Turtle Turncoat - Page 5

*Sewer Bull* · 01-06-2006, 01:36 AM

Violence! Violence! Teeth! Blood!

Ohhh... Part 2 looks so promising!

BTW - page 60 - middle panel - Raph lacks his belt in here. Also, I'm not quite sure but Leo most probably lacks his left elbow-band in the panel above the aforementioned one. And a bit of bandage too.

Tony Day · 01-06-2006, 09:43 AM

Thats the top of Leo's arm, so u can't see the bandage and I totally forgot about Raph's belt in the lower panel. All fixed now though mate.

Laterz bro

hazlov2004 · 01-06-2006, 12:12 PM

wow tony day good job

*Garou* · 01-06-2006, 12:57 PM

I'm feeling terrible for Raph, that poor thing... BUt as usual, great work. I can't ait to see, what happens next.

-Savannah- · 01-06-2006, 01:00 PM

Well nicely done! The details are very refined, and bring a delightful 3-D, and a more realistic appearance to the comic. Awsome job. but I hope Rpah and his 3 brothers won't let this silly feud go too far!

Tony Day · 01-06-2006, 03:18 PM

Hi guys and girls.

Just finished the last page of Turtle Turncoat and all I can say is phew!!!, that took a long time! (the whole thing that is)

See u in part 2.

Laterz

Tony

*Sewer Bull* · 01-06-2006, 03:28 PM

Oh superstar, Tony! Raph left and I can't wait to see Part 2.

Care if I save all your pages on my hard disk and cbr them? Thanks to that, I'd be able to watch them more easily in CDisplay, like the other comics I have. That would be great for me

Oh. And BTW - although I haven't spotted any goof in page 62... There's one in page 57. Bottom right panel - Leo lacks his bandage... again

*Weapon X* · 01-06-2006, 03:30 PM

Man, I miss alot not being on my computer, thet last like four pages that is, all great, and the last page with the little "To be continued" was really cool. I feel bad for Raph, really.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tony Day

See u in part 2.

Can't wait.

Tigerfog · 01-06-2006, 06:38 PM

Whoa, what a way to end the first part! Violence!

I really like how Raphael regrets having offended his family. He seems to really mean it but cannot say it... right?
Can't wait to see the consequences of this separation your second chapter, Tony!

*Garou* · 01-07-2006, 09:45 AM

I can't wait for part 2!!! This is such a cool comic, Tony, and it's getting better for every page...

**Jester** · 01-07-2006, 06:12 PM

Indeed, I so can't wait. I hope in the end Raphie finds some redemption.

Tony Day · 01-13-2006, 01:34 AM

Sewerbull

cbr away my friend

*Anarky* · 01-13-2006, 08:52 AM

Could I host the CBR on my IRC-Server? I think people would appreciate that. Besides, I'm constantly looking for new TMNT-stuff to host. Of course, you'll receive credit and I will not claim your work to be mine at any point.

*Sewer Bull* · 01-13-2006, 08:59 AM

Yeah, reading a cbr-ed version would be much easier for the viewer.

Tony Day · 01-14-2006, 03:35 AM

no problem anarky

*ZariusTwo* · 01-14-2006, 11:55 PM

The closest those guys ever got to throttling each other actually in the series prior to this was in "Turtle Trek", not in a sense of love potions or spells or what not, it was just pure teamwork dissolution

Kingpin · 01-31-2006, 10:07 AM

I hope that a gap of 15 days isn't 'resurrecting an old topic'.

Some great art and depictions in Turtle Turncoat so far... and certainly going in an interesting direction.

All I can really suggest, is maybe havea look at some New York reference shots... most of the buildings are lined up in straight lines due to the grid system, and maybe put in some New York landmarks for a general idea of where in the city the scene is taking place.

That's really it, aside from that, keep up the high standard of quality.

*Buslady* · 01-31-2006, 11:22 AM

OMG!!! I about cried with this ending. I've always seen something like this happen. All the hiding underground...you can't expect someone like Raph to be content. What happens? KABOOM!
It is kinda iffy that they others would beat the living crap out of him, but he did, inadvertantly hit Splinter pretty hard and they snapped. So who knows.
I think Raph in this oughta have a good long therapy session!

*VaughnMichael* · 01-31-2006, 06:07 PM

this tale is amazing to say the least I was just re-reading the entire thing till the new to be continued and wow I always saw that happening but they never did it...sure they hinted at raph living alone in mirage and heck even was talked about in the next mutation tv series that didnt get to far...but you did it...and it's great and the art work is beautiful to say the least not my favorite style but it's great for what it is

your robotic drawings are the best though The Technodrome is amazing looking!
I agree with buslady man I almost cried at that end poor raph!
-Putrescent

*Raph's Girl* · 01-31-2006, 07:35 PM

Buslady showed me this web comic today and I have to say that WOW! Awesome series!!! Poor Raphie tho.

I hope Splinter is ok. I love the Manga looks of April and Casey. Is Casey alright tho? He wasn't shown at all in the end.

Can't wait for Pt 2!!! When will the first issue of that be out???

01-06-2006, 01:36 AM	#81
Sewer Bull Devil's Advocate Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 4,768	Violence! Violence! Teeth! Blood! Ohhh... Part 2 looks so promising! BTW - page 60 - middle panel - Raph lacks his belt in here. Also, I'm not quite sure but Leo most probably lacks his left elbow-band in the panel above the aforementioned one. And a bit of bandage too. __________________ Soooo... THIS* is how you spend your free time now?!*

01-06-2006, 09:43 AM	#82
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 555	Hi Thats the top of Leo's arm, so u can't see the bandage and I totally forgot about Raph's belt in the lower panel. All fixed now though mate. Laterz bro

01-06-2006, 12:12 PM	#83
hazlov2004 Mad Scientist Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Conyers GA Posts: 1,272	wow tony day good job __________________ Im a silly and random person

01-06-2006, 12:57 PM	#84
Garou On a X-Men: Evo trip! Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: In a different and wicked reality... Posts: 1,991	I'm feeling terrible for Raph, that poor thing... BUt as usual, great work. I can't ait to see, what happens next. __________________ Ferret Bureau of Investigation

01-06-2006, 01:00 PM	#85
-Savannah- Mad Scientist Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Someplace or another... Posts: 1,366	Well nicely done! The details are very refined, and bring a delightful 3-D, and a more realistic appearance to the comic. Awsome job. but I hope Rpah and his 3 brothers won't let this silly feud go too far! __________________ ~Love was a gentle breeze, weaves it's spell upon your ♥.~ ((LeAnn Rimes, Can't Fight the Moonlight))

01-06-2006, 03:18 PM	#86
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 555	New Page Hi guys and girls. Just finished the last page of Turtle Turncoat and all I can say is phew!!!, that took a long time! (the whole thing that is) See u in part 2. Laterz Tony

01-06-2006, 03:28 PM	#87
Sewer Bull Devil's Advocate Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 4,768	Oh superstar, Tony! Raph left and I can't wait to see Part 2. Care if I save all your pages on my hard disk and cbr them? Thanks to that, I'd be able to watch them more easily in CDisplay, like the other comics I have. That would be great for me Oh. And BTW - although I haven't spotted any goof in page 62... There's one in page 57. Bottom right panel - Leo lacks his bandage... again __________________ Soooo... THIS* is how you spend your free time now?!*

01-06-2006, 06:38 PM	#89
Tigerfog Hench Mutant Join Date: May 2004 Location: Montreal (Quebec, Canada) Posts: 348	Whoa, what a way to end the first part! Violence! I really like how Raphael regrets having offended his family. He seems to really mean it but cannot say it... right? Can't wait to see the consequences of this separation your second chapter, Tony! __________________

01-07-2006, 09:45 AM	#90
Garou On a X-Men: Evo trip! Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: In a different and wicked reality... Posts: 1,991	I can't wait for part 2!!! This is such a cool comic, Tony, and it's getting better for every page... __________________ Ferret Bureau of Investigation

01-07-2006, 06:12 PM	#91
Jester Rat-faced Dude-guy Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Arkansas Posts: 26,216	Indeed, I so can't wait. I hope in the end Raphie finds some redemption. __________________ "Clearly, you're Ninja Turtling incorrectly." - Leo656

01-13-2006, 01:34 AM	#92
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 555	Sewerbull cbr away my friend

01-13-2006, 08:52 AM	#93
Anarky Outlaw Hero Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Tannhauser Gate Posts: 4,867	Could I host the CBR on my IRC-Server? I think people would appreciate that. Besides, I'm constantly looking for new TMNT-stuff to host. Of course, you'll receive credit and I will not claim your work to be mine at any point. __________________ Because it's... I dunno... brutal.

01-13-2006, 08:59 AM	#94
Sewer Bull Devil's Advocate Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 4,768	Yeah, reading a cbr-ed version would be much easier for the viewer. __________________ Soooo... THIS* is how you spend your free time now?!*

01-14-2006, 03:35 AM	#95
Tony Day Stone Warrior Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Indiana Posts: 555	no problem anarky

01-14-2006, 11:55 PM	#96
ZariusTwo Overlord Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Britain, DINO THUNDER...POWER UP! Posts: 20,885	The closest those guys ever got to throttling each other actually in the series prior to this was in "Turtle Trek", not in a sense of love potions or spells or what not, it was just pure teamwork dissolution __________________ TMNT Fan Script Discussion Thread "It Should Have Ended Here"...add your ideal ending to the Series Fauxnale wiki Add Your Story to the TMNT Fanfiction Wiki Spider-Man: The Rescue Spider-Man: The Galloping Cat Spider-Man: Scarlet Mirror Doctor Who: Child of the Daleks

01-31-2006, 10:07 AM	#97
Kingpin Thug Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 74	I hope that a gap of 15 days isn't 'resurrecting an old topic'. Some great art and depictions in Turtle Turncoat so far... and certainly going in an interesting direction. All I can really suggest, is maybe havea look at some New York reference shots... most of the buildings are lined up in straight lines due to the grid system, and maybe put in some New York landmarks for a general idea of where in the city the scene is taking place. That's really it, aside from that, keep up the high standard of quality. __________________ "We have the tools, we have the talent"

01-31-2006, 11:22 AM	#98
Buslady WingsOfDarkness! Perkele! Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: In 7803... Posts: 4,366	OMG!!! I about cried with this ending. I've always seen something like this happen. All the hiding underground...you can't expect someone like Raph to be content. What happens? KABOOM! It is kinda iffy that they others would beat the living crap out of him, but he did, inadvertantly hit Splinter pretty hard and they snapped. So who knows. I think Raph in this oughta have a good long therapy session! __________________

01-31-2006, 06:07 PM	#99
VaughnMichael I'm Baaaaaaccck! Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Pittsburgh, PA Posts: 11,833	this tale is amazing to say the least I was just re-reading the entire thing till the new to be continued and wow I always saw that happening but they never did it...sure they hinted at raph living alone in mirage and heck even was talked about in the next mutation tv series that didnt get to far...but you did it...and it's great and the art work is beautiful to say the least not my favorite style but it's great for what it is your robotic drawings are the best though The Technodrome is amazing looking! I agree with buslady man I almost cried at that end poor raph! -Putrescent

01-31-2006, 07:35 PM	#100
Raph's Girl Dierna Soul, Reporter Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Jakku Posts: 10,831	Buslady showed me this web comic today and I have to say that WOW! Awesome series!!! Poor Raphie tho. I hope Splinter is ok. I love the Manga looks of April and Casey. Is Casey alright tho? He wasn't shown at all in the end. Can't wait for Pt 2!!! When will the first issue of that be out??? __________________