CGI Turtles - Fan Made - Page 5

*oldmanwinters* · 04-20-2011, 09:46 PM

I agree with Jester that the most recent pic doesn't quite make the right kind of improvement; it makes the mouth area look too droopy. My main concern is with the back of the head. Perhaps you might try reverting to this earlier attempt, in which we have a triangular shape in between the shoulder blades:

Spoiler:

*Vegita-San* · 04-21-2011, 10:22 AM

a few more minor face changes.. I guess it looks OK from the front....just needs a little work on the side. Either way, it's as good as I can ever get it, so on to Bebop!

Speaking of which, the start..

*oldmanwinters* · 04-21-2011, 10:50 AM

Ah, I just figured out that Krang's mouth should be in closer proximity to his nose.

Improvements are looking good from the front though!

*Vegita-San* · 04-21-2011, 11:46 AM

best I can make it

*Vegita-San* · 04-21-2011, 12:21 PM

*Jephael* · 04-21-2011, 12:55 PM

Awesome designs, Neil! I'm anxious to see what you do with these.

*Vegita-San* · 04-21-2011, 12:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jephael

Awesome designs, Neil! I'm anxious to see what you do with these.

Now rigged for animation... Two down... Only 7 more to go....
Then it's off to creating all the sets..

Krang now rigged up for light anmation

*oldmanwinters* · 04-21-2011, 03:39 PM

Oh yeah, Neil, it's really come together!

One thing that puzzles me, though. Are you planning to keep that bright neon yellow on a few sections of April's jumpsuit? The color really seems out of place given the rest of the jumpsuit's colors. I figured it was just a stand-in color until you would correct in the animation.

**Jester** · 04-21-2011, 04:04 PM

Did Krang's antenna get duplicated with every edit...there are like 6 or 7 prongs on the puppy.

*Vegita-San* · 04-21-2011, 07:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jester

Did Krang's antenna get duplicated with every edit...there are like 6 or 7 prongs on the puppy.

nope, only three. April Color : thought it would look better if pads where a little brighter..

Very early Bebop from scratch..

Previous Model

*Vegita-San* · 04-21-2011, 09:18 PM

More very early Bebop

*oldmanwinters* · 04-21-2011, 09:21 PM

You're making me go "hog-wild!"

And regarding April's jumpsuit pads, I'd probably just keep them the same color as the rest of her outfit. That would make it more Toon accurate (like you had it earlier). You'd made all the section seams plain enough so that it should provide all the necessary depth.

**Jester** · 04-21-2011, 09:39 PM

Krang looks great...am I seeing his back through his stomach?

*Vegita-San* · 04-22-2011, 09:01 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jester

Krang looks great...am I seeing his back through his stomach?

yep, since fixed

Newton Gimmick · 04-22-2011, 10:40 AM

That Krang is awesome and freaky at the same time.

*Vegita-San* · 04-22-2011, 04:36 PM

A few more changes

For the first time, I'm kind of liking how this face is turning out

*Vegita-San* · 04-23-2011, 07:08 PM

Spent all day trying to finish this one up...so, what's off about it now?

*Vegita-San* · 04-23-2011, 10:01 PM

Last post for the day.. setting it up for animation shows us where the weak points are

*oldmanwinters* · 04-24-2011, 01:18 AM

You really made Bebop look great in a hurry!

The big thing that is jumping out at me in the nose. It's much too round. The front part of his snout needs to be flat.

Also, the shoes are very jagged polygons. Try to make their contours smoother.

*Vegita-San* · 04-24-2011, 11:08 AM

I'll work on fixing the shoes later... but for now, a few minor changes..before I start working on it again tonight..I got rid of his extra finger.. bebop only has 4. Started his necklace, made the legs a little thicker...ever closer

04-20-2011, 09:46 PM	#81
oldmanwinters Overlord Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Between yesterday and tomorrow! Posts: 10,825	I agree with Jester that the most recent pic doesn't quite make the right kind of improvement; it makes the mouth area look too droopy. My main concern is with the back of the head. Perhaps you might try reverting to this earlier attempt, in which we have a triangular shape in between the shoulder blades: Spoiler: __________________ Experience the TMNT Fan Commentaries! Check out my TMNT fan comic, "Nothing to Fear"! View my sketch work! I'm selling some of my hard-to-find TMNT items!

04-21-2011, 10:50 AM	#83
oldmanwinters Overlord Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Between yesterday and tomorrow! Posts: 10,825	Ah, I just figured out that Krang's mouth should be in closer proximity to his nose. Improvements are looking good from the front though! __________________ Experience the TMNT Fan Commentaries! Check out my TMNT fan comic, "Nothing to Fear"! View my sketch work! I'm selling some of my hard-to-find TMNT items!

04-21-2011, 12:55 PM	#86
Jephael That whack job behind you Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Carlisle, Pennsylvania Posts: 7,898	Awesome designs, Neil! I'm anxious to see what you do with these. __________________ "I like it. Simple, but effective!" Raphael; The Mean Machines YouTube: www.youtube.com/user/Jephael Facebook: www.facebook.com/jephael Twitter: https://twitter.com/JeOughton Sadly I no longer frequent this community, but please give it a shot. You never know who you might connect with. I will forever cherish the fond memories I have of the fandom as it was in its heyday. Peace and love to you all - Later, dudes!!!

04-21-2011, 03:39 PM	#88
oldmanwinters Overlord Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Between yesterday and tomorrow! Posts: 10,825	Oh yeah, Neil, it's really come together! One thing that puzzles me, though. Are you planning to keep that bright neon yellow on a few sections of April's jumpsuit? The color really seems out of place given the rest of the jumpsuit's colors. I figured it was just a stand-in color until you would correct in the animation. __________________ Experience the TMNT Fan Commentaries! Check out my TMNT fan comic, "Nothing to Fear"! View my sketch work! I'm selling some of my hard-to-find TMNT items!

04-21-2011, 04:04 PM	#89
Jester Rat-faced Dude-guy Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Arkansas Posts: 25,110	Did Krang's antenna get duplicated with every edit...there are like 6 or 7 prongs on the puppy. __________________ "Clearly, you're Ninja Turtling incorrectly." - Leo656

04-21-2011, 10:22 AM	#82
Vegita-San Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 3,806	a few more minor face changes.. I guess it looks OK from the front....just needs a little work on the side. Either way, it's as good as I can ever get it, so on to Bebop! Speaking of which, the start..

04-21-2011, 11:46 AM	#84
Vegita-San Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 3,806	best I can make it

04-21-2011, 12:21 PM	#85
Vegita-San Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 3,806

04-21-2011, 09:18 PM	#91
Vegita-San Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 3,806	More very early Bebop

04-21-2011, 09:21 PM	#92
oldmanwinters Overlord Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Between yesterday and tomorrow! Posts: 10,825	You're making me go "hog-wild!" And regarding April's jumpsuit pads, I'd probably just keep them the same color as the rest of her outfit. That would make it more Toon accurate (like you had it earlier). You'd made all the section seams plain enough so that it should provide all the necessary depth. __________________ Experience the TMNT Fan Commentaries! Check out my TMNT fan comic, "Nothing to Fear"! View my sketch work! I'm selling some of my hard-to-find TMNT items!

04-21-2011, 09:39 PM	#93
Jester Rat-faced Dude-guy Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Arkansas Posts: 25,110	Krang looks great...am I seeing his back through his stomach? __________________ "Clearly, you're Ninja Turtling incorrectly." - Leo656

04-22-2011, 10:40 AM	#95
Newton Gimmick Mad Scientist Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 1,099	That Krang is awesome and freaky at the same time. __________________

04-22-2011, 04:36 PM	#96
Vegita-San Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 3,806	A few more changes For the first time, I'm kind of liking how this face is turning out Last edited by Vegita-San; 04-22-2011 at 08:22 PM.

04-23-2011, 07:08 PM	#97
Vegita-San Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 3,806	Spent all day trying to finish this one up...so, what's off about it now?

04-23-2011, 10:01 PM	#98
Vegita-San Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 3,806	Last post for the day.. setting it up for animation shows us where the weak points are

04-24-2011, 01:18 AM	#99
oldmanwinters Overlord Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Between yesterday and tomorrow! Posts: 10,825	You really made Bebop look great in a hurry! The big thing that is jumping out at me in the nose. It's much too round. The front part of his snout needs to be flat. Also, the shoes are very jagged polygons. Try to make their contours smoother. __________________ Experience the TMNT Fan Commentaries! Check out my TMNT fan comic, "Nothing to Fear"! View my sketch work! I'm selling some of my hard-to-find TMNT items!

04-24-2011, 11:08 AM	#100
Vegita-San Foot Elite Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 3,806	I'll work on fixing the shoes later... but for now, a few minor changes..before I start working on it again tonight..I got rid of his extra finger.. bebop only has 4. Started his necklace, made the legs a little thicker...ever closer

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