[Fanfic] Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles (OT)- The Fan Audio Scripts - Page 3

*ZariusTwo* · 01-22-2013, 11:57 AM

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Originally Posted by Swedenfan 1982

Are they sequels, so I will have to read them in order?

Yes, as the stories progress, certain little things happen in them that contribute to an overall arc that pays off in the fifth episode and then builds over the second wave.

*ZariusTwo* · 01-22-2013, 01:12 PM

Second script is up.

*Original TMNT Cartoon Fan* · 01-22-2013, 02:23 PM

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Originally Posted by ZariusTwo

Second script is up.

Is it my computer? When I check it out, I just see everything written, just word after word, nothing like "So Long, No Thanks For All The Fish".

*ZariusTwo* · 01-22-2013, 03:56 PM

I think it might be because I saved this script as an HTML file.

*Refractive Reflections* · 01-24-2013, 11:59 PM

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Originally Posted by ZariusTwo

Yes, as the stories progress, certain little things happen in them that contribute to an overall arc that pays off in the fifth episode and then builds over the second wave.

Interesting ZariusTwo...

It's an added bonus, in which I like stories that have small details/clues for the reader to pick up on that contributes to the overall arc/story. Looks like I have to read your stories even more carefully now!

*BubblyShell22* · 01-25-2013, 07:30 AM

I've checked out the second story. It's awesome so far, and I can't wait to see what else you have in store for it.

*ZariusTwo* · 01-26-2013, 01:29 PM

Man was retweeking my second script a nightmare. Deviantart's new upgrades suck

*BubblyShell22* · 01-26-2013, 01:52 PM

Wow. Not cool, Zarius. I'd be mad if it were me.

*Original TMNT Cartoon Fan* · 01-27-2013, 07:40 AM

Thankfully, I prefer the novelizations

*ZariusTwo* · 01-27-2013, 07:56 AM

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Originally Posted by Swedenfan 1982

Thankfully, I prefer the novelizations

So do I. I have to pander to a listening audience with the scripts where as the novelizations allow me to describe things a bit more visually.

*ZariusTwo* · 01-27-2013, 02:15 PM

Novelization of "My Seer, My Secretary" is complete

*BubblyShell22* · 01-27-2013, 02:51 PM

Yep, finished reading it and thought it was awesome. Good job. Can't wait for the next one.

*ZariusTwo* · 01-27-2013, 03:53 PM

Thaks. Sorry for all the mistakes you keep finding. I get pretty bummed when that happens, I feel stupid when I slip up and sometimes think I'm dyspraxic because it happens all the time.

*Jephael* · 01-27-2013, 03:56 PM

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Originally Posted by ZariusTwo

Sorry for all the mistakes you keep finding. I get pretty bummed when that happens, I feel stupid when I slip up and sometimes think I'm dyspraxic because it happens all the time.

Happens to the best of us, dude.

*ZariusTwo* · 01-27-2013, 05:04 PM

I suppose so. Thanks for the reassurence.

Blossombrooks · 01-27-2013, 05:30 PM

I'm still reading but enjoying the story so much! I'll catch up soon. Don't be too hard on yourself about mistakes. A lot of TMNT speak isn't in the spell checker, it's easy to gloss over all the red squiggles! Been there, done that.

*BubblyShell22* · 01-28-2013, 08:29 AM

Hey, no sweat, Zarius. And don't be down on yourself for the mistakes. It's happened to me, too. Just keep on trucking and you'll get it. And even if you are dyslexic, it's nothing to be ashamed of. You're still an awesome writer, and that's what counts.

*ZariusTwo* · 01-28-2013, 10:53 AM

Thanks guys, I just had a down period yesterday, I appreciate the kind words, trust me, I've only just begun with these.

Just for making me a feel better, here's a cryptic little preview of what's to come

Episode Three sees Raph getting too encylopedic for the Turtles own good, and comes close to spilling a secret many of them arent even aware they already know. Meanwhile, Shredder and Krang target the seven most important bakers in the world!

Episode Four sees Leo take center stage as Lotus Blossom runs a gauntlet on a special errand, prompting his assistance, whilst Shredder and Krang attempt to move something big, hot, and important to everyone out of orbit, the remaining Turtles head to space to halt the heist.

And Episode Five features festivity as Leonardo, Splinter, and the Punk Frogs try to clear a freeway on a busy christmas afternoon, The Rat King holds an orphanage hostage, Mike's urge to do some special christmas shopping inspires Raph to pull a rib on him, whilst Donatello tries to repair a teddy bear. Plus, a certain mystery lingering from a favoruite episode of mine from the old show is explained.

*BubblyShell22* · 01-28-2013, 03:44 PM

Oooh, some interesting plots there indeed. Can't wait to read them. I'm especially excited for episode four as I'm a huge Leo fan and can't wait to see him shine.

*Refractive Reflections* · 01-31-2013, 03:20 PM

Hey ZariusTwo,

Hope you don't mind the detailed reviews I'm giving. I just wanted to give something with a bit substance to it so you could know how a reader (just my small opinion

) was interpreting it. Everything is good from what I'm reading. I'm really impressed by the conversation and interaction with the characters in your work which makes them in-character in your fanfiction stories.

01-22-2013, 01:12 PM	#42
ZariusTwo Overlord Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Britain, DINO THUNDER...POWER UP! Posts: 20,887	Second script is up. __________________ TMNT Fan Script Discussion Thread "It Should Have Ended Here"...add your ideal ending to the Series Fauxnale wiki Add Your Story to the TMNT Fanfiction Wiki Spider-Man: The Rescue Spider-Man: The Galloping Cat Spider-Man: Scarlet Mirror Doctor Who: Child of the Daleks

01-22-2013, 03:56 PM	#44
ZariusTwo Overlord Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Britain, DINO THUNDER...POWER UP! Posts: 20,887	I think it might be because I saved this script as an HTML file. __________________ TMNT Fan Script Discussion Thread "It Should Have Ended Here"...add your ideal ending to the Series Fauxnale wiki Add Your Story to the TMNT Fanfiction Wiki Spider-Man: The Rescue Spider-Man: The Galloping Cat Spider-Man: Scarlet Mirror Doctor Who: Child of the Daleks

01-25-2013, 07:30 AM	#46
BubblyShell22 Leo-holic Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Indiana Posts: 16,912	I've checked out the second story. It's awesome so far, and I can't wait to see what else you have in store for it. __________________ "A warrior who never fails, never learns."-The Ancient One. "Embrace your inner a**holiness."-Mr. Anderson.

01-26-2013, 01:29 PM	#47
ZariusTwo Overlord Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Britain, DINO THUNDER...POWER UP! Posts: 20,887	Man was retweeking my second script a nightmare. Deviantart's new upgrades suck __________________ TMNT Fan Script Discussion Thread "It Should Have Ended Here"...add your ideal ending to the Series Fauxnale wiki Add Your Story to the TMNT Fanfiction Wiki Spider-Man: The Rescue Spider-Man: The Galloping Cat Spider-Man: Scarlet Mirror Doctor Who: Child of the Daleks Last edited by ZariusTwo; 01-26-2013 at 02:18 PM.

01-26-2013, 01:52 PM	#48
BubblyShell22 Leo-holic Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Indiana Posts: 16,912	Wow. Not cool, Zarius. I'd be mad if it were me. __________________ "A warrior who never fails, never learns."-The Ancient One. "Embrace your inner a**holiness."-Mr. Anderson.

01-27-2013, 07:40 AM	#49
Original TMNT Cartoon Fan Overlord Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Sweden Posts: 10,155	Novelizations Thankfully, I prefer the novelizations

01-27-2013, 02:15 PM	#51
ZariusTwo Overlord Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Britain, DINO THUNDER...POWER UP! Posts: 20,887	Novelization of "My Seer, My Secretary" is complete __________________ TMNT Fan Script Discussion Thread "It Should Have Ended Here"...add your ideal ending to the Series Fauxnale wiki Add Your Story to the TMNT Fanfiction Wiki Spider-Man: The Rescue Spider-Man: The Galloping Cat Spider-Man: Scarlet Mirror Doctor Who: Child of the Daleks

01-27-2013, 02:51 PM	#52
BubblyShell22 Leo-holic Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Indiana Posts: 16,912	Yep, finished reading it and thought it was awesome. Good job. Can't wait for the next one. __________________ "A warrior who never fails, never learns."-The Ancient One. "Embrace your inner a**holiness."-Mr. Anderson.

01-27-2013, 03:53 PM	#53
ZariusTwo Overlord Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Britain, DINO THUNDER...POWER UP! Posts: 20,887	Thaks. Sorry for all the mistakes you keep finding. I get pretty bummed when that happens, I feel stupid when I slip up and sometimes think I'm dyspraxic because it happens all the time. __________________ TMNT Fan Script Discussion Thread "It Should Have Ended Here"...add your ideal ending to the Series Fauxnale wiki Add Your Story to the TMNT Fanfiction Wiki Spider-Man: The Rescue Spider-Man: The Galloping Cat Spider-Man: Scarlet Mirror Doctor Who: Child of the Daleks

01-27-2013, 05:04 PM	#55
ZariusTwo Overlord Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Britain, DINO THUNDER...POWER UP! Posts: 20,887	I suppose so. Thanks for the reassurence. __________________ TMNT Fan Script Discussion Thread "It Should Have Ended Here"...add your ideal ending to the Series Fauxnale wiki Add Your Story to the TMNT Fanfiction Wiki Spider-Man: The Rescue Spider-Man: The Galloping Cat Spider-Man: Scarlet Mirror Doctor Who: Child of the Daleks

01-27-2013, 05:30 PM	#56
Blossombrooks Stone Warrior Join Date: Oct 2012 Location: 'hero' turtle land Posts: 946	I'm still reading but enjoying the story so much! I'll catch up soon. Don't be too hard on yourself about mistakes. A lot of TMNT speak isn't in the spell checker, it's easy to gloss over all the red squiggles! Been there, done that. __________________ There's too much green to feel blue! http://blossombrooks.deviantart.com/

01-28-2013, 08:29 AM	#57
BubblyShell22 Leo-holic Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Indiana Posts: 16,912	Hey, no sweat, Zarius. And don't be down on yourself for the mistakes. It's happened to me, too. Just keep on trucking and you'll get it. And even if you are dyslexic, it's nothing to be ashamed of. You're still an awesome writer, and that's what counts. __________________ "A warrior who never fails, never learns."-The Ancient One. "Embrace your inner a**holiness."-Mr. Anderson.

01-28-2013, 10:53 AM	#58
ZariusTwo Overlord Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Britain, DINO THUNDER...POWER UP! Posts: 20,887	Thanks guys, I just had a down period yesterday, I appreciate the kind words, trust me, I've only just begun with these. Just for making me a feel better, here's a cryptic little preview of what's to come Episode Three sees Raph getting too encylopedic for the Turtles own good, and comes close to spilling a secret many of them arent even aware they already know. Meanwhile, Shredder and Krang target the seven most important bakers in the world! Episode Four sees Leo take center stage as Lotus Blossom runs a gauntlet on a special errand, prompting his assistance, whilst Shredder and Krang attempt to move something big, hot, and important to everyone out of orbit, the remaining Turtles head to space to halt the heist. And Episode Five features festivity as Leonardo, Splinter, and the Punk Frogs try to clear a freeway on a busy christmas afternoon, The Rat King holds an orphanage hostage, Mike's urge to do some special christmas shopping inspires Raph to pull a rib on him, whilst Donatello tries to repair a teddy bear. Plus, a certain mystery lingering from a favoruite episode of mine from the old show is explained. __________________ TMNT Fan Script Discussion Thread "It Should Have Ended Here"...add your ideal ending to the Series Fauxnale wiki Add Your Story to the TMNT Fanfiction Wiki Spider-Man: The Rescue Spider-Man: The Galloping Cat Spider-Man: Scarlet Mirror Doctor Who: Child of the Daleks

01-28-2013, 03:44 PM	#59
BubblyShell22 Leo-holic Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Indiana Posts: 16,912	Oooh, some interesting plots there indeed. Can't wait to read them. I'm especially excited for episode four as I'm a huge Leo fan and can't wait to see him shine. __________________ "A warrior who never fails, never learns."-The Ancient One. "Embrace your inner a**holiness."-Mr. Anderson.

01-31-2013, 03:20 PM	#60
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