10-27-2015, 10:18 AM | #121 |
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Hm, I'm also of the opinion "dim lit house" should be "dimly lit house". Not sure if it should be hyphenated, as well.
It is overall a pleasant and interesting read. Perhaps a little too academic sounding. Also here I thought I'd stick this in here, a roleplay reply I wrote today that I had entirely too much fun with: Spoiler:
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10-27-2015, 02:36 PM | #122 |
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Those are some good writing samples, guys. Net, I particularly liked your RP bit, it reminds me of some of the RP's I've done on-line. Here's an example of some of mine.
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Lothir is the main character in my Darksong story, and also features in a second story that is a sequel to that one, called "Children of the Golden Flame". It's not on FF.net yet, but it IS posted at the site in my siggy.
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10-27-2015, 02:49 PM | #123 |
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I'm loving this... good stuff, guys!
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10-27-2015, 08:08 PM | #124 |
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Thanks a ton, maybe I'll post more snippets here from now on. I RP all the time, though a lot of my stuff is pretty damn gay or not worksafe... the gen stuff can go here, though.
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10-27-2015, 08:45 PM | #125 |
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so doing a small one-shot about a web show I found recently called "star darlings"
in it Spoiler:
and I am working on an Ever After High/Silent Hill fanfic...haven't figured out a title yet...either Silent Ever After or Shattered Masks. I am honestly just working on dark Ever After High stuff in general, like I have this one where Cedar (the next Pinocchio) becomes a full fledged doll and she has to witness the world around her move on.
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10-27-2015, 09:03 PM | #126 |
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I know I posted this already in the fan-fic pimping thread, but in case some missed it, here's the new chapter of Tale of Two Clans!
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9536626...e-of-Two-Clans And I've finally decided that I will probably use Tiger Claw, as he fits well with Pimiko and Kazuo as a "hired gun". As much as I'd love to use Hob and some of the other Mutanimals, I kind of feel like that would be stretching myself too thin plot-wise. Plus, I've been kind of sparing with mutants in this series so far, only using the "main" ones from various versions, like Leatherhead, Mona Lisa, Slash, Tokka and Rahzar, Rocksteady and Bebop, and Baxter (who is in Dimension X anyway). I'm strongly leaning toward not having any other mutants, although perhaps if I do a third story, I might include the human/mutant "war" there. I'm thinking TC could have been one of Shredder's experiments that was off on some mission, and returns only to find his boss dead, and delivers the news to his daughter. Any thoughts?
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10-28-2015, 12:38 AM | #127 |
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so finished that "Star Darlings" fanfic. sadly there is nothing on "fanfiction.net" or archive of your own for the show. so here is my link to my deviantart post.
http://yurivorelover.deviantart.com/...253A1446014200 trying something new with writing it, would like some feed back.
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11-05-2015, 08:36 AM | #128 |
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After 221 pages but a LOT of frustration, depression, and not writing, I've had to shelve my current project. "Rage" just isn't working anymore... maybe I can pick it up in another year or two, but for now, it's time to move on to a fresh project.
Sucks.
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11-05-2015, 02:32 PM | #129 |
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Wrote this a couple of months ago in preparations of "Once Upon a Zombie"
still the only fanfic it has http://archiveofourown.org/works/4561752 it has a broken girl, one of my favorites
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11-05-2015, 04:26 PM | #130 |
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Picked my next project from my list of ideas... on to a bold new start! With my first love, no less... science fiction.
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11-05-2015, 05:55 PM | #131 |
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Sounds cool, CKD! Sorry to hear that your other project hit a snag. It happens, though. So what is the new obe about?
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"Soldiers of Time and Shadow" is going to be a time-travel science fiction story about a team of independent rogues thrown together working to change history while unknowingly being a central part of a conspiracy involving the very fabric of reality. What starts as a basic bunch of time-traveling rogues assassinating various a$$holes from history turns into a trippy sci-fi conspiracy epic. I'm still trying to wrap my head around the various science theories I'm going to need to work with...
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11-06-2015, 03:49 AM | #133 |
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Wow. Sounds awesome! And sounds like you are in for some heavy research. Keep us posted!
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"It always comes back to Hitler, doesn't it?" Ulysses sighed. The big man looked down at the polished transsteel table surface in front of him and glared at his reflection. “Every time travel story you’ve ever read as a kid or any time travel movie you watched… it’s always about that damn little Nazi with the pathetic mustache.”
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11-06-2015, 02:12 PM | #135 |
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Hey, I really like that description of Hitler, CK! It's short, but fits him perfectly. Nice little teaser.
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To quote River Song: "I have a gun; you have a time machine... what the hell, let's kill Hitler."
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11-15-2015, 08:15 PM | #137 |
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Writing's going well for me; right now, I'm sitting back and letting two very angry academic rivals denigrate each other. It's practically writing itself at the moment.
Starting to feel glad I pulled the plug on a year's worth of work and transferred my spare time to this new project instead. How's writing for you guys?
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11-15-2015, 08:30 PM | #138 |
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It's actually going pretty well right now! I've banged out a bit on four stories over the past few days- my Christmas Ninjas one-shot, A Matter of Time (my Quantum Leap crossover), A Tale of Two Clans (the Gargoyles one), and Love Is Shell. Then again, I've had a lot of "quiet time" to myself the past few days, with my hubby being in the hospital. When I come home after visiting him, there's not much to do but write to take my mind off things.
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As far as Ulysses was concerned, 1921 in Nazi Germany might as well be heaven. He had a man to kill and a foamy mug of beer in his hand, and if everything went according to plan, human history would be better off by the end of the night. But for the moment, killing Hitler could wait… Ulysses was holding four eights.
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11-16-2015, 05:35 PM | #140 |
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He came home yesterday afternoon. Our kitty Angel has been glued to his side almost constantly ever since, aside from while he was at treatment today. She missed her "daddy", LOL! Hopefully he won't be going back into the hospital anytime soon.
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