one's sword is OK.
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Old 04-13-2011, 02:38 PM   #39
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This one's great.
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This one's sword is OK.
This is Vegita-San personal CGI works thread, if you want to post other TMNT CGI/3D art or movies there is a thread for that

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Old 04-13-2011, 02:44 PM   #40
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While waiting on Krang reviews, here's another one.

My base Turtle Model with skin color directly from The Big Blow Out. Now, what is wrong with this model?

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