Issue #2 of my ONLINE COMIC!

[Newton Gimmick]

Well, I finally got Issue #2 up. This one is a completely original plot. While it is simple, its the begining of a pretty in depth story arc. I also introduced some new characters in this story...Don't worry they aren't major characters and I won't do what alot of people do with fanfics, and thats shove tons of made up people in that you don't care about. I won't be in this, nor my friends or my grandma and so on, like some others. I'd love some feedback, as well as stroyline ideas. You can check out my site here:

http://www.angelfire.com/empire/dwrestling/turtle.html

Or directly link to the story here:

http://www.angelfire.com/empire/dwrestling/turtles4.html

Alright, let me know what ya think!

[Karpo_007]

That was a comic? More like a Pictured Fanfic...

[Newton Gimmick]

You're constantly negative about everything. :thumbsdo:

[Karpo_007]

Negative? I think that a comic is a story with drawn pictures. I didnt say it was bad or anything, just that it isnt a comic.

[Newton Gimmick]

Well, a comic is anything that uses pictures and text to tell a story. Its the pictures that seperate a comic book, from just a book. There are actually comics in which nothing is drawn. Dunno if they have those where your from or not, but they do exist. Alot of popular detective comics in the 50's used real photos of people. In addition, alot of those pictures are edited in paint and such, which means, they were drawn in certain ways. Anyway, its a online figure comic. Which I've put alot of work into, and am trying to stay true to the TMNT fanbase. So I get a little edgy sometimes, when the critism is so basic.....

Much lik if someone said "The photos are too blurry" you have to understand I'm using a very basic webcam, etc.

With only a limited budget and limited amounts of sets, one can only do so much.

Anywho, keep the feedback coming guys.

:ksad:

[Greed]

Your story is cool

[Karpo_007]

Ok, it's just not something i have tought as a comic...

[Eye of Sarnath]

Hey, I like it. They story is more original than the last one.

[DarthRaphael]

PicFics are cool. Very time consuming to setup the scenes and take photos.
Nice job there.

[Karpo_007]

This makes me angry. This guy Newton Gimick is sayin im an idiot in another forum just because i said that i tought it is a fan fick with pictures. Can you believe it? He dosent have the courage to say it to my face, instead he posts on another TMNT forum that im an idiot. I never even had posted in that forum, i was just lucky to check it.

What a Coward. I wouldnt want to post this on this forum, but i felt i dont have a choice.

[Newton Gimmick]

Uhh Karpo dude, see my response on the other board. I'm not gonna get into some lame name calling feud on the internet. I'm above all that. However I am trying to as Barney would say "NIP IT IN THE BUD!" so uhh, I'm calling a truce.

Anyway, thanks for the compliments guys. Your right, they are hard and time consuming.

P.S. Karpo, if you don't like my posts, then don't respond to them. I'm trying to get feedback from TMNT fans about my comic, not feud with you.

[Eye of Sarnath]

Did you make up the story yourself, or did you get it from a comic or television show? Because I really like it. :D

[Newton Gimmick]

Thanks. Yes the second story is entirely mine. The characters, and such too. I tried to tie in alot of classic TMNT aspect, and set a stroy arc for the arival of everyone's favorite pink brain!

The first issue however, is my interpretation of the first Mirage comic. But I'm sure you knew that

[PWDESAI]

he gots it from the comic buddy

btw it's good, and even though you already explained the blurry pictures, it's just not going for me sorry

I only read the fisrt one so far though, i'll read your second one later, i say keep it up, and don't take criticism too hard man.

[PWDESAI]

i really just glimpsed at the pics in the "episode 2" and i have to say you improved a lot and 1 good thing i like about your "comics" are the way you use all sorts of figures. Although i dunno if the next mutation figures are the best to use :wink:
I really should buy that next mutation shredder some day... oh well

[Karpo_007]

You are above that... And still do it, whats worst behind my back, thats cowardly. well truce is fine with me, but you were the one who started it.

[Newton Gimmick]

Well, I really want a better cam, but thats gonna have to be something down the line. And really only wide angle shots are blurry, and since I try to avoid them at all cost there isn't much to complain about on that front.

As for the figures, I liked the Next Mutation's look of the turtles the best. Its the closet I feel to the Mirage look, and its also just cool to see the turtles looking pumped and ready for a brawl as opposed to fat and goofy.

I try to include lots of types of figures, just so long as they can fit in with the scheme of the plot.

And the second issue is totally original, and the first, I added and subtracted a few things from Mirage's version. Anywho.

Thanks for the feedback.