|12-07-2007, 01:05 AM||#1|
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Join Date: Mar 2004
Episode I wrote "Return To Sender"
Zarius had some fictional episodes he had ideas for and had people write some stuff for them. I never finished this and never plan on it so for those interested here's what I had.
I don't remember much but it's about Hun stealing an experimental helicopter and going after the turtles. Sadly I never got to the part where Hun confronts the TMNT. Idea of for the episode is credit to Zarius as well as the title. I wrote everything and added my own spin to it.
Return To Sender
The city sleeps soundly, though some of it’s citizens appear to be very awake at such an hour.
“Look Casey I don’t want to talk about it right now” Yelled April
“You’ve been acting so different lately April what is it?”
“I told you I don’t want to talk about it ”
“I’m just trying to be here for you, you know, because I care about you”
“UGH ” April yelled as she quickly walked into her bedroom and slammed the door shut.
Dashing fiercely into the night, soaring through the sky with grace, the Foot Elite makes his way to his next target. They were mostly disbanded now. With no leader they roamed the streets taking what ever jobs were tossed at them, like dogs picking through garbage cans for scraps. Highly skilled they were the go to men for any job. The Foot, a name that once made a mans bones shiver were degraded to the status of hit man.
This ninja’s job was simple, he was to hit a mob boss during a drug exchange down at the docks. At least it would have been simple if Casey Jones and Raphael weren’t present. In an attempt to cheer up Casey, Raph went out on a ride with him.
“Hey Case let’s hit the docks next.” Yelled Raph
“Why for, want to get your butt smoked in a race again?” Said Casey as he revved his engine.
“Your whack’d bonehead last time I left you eating my dust”
Gun shots are fired in the distance, Raph senses something is up.
“You hear that? Something's going down. Come on Case let’s check it out.” The two quickly ran towards the gunfire, unaware of what they were getting themselves into.
The Elite was prepared, he had been stalking this man for days now. His sword by his side he watched, waited for his target to show himself. But suddenly his concentration was broken by voices.
“Woah, this looks big Raph. You sure your up to this?” Said Casey
“Up to it? I live for this kind of thing! Come on let’s get in closer”
The ninja follows, keeping to the shadows as he was taught by his master.
When they reach the rooftop Casey and Raph can see the whole operation. A huge tanker being unloaded by at least twenty men. Creates everywhere, and in the middle of the docks are two men talking, both heavily armed. One is wearing a white tuxedo and is missing his left eye. The other in all black with night vision goggles on. It is very dark and the only thing lighting the place are the lamps, whose bulbs are dim. The shadow of a corpse could be seen. Still smoking from the bullets that did him in.
“Recognize any of these punks?” Asked Raph
“Their not dragons or the mob, heck they don’t look like anyone I’ve seen before.”
“Me neither, let’s go introduce ourselves.”
“I’m all for that” Said Casey as he pulled his mask over his face.
The ninja draws his sword, the last thing he needs are these two fools ruining his hit. Quickly he lunges at them knocking Raph to the side of the roof. Casey draws his bat and swings frantically at the ninja. Dodging his strikes with ease the ninja cuts Casey’s bat in half. Shocked Casey stands there for a moment, the ninja ceases this short window of time and kicks Casey in the ribs. A loud cracking noise echoes into the night.
“AHHH” Casey screamed in pain as he fell to his knees.
“Casey! Your going to pay for that Foot scum” Raph yelled
He picked up his sais that were by his side and ran at the ninja. Cutting away at the air the ninja was impossible to hit. Clashing steel was heard as the ninja fought back swinging his sword at Raph. The ninja looked to his target for a second and saw the deal was almost over, he had to hurry.
“I have no time for you freak.” The ninja said as he decked Raph.
Raph was knocked against an air conditioner grating. Stunned for a second he pulled himself together and got back up to stand his ground. But by the time he did that the ninja was gone. Suddenly in the distance a scream was heard, followed by gunfire. Raph ran to the side of the roof to see what happened, The man in the white suit laid dead on the docks and the ninja was no where to be found.
Raph walked over and picked up Casey.
“Come on, let’s get you home.” Raph said as he helped Casey down the roof.
Later at April’s Casey was in an uproar.
“What do you mean I can’t go back out? I want to show that punk a thing or two! I’ll break his...”Casey threw his fist into the air, the crunching of his rips could be heard “Ouch”
“Casey calm down, getting upset won’t help your ribs heal any faster. Their fractured you need to rest.” Said April.
“I can’t clam down April! The Foot Ninja are out there killing people on my watch. When I get my hands on that creep I’m going to...”
“Enough Jones, I’m not going to sit here and listen to you rant about this. My sister called me earlier, I’m going to go see a movie with her. I have other family besides you and the turtles, and lately I haven’t been giving them much attention.”
“Aw babe I’m sorry, it’s just...”
“I don’t want to hear it, good bye!” Said April as she slammed the front door shut.
Casey angerly slammed his fist on the coffee table “Ugh what is her problem lately?”
Back at the turtles lair Donatello was studying Hun’s recent crimewave, trying to find a pattern. Leonardo was doing his daily Katana exercises, Michelangelo was reading the newest issue of “Justice Force”, and Raph was giving his punching bag a going over.
Punching faster and harder Raph burst into an explosion of rage “RRR when I find that freak I’m going to make him pay for what he did to Casey. I’ll bash his skull into dust!” He screamed.
“Wow Raph, don't you think your over reacting just a little?” Asked Mikey
“You want some of this laughing boy! I’ll make you eat that comic book!” Raph snapped back
“Hey will you two pipe down I’m doing important work over here!”Yelled Don from his computer desk.
“And what, may I ask, would that be?” Asked Raph as he walked towards Don
“I’m studying Hun’s recent robberies. The way I see it he’s going to hit the docks next, the ones by the Hudson River to be precise. See first he started off stealing cargo from ships that were docked further away from the bridge but the only dock he hasn’t hit yet is this one.” Explained Don.
“That’s where me and Case saw that Ninja.” Yelled Raph
“Maybe he will be there again Raph. And maybe he will kick your butt again too” Laughed Mikey
Raph swiftly smacked Mikey across the head “Can it Mikey I’m not in the mood”
“Your never in the mood. You really need to lighten up Raph. Maybe take a vacation, I heard Florida is very nice this time of year. Just make sure you stay away from the docks. You never know where an evil ninja might be hiding.” Mikey taunted
“That’s it!” Raph yelled as he chased Mikey around the lair.
“What’s all that noise I’m trying to practice over here?” Asked Leo
“Nothing just these two ingrates going at it again.” Replied Don
“What’s that your working on Donny?” Asked Leo
“It’s a map of the places Hun have hit. See, their going to hit there next.” Explained Don
“When do you estimate?” Asked Leo
“With the current pattern I’d say tonight is very likely”
“Well then let’s get going, come on you two it’s mission time” Commanded Leo.
“Mission time! Oh my favorite. Nothing makes me feel more like Tom Cruise then Mission Time!” Said Mikey
“What is wrong with you?” Asked Raph
The turtles all got into the Battle Shell and made their way to the docks.
Meanwhile at the docks Hun was indeed getting ready for his next heist.
“Come on Dragon’s load up the trucks. We haven’t had turtle troubles since last week. I think we finally shook them but just to be sure hurry it up.” Said Hun
The Dragons quickly put the crates into the truck. Little did they know they were bing watched. Hun had been getting to powerful and someone wanted him knocked off. The Ninja watched in the darkness. Ready to strike once Hun’s convoy left the docks. This Ninja knew Hun quite well and had fought by his side many times, but ties like these mean nothing to an assassin.
“Alright boys let’s do this big one now!” Yelled Hun
The Dragons used a crane to lift the biggest crate in the lot. It was giant, the size of a tank.
“Careful with it, don’t drop it!”
The Dragon’s hand slipped and the crate went plummeting to the ground towards Hun. Quickly jumping out of the way Hun avoided the disaster.
“You idiot! I said be careful!” Scolded Hun
“Woah boss look.” Said one of the Dragons as he pointed to the broken crate
Inside was a helicopter, one from which likes no one has ever seen. This is when Hun put two and two together, Bishop. This was another military shipment of Bishop’s and this was Bishop’s helicopter.
“Let me see that manifest!” Commanded Hun
As he read he found it on the list and mumbled the name “Stacked Deck”
“Alright boys head out without me. I got some business to attend to.”
“You want us to just leave you hear boss?” Asked a Dragon
“Yes I got a score to settle and in front of me just the tool to settle it with!”
The men left and Hun stood alone with the helicopter. It was huge, painted jet black. This thing had enough firepower to take out an entire army. Missile launchers and Gatling guns decorated this monstrosity. It was truly terrifying, and Hun had no idea the chaos he was about to cause with it.
|12-07-2007, 01:06 AM||#2|
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Join Date: Mar 2004
But the ninja had other plans for Hun, and now that he was alone it was his time to strike. He swiftly darted out of the shadows sword drawn at Hun. Hun heard the ninja coming and dodged to the side. The ninjas sword hit the copter.
“Hey watch the paint job I just got that” Said Hun
The ninja responded to Hun with more slashes. Hun dodging them all with ease.
“You’re an idiot, I was trained by the Shredder as well. I know all your tricks. Your nothing but a no good merc now.”
“Did you know this one?” Asked the ninja as he blew blinding dust into Hun’s eyes.
Yelling at his loss of sight Hun held his eyes. Knowing the dust would only last a few seconds the ninja had little time to waste. He circled Hun and quickly made his killing strokes. Hun fell to the ground bloody and battered. The ninja turned away and began to walk off into the darkness.
Suddenly the sound of a helicopter could be heard behind him. Like a deer in the headlights the ninja turned around to see death looking him in the eyes.
“You think a few swipes from your butter knife can take me down merc? I’m allot stronger then that. I’m also allot more dangerous, let me demonstrate!” Yelled Hun
Hun lifted the copter off the ground and began firing at the ninja. Running for his life the ninja took to the roof tops and began jumping from building to building trying to escape Hun’s wrath.
“You can’t run from me freak! This thing has night vision, heat vision, and my vision! Your going down.”
Hun began launching missiles now. The ninja dodging as quickly as he could, the copter would never tire like his body. Buildings exploded around him and debris clouded his vision. The ninja knew he could not out run this copter.
“Stand still you little...” Hun noticed a button he has not seen before “What does this do?” He pressed it and giant laser beam shot out of the copter’s belly and sliced a building in half. “Woah”
The ninja had no fear of death but was still pumped with adrenaline. He knew the only way to survive this was to take the copter down. He lunged at the windshield trying to crack it with his sword. He didn’t leave a scratch. Hun pressed a button and electricity covered the copter shocking the ninja off.
“Your like a bug! And I’ll squash you like one!” Yelled Hun
The Ninja looked up to see his last image, a missile from Hun’s copter flying into his face. The building below him crumbled and the ninja was no more. Half the area by the docks was no more in fact. Hun had extracted his revenge. But he wasn’t done yet.
“Wait till I find those turtles. I’ll make bowls out of their shells, if there's enough pieces left Hahaha” Laughed Hun
Meanwhile the turtles were in the Battle Shell listening to the radio. They had heard the explosions.
“Over half of Hudson's dock area lies in ruins tonight. A mad man in a stolen military helicopter is wreaking havoc on our city. The mayor recommends we evacuate the city at once. I repeat...” Don shuts off the radio.
“Bishop” Says Leo
“Bishop’s copter maybe but who knows whose in it” Said Don
“Wait didn’t she say the area that was destroyed was by the docks Donny?” Asked Raph
“Yeah she did.” replided Don
“Hun” they all said
“I thought Hun was stealing little stuff, not military tech.” Said Mikey
“You would think he learned his lesson last time.” Said Leo
“Well I don’t know about you guys but I say we need to stop that moron before he destroys the whole city!” Yelled Raph
“I agree Raph but how are we going to find him” Said Leo
“I’m more concerned about finding that Ninja punk from earlier” Said Raph
“Boy you got a one track mind Raphy boy” Mocked Mikey
“Umm Leo we might not have to look far, LOOK!” Yelled Don
Coming towards them were a convoy of semi-trucks all being escorted by Purple Dragon cars. The men in the cars quickly pulled out their guns.
“Hey isn’t that the car them ninja frog’s drive?” Asked one of the Dragons
“Yeah it is, waste it!” Replied another
The Dragons began firing at the Battle Shell. They popped the front tires and the Battle Shell skidded to a stop. Then one of the trucks rammed it and toppled it over. The Battle Shell lay upside down, broken and smoking.
“Yeah!” The Dragons Cheered.
“Master Hun will be pleased”
Suddenly the back burst open and four turtles jumped out.
“Oh your so going to pay for that!” Yelled Raph “My bike was in there and now it’s trashed!”
The turtles rushed the convoy in full force. Leo launched over the first car and kicked two Dragons aside. The Dragons began firing at the turtles. Dodging the bullets Don whacked guns out of a few mens hands. Holding one on the end of his bo he tossed it in the air and smacked it like a baseball right into a Dragon’s face. Raph enraged ran at the first and began dismantling it. Piece by piece he ripped the car to shreds until it was just a smashed up piece of metal.
“How do you like it!” He yelled as he hit the driver in the face with his sai through the windshield.
Mikey was surrounded, out numbered, and out gunned. But that was no problem for him. He used his chucks to grab hold of two guns and hurled them at the other two me. He then leaped in the air kicking one man down. The other came at him with a pipe. Mikey punched him in the ribs and smacked him aside with his chuck.
“Boy these guys are dumb” he said
The semi trucks opened and out jumped four huge men. They were bigger then Hun, and they were mad. They charged the turtles knocking them all back.
“Who are these guys?” Asked Don
“New recruits.” Said Leo “Attack as one we can take them”
Leo rushed forward.
“I love it when he talks like that.” Said Mikey
Raph ran at one of the behemouths and tried kicking him in the jaw. The mans head snapped back and with a big grin on his face he picked him Raph with one hand and threw him into the Battle Shell wreckage.
‘What is Hun feeding these guys?” Asked Raph
Don using his bo smacked one in the knee, then the shoulder. The man showed no signs of pain. Don then bashed him over the head. His bo snapped in half. The man punched Don and sent him flying into Raph.
“I don’t know but we could use some” Said Don
Leo fiercely swung his Katana at the Dragon. This Dragon was welding a pipe. He cracked Leo in the shell and then kicked him in the chest. Leo fell down to his knees but quickly got back up and continued his attack. The Dragon then punched Leo in the arm and kicked his legs out from under him. To finish the job the Dragon picked up Leo and tossed him into his other two brothers.
“This is getting tiring” Said Raph
Mikey was alone, he stood off against a Dragon with a chain.
“This is too good to be true!”
Mikey whirled his chucks around to show off his chucking skills. When he was done he smirked. The Dragon roared and threw his chain at Mikey, The end caught Mikey’s chucks and the dragon swung Mikey around and into his three brothers.
“Note to self, show off after you take the goon down”
The four dragons moved in to finish off the turtles.
“Convoy report!” Hun was on the radio
“We ran into the turtles boss but were about to finish them off” Answered one of the truck drivers. “Your boys are giving them the one two”
“Abort! I want to finish the turtles off myself, you get the goods back to our headquarters” Commanded Hun.
“Right, hey boys get back in. Boss says we’re heading out”
The four Dragons got back into the truck and the convoy continued on it’s way back to the Dragon headquarters.
Getting up a groggy Leo said “What were those things?”
“I don’t know Leo but we have bigger things to worry about” Said Don
“Yeah did you hear what Hun said. He’s looking for us!” Panicked Mikey
“Yeah and he wants to show us his new toy” Said Raph
“Let me call April and see if she can give us a ride back to the lair” Said Don
April sat down in the red seat. She hadn’t been in a movie theater in a long time. Her phone began vibrating.
“I’m only out for a few minutes and already their bugging me” She looked at who it was and put her phone back in her purse. “You guys are on your own tonight.”
“No answer” Said Don
“Well what do we do now?” Asked Mikey
“I guess we head back to the lair on foot. I mean we can’t take Hun on naked like this” Said Leo
The turtles headed back home. Little did they know Hun was near by.
|12-07-2007, 06:18 AM||#3|
Join Date: Sep 2007
go on,will you?XDDDD
|12-07-2007, 08:41 AM||#5|
Join Date: Feb 2004
I know that feeling. I've started more random fan fics that just halt abruptly.
|10-27-2008, 06:13 PM||#6|
Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: Britain, DINO THUNDER...POWER UP!
...Suffice to say, it's almost a year now and I've only just found this, my apologies to Spit for not getting around to this sooner, I scarsely visit the fan works forum.
With FF disintergrating by this point, I felt there was no point continuing it since it was launched with the sole intent of being a REACTION to FF and losing the TMNT we had known by that point.
With the possibility the show is ending however, we COULD restart the project, but I'd definatly be more "hands-off" and would go into story-editing.
As for what is here...easily something Spit could polish off and rewrite things, but not by much since it works incredibly well for Hun and The Turtles as it is, and works even better for a married Casey and April.