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Old 01-06-2006, 02:36 AM   #81
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Violence! Violence! Teeth! Blood!

Ohhh... Part 2 looks so promising!

BTW - page 60 - middle panel - Raph lacks his belt in here. Also, I'm not quite sure but Leo most probably lacks his left elbow-band in the panel above the aforementioned one. And a bit of bandage too.
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Old 01-06-2006, 10:43 AM   #82
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Hi

Thats the top of Leo's arm, so u can't see the bandage and I totally forgot about Raph's belt in the lower panel. All fixed now though mate.

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Old 01-06-2006, 01:12 PM   #83
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wow tony day good job
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Old 01-06-2006, 01:57 PM   #84
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I'm feeling terrible for Raph, that poor thing... BUt as usual, great work. I can't ait to see, what happens next.
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Old 01-06-2006, 02:00 PM   #85
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Well nicely done! The details are very refined, and bring a delightful 3-D, and a more realistic appearance to the comic. Awsome job. but I hope Rpah and his 3 brothers won't let this silly feud go too far!
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Old 01-06-2006, 04:18 PM   #86
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Hi guys and girls.

Just finished the last page of Turtle Turncoat and all I can say is phew!!!, that took a long time! (the whole thing that is)

See u in part 2.

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Old 01-06-2006, 04:28 PM   #87
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Oh superstar, Tony! Raph left and I can't wait to see Part 2.

Care if I save all your pages on my hard disk and cbr them? Thanks to that, I'd be able to watch them more easily in CDisplay, like the other comics I have. That would be great for me

Oh. And BTW - although I haven't spotted any goof in page 62... There's one in page 57. Bottom right panel - Leo lacks his bandage... again
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Old 01-06-2006, 04:30 PM   #88
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Man, I miss alot not being on my computer, thet last like four pages that is, all great, and the last page with the little "To be continued" was really cool. I feel bad for Raph, really.

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Old 01-06-2006, 07:38 PM   #89
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Whoa, what a way to end the first part! Violence!
I really like how Raphael regrets having offended his family. He seems to really mean it but cannot say it... right?
Can't wait to see the consequences of this separation your second chapter, Tony!
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Old 01-07-2006, 10:45 AM   #90
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I can't wait for part 2!!! This is such a cool comic, Tony, and it's getting better for every page...
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Old 01-07-2006, 07:12 PM   #91
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Indeed, I so can't wait. I hope in the end Raphie finds some redemption.
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Old 01-13-2006, 02:34 AM   #92
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Old 01-13-2006, 09:52 AM   #93
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Could I host the CBR on my IRC-Server? I think people would appreciate that. Besides, I'm constantly looking for new TMNT-stuff to host. Of course, you'll receive credit and I will not claim your work to be mine at any point.
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Old 01-13-2006, 09:59 AM   #94
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Yeah, reading a cbr-ed version would be much easier for the viewer.
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Old 01-14-2006, 04:35 AM   #95
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Old 01-15-2006, 12:55 AM   #96
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The closest those guys ever got to throttling each other actually in the series prior to this was in "Turtle Trek", not in a sense of love potions or spells or what not, it was just pure teamwork dissolution
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Old 01-31-2006, 11:07 AM   #97
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I hope that a gap of 15 days isn't 'resurrecting an old topic'.

Some great art and depictions in Turtle Turncoat so far... and certainly going in an interesting direction.

All I can really suggest, is maybe havea look at some New York reference shots... most of the buildings are lined up in straight lines due to the grid system, and maybe put in some New York landmarks for a general idea of where in the city the scene is taking place.

That's really it, aside from that, keep up the high standard of quality.
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Old 01-31-2006, 12:22 PM   #98
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OMG!!! I about cried with this ending. I've always seen something like this happen. All the hiding underground...you can't expect someone like Raph to be content. What happens? KABOOM!
It is kinda iffy that they others would beat the living crap out of him, but he did, inadvertantly hit Splinter pretty hard and they snapped. So who knows.
I think Raph in this oughta have a good long therapy session!
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Old 01-31-2006, 07:07 PM   #99
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this tale is amazing to say the least I was just re-reading the entire thing till the new to be continued and wow I always saw that happening but they never did it...sure they hinted at raph living alone in mirage and heck even was talked about in the next mutation tv series that didnt get to far...but you did it...and it's great and the art work is beautiful to say the least not my favorite style but it's great for what it is your robotic drawings are the best though The Technodrome is amazing looking!
I agree with buslady man I almost cried at that end poor raph!
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Old 01-31-2006, 08:35 PM   #100
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Buslady showed me this web comic today and I have to say that WOW! Awesome series!!! Poor Raphie tho. I hope Splinter is ok. I love the Manga looks of April and Casey. Is Casey alright tho? He wasn't shown at all in the end.

Can't wait for Pt 2!!! When will the first issue of that be out???
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