How would you continue fast forward?

[creativerealms82]

Fast forward is over and a new TMNT reboot is beginning, however if Fast forward was continuing how would you like it to continue? Here are my ideas. Note this will be long.
#1: The old is new again: The Turtles are walking the streets when they are attacked by Foot ninja tricked out with futuristic gear. These foot match the turtles blow for blow and leave. The Turtles catch a glance of twin Shredders on a roof top as they are left to reflect on their battle. The story also deals with the fate of Dunn, him contacting one of those “Shredders” and with Cody in a Stock Holder’s meeting. The Turtles only see the end of the meeting where they meet Saki and Pimiko Chaplin owners of the Oroko Foundation.

#2: Hard Foundation: Cody explains to the turtles about how Karai and Dr. Chaplin made up for past crimes with the Oroko foundation. They showed the world the type of man (and later alien) that Oroko Saki really was and tried to make up for his deeds. Meanwhile the Twin Shredders work with Darius Dunn with a plan to take over O’Neal tech. the Turtles get an invitation from the Oroko twins and head to the Foundation’s headquarters where they know a trap awaits.

#3: Gauntlet of the Flesh: The Turtles face a growing number of foot ninja, their evil clones, and finally a clone of the Utrom Shredder while the Saki Twins and Dunn begin their plan. Can the Turtles defeat the twin shredders and Dunn before operation Maximum is in full swing. Just what is Operation Maximum anyway?

#4: Shadows of the past: The Turtles return to O’Neal Tech after their first failed battle with the Max Being to find their master Splinter missing. Splinter it seems went searching for the Turtles after they were gone for too long. Splinter is lead by a voice in his head to an abandoned factory that no one touched for over a hundred years. There he must overcome the spirit of the Rat King who can’t rest while the donators of his flesh still live.

#5: Time Mistress Distress: Renet shows up in front of the turtles and is surprised to see then in the 22 century. She tries to return them back to their own time but can’t, something is blocking her power. Meanwhile, The Shredder Twins begin gathering the crystals of Tengu to make the Max Being even more powerful. One Cristal lands in some Tar pits and resurrects the Demon Savanti Romero. The Turtles, Renet and the Shredder Twin join up to face a more powerful Romero.

#6: Times on our side: Savanti Romero uses his new power to warp New York into his own personal, kingdom. The Turtles, Renet and the Shredder twins are immune to the effects only because of Renet’s powers. There is only one way to defeat Romero is to remove the power source, the Tengu crystal from his chest.

#7: Hail to the chief: The Rat King returns to kill those keeping him from resting eternally. He attacks Splinter again and then goes after Bishop. President Bishop’s peace conference with a hostel race is broken up by the Rat king and the spirit of Vengeance sends Earth into war with the Rokorians, a race of rock like people.

#8: Jam session: Street Phantoms break their leader Jammerhead out of jail and take him to a strange crystal that is making them more powerful. Jammerhead hooks the crystal up to his arm and becomes over charges. He then goes after the turtles. Meanwhile the Turtles are fighting their evil twins over another crystal; Jammerhead breaks the party and can’t tell which turtles is which, so he just decides to kill them all.

9: Lost in Translation: Cody figures that a way to defeat the Max Being is to awaken Darius consciousness from inside it. He and Don monitor a device that sends Leo, Raph, and Mike into the head of Darius Dunn. However Dunn’s head is a deadly place for the Turtles as it begins to collapse on itself.

#10: Ancient Advice: Leo heads to the Ninja Tribunal to get their help finding the Crystals of Tengu, the last remnants of the Demon Shredder. Also he wants o know what is so important about Darius Dunn. Leo is being stalked by his evil counterpart as he searches for answers. Answers that enlighten one and destroy the other.

#11: Remnants of the past: The final Tengu shard falls into the hands of Baxter Stockman. Stockman believes he can do great good with it but the power slowly corrupts him. Stockman starts reverting to his old ways. The Turtles and Bishop try to stop Stockman while there is still something to save.

#12: Deal with the Devil: Dunn’s history is reveled as the six shards of Tengu are turned into the crystal of Tengu. Dunn is related to Hun who after the Demon Shredder’s defeat used the demons DNA to become part Demon himself. Dunn as a descendent of Hun holds with in him that power, which the Shredder Twins now control as the Max Being.

#13: The darkest hour: The Max Being turns on the Shredder twins, and absorbs them into himself, he then absorbs Master Splinter. Don creates a device that prevents them from becoming part of the Max Being and then the Turtles begin to fight it. They channel their mystic powers one more time, with the help of technology and clash with the Max Being. Who will fall and who will survive?

[creativerealms82]

#14: Families Divided: The rest of the dark Turtles go after Leo believing that he killed their brother. As Leo tries to convince the evil Turtles of their brother’s true face Saki Chaplin stages a breakout in jail while his sister decides it’s better to help capture her brother. Does she truly regret what she has done?

#15: What we hold dear: Saki and a group of escaped criminals try to get revenge on O’Neal Tech. Pimiko leads three of the turtles to a Foot soldier battle shelter under the city. Leo and the Dark Turtles head to Japan to know the fate of dark Leo. Families may be torn apart and things will change.

#16: Damage Repair: The Turtles go with Bishop to a second meeting with the Rokorians hoping to reach a peaceful solution. The Rokorian ambassador has a secret he is hiding, one that makes him a bigger threat then he seems. The Turtles believe they know this man. They believe he is their old enemy The Shredder, Ch'rell, but Bishop will not listen to the turtles, consumed with making sure no more mistakes are made.

#17: Rescue Mission: The Turtles have to rescue Torbin Zixx from one of his past clients, a shape shifter named Omnius. However who is telling the truth and who is lying. Did Zixx steal Omnius life or is it all a lie. Omnius plays the Turtles and Zixx against each other for his own unknown gain.

#18: Rest in Peace: Splinter and Bishop team up to face the Spirit of the Rat King one last time. They plan to put the spirit to rest, to finally end his suffering. Meanwhile the Turtles face Jammerhead as he has brought back Viral for vengeance against the Turtles.

#19: Going to War: The Rokorians start their war against the Earth and it’s aliens with some allies of them own, along with them a renegade faction of Tricaratrons. The Turtles break into Ambassador Hoarek’s ship hoping they can unmask him for the worm he is. Yet things are now always what they seem, Hoarek was expecting them.

#20: For the Team: The Turtles are captured by the Rokorians, in the torture chamber. Their capture Hoarek is none other then Ch’rell, who explains how he escaped his ice rock, being saved by the Rokorians, how he saved the crumbling Rokorian culture in one hundred years and then trained them into an unstoppable force. All for revenge, first on Earth and then the Utrom council. Meanwhile Splinter, Serling and Cody plan for a rescue mission to save the Turtles, with the help of President Bishop, secretary of Defense Stockman, and Torbin Zixx.

#21: Giving it our all: President Bishop stays on Earth to lead the fight against the Rokorians while Splinter, Serling and Torbin sneak into the command ship to rescue the Turtles. Cody is ordered to head to the Utrom alliance building to meet with a man named Mortu. The Turtles face new and improved robots, and a super shredder like suit.

#22: Endgame 1 of 2: All fronts of the war are going poorly, the rescue team has ran into super powerful bounty hunters named Tokkra and Razar, Mortu tells Cody that the best option is to abandon Earth, Bishop’s forces are losing to the Rock Soldiers and their tank like “Technodrome,” and the Turtles are falling at the hands of Ch’rell. Can the earth’s lines of defense come out winning at the end?

#23: Endgame 2 of 2: Just as all seems lost the tide of battle changes. Pimiko Chaplin and her foot ninja join the battle, as do many of earth’s criminals including her brother Saki. The Utroms and Cody also show up for their support. The Turtles and their would be rescuers come together to face Ch’rell and an army of Tricaritrons lead by Zukko.

#24: Aftermath: Told though the eyes of Constable Biggles. It is about the Rokorian invasion, the return of the greatest threat Earth had ever seen and the heroes of the day. He talks about how useless his police force was and how at the end it was the Turtles he despised so much that saved the day. He is reduced to cleaning up the mess and is not too disappointed by that fact.

#25: Ninja Turtles forever: Cody adjusts the time window finally believing he is getting somewhere. Leo raph and Mikey are wondering the town for what they will believe is the last time when a Tricaratron riot breaks out. The Turtles are quickly out numbered when they are saved by the dark turtles. The Dark Turtles, enlightened by their training from the Ninja Tribunal are now different creatures. There is talk that they will replace the Ninja Turtles when the four return to the present.

#26: A fond farewell to the Future: The Turtles say goodbye to the different people they met during their time in the future. With the Future in the hands of a new group of Ninja turtles there is little to worry about. Yet a civil war between the two leaders of the foot Clan shows that there are still problems in the future. Problems that the Turtles are sure their clones can handle so they return to their own time.

Man that was a lot. Yeah that’s not al I would do. Hell some of those episode ideas suck or have very little idea to them.

Now some of these episodes I really like others I don't. Some like giving Biggles an episode was well I could not think of anything else to do. It's done as a joke.

[CyberCubed]

I'm not going to do summaries for each ep of a season, but things I would have done for another season:

- Introduce Space Usagi like they were planning. A three or four part arc involving him would be cool.

- More of Zukko and those Triceratons, those guys were awesome.

- The Dark Turtles eventually turn on Darius, presumedly killing him

- Bishop helps Baxter re-construct his human body. Baxter has more flashbacks of his childhood, and after the procedure Baxter, now with a new body that looks just like he did in Season 1, declares a truce with the Turtles.

- The Turtles meet Motru and the Utrom ambassadors on Earth.

[ToTheNines]

Those were mostly good ideas, nice job. Do you mean Pimiko Chaplin perhaps?

[creativerealms82]

Those were mostly good ideas, nice job. Do you mean Pimiko Chaplin perhaps?

Ah yes, thats it. I will fix that.

[Slash]

#7: Hail to the chef: The Rat King returns to kill those keeping him from resting eternally. He attacks Splinter again and then goes after Bishop. President Bishop’s peace conference with a hostel race is broken up by the Rat king and the spirit of Vengeance sends Earth into war with the Rokorians, a race of rock like people.


For some reason, I was expecting Pizzaface. :(

[syd]

more bishop scenes pleaz,i look up to that narcissist.:)

[BubblyShell22]

Those are all wonderful ideas, Creative Realms. The only thing I wouldn't have is that battle cry. Other than that, I can see those episodes being made. I think the one called "Ancient Advice" would be one I'd want to see since it involves Leo. Great job. I think these ideas would be awesome.

[Scandia]

- What happened to the Utroms. Granted, it is possible that they returned to their homeworld. But even that can be stated and shown.

- Space Usagi. Leo could use a peer friend.

- IIRC, random Triceratons are shown in FF. It would be cool if the Turtles were to interact with them.

- Seeing if Karai and Chaplin end up together would be cool, but I would prefer to see more development of that in the regular 2k3 series.

[ZariusTwo]

Dont bother, she's got someone already and Laird's mandate is "no human relationships", accept that

[creativerealms82]

Now with my ideas. Well I added a lot more 2k3 references into my "season" the first half dealing with a "new" foot and the second half the return of Ch'rell.

The Renet two parter was created due to "why hasn't she shown up to fix this mess" simple it was meant to be. She tries comes to this time not realizing the turtles are there and can't send them back because their business in the future is not finished.

The Rokorians are based on the Rock Soldiers from the original series. Tokkra and Razar well thats obvious, they are assassions in this future, working for Ch'rell.

The Splinter/Bishop/Rat King side story is based on Splinter's City at War story at first, with the spirit of the Rat King haunting a lost Splinter, eventually he haunts Bishop too. The Spirit of The rat King can't rest thanks to those two still living.

Bishop appears a lot as this season has a more global feel then season one. Stockman shows up often too.

The Ninja Tribunal (With the Ancient one as a member now) shows up in a Leo/Dark Turtles story line which leads to the dark Turtles reform. Also the first half of the story line deals with the last fragments of the Demon Shredder.

The Tricaratrons that join up with the Rokorians are Zukko's gang and others like them.

Yeah I have Jammerhead show up twice. In his first appearance out of his mind thats to a tengu fragment and the second time just as a side story. Thats just to give the Turtles someone to fight while the ratking Plot raps up.

Dunn related to Hun? Well the right build, the similarities in the name. Thats really all. Hun deciding to become part demon? You knows where that idea come from.

An episode focusing on Biggles? Well the final three episodes are suppose to deal with the aftermath of the war, and the Turtles getting ready to leave. For one of those I wanted a minor character to be focused.

That is all.

[BubblyShell22]

Well, all of those ideas are fascinating. You could definitely be a writer for the show with the way you have plotted this out. Nice job.

[ZariusTwo]

(Snigger)

Theres a fine line between bad fanfiction and seriously pitching stuff similar in layout...50% of that would go out the window on the first day guaranteed.

[Mutated Leo]

Shoot those ideas are better than the whole FF series! Don't be to hard on your ideas, they are better than most.

[ZariusTwo]

As is usually the case, fans who dont know the buisness are quick to say things BY fans are often good when only half of it would ever find it's way into a studio, and even then have to be tweeked to meet standards and practises.

..Why the heck isnt this in the fanfiction forum?

[ToTheNines]

As is usually the case, fans who dont know the buisness are quick to say things BY fans are often good when only half of it would ever find it's way into a studio, and even then have to be tweeked to meet standards and practises.

..Why the heck isnt this in the fanfiction forum?

The dude didn't say he was pitching it to a studio did he? He's just sharing what he thinks would be cool, but I'm sure you knew that.

And it's not in the fanfiction forum because... it's not a fanfiction.

How about you tell us your ideas for an extended fast forward since you know "the business". Everyone's interested.

[creativerealms82]

(Snigger)

Theres a fine line between bad fanfiction and seriously pitching stuff similar in layout...50% of that would go out the window on the first day guaranteed.

Oh I agree most of those are bad fan fiction ideas. Sorry about this topic Zarius, I will lock it.

[gobo]

1 ep of more Dark Turtle conflict
2 eps of Space Usagi (preferably where Zixx gets his butt handed to him)
1 ep of Dark Turtles overthrowing Dunn, and him being jailed
There's really nothing left to say beyond that...


or maybe...
Dunn doesn't go to jail, and tries to saboutage the Turtles' return to their time by changing the destination. Splinter catches on and lays the smack down, then Dunn's thrust into the portal to land on top of Savanti during his final battle with the Turtles back in the land of the lost. ;) That'll complicate the predestined sense of time that they've tried to set up in Fast Forward by posing the idea of alternate realities (very similar to the alternate dimensions they already have introduced to the series; I mean, we don't know how different Dimension Second Earth is from ours [assuming it isn't just a clever way to make a ThunderCats reference] except that other mammals have evolved into the dominant species... as in samurai rabbits :D).

[Mutated Leo]

As is usually the case, fans who dont know the buisness are quick to say things BY fans are often good when only half of it would ever find it's way into a studio, and even then have to be tweeked to meet standards and practises.

..Why the heck isnt this in the fanfiction forum?

I guess I missed that they were ideas... Ideas :roll:

Since you seem to have such insight on studio standards... LOL.

Yeah... Milton were going to need you to move your desk again... Yeah.

[odupianist]

I like it, but I figured there'd be an explanation of why Renet's powers didn't work. Maybe because of the potent power of the tengu crystal? I always wondered that with the current FF, why Renet never showed up? But that's for another thread lol

[Spitfire]

Anyone else chuckle when they read this "Gauntlet of the Flesh"

[VaughnMichael]

Anyone else chuckle when they read this "Gauntlet of the Flesh"
No, because when I saw the Name Shredder I stopped reading.:|

[Lanagirl]

I watched only one episode and that was too much. They have spoilt EVERYTHING to my mind. It's a surprise that many people like FF. The majority of fans I'm acquainted with are disappointed with the sixth season.:roll:

[ToTheNines]

You really shouldn't judge a whole season on one episode.

[Scandia]

The first FF episode that I watched a large portion of was "Enter the Jammerhead". Which many people have stated is one of the worst FF episodes.

It still did not turn me off at all.

FF is perfectly fine with me. And had they shown the Ninja Tribunal first, I would not mind a prolongation of FF. I prefer the 2k3 regular run character designs, but otherwise I deal with FF quite well.

[VaughnMichael]

You really shouldn't judge a whole season on one episode.
It's just like people you shouldn't judge an entire group of people because one jerk acted like a idiot.
While Fast Forward isn't ground breaking in any way it's hardly as horrid as people make it out to be.
People just get to use to something then when it changes they freak out like old people do in a small town.

[Lanagirl]

Oh, perhaps you're right. I'll try to watch the whole season. But still this is not easy for me. By the way, I also could not imagine how I would watch this new cartoon and now everything is great. So may be I have a chance to like FF.

[VaughnMichael]

Oh, perhaps you're right. I'll try to watch the whole season. But still this is not easy for me. By the way, I also could not imagine how I would watch this new cartoon and now everything is great. So may be I have a chance to like FF.
Not everything in life is going to be good all of the time.
That's what makes life interesting and builds character.

[Lanagirl]

Exactly. I bet all of us faced difficult moments in life.
As to the FF, I just meant it wasn't so nice, they can do much better I guess, they have... how the Tribunal says: they have the potential :)

[CylonsKlingonsDaleksOhMy]

Great ideas. Anything with Pimiko in it gets an automatic five-star-rating from me.

BRING KUNOICHI TO TMNT 2003!