04-12-2011, 02:18 PM | #21 |
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Dude, that is a fantastic improvement!
I see you also rendered some of April's pockets and jumpsuit details, as well as the clothing folds. Your overall progress has been fun to watch over these last few years.
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EDIT: or maybe egg-shaped. I can't really express it. Maybe experiment with some slightly largely eyes too, as those will benefit animation.
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04-12-2011, 03:34 PM | #24 |
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Slightly Bigger Eyes...Slightly modified face. April on right has colors sampled from the first episode... |
04-12-2011, 03:39 PM | #25 | |
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EDIT: You might wanna add a zipper seam down the front of the jumpsuit and perhaps some seams around the shoulders.
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04-12-2011, 03:49 PM | #26 |
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Whoa, thats some really amazing work. April looks pretty good, love how awesome donatello looks.
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I think u did an amazing job though, really top notch work.
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04-12-2011, 05:32 PM | #28 |
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The models are cool, the animation is great and the fact that you have done the intro complete is impressive.
However the actual final images you are showing us can be improved a lot by tweaking the rendering options (and maybe the lightning). Are you using Ray Tracer? Kinda looks as if the Ray Tracing option is off... |
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I am using Mental Ray.. Unfortunately, I never got beyond basic rendering and lighting. These are all the standard options with nothing changed.. The latest changes. Now only the arms look like they could use a tad bit of work.. Next up, getting an improved color scheme that works for the Technodrome |
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04-12-2011, 09:35 PM | #30 |
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One thing on April's shoulder jumpsuit seams...
According to the model sheet, it appears the seams should be located below her shoulders rather than above them. I'm guessing it wasn't a consistent thing in the show, but I think it looks a little better like this:
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Not to sound like a letch, but did they remove April's cleavage from that model?
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04-12-2011, 10:23 PM | #34 |
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Pretty neat.
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04-13-2011, 12:46 PM | #35 |
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Final April changes to shoulders.... Now that April is done, What is wrong with Krang? What can we do to make him more show accurate? Last edited by Vegita-San; 04-13-2011 at 12:58 PM. |
04-13-2011, 01:52 PM | #36 |
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A few minor changes...what's wrong with this model? Last edited by Vegita-San; 04-13-2011 at 02:07 PM. |
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Check this out!
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04-13-2011, 02:44 PM | #40 |
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While waiting on Krang reviews, here's another one.
My base Turtle Model with skin color directly from The Big Blow Out. Now, what is wrong with this model? |
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