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Old 02-11-2013, 06:18 PM   #81
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Yeah, the start looks great! Lone Wolf and Cub reference... tell me, Zarius, are you a comics fan?
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Old 02-12-2013, 05:16 AM   #82
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Yeah, the start looks great! Lone Wolf and Cub reference... tell me, Zarius, are you a comics fan?
To an almost unhealthy degree, yes.
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Old 02-17-2013, 07:46 AM   #83
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EDIT: Disregard. Fifth book will be out soon

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Old 02-17-2013, 11:23 AM   #84
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I've no personal problems with reading the story right now just because it's Christmas in it. Those who refuse can always wait until at least Advent or something.

Also, the story risks the drown in other Christmas stories at that time.
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Old 02-17-2013, 01:03 PM   #85
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I've no personal problems with reading the story right now just because it's Christmas in it. Those who refuse can always wait until at least Advent or something.
Perhaps you didn't read this bit:

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My fandom is not confined to just TMNT, there are many television series and comic heroes that I wish to write fanfics about in the coming year, and I need free time to write them
In short, you're gonna have to learn a little something called "paitence". The fifth book will be arriving in December. Bottom line.

And I don't care if the story gets lost in Chirstmas 'fic traffic on there. The link to it will always be availible here and it'll always make it to the top of the pile each time it's updated daily until completion, so there's nothing to 'fuss about.

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Old 02-19-2013, 08:06 AM   #86
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Take your time, Zarius. I'm very patient and will wait the allotted time until you have the stories up. In the meantime, I'll enjoy the ones you're doing now and review them as needed.
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Old 02-19-2013, 09:07 AM   #87
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Take your time, Zarius. I'm very patient and will wait the allotted time until you have the stories up. In the meantime, I'll enjoy the ones you're doing now and review them as needed.
Thanks Bubbly. To be honest, I might change my mind if I feel the fifth story is too good to spend in limbo until December (because from what I have written of it so far, it'll definatly please people). We'll see how it goes for now.
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Old 02-19-2013, 12:49 PM   #88
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Hey, it's your choice. Do what makes you feel comfortable.
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Old 02-20-2013, 07:56 AM   #89
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I've decided not to wait unitl December for the fifth book.

I've also added the episode titles for wave two.

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Old 02-20-2013, 08:01 AM   #90
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Awesome. Can't wait to read it.
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Old 02-20-2013, 08:11 AM   #91
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My favourites, so far, are

*"So Long, No Thanks For All The Fish"
*"The Lotus and the Sun"
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Old 02-20-2013, 02:13 PM   #92
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Good news Zarius! I'm sure it'll be great if your other stories are anything to go by. The Lotus and the Sun is very good, i'm really enjoying it.
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Old 02-20-2013, 03:07 PM   #93
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Good news Zarius! I'm sure it'll be great if your other stories are anything to go by. The Lotus and the Sun is very good, i'm really enjoying it.
Glad you're enjoying it Blossom, I think it's one of my best ones yet, I aim to try and top the previous one every time with some kind of hook. Just about finished "Lotus and the Sun", though it might be at least one chapter longer than planned.

The fifth book is really worth it. It's the one TMNT story I've been wanting to tell for years.
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Old 02-20-2013, 03:54 PM   #94
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Glad you're enjoying it Blossom, I think it's one of my best ones yet, I aim to try and top the previous one every time with some kind of hook. Just about finished "Lotus and the Sun", though it might be at least one chapter longer than planned.

The fifth book is really worth it. It's the one TMNT story I've been wanting to tell for years.
Well those types of stories are always the best and most satisfying to write, looking forward to it
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Yeah, I really like "The Lotus and the Sun" as well. It's so well-written and keeps me on my toes.
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Old 02-21-2013, 08:30 AM   #96
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Yeah, I really like "The Lotus and the Sun" as well. It's so well-written
Surprised you think that given all the spelling mistakes you find...
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Old 02-21-2013, 01:03 PM   #97
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Book Four is complete
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Old 02-21-2013, 04:26 PM   #98
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Surprised you think that given all the spelling mistakes you find...
I meant well-written as in it has a good plot. Just because you have spelling mistakes doesn't mean you're a bad writer. It happens to all of us.

Just finished reading and reviewing book four. Loved it.
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Old 02-21-2013, 04:50 PM   #99
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I meant well-written as in it has a good plot. Just because you have spelling mistakes doesn't mean you're a bad writer. It happens to all of us.
Yeah, I appreciate that. Just being a bit self-depricating.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Definatly one of my faves.
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Old 02-22-2013, 03:35 AM   #100
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How do you get all these plots, and create your stories?

This is how I do:

First (I write stand alone-stories, tied to the seasons) I think of a topic (I've written about music recording industry, Christmas, sports and different geographical locations on Earth just to mention some) and decide which characters to use. Then I create a storyline, like how the story goes (like start at Channel 6, then sewers, Technodrome and whatever). Then I write the story just elementary. Then I go back and add some more lines, social conversations (like turtles-Splinter, April-Vernon, April-Irma, Shredder-Krang, Bebop-Rocksteady), pop culture references, descriptions of weather/season and nature to create more fealing.
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http://www.fanfiction.net/u/968367/O...NT-Cartoon-Fan

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