Fanfic update-for anyone who wants to pimp their stories/art - Page 36

*BubblyShell22* · 09-08-2013, 07:50 AM

Awesome job on your story, DN. Loved it and can't wait for more.

And, Duckie. I'll be waiting for that update, even though I'm not caught up to that story yet. I'm almost there though. Only three chapters to go.

DonatelloNinja82 · 09-08-2013, 07:56 AM

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Originally Posted by BubblyShell22

Awesome job on your story, DN. Loved it and can't wait for more.

And, Duckie. I'll be waiting for that update, even though I'm not caught up to that story yet. I'm almost there though. Only three chapters to go.

Thanks, Bubbly

JH24 · 09-08-2013, 12:50 PM

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Originally Posted by DonatelloNinja82

Wow JH! I read and reviewed (I'm 1uvakindmom over on ff.net) and I'm pleasantly impressed with your work! A great OC you have, and your battle scene was well-done. Excellent characterization of Leo as well. I look forward to more from you.

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Originally Posted by MsMarvelDuckie

JH, I read and reviewed your story, and WOW! Great job. I love your fight-choreography. And the OC was both interesting and sympathetic. Kudos!

Thank you both so much for your kind words and for your reviews. It really means a lot to me.

I've posted a review for DonatelloNinja82 "Wraith" and for MsMarvelDuckie's "Goodbye Father". Both truly amazing and emotional stories which really made a deep impact on me. Both beautifully written and both really touched my heart. Thank you both so much for sharing your work with us all.

I'm going to check out your other stories very soon. I promise.

Sleepingseeker · 09-08-2013, 01:55 PM

JH - I look forward to reading whatcha got! XD
Bubbly the intense wait is almost over and I just cannot wait to read the big reveal! DN, I love your stuff! Bender's voice: Shut up, you know it!

Chewing my finger nails for the other updates people...looking at you, MsMarvel and you Zarius XD, I kid! You know I love you guys as well!
Okay, yeah, waaay too much coffee this morning, I swear I'll probably crash at 7 pm and wake up to my kids drawing a mustache on my face with a sharpie...and I have work tomorrow...BLAH! But to get back to the point...I have updated What Makes A Father!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9463892/21/

Thanks in advance for checkin' 'er out! xoxoxo

*BubblyShell22* · 09-08-2013, 04:17 PM

Read and reviewed, Seeker. Awesome job as always, and I'll be waiting for that epilogue.

DonatelloNinja82 · 09-08-2013, 07:20 PM

Love it, SS!!! So looking forward to the epilogue!!!

*MsMarvelDuckie* · 09-08-2013, 08:22 PM

^^Ditto! I was moved almost to tears, SS. Loved it.

Well, didn't get top finish the update yet- got home from work too late and was really tired. I'll try to get it up tomorrow, though.

Edit: Due to length issues, I decided to cut the new chapter in half, and now the first part is up! Enjoy, and don't forget to leave a review!

Edit #2: Can't believe I forgot to add a link.....

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9377718/12/Love-Is-Shell

Sleepingseeker · 09-09-2013, 05:07 PM

Ms Marvel, JH, Bubbly, DN, your stories are all so entertaining and thrilling and great fun to read. Keep it up!

MsMarvel, you have me thoroughly intrigued, woman! Same goes for you, Bubbly, can't wait to find out who A is. DN and JH you keep the good stuff flowing my way, okay?

Without further ado, here is the FINAL Chapter of What Makes a Father...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9463892/22/

I can't WAIT to see your reactions to this. MWHAHAHAH!

Your thoughts and input greatly affect and influence me. I thank you for all the reviews you've left and continue to leave. The support is beyond kind and generous. HUGS

*MsMarvelDuckie* · 09-09-2013, 05:47 PM

Read and reviewed, SS! Yay! And Boo.... Yay that you did another update, but boo that it's the END of the story..... Yeah, I'm conflicted here.

DonatelloNinja82 · 09-09-2013, 08:12 PM

OMG SS...WHAT AN ENDING!! Totally didn't see that coming! I was expecting another look at the boys later on...totally not that! But great entrance into a sequel!!

Duckie...love love love. Your Mikey is so awesome. To sound like Shrek, he's an onion...layers, he has layers!! I love intense Mikey...I demand more! Great update, Shredder sucks, and he needs a punch in the um....nose. Yah nose.

*BubblyShell22* · 09-10-2013, 08:34 AM

Awesome chapter, Duckie. Yeah, Shredder really needs his butt kicked for what he did to Orlene. So glad I'm caught up now.

SS, awesome chapter. Didn't see that coming, and I can't wait for a sequel.

*MsMarvelDuckie* · 09-10-2013, 09:15 PM

Yeah, I loved it too. What a great bg for the Rat King.

And thanks for all the great reviews, guys, especially you, SS. You have no idea how close you came to what I've got planned for Donnie, but I'm gonna' have to figure out exactly how to work it in. I have a couple of ideas, but it's not exactly something that would "come up" in casual conversation, so it might require some serious poking to get it to work. I HAVE dropped a few hints already, for those who've been paying attention, but they are very subtle. Hopefully this will make everyone go "WTF??!!" and see Donnie in a whole new light......

And glad everyone liked "intense Mikey"!! I used SAINW as inspiration for his "darker" side in that chapter- I even steeled myself to re-watch that ep just so I'd get it right. I wanted to give him a good reason to drop the "funny-man" act for a bit, and that chapter was it. (Well, it was already in the original version of this tale- before the overhaul/rewrite- but it seemed like the perfect place to have him do some growing up....) Ah, but just wait until you guys see what's in store for the next chapter! I've tentatively called it "Techno-Syn-Drome" (It's a play on the Mortal Kombat theme's actual title, BTW. Just thought I'd throw that in, LOL!)

*BubblyShell22* · 09-11-2013, 07:35 AM

Sounds like it'll be awesome, Duckie. Can't wait to read it.

Sleepingseeker · 09-12-2013, 01:40 PM

So, chapter 4 is up for Scar Tissue!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9576022/4/

I wasn't sure who was actually interested in my part two to The Long Way Home, but I got reinspired by a fan I haven't heard from in a while over on Deviantart. Check out my Mistress pic! mwhahah!

Thank you guys so much for your support. You're all so wonderful!

*BubblyShell22* · 09-12-2013, 04:51 PM

Read and reviewed, Seeker. What a chapter. Can't believe The Mistress is back and up to her old tricks again.

*ZariusTwo* · 09-13-2013, 06:10 AM

Sorry I havent been reviewing stuff lately guys, I've been very busy editing and designing.

Consider today my catch-up day, and as a bonus, here's a chapter of Dreggs of Society

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9439636/...ggs-of-Society

*BubblyShell22* · 09-13-2013, 07:31 AM

Read and reviewed, Zar. Nice job as always. It's good to see you back.

DonatelloNinja82 · 09-13-2013, 05:45 PM

I've been wondering where you were, Zar! But totally worth the wait! Great chapter!!

Excellent chapter to you as well, SS!! Things are really "heating" up!! I love the mental picture of April slamming her window shut, too. HAHA! Poor Don.

*MsMarvelDuckie* · 09-13-2013, 06:55 PM

Yeah, and that had to hurt, too- getting thrown out from that high up?! Geez, was she trying to KILL him?! Great chapter, though! And the new chapter of LIS is clicking along nicely- I expect to have it up in a day or two! Trust me, this one's going to make you go "WTF?!" Mikey's out for a little vengeance, and SOMEBODY'S gonna' feel the pain....

DonatelloNinja82 · 09-14-2013, 11:21 PM

Chapter 3 of Sinners and Saints...Gluttony...I'm so mean...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9646148/...ers-and-Saints

And Duckie, cannot wait for the next chappy of LIS

09-08-2013, 07:50 AM	#701
BubblyShell22 Leo-holic Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Indiana Posts: 16,912	Awesome job on your story, DN. Loved it and can't wait for more. And, Duckie. I'll be waiting for that update, even though I'm not caught up to that story yet. I'm almost there though. Only three chapters to go. __________________ "A warrior who never fails, never learns."-The Ancient One. "Embrace your inner a**holiness."-Mr. Anderson.

09-08-2013, 01:55 PM	#704
Sleepingseeker Foot Soldier Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Chicago Posts: 213	JH - I look forward to reading whatcha got! XD Bubbly the intense wait is almost over and I just cannot wait to read the big reveal! DN, I love your stuff! Bender's voice: Shut up, you know it! Chewing my finger nails for the other updates people...looking at you, MsMarvel and you Zarius XD, I kid! You know I love you guys as well! Okay, yeah, waaay too much coffee this morning, I swear I'll probably crash at 7 pm and wake up to my kids drawing a mustache on my face with a sharpie...and I have work tomorrow...BLAH! But to get back to the point...I have updated What Makes A Father! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9463892/21/ Thanks in advance for checkin' 'er out! xoxoxo __________________ ------------------------------------------------------ Love ya! http://www.fanfiction.net/~sleepingseeker http://sleepingseeker.deviantart.com/ http://sleepingseeker.tumblr.com/

09-08-2013, 04:17 PM	#705
BubblyShell22 Leo-holic Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Indiana Posts: 16,912	Read and reviewed, Seeker. Awesome job as always, and I'll be waiting for that epilogue. __________________ "A warrior who never fails, never learns."-The Ancient One. "Embrace your inner a**holiness."-Mr. Anderson.

09-08-2013, 07:20 PM	#706
DonatelloNinja82 Mad Scientist Join Date: Nov 2012 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 1,345	Love it, SS!!! So looking forward to the epilogue!!! __________________ Michelangelo: Holy guacamole with hot sauce and jalapenos!

09-08-2013, 08:22 PM	#707
MsMarvelDuckie I Married a Duck! Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: The bowels of Hell, Texas(otherwise known as Decatur) Posts: 8,772	^^Ditto! I was moved almost to tears, SS. Loved it. Well, didn't get top finish the update yet- got home from work too late and was really tired. I'll try to get it up tomorrow, though. Edit: Due to length issues, I decided to cut the new chapter in half, and now the first part is up! Enjoy, and don't forget to leave a review! Edit #2: Can't believe I forgot to add a link..... http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9377718/12/Love-Is-Shell __________________ "You IDIOTS! You've captured their STUNT doubles!" -from "Spaceballs" "Where Science ends, magic begins." -Spiral, Uncanny X-Men #491 My various stories and fan-fics are now here- https://m.fanfiction.net/u/4770494/#end Last edited by MsMarvelDuckie; 09-09-2013 at 05:49 PM.

09-09-2013, 05:07 PM	#708
Sleepingseeker Foot Soldier Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Chicago Posts: 213	Ms Marvel, JH, Bubbly, DN, your stories are all so entertaining and thrilling and great fun to read. Keep it up! MsMarvel, you have me thoroughly intrigued, woman! Same goes for you, Bubbly, can't wait to find out who A is. DN and JH you keep the good stuff flowing my way, okay? Without further ado, here is the FINAL Chapter of What Makes a Father... http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9463892/22/ I can't WAIT to see your reactions to this. MWHAHAHAH! Your thoughts and input greatly affect and influence me. I thank you for all the reviews you've left and continue to leave. The support is beyond kind and generous. HUGS __________________ ------------------------------------------------------ Love ya! http://www.fanfiction.net/~sleepingseeker http://sleepingseeker.deviantart.com/ http://sleepingseeker.tumblr.com/

09-09-2013, 05:47 PM	#709
MsMarvelDuckie I Married a Duck! Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: The bowels of Hell, Texas(otherwise known as Decatur) Posts: 8,772	Read and reviewed, SS! Yay! And Boo.... Yay that you did another update, but boo that it's the END of the story..... Yeah, I'm conflicted here. __________________ "You IDIOTS! You've captured their STUNT doubles!" -from "Spaceballs" "Where Science ends, magic begins." -Spiral, Uncanny X-Men #491 My various stories and fan-fics are now here- https://m.fanfiction.net/u/4770494/#end

09-09-2013, 08:12 PM	#710
DonatelloNinja82 Mad Scientist Join Date: Nov 2012 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 1,345	OMG SS...WHAT AN ENDING!! Totally didn't see that coming! I was expecting another look at the boys later on...totally not that! But great entrance into a sequel!! Duckie...love love love. Your Mikey is so awesome. To sound like Shrek, he's an onion...layers, he has layers!! I love intense Mikey...I demand more! Great update, Shredder sucks, and he needs a punch in the um....nose. Yah nose. __________________ Michelangelo: Holy guacamole with hot sauce and jalapenos!

09-10-2013, 08:34 AM	#711
BubblyShell22 Leo-holic Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Indiana Posts: 16,912	Awesome chapter, Duckie. Yeah, Shredder really needs his butt kicked for what he did to Orlene. So glad I'm caught up now. SS, awesome chapter. Didn't see that coming, and I can't wait for a sequel. __________________ "A warrior who never fails, never learns."-The Ancient One. "Embrace your inner a**holiness."-Mr. Anderson.

09-10-2013, 09:15 PM	#712
MsMarvelDuckie I Married a Duck! Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: The bowels of Hell, Texas(otherwise known as Decatur) Posts: 8,772	Yeah, I loved it too. What a great bg for the Rat King. And thanks for all the great reviews, guys, especially you, SS. You have no idea how close you came to what I've got planned for Donnie, but I'm gonna' have to figure out exactly how to work it in. I have a couple of ideas, but it's not exactly something that would "come up" in casual conversation, so it might require some serious poking to get it to work. I HAVE dropped a few hints already, for those who've been paying attention, but they are very subtle. Hopefully this will make everyone go "WTF??!!" and see Donnie in a whole new light...... And glad everyone liked "intense Mikey"!! I used SAINW as inspiration for his "darker" side in that chapter- I even steeled myself to re-watch that ep just so I'd get it right. I wanted to give him a good reason to drop the "funny-man" act for a bit, and that chapter was it. (Well, it was already in the original version of this tale- before the overhaul/rewrite- but it seemed like the perfect place to have him do some growing up....) Ah, but just wait until you guys see what's in store for the next chapter! I've tentatively called it "Techno-Syn-Drome" (It's a play on the Mortal Kombat theme's actual title, BTW. Just thought I'd throw that in, LOL!) __________________ "You IDIOTS! You've captured their STUNT doubles!" -from "Spaceballs" "Where Science ends, magic begins." -Spiral, Uncanny X-Men #491 My various stories and fan-fics are now here- https://m.fanfiction.net/u/4770494/#end Last edited by MsMarvelDuckie; 09-10-2013 at 09:23 PM.

09-11-2013, 07:35 AM	#713
BubblyShell22 Leo-holic Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Indiana Posts: 16,912	Sounds like it'll be awesome, Duckie. Can't wait to read it. __________________ "A warrior who never fails, never learns."-The Ancient One. "Embrace your inner a**holiness."-Mr. Anderson.

09-12-2013, 01:40 PM	#714
Sleepingseeker Foot Soldier Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Chicago Posts: 213	So, chapter 4 is up for Scar Tissue! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9576022/4/ I wasn't sure who was actually interested in my part two to The Long Way Home, but I got reinspired by a fan I haven't heard from in a while over on Deviantart. Check out my Mistress pic! mwhahah! Thank you guys so much for your support. You're all so wonderful! __________________ ------------------------------------------------------ Love ya! http://www.fanfiction.net/~sleepingseeker http://sleepingseeker.deviantart.com/ http://sleepingseeker.tumblr.com/

09-12-2013, 04:51 PM	#715
BubblyShell22 Leo-holic Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Indiana Posts: 16,912	Read and reviewed, Seeker. What a chapter. Can't believe The Mistress is back and up to her old tricks again. __________________ "A warrior who never fails, never learns."-The Ancient One. "Embrace your inner a**holiness."-Mr. Anderson.

09-13-2013, 06:10 AM	#716
ZariusTwo Overlord Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Britain, DINO THUNDER...POWER UP! Posts: 20,884	Sorry I havent been reviewing stuff lately guys, I've been very busy editing and designing. Consider today my catch-up day, and as a bonus, here's a chapter of Dreggs of Society http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9439636/...ggs-of-Society __________________ TMNT Fan Script Discussion Thread "It Should Have Ended Here"...add your ideal ending to the Series Fauxnale wiki Add Your Story to the TMNT Fanfiction Wiki Spider-Man: The Rescue Spider-Man: The Galloping Cat Spider-Man: Scarlet Mirror Doctor Who: Child of the Daleks

09-13-2013, 07:31 AM	#717
BubblyShell22 Leo-holic Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Indiana Posts: 16,912	Read and reviewed, Zar. Nice job as always. It's good to see you back. __________________ "A warrior who never fails, never learns."-The Ancient One. "Embrace your inner a**holiness."-Mr. Anderson.

09-13-2013, 05:45 PM	#718
DonatelloNinja82 Mad Scientist Join Date: Nov 2012 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 1,345	I've been wondering where you were, Zar! But totally worth the wait! Great chapter!! Excellent chapter to you as well, SS!! Things are really "heating" up!! I love the mental picture of April slamming her window shut, too. HAHA! Poor Don. __________________ Michelangelo: Holy guacamole with hot sauce and jalapenos!

09-13-2013, 06:55 PM	#719
MsMarvelDuckie I Married a Duck! Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: The bowels of Hell, Texas(otherwise known as Decatur) Posts: 8,772	Yeah, and that had to hurt, too- getting thrown out from that high up?! Geez, was she trying to KILL him?! Great chapter, though! And the new chapter of LIS is clicking along nicely- I expect to have it up in a day or two! Trust me, this one's going to make you go "WTF?!" Mikey's out for a little vengeance, and SOMEBODY'S gonna' feel the pain.... __________________ "You IDIOTS! You've captured their STUNT doubles!" -from "Spaceballs" "Where Science ends, magic begins." -Spiral, Uncanny X-Men #491 My various stories and fan-fics are now here- https://m.fanfiction.net/u/4770494/#end

09-14-2013, 11:21 PM	#720
DonatelloNinja82 Mad Scientist Join Date: Nov 2012 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 1,345	Chapter 3 of Sinners and Saints...Gluttony...I'm so mean... http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9646148/...ers-and-Saints And Duckie, cannot wait for the next chappy of LIS __________________ Michelangelo: Holy guacamole with hot sauce and jalapenos!