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*BubblyShell22* · 09-15-2013, 07:42 AM

Read and reviewed, DN. Nicely done on that one.

DonatelloNinja82 · 09-15-2013, 08:21 AM

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Read and reviewed, DN. Nicely done on that one.

Thank you very much, Bubbly!!

Sleepingseeker · 09-15-2013, 02:22 PM

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Yeah, and that had to hurt, too- getting thrown out from that high up?! Geez, was she trying to KILL him?! Great chapter, though! And the new chapter of LIS is clicking along nicely- I expect to have it up in a day or two! Trust me, this one's going to make you go "WTF?!" Mikey's out for a little vengeance, and SOMEBODY'S gonna' feel the pain....

Yep, but when you're as aggravated as April was at the moment, I'd say he got off lucky! XD Can't wait to read the update!

Sleepingseeker · 09-15-2013, 02:24 PM

Loved that chapter, DN. I can't tell you how much I love this little string of stories you're doing. They're really addictive and wonderful!

Okay, so Chapter 5 is up for Scar Tissue with the next chapter coming soon and that one will be a Mikey-filled extravaganza! XD I had a lot of fun with this recent chapter, particularly the scenes between Raph and his, uh, buddy. ;'D

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9576022/5/

DonatelloNinja82 · 09-15-2013, 04:00 PM

Wow, SS...what a chapter...poor Raphael...I cannot wait for Mikey chapter...and thanks for your kind words. Means so much to me.

*BubblyShell22* · 09-16-2013, 07:52 AM

Read and reviewed, SS. Awesome chapter. Man, Raph's in for it now. I can't wait for the Mikey chapter.

Sleepingseeker · 09-17-2013, 02:54 PM

Mikey's chapter is now up! eee!

poor Mikey . . .

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9576022/6/

*BubblyShell22* · 09-17-2013, 05:03 PM

Read and reviewed, Seeker. Awesome Mikey chapter. Loved the conflict he had and how he wanted to tell his brother and then forgot about it on his way home. Can't wait for more.

DonatelloNinja82 · 09-17-2013, 06:01 PM

AWSOME, SS!! I've been waiting for more Mikey from you

*MsMarvelDuckie* · 09-17-2013, 10:19 PM

Read and reviewed, SS! Loved that chappie! Poor Mikey- he's so confused. And he just escaped the jaws of- something even worse than death. *shudders* Makes me want to go hug the poor guy....

*ZariusTwo* · 09-18-2013, 05:59 AM

Great work SS, I'll leave a review

More from "The Dreggs of Society"

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9439636/...ggs-of-Society

*BubblyShell22* · 09-18-2013, 08:24 AM

Awesome chapter, Zar. I really liked it though I don't like the sound of that one reality Mikey referenced at the end.

*ZariusTwo* · 09-18-2013, 10:16 AM

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Originally Posted by BubblyShell22

Awesome chapter, Zar. I really liked it though I don't like the sound of that one reality Mikey referenced at the end.

Yeah, the scary thing is all the realitys he has seem too good to be true, but there's always a catch. More to come.

I'll try and finish off "We Are Shadows" over the next couple of weeks too, it's been almost a month since I updated it

*BubblyShell22* · 09-18-2013, 02:02 PM

Yeah, I hear you there. I'm trying to finish off Truth and Lies, but it's slow going. I only have eight pages in my notebook, so I'm trying to debate if I should use that for chapter 23 or if I should have an additional chapter that's an epilogue type deal. We'll see how it plays out. I really need to update it, too. Been leaving you guys hanging, and I can't do that.

*ZariusTwo* · 09-18-2013, 03:13 PM

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Originally Posted by BubblyShell22

Yeah, I hear you there. I'm trying to finish off Truth and Lies, but it's slow going. I only have eight pages in my notebook, so I'm trying to debate if I should use that for chapter 23 or if I should have an additional chapter that's an epilogue type deal. We'll see how it plays out. I really need to update it, too. Been leaving you guys hanging, and I can't do that.

Perfectly understandable,as a matter of fact, this week's update of "Dreggs" was meant to be slightly longer in length, but I made the decision to spill the second half into another chapter entirely because I felt I'd reached a good end point for a cliffhanger, and it seems to have worked given how you reacted to it. If you can find a similar spot with your eight page material, feel free to upload that, but only if you're happy with it.

Sleepingseeker · 09-18-2013, 06:30 PM

Looking forward to We Are Shadows update, Zar! Take your time and let it flow.

Speaking of flowing - Scar Tissue is possessing me, apparently, because I typed this next chapter up after work and just reviewed it after dinner and so now I'm posting it. Please enjoy yet another update . . .

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9576022/7/

One of these days I may just burn out from writing all this ff - yeah, in a big blaze of glory or my fingers are going to fall off . . . one of the two, I'm sure. Of course, I do have homework to attend to as well, hmmm, maybe that's why I've been so prolific, my tedious online classes await...

*BubblyShell22* · 09-19-2013, 03:43 PM

Read and reviewed the chapter, Seeker. Awesome job. Man, that had to suck for Leo getting attacked like that. Can't wait for more.

And, Zar, I know what you mean. We'll see how things go and how I can work it out.

*ZariusTwo* · 09-20-2013, 07:24 AM

Love your work SS, you're one of the more 'dangerous' TMNT writers we have, never letting anyone take it easy and constantly creating relationship and physical hurdles for them all to overcome.

"We Are Shadows" update, only a few more chapters left to go

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9147756/55/We-Are-Shadows

*BubblyShell22* · 09-20-2013, 07:57 AM

Awesome chapter, Zar. I really liked it and how you referenced the first movie. Good job. Can't wait for more.

DonatelloNinja82 · 09-20-2013, 06:51 PM

Great chapter, SS! I love this story!!

Glad for the update, Zar! I caught the 1st movie reference too! Love it!!

09-15-2013, 07:42 AM	#721
BubblyShell22 Leo-holic Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Indiana Posts: 16,912	Read and reviewed, DN. Nicely done on that one. __________________ "A warrior who never fails, never learns."-The Ancient One. "Embrace your inner a**holiness."-Mr. Anderson.

09-15-2013, 02:24 PM	#724
Sleepingseeker Foot Soldier Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Chicago Posts: 213	Loved that chapter, DN. I can't tell you how much I love this little string of stories you're doing. They're really addictive and wonderful! Okay, so Chapter 5 is up for Scar Tissue with the next chapter coming soon and that one will be a Mikey-filled extravaganza! XD I had a lot of fun with this recent chapter, particularly the scenes between Raph and his, uh, buddy. ;'D http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9576022/5/ __________________ ------------------------------------------------------ Love ya! http://www.fanfiction.net/~sleepingseeker http://sleepingseeker.deviantart.com/ http://sleepingseeker.tumblr.com/

09-15-2013, 04:00 PM	#725
DonatelloNinja82 Mad Scientist Join Date: Nov 2012 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 1,345	Wow, SS...what a chapter...poor Raphael...I cannot wait for Mikey chapter...and thanks for your kind words. Means so much to me. __________________ Michelangelo: Holy guacamole with hot sauce and jalapenos!

09-16-2013, 07:52 AM	#726
BubblyShell22 Leo-holic Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Indiana Posts: 16,912	Read and reviewed, SS. Awesome chapter. Man, Raph's in for it now. I can't wait for the Mikey chapter. __________________ "A warrior who never fails, never learns."-The Ancient One. "Embrace your inner a**holiness."-Mr. Anderson.

09-17-2013, 02:54 PM	#727
Sleepingseeker Foot Soldier Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Chicago Posts: 213	Mikey's chapter is now up! eee! poor Mikey . . . http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9576022/6/ __________________ ------------------------------------------------------ Love ya! http://www.fanfiction.net/~sleepingseeker http://sleepingseeker.deviantart.com/ http://sleepingseeker.tumblr.com/

09-17-2013, 05:03 PM	#728
BubblyShell22 Leo-holic Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Indiana Posts: 16,912	Read and reviewed, Seeker. Awesome Mikey chapter. Loved the conflict he had and how he wanted to tell his brother and then forgot about it on his way home. Can't wait for more. __________________ "A warrior who never fails, never learns."-The Ancient One. "Embrace your inner a**holiness."-Mr. Anderson.

09-17-2013, 06:01 PM	#729
DonatelloNinja82 Mad Scientist Join Date: Nov 2012 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 1,345	AWSOME, SS!! I've been waiting for more Mikey from you __________________ Michelangelo: Holy guacamole with hot sauce and jalapenos!

09-17-2013, 10:19 PM	#730
MsMarvelDuckie I Married a Duck! Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: The bowels of Hell, Texas(otherwise known as Decatur) Posts: 8,772	Read and reviewed, SS! Loved that chappie! Poor Mikey- he's so confused. And he just escaped the jaws of- something even worse than death. shudders Makes me want to go hug the poor guy.... __________________ "You IDIOTS! You've captured their STUNT doubles!" -from "Spaceballs" "Where Science ends, magic begins." -Spiral, Uncanny X-Men #491 My various stories and fan-fics are now here- https://m.fanfiction.net/u/4770494/#end

09-18-2013, 05:59 AM	#731
ZariusTwo Overlord Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Britain, DINO THUNDER...POWER UP! Posts: 20,887	Great work SS, I'll leave a review More from "The Dreggs of Society" http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9439636/...ggs-of-Society __________________ TMNT Fan Script Discussion Thread "It Should Have Ended Here"...add your ideal ending to the Series Fauxnale wiki Add Your Story to the TMNT Fanfiction Wiki Spider-Man: The Rescue Spider-Man: The Galloping Cat Spider-Man: Scarlet Mirror Doctor Who: Child of the Daleks

09-18-2013, 08:24 AM	#732
BubblyShell22 Leo-holic Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Indiana Posts: 16,912	Awesome chapter, Zar. I really liked it though I don't like the sound of that one reality Mikey referenced at the end. __________________ "A warrior who never fails, never learns."-The Ancient One. "Embrace your inner a**holiness."-Mr. Anderson.

09-18-2013, 02:02 PM	#734
BubblyShell22 Leo-holic Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Indiana Posts: 16,912	Yeah, I hear you there. I'm trying to finish off Truth and Lies, but it's slow going. I only have eight pages in my notebook, so I'm trying to debate if I should use that for chapter 23 or if I should have an additional chapter that's an epilogue type deal. We'll see how it plays out. I really need to update it, too. Been leaving you guys hanging, and I can't do that. __________________ "A warrior who never fails, never learns."-The Ancient One. "Embrace your inner a**holiness."-Mr. Anderson.

09-18-2013, 06:30 PM	#736
Sleepingseeker Foot Soldier Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Chicago Posts: 213	Looking forward to We Are Shadows update, Zar! Take your time and let it flow. Speaking of flowing - Scar Tissue is possessing me, apparently, because I typed this next chapter up after work and just reviewed it after dinner and so now I'm posting it. Please enjoy yet another update . . . http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9576022/7/ One of these days I may just burn out from writing all this ff - yeah, in a big blaze of glory or my fingers are going to fall off . . . one of the two, I'm sure. Of course, I do have homework to attend to as well, hmmm, maybe that's why I've been so prolific, my tedious online classes await... __________________ ------------------------------------------------------ Love ya! http://www.fanfiction.net/~sleepingseeker http://sleepingseeker.deviantart.com/ http://sleepingseeker.tumblr.com/

09-19-2013, 03:43 PM	#737
BubblyShell22 Leo-holic Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Indiana Posts: 16,912	Read and reviewed the chapter, Seeker. Awesome job. Man, that had to suck for Leo getting attacked like that. Can't wait for more. And, Zar, I know what you mean. We'll see how things go and how I can work it out. __________________ "A warrior who never fails, never learns."-The Ancient One. "Embrace your inner a**holiness."-Mr. Anderson.

09-20-2013, 07:24 AM	#738
ZariusTwo Overlord Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Britain, DINO THUNDER...POWER UP! Posts: 20,887	Love your work SS, you're one of the more 'dangerous' TMNT writers we have, never letting anyone take it easy and constantly creating relationship and physical hurdles for them all to overcome. "We Are Shadows" update, only a few more chapters left to go http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9147756/55/We-Are-Shadows __________________ TMNT Fan Script Discussion Thread "It Should Have Ended Here"...add your ideal ending to the Series Fauxnale wiki Add Your Story to the TMNT Fanfiction Wiki Spider-Man: The Rescue Spider-Man: The Galloping Cat Spider-Man: Scarlet Mirror Doctor Who: Child of the Daleks

09-20-2013, 07:57 AM	#739
BubblyShell22 Leo-holic Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Indiana Posts: 16,912	Awesome chapter, Zar. I really liked it and how you referenced the first movie. Good job. Can't wait for more. __________________ "A warrior who never fails, never learns."-The Ancient One. "Embrace your inner a**holiness."-Mr. Anderson.

09-20-2013, 06:51 PM	#740
DonatelloNinja82 Mad Scientist Join Date: Nov 2012 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 1,345	Great chapter, SS! I love this story!! Glad for the update, Zar! I caught the 1st movie reference too! Love it!! __________________ Michelangelo: Holy guacamole with hot sauce and jalapenos!