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Different strokes, and all that. I actually liked some of the scientists and mobsters. Turtelli and Big Louie mostly. Professor Sofo was a fun one, and gets a mention in the first story during Don and Mike's conversation when Donnie confesses his secret. Mikey makes a joke about how the guy was actually half right when he addressed the letter to "MISS Donna Tello". And Don replies by saying he was a nut and questions whether his diploma is actually valid. Big Louie was in a scene where several men were executed by him. It's all in how you use them and making it seem like a credible threat or at least give it a respectful treatment in the story. But I like playing with weird elements and trying to make them interesting and realistic.
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I can't speak to Belgian law, but I really think you should look into it.
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Maybe when I'm an adult and I publish something I'll look into it.
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Stayed up way too late last night; wrote one half of a conversation between two female characters.
They're bonding by braiding each other's hair, talking about boys, and talking about people they killed. Okay, I lied. They're just sharing their mutual history of being slaves and how they escaped. But it's definitely bonding.
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01-14-2016, 05:47 PM | #186 |
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Ah, female bonding- the precursor to becoming best frienemies.
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Considering they are both now on genocidal quests to punish their former slavers through time travel, I think they'll be bestest friends forever.
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Paradoxes and broken shells
Do I smell a granny paradox a brewing? Hmm.... (Don't step on any butterflies when you go back to kill Hitler- you might unwittingly cause a hurricane that destroys Miami, or downs the plane your grandparents were on....)
Since the last one wasn't exactly to most readers' tastes, I'll toss in something a bit different. Just as a teaser for those reading Tale of Two Clans, hopefully not too graphic. (Or is it graphic enough?) Spoiler:
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Holy crap. It's not even 11pm and I hammered out 10 whole pages in the novel, finishing another chapter. I'm fully caught up on my outline again and need to brainstorm the next couple of chapters...
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Seven months later and I finally got my first script done with some assistance.
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So, I have the rough outlines for a character I'm working on.
He's someone in his early 20's from London (or maybe just England, but London seems like a really nice place for his story). He's intelligent, but mentally unstable. He sports a red armour he put together himself and also uses weapons. I have a few questions for you guys, because I haven't written actual stories in English and those sucked, and I'm pretty nervous because I think I'll still suck. What weapons do you think he should use? It needs to be realistic for him to be able to take care of himself without being arrested or killed or anything. What material should the armour be made of? (It needs to protect him from bullets and it's red. He also wears a helmet). I was going with long shoulder-length black hair in a pony-tail while in costume and green eyes. But maybe brown eyes look better. Thoughts? I do realize I'm asking a whole lot that's not even writer-related. But I really don't know who to ask and Cylon told me he'd beat me up if I kept spamming his inbox. |
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Please don't. Marmalade sounds disgusting.
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You shut up, boy. Go sit in the corner and think about what you said.
It's orange jelly, for crying out loud! That sh!t is my JAM.
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Tfw you ask for help, but instead you get Cylon talking about jelly.
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Am, speaking of advice, you could try looking online for writers forums and writing articles. As a matter of fact, this ties in nicely with an issue I wanted to bring up here. On another site I frequent as a member, there is a monthly writing competition in the writers section of the forum. (It's primarily a comics, sports and movies fan-site. But it was started by former members of the Marvel boards, many of whom are also fic-writers.) They are currently seeking new members to participate in the monthly competition. So anyone interested in participating PM me for details, and I'll fill you in on the particulars. The contest for this month is just starting, so there will be plenty of time to get something in.
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My Dutch writing game is probably a lot better than my English writing game. I want to write out my character this weekend. But I really need some help with his details. (I'm really obsessive and perfectionist. I never got diagnosed with anything, but it's pretty bad.) and I'm not sure about these details myself.
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At the end of the day, though it's YOUR character. Think of how you want them to look, act, dress, and sound. Yes, even their voice can help define them. No one else will understand who this character is better than you will. To write any character well, you have to be able to make them come alive on the page. Otherwise, they will just be boring and flat.
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