View Full Version : [Fanfic] Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles/Kung Fu Panda: Chaos on 2 Worlds
TurtleTitan97
04-29-2012, 03:44 PM
I got inspiration to do this by the idea of what if the Nicktoon TMNT met The Furious Five and Po. I hope you all enjoy my take of a story for what a crossover between them would be like.:tsmile: Critisim is welcomed since this is my first Fanfic.
Plot: When an ancient evil has return from the darkness, two teams of the greatest heroes of two worlds must unite to fight, and save both their worlds from destruction...
Prologue: It Begins...
The Valley of Peace, late at night:
It was all quiet around the Jade Place. All members were fast asleep, execept for Shifu. It was during this time, when he felt like he could think clearly without worrying and stressing. It was a time when he felt most at peace. He looked towards the moonlight, marveling at its beauty. He remembered when he was young, he saw his teacher, Grand Master Oogway, always watching the moonlight, and when he joined him during this time. Shifu turns towards the shrine he built for his master, and felt sadness.
"Oh, Master, it's been so long since you left us. What I wouldn't give to actually see you again. Where ever you are, rest in peace, old friend."
"Shifu..."
Shifu turns around, in fighting position, waiting to see how was talking. "Whose there?! Po, is that you?! I don't have time for another one of your games!"
Suddenly, Lotus flowers fill the room, and soon, a old tortoise stood in front of Shifu.
"It has been a long time, old friend."
Shifu wasn't fooled. "Master? Is that really you?" Shifu had to be cautious, it was not the first time someone came to the Jade Palace and claimed to be Oogway. His mind went back to Junji, his old rival.
Oogway smiled. "Do not fear, Shifu. I am not one of your eneimes. I am the real Oogway. Who else remembers our times when you came here to watch the night with me?"
Shifu was shocked. "Master Oogway, it is you! But, why have you returned to the Jade Palace? Is something wrong?"
Oogway's face suddenly looked sad. He faced looked towards the moonlight. "Shifu, I come only to deliver this message. I sense dark and powerful force coming quickly, one that threatens not only China, but the world itself. I fear that not even the Dragon Warrior can stop what is coming."
Shifu comes to be next to his Master. "What evil is this, Master? There must be something we can do to stop this evil, isn't there?"
Oogway looks at his pupil. "Of course, Shifu. There is one way to stop this." Oogway projects an image of four turtles, fighting off against someone in armor, and a group of ninjas. "Shifu, these four turtles might be able to help you. I have seen them in action, for youths, there fighting style is almost of that a master. No one has beaten them. You must find these ninjas tomarrow afternoon, and get their help in this upcoming battle."
Shifu nodded his head. "I understand, Master. But how can these...children help us? How do I find them?"
Oogway soon started to dissappear. "You will find out. And do not worry about you finding them, they will find you." With that, Oogway dissappeared in a cloud of Lotus Blossums. Shifu looked down on the floor, and saw a picture of the turtles. He pick it up and put it in his pocket. 'Oogway is never wrong. If this great evil is coming soon, I must find these four. Otherwise, no one in the Valley, or all of China, is safe.'
END OF PROLOGUE
TurtleTitan97
04-29-2012, 05:39 PM
(Meanwhile, across another dimension at the same time...)
The Foot solider moves as quietly as possible inside the museum. He had already taken out most of the guards and deactivated all cameras, but he had to be careful. The Master did not except failure at all. He quicklyv spotted two remaining guards near the target. He signaled the other Foot solders to be ready. They attack, taking down the guards quickly without being seen. After they had taken care of them, in walked the Shredder. His armor shined in the moonlight. His giant claws looked terriying, ready to attack any who dare appose him. His scar across his eye showed he had faced tough odds in the past.
"Open it." The Foot soliders went to work. Shredder crossed his arms and looked around. He had to be ready, in case any of the freaks he had met a few weeks back appeared.
Meanwhile, above the building, four shadows dropped quietly on the rooftop.
Leonardo looked down at the Foot soliders cuting into a case, containing an old Japenese sword that looked as though it was still new, while Shredder stood watching. 'Looks like April's guess about where the Foot would strike was correct.'
He turned towards his brothers. "Alright, as we all know, the Foot has been stealing various items across town. Even though we don't know what they are planing, we know for certain it can't be good. Splinter has said our goal. We need to capture one of these guys and find out what they are..." Leo suddenly hears a lound chewing sound. He sighs in fustration. "Michealanglo, are you eating something?!"
The three other turtles look towards the small and youngest turtle. He had part of a pizza crust sticking out of his mouth. "What?"
"Mikey, the whole point of being a ninja is to be stealthy and quiet, not chewing so loud that the enemy can hear you a mile away", said Donnie.
"I can't help it dudes. You know what they say, fish gotta swim, birds gotta fly, and mutant turtles gotta eat. Besides, we left during dinner." He tosses the last bit of pizza into his mouth. "Now, what were you saying, Leo?"
Leo rolled his eyes. "Nevermind. Anyway, here's the plan.."
Raph look impatient. "Plan?! What the shell do we need a plan for?! There's just a couple of Foot goons in there. I say we just go in now! We can take them!"
"Raph, we can't do that. There might be more Foot soliders hiding in the shadows and..."
"Blah,Blah,Blah! If we plan any longer, they'll get away by the time we're done! You guys can go "plan" with fearless leader here, I'm going in."
"Raph, wait!" But it was to late, the young red masked turtle jumped in and landed behind Shredder.
"Suprise, chrome-dome! Hope you got a good doctor, 'cause I'm about to beat your sorry...!" Suddenly, more Foot soliders come out from out of the shadows, surrounding Raphael and protecting Shredder. Raph looked around, counting at least more than twenty. "Aw, crude."
TurtleTitan97
04-30-2012, 09:04 AM
Leo shakes his head as the Foot soliders close in on Raph. "Come on, we gotta help him." The three turtles jump in and press in, forming a tight circle, ready to fight. "Way to practice stealth, Raph! What were you thinking?!", said Leo. Raph turn towards Leo and said "Hey, I didn't hear you coming up with any ideas."
"I had a perfect plan set up, but you blew it! Splinter put me in charge for a reason, wheter you like it or not! If something happens to me, then you can be the leader. You can't just rush off into things like this, what if something happen to you?!"
"Leo, look, I'm sorry, I really am. But can focus on these guys instead of this fight between us?"
Leo looked at the Foot soliders. "Alright, we can deal with this later."
A slow clap is heared, then Shredder walks in front of the turtles. "Ah, the freaks. I was expecting you would show up." He looks around the building. "Where is your so called 'Master', Hamato Yoshi? Is he too scared to face me, that he sends children to fight me?" The Foot soliders laugh.
Leo would not be silent while they mocked Splinter. "Our master is no coward like you, Shredder! At least he knows the meaning of honor!"
"Not to mention he has better fashion sense", joked Mikey. "Three words, Shredder: TOO MUCH ARMOR. You should have called yourself the Human Can Opener. Seems to fit you better."
"Silence, freak! Your master has no honor! He shall pay for the death of my love! I will make him suffer, the way he made her suffer! And you four, will share the same fate! Foot ninja, attack!"
The Foot obeys the words of their master, launching themselves at the young heroes. The turtles pull out their weapons, and do the same. A battle ensues, with each turtle kicking and punching each Foot solider, until only Shredder is left standing.
TurtleTitan97
04-30-2012, 10:03 AM
"Fools! They are just mere children!" Shredder turns to face the turtles. "Fine, I will deal with you four myself." Giant claws pop out, Shredder pointing them at the turtles. They each stand ready, when suddenly police sirens are heard.
"Master, we must leave! We have the sword!", said a Foot solider. Shredder hesitated, but soon nodded his head. "Ninja, vanish! And as for you turtles, you will not be so lucky to escape my wrath next time!" Shredder soon started to run, along with all the other Foot soliders.
"Come on, let's get out of here!", said Leo. The turtles soon followed Leo as he climbed out of the building just as the police arrived.
After they were all on the rooftop, Leo looked back at the museum. "This was a disaster. Not only did the Foot get away, we still don't know what they are up too."
Raph came up to Leo. "Hey, don't worry, Leo. We'll get them."
"Yeah, but like, how will we find them?", asked Mikey.
"Not to worry, fellas. During our fight, I placed a tracker on a Foot solider", said Donnie. He showed them a tracker, which show the Foot member moving quickly.
Leo smiled. "Good work, Don. Come on guys, lets go see what they're up too."
END OF CHAPTER 1
Zany Orange Dude
04-30-2012, 01:39 PM
Dude, nice work! I love the human can opener line!:tlol: You have the everyone very well in character!:tgrin: Keep up the good work, Turtle Titan!
TurtleTitan97
05-01-2012, 11:14 AM
Dude, nice work! I love the human can opener line!:tlol: You have the everyone very well in character!:tgrin: Keep up the good work, Turtle Titan!
Thanks, dudette. I'm glad you like it so far. That line is my favorite as well. I shall have the next chapter up as soon as possible, so stay tuned! :)
TurtleTitan97
05-01-2012, 09:17 PM
Morning, Jade Palace.
"Panda, wake up!", yelled Shifu.
"Huh?!" says Po as he wakes up. The Dragon Warrior jumps to his feet, already in fighting position. "Shifu, what's wrong?! Is the Jade Palace under attack?!"
"No, Po, it's just..."
"Has someone threaten the Valley of Peace?!"
"Po, if you give me a moment..."
*Gasps* "We're not out of dumplings, are we?!"
"PANDA, JUST LISTEN!" yelled Shifu.
Po turned to his master. "Well, what's the emregency? Cause if there's some bad dudes messing with the good people of the valley, I'll just give a little taste of my Kung Fu, Dragon Warrior style."
"Well, you'll have to do that another time. Or have you forgotten that we were in the middle of training while you were sleeping off?"
"Huh?" Po looked to see that he was in the Jade Palace's Training Hall, and turned behind him to see the Furious Five, Tigress, Viper, Crane, Monkey, and Mantis. They looked at Po with annoyed faces.
"What me, forget training? Phfft, I...I didn't forget, I was just...taking a little nap, yeah that's it! I just wanted to be energized enough to be ready to...train."
Shifu just stared at Po. "I see. Well, I hope your little nap has helped you, because you'll be sparring with Tigress this morning."
Po looked at the Tigress with dread. "I'm dead."
The two warriors looked at each other when they were ready. " Is something the matter, Po" , asked Tigress, "You appear to be shaking?"
"What, shaking?" said Po "I'm not shaking, why would I be shaking?" Po hated when Shifu made him fight Tigress, he always got his butt kicked by her. 'Who knows, maybe today I got a shot at her this time', the panda thought.
Shifu looked at the two, then said, "Begin."
Zany Orange Dude
05-01-2012, 09:41 PM
Geez Turtle Titan! You right everyone so well in character! I've said it before but trust me it is a big compliment. Not many people can write these characters as naturally as you do. Can't wait to get more of chapter two! Po is so gonna get whooped!:tlol:
TurtleTitan97
05-02-2012, 09:26 AM
The two warriors take their position. They look at each other, waiting for the other to strike. Po looked for an opening, and when he found one, he attacked. He attempted a scissor kick, but Tigress was ready. She grabed one of Po's legs and started to spin in a circle until she let go, sending him in the wall.
"Why is the training hall moving?" said the dizzy panda. He shook his head and then blocked an attack from Tigress. "Alright, my turn. Get ready to feel the thunder."
Unfortunetly, the thunder did not come to help him. Although Po was able to block most of the attacks, Po was not able to beat Tigress's speed. Fortunetly, Po had one more trick. When Tigress attempted a sneek attack from behind, Po filped her back, ending with him siting on her.
"Alright! I finally did it! The winner and most awesome warrior of China is..!"
Tigress then said something from under Po. "What's that Tigress? I can't hear you."
Unfortunetly, Po had underestimated Tigress, and she sent him flying, until he landed on his face. Tigress looked at the panda and spoke. "I said, me. But good try, you're improving, you nearly beat me. You must never under estimate your opponet, Po, remember that."
Zany Orange Dude
05-02-2012, 04:54 PM
Poor Po, can never beat Tigeress. Look forward to more in the future! Keep it up Turtle Titan!:tgrin:
TurtleTitan97
05-02-2012, 10:11 PM
Po rubs his face. "Ow, don't worry, this bruise is going to make me remember for a long time."
Tigress turns too Shifu, wondering why he had not said anything. "Umm, Master Shifu...?
"Hmm? Tigress, why aren't you and Po training like told you too?"
"Master Shifu...we just finished. Didn't you see us fight?"
"You did?" Shifu looked at his students. "*sighs* I'm sorry, I have been distracted lately. Terrible news has come, and it's something I must tell you all right now."
Po suddenly became interested. "What is it Shifu?"
Shifu took a deep breath. "Last night, I was visited by..."
The doors behind Shifu suddenly burst open behind him. In flew Zeng, the messanger goose for the Jade Palace, and was the one who alerted the Five when there was trouble.
"Master Shifu, I bring urgent news! The village is being attacked!" said Zeng, who was out of breath from flying.
"By whom?!", demand Shifu.
"Rats! They came in huge numbers, I counted more then a hundred! Shifu, they're tearing up everything!"
Shifu turns to his students. "What I have to say must wait. You must go and fight off these rats, and save the village! GO!"
The Five bowed, then rushed off to fight. Po followed them, until he was stopped by Shifu.
"I have an important mission for you while down there, panda."
'SWEET! I got an important mission! Awesome!' thought Po. "Sure Shifu, what is it?"
"I need you to look for these four." Shifu hands Po a picture of four turtles, each wearing multi colored headbands and carring weapons.
"You want me to look for...kids?" asked the confused panda.
"Po, I don't have time to explain, but it's important that you find these four, and bring them to the Jade Palace. I'll explain everything later, but now you must go and help the Five."
Po bowed, and left to join the Five. He looked at the picture. 'I don't get it', he thought, 'why would Shifu be interested in these four? I wonder who they are?'
END OF CHAPTER 2
TurtleTitan97
05-03-2012, 10:09 AM
"This all your fault! My fault?! How the shell is this my fault?!" yelled Raph and Leo.
Both Mikey and Donnie stood on the side. They were used to Leo and Raph fighting,but wanted them to stop so that they can see the situation they were in. They had just woke up in a strange place on a plain, not remembering what had happen. All they remember is that they had just entered Shredder's HQ, hoping to take back what the Foot stole. As usual, things did not go as planned. Next thing they knew, they were somewhere else, and knew that it wasn't New York.
"Hothead!"
"Splinter Juinor!"
"Ninja Dropout!"
Mikey knew it was both their faults, and tried to think back what had gone wrong...
Bauer536
05-03-2012, 10:32 AM
Hey! Just to let you know, you have Raph and Leo in character. Just, here's the thing. I don't know how they're really going to behave in the 2k12 series, but you seem to have right down on pat.:tsmile:
Anyway, what would make things interesting is if Don came into the arguement and defended Leo, that way we could see his snarkiness or something to Raph, since he was the one who made the poor choice. I mean, Don's suppose to have this edge or something.:tcool:
Lethal Lullaby
05-03-2012, 11:50 AM
Hey! Just to let you know, you have Raph and Leo in character. :tcool:
I agree. You protrayed them very well. :tsmile:
Zany Orange Dude
05-03-2012, 04:20 PM
Yes! Keep it coming Titan, keep it coming!:D
TurtleTitan97
05-07-2012, 10:03 PM
Donnie had successfully been able to plant a tracker on a Foot soldier during their fight with Shredder. Thanks to him, they were lucky enough to find their current hideout: An old abandond warehouse, located at Eastman & Laird downtown Manhattan. The place was surrounded on Foot solider everywhere, and when Mikey looked towards Leo, he could see his face was grave.
"Man, look at this. Foot soldiers are everywhere. Whatever Shredder is planing, it's something big", said Donnie.
Leo nodded his head and looked back at the warehouse. "Guys, follow my lead. We have to be careful not to alert the Foot that we followed them. If we stick to the plan, we should be alright. That goes for everyone." While Leo looked directly at Raph when he said this. In turn, Raph looked back and stared angrily at Leo.
Mikey shook his head and muttered, "Aw man, not again."
Leo turned away and headed towards the warehouse, sticking to the shadows, followed by the others. After taking out a few guards, they found a ventilation shaft, and craweled into it, one by one, ready to face what was before them.
Lethal Lullaby
05-08-2012, 06:50 AM
:tthumbsu: You're awesome!
TurtleTitan97
05-08-2012, 10:27 AM
Meanwhile...
Inside the warehouse, Shredder was listening to a report from his commander. He was not focused on what he was saying, only on the task he had to do. He'd only get one shot at this.
"…As you can see, Master, all preperations for tonight are ready. The technology provided by the Kraang should help you in your plan...whatever that plan is, of course."
"Execellent. Has there been any sign of the turtles?"
"Negitive, sir. No sign of them."
"Perfect. Things should go well tonight."
The commander muttered under his breath. "That's if anything even happens, you madman…"
Shredder quickly grabs him and pushes him to the wall. He puts his fist near the commader's face, ready to press the switch that activated his giant claws. "What did you say?!"
The commander begins to studder. "I…I said, things should go very well too, you brilliant man, you!" He starts to sweat. "P…Please, don't hurt me…"
Shredder lets him go. "Coward." He walks away. The commander follows him.
"Master, far be it for me to question you, but why have we've been stealing these five items across town? Surely these items cannot defeat those mutant turtles and your old foe, Hamato Yoshi?"
Shredder turns towards him. "Very well, commander. I shall tell you while we walk..."
TurtleTitan97
05-09-2012, 05:35 PM
"Do you know the story about the legendary tengu, Kuij the Chaos Bringer?", asked Shredder.
"Hmm, it does ring a bell. Why?" asked the commander.
"It all began in the 16th Century Japan, in the early days of the Foot Clan. During those times, there was Kuji, a dark and powerful tengu, who laid waste to countless cites and villages. No army could withstand his amazing power! Then one day, five members of the Foot, who were regarded as the first Elite, were selected to defeat Kuji. With the help of Sorcery , their weapons were transformed, charged with powerful energy. They soon went out to fight Kuji, and after a battle that lasted many days and nights, they defeated him. Unfortunatly, Kuji was immortal, and even with the magic, they could not kill him. With no other choice and realizing how dangerous he was, they used the power within their swords, they cast a spell to toss the demon into another world, into the soil, and locked behind a magical barrier. After the deed had been done, the five were rewarded by keeping the magic contained inside the sword. After their deaths, the five swords dissappeared, the Foot never seeing them again. That is, until now."
Shredder opened a door, which led to a large room in the warehouse. On each side stood thousands of Foot ninja, each bowing down to Shredder as he passed. Before him, a platform where the Kraang worked. There, five swords stood in place, with the moonlight almost close to the center. "Behold, commander, the Five Swords of the first Elite!!!"
Zany Orange Dude
05-09-2012, 06:02 PM
Oooooo this is getting good! I need to go and get the popcorn! Keep up the awesome work Turtle Titan!:tgrin:
Lethal Lullaby
05-09-2012, 06:31 PM
This is making an awesome cartoon in my mind theatre.
C'est superb mon ami! :twink:
TurtleTitan97
05-10-2012, 05:08 PM
"What are you planing to do with the swords, Master Shredder?", asked the Commander.
The Shredder turned his gaze towards him. "What else? The Elite used the magic within these swords to send Kuji away, I intend to use it to bring him back."
Foot Commander was completely shocked. "Are you mad?! Master Shredder, this tengu nearly wiped out all of Japan, not to mention it nearly destroyed the world! Why on earth would you bring it back?!"
'Because, you fool, I will be able to harness it's power! For weeks now, I've had the Kraang work on a device that will allow me to control him." He signals a Kraang to bring the device he mention to him. The alien obeys, and hands Shredder a small futuristic gun. "This Mind Ray will help me control the tengu. The Kraang have made it so that no mind, no matter how strong, will not be able to resist the effects. Once Kuji appears, I'll zap him with this, and he will obey me and me alone. Think of it, Commander, an all powerful tengu, under my control. With it's power, I will be able to conquer and rule this world, as it is my destiny. Not even Hamato Yoshi, and his accursed turtles, will stop me this time!" He begins to turn away, but stops. "The next time you question my decision or dare oppose me in anyway, Commander, I will gladly turn you over to the Kraang. They're very interested in human biology, and I'm sure they would love to have a live specimen to dissect and study." The Commander looks back at the small pink aliens, and glups.
Shredder turns to face the Foot soliders behind him. "My loyal ninjas! For far too long, we have suffered defeat after defeat by our eneimes! To have been denied our rightful rule as leaders of this world! I say to you, that tonight, that all changes! Tonight, that dream shall become a reality!!!"
The Foot clan starts to chant. "LONG LIVE OROKU SAKI!!! LONG LIVE THE SHREDDER!!!"
"Do you guys hear that?", said Donnie.
"Yeah, sounds like the Foot's having some kinda pep rally", said Mikey.
"Come on, it's coming from over there", said Leo.
Bauer536
05-10-2012, 05:22 PM
I like the Shredder's dialogue a lot. Even the chanting from his ninjas was intense. Keep up the good work!
Redeemer
05-10-2012, 05:42 PM
Hey turtle Titan have you ever thought about making a fan-comic, based off the 87 series????
Also you should check out turtle turncoat in this section
TurtleTitan97
05-10-2012, 05:48 PM
Hey turtle Titan have you ever thought about making a fan-comic, based off the 87 series????
As it turns out, awhile back I did have an idea for a TMNT comic based of the 87 series. Unfortunatly, I'm not a drawer and my writing is pretty messy. But I'd love to do a fanfic of it someday.
Also you should check out turtle turncoat in this section
I checked that one out awhile back. It's pretty interesting.
I like the Shredder's dialogue a lot. Even the chanting from his ninjas was intense. Keep up the good work!
Thanks, dude. :)
Zany Orange Dude
05-10-2012, 06:32 PM
You have Shredder very well in character!
Lethal Lullaby
05-10-2012, 06:45 PM
You have Shredder very well in character!
I agree with and TBH I hate reading, but THIS. This is sick. And I mean sick as in awesome. :twink:
Redeemer
05-10-2012, 06:49 PM
As it turns out, awhile back I did have an idea for a TMNT comic based of the 87 series. Unfortunatly, I'm not a drawer and my writing is pretty messy.
Here now you have no excuse... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f3y6k_vk_Vg
I could not draw for crap....until last spring my friend showed me this and now I can actually draw pretty decently..... It improved my drawing by leaps and bounds, I wish I would actually draw on a regular bases bc I would be extraordinarily good if I PRACTICED on a regular bases.... The more you draw the better you get.
This video not only show you how to draw, but how to shade, ink, what tools you need, how to set up panels, style of drawing, It basically shows you how to make a comic
TurtleTitan97
05-10-2012, 06:52 PM
Here now you have no excuse... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f3y6k_vk_Vg
I could not draw for crap....until last spring my friend showed me this and now I can actually draw pretty decently..... It improved my drawing by leaps and bounds, I wish I would actually draw on a regular bases bc I would be extraordinarily good if I PRACTICED on a regular bases.... The more you draw the better you get.
This video not only show you how to draw, but how to shade, ink, what tools you need, how to set up panels, style of drawing, It basically shows you how to make a comic
Wow, thanks dude! I'll check it out when I'm not busy. This is very kind of you!:tsmile:
Redeemer
05-10-2012, 06:58 PM
Wow, thanks dude! I'll check it out when I'm not busy. This is very kind of you!:tsmile:
They have an actual book as well that I find better, just bc I dont have to pause the video and go back..... But the book is awesome http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/how-to-draw-comics-the-marvel-way-stan-lee/1103434883
TurtleTitan97
05-10-2012, 07:01 PM
They have an actual book as well that I find better, just bc I dont have to pause the video and go back..... But the book is awesome http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/how-to-draw-comics-the-marvel-way-stan-lee/1103434883
Rad. Thanks again! I hope you are enjoying my story so far.:twink:
Redeemer
05-10-2012, 07:19 PM
Rad. Thanks again! I hope you are enjoying my story so far.:twink:
Lol the only thing I read was 1987 turtles and ShredderxApril
Im sorry :lol: the ShredderxApril thing just really made me close my eyes in all honest, but I will give it a read through it in a minute, have to fill out an application for my entry into the National Guard
Drose18
05-10-2012, 07:47 PM
Sounds awesome so far Turtle Titan! Just asking will there be any super villian team ups? I'd like to so Peng with Shredder it sounds cool. Not that peng is entirely a bad guy but he is Tai Lung's nephew so... :ohwell:
TurtleTitan97
05-10-2012, 07:51 PM
Sounds awesome so far Turtle Titan! Just asking will there be any super villian team ups? I'd like to so Peng with Shredder it sounds cool. Not that peng is entirely a bad guy but he is Tai Lung's nephew so... :ohwell:
I'll see if I can find a way to add some villians from Kung Fu Panda into my story. As for Peng, I really didn't plan for him to appear.
TurtleTitan97
05-15-2012, 11:25 AM
After silently kicking open the ventilation shaft, the four turtles crawl out one by one. Hiding behind some boxes near the wall, they peer over to see over a thousand Foot soliders, with Shredder standing on a platform. He shouts over the cheering of the Foot soliders, "Let the ritual BEGIN!!!" As soon as Shredder said this, four hooded figures in black cloaks came out and surronded the five swords. They soon start chanting.
"Hey Don, you're the smart one, what the shell are they doing?", asked Mikey. "I can't say, Mikey. But it looks like their saying something over and over again in Japanese."
"I think I can understand it. I remember Splinter teaching Japanese to me awhile back", said Leo. "They're saying 'Oh come great demon, rise from your chains, and be free once more'."
"What does that even mean?", asked Mikey.
"No clue, whatever it is, we're putting an end to this now", said Leo.
Bauer536
05-15-2012, 12:28 PM
Dude! I LOVE the chemistry you've made for the turtles. Even making Leo understand Japanese was priceless. He can translate it, but yet he has no idea the meaning of the chant.:tlol: Great job! Keep up the good work.:tgrin:
TurtleTitan97
05-15-2012, 12:40 PM
Dude! I LOVE the chemistry you've made for the turtles. Even making Leo understand Japanese was priceless. He can translate it, but yet he has no idea the meaning of the chant.:tlol: Great job! Keep up the good work.:tgrin:
Thanks, dude. I'm glad you enjoyed that part with Leo.
TurtleTitan97
05-19-2012, 08:56 PM
"Uh, guys, where's Raph?", asked Mikey. Leo and Donnie both turn around to see their red masked brother was not with them. "Where could he have gone? He was just behind us..", said Leo. Donnie looks around, then points to the left. "Leo, over there!" Leo follows Donnie's gaze, and sees Raph sneeking past the Foot soliders, heading towards the platform.
Lethal Lullaby
05-20-2012, 07:50 PM
Oh boy. I wonder what Raphie's gettin' himself into. Haha. :lol: Anyways just keep doing whatever you're doing. :twink:
TurtleTitan97
05-26-2012, 11:33 PM
Leo quickly rushes to Raph's side. "What the shell do you think you're doing?!" "Stopping Shredder here and now, unlike you, bro.", replied Raph. Raph turns around, but Leo quickly grabs his shoulder.
"What is your deal, Raph?!"
"You want to know?! It's you Leo. I don't care if Splinter did choose you to be the leader, which is not a suprise since you're the favorite son!"
"How can you even say that?!"
"Because it's true! Let go!" Raph pushes Leo away, but Leo pushes right back. "I've just have had about enough of your hotheaded additude, Rapheal!" Suddenly the two brothers start to push until eventually they knock down a box, causing a loud sound to be heard in the area. The Foot turn their attention to the four mutants.
TurtleTitan97
05-31-2012, 10:34 PM
"Well, who didn't see this happening?", said Donnie as the Foot soliders started to close in on them.
Shredder jumped down from the platform and pointed towards the turtles. "Stop them! They must not ruin the ritual!" The Foot obeys and rush towards the turtles.
Mikey brings out his nunchakus, and begins to whirl them as the Foot come towards him. "Man, 4 turtles against more that 1,000 ninjas? Seems alittle unfair...for them anyway." With a big grin, Mikey jumps towards them, yelling out his latest catchphrase: "Booyakasha!" He hits a Foot solider right in the face, using a kick to send him into an oncoming group of Foot soliders.
"Booyakasha? You're still using that?" yelled Donnie while he was fighting. Spining his Bo, he quickly takes out two ninjas, then pole vaults over one, and when landing, does a sweep kick.
"What can I say? It's catchy, not to mention original." Mikey quickly uses his nunchakes to take away a ninja's weapons. "Nighty, night, ugly!", says the small turtle as he punches the ninjas light's out.
Zany Orange Dude
06-01-2012, 03:57 PM
Nice incorporation of the new catchphrase! Keep up the radical story Turtle Titan!:tgrin:
BubblyShell22
06-01-2012, 04:09 PM
Wow. I really like where this is going. I think some posts are a bit short and could be elaborated on, but other than that, this is a nice story. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update.
TurtleTitan97
11-26-2012, 09:16 AM
(Hey everyone, sorry it's been awhile since I posted another part of the story. Been really busy lately.)
The ninjas soon started to close in on Donnie and Mikey. "We could sure use Raph and Leo right now! Where are they?!" "Probably beating the stuffing out of each other more like it!", said Donnie.
Meanwhile, Raph and Leo rushed towards the platform Shredder was on while fighting off against the Foot. When suddenly, out of no where, Fishface and Dogpound appeared. "Going somewhere, freaks?", said Dogpound. Raph rushed towards him, sais drawn. Leo, on the other hand, was locked in combat with Fishface."Nothing to wash us away this time, turtle. Surrender now, and I promise you a quick and painless demise", Fishface said as he kicked Leo away. "We don't need that to stop you. I'll do it myself if I have too", said Leo. Fishface chuckled. "Ah, famous last words. I'll be sure to remember to carve them into your shell before I deliver you to the Shredder." Suddenly Fishface was knocked to the side before he could harm Leo, and in his place stood Donatello. "We'll take care of these two. Get to that platform! Whatever Shredder is doing can't be good." Mikey appeared behind Dogpound as he was holding Raph. "Yo, Dogpound! If there was award for ugliest mutant mutt, you'd beat everyone by a landslide!" Dogpound drops Raph and runs towards Mikey. "My name is Chris Bradford, not Dogpound, you littleā¦!" "Naah,naah! You can't catch me!", said Mikey as he ran away. Leo quickly ran towards the platform. Raph quickly got up. "No way is he stealling the glory", he thought.
TurtleTitan97
11-26-2012, 06:10 PM
The Kraang watched the battle as it ensued. "Kraang, we must no let the ones called the Turtles reach this place so that the ones called the Foot can bring this tengu into this place." "Of course Kraang. I shall tell Kraang to not let the ones called the Turtles reach this place so that..." Suddenly, two sais are sent straight into the two Kraang's faces. Raph pulls them out. "Sheesh, you guys are so annoying!" Raph made quick work of the other Kraangs, sending them over the platform. "Alright. Time to end this." As he walks over the platform, it begins to glow as he grabs the one of the swords, so does Leo. "What are you doing?! I had this first!", said Raph. "No, I did. Just go grab the other swords so we can leave", said Leo. "Fine", said Raph. He tried to move, but he couldn't. "Hey, I can't move!" "Oh c'mon, Raph! Just let go!" Raph tried again. "Leo, I'm serious! I'm stuck!" Leo tried to pull away too. "What the...?! I can't move either! What's happening?!" Suddenly light fell on them. "What's going on?!" He looked back at Leo. "Dude, you're diappearing!" Leo looked back at Raph. "So are you!"
Meanwhile, Donnie stood before Fishface. As he ran towards him, Donnie popped out the blade from his bo staff, and sliced off one of his robotic legs. "Oooh, just wait until I get my hands on you!", said Fishface as he hopped over to Donnie. "Yeah,yeah, whatever", said Donnie as sliced off his other robotic leg, causing Fishface to fall. He walked over to him, bent over, and smiled. "Face it, Xever. With your new mutated form, you're as pathetic as Baxter Stockman." "Baxter who?" Donnie rolled his eyes. "Nevermind." He turned around to see Leo and Raph disappearing. "Aw nuts. Mikey, help me out here!" "I'm on it!", said Mikey as he ducked between Dogpound''s legs. He joins up with Donnie, and they run towards the platform. Shredder stood watching from the side. "Those accursed turtles are ruining everything! I must stop them!" He jumps out of the shadows and runs after Mikey and Donnie. Mikey turns around to see him. "Dude! Shred-head at ten o'clock!" "Just keep running!",said Donnie the jump on the platform. "What are you two doing?! We've got to get out of here before...! Hey, I can't move!" "Me either! Dudes, did Shredder, like, put super glue on here or something?!" Shredder jumps towards them. "I've got you now!" Suddenly, there's a flash of light! When it was gone, there was no sign of the turtles or Shredder. The Kraang got on the platform. "The ones that were in this place are no longer in this place, Kraang." "Yes, I see that Kraang. But if the ones who were in this place are no longer in this place, than in what place are the ones called the Turtles and Shredder?"
"...And that's how we ended up here", thought Mikey. "Whereever here is anyway. How are we going to get back home? Maybe Leo knows." He turned around, and saw that Leo and Raph were fighting in the dirt. "Or maybe not." Donnie got up. "I've had enough of this." He pushed Leo and Raph apart. "ENOUGH! In case you two didn't notice, we're in the middle of no where in broad daylight, completely exposed! So how about instead of fighting, we figure out what to do next?!" Leo and Raph looked at each other and muttered, "Fine." "Hey guys, check this out!", said Mikey as he pointed to the distance. The others followed where Mikey was pointing, and where shocked. Across where they were, they saw animal farmers! The looked across, but saw no humans. "What is going on? Humanoid animals farming in daylight? No sign of humans aywhere? What is going on?", said Donnie. Leo looked across and pointed at mountains. "I recognize that mountain range from one of sensei's books." "So? What so special about some dumb old mountains?", said Raph. Leo turned to him. "What's special about these mountains is that they are only found in one place in the world: China." "Hold up", said Raph. "How can we be in China when there's all these animals that walk and talk like us, yet no people?" Donnie walked up. "Maybe it's because this isn't our China." "What are you saying, Donnie?" "I'm saying that whatever Shredder was doing not only teleported us away from New York, but from our universe all together." The other turtles stared at him in confusion. "Don't you guys get it? We're in an alternate dimension!"
Lethal Lullaby
11-26-2012, 08:23 PM
Love what you got here so far, dude. ;) Keep it coming.
TurtleTitan97
11-26-2012, 09:52 PM
"Alright, so how do we get back?",asked Raph. Donnie scratched his head. "The thing is...I don't really know." "WHAT?! How can you not know?! You're the genuis?!" "Gee Raph, I must have forgot to bring me book on alternate dimensions with me while we were fighting for our lives against the Foot", said Donnie. Leo stepped in, and spoke in his best heroic voice. "This no time to lose our heads. We may not have a way to leave, but by working together, we can overcome any obstacles." Raph turned to Leo. "Seriously, you have got to stop using lines from that 'Space Heroes' show." "So, like, we're stuck here?!", said Mikey freaking out. "Aw,man,I'll never have pizza again! This the worst day of my life!" Leo rolled his eyes, and turned around. "Look, someone's coming. Maybe he can tell us if there's a town near by or something." Mikey looked to the ground, and saw the swords Shredder had before. "Might as well pick them up...", he thought. The traveler came towards the turtles, and they could see he was a goose. Leo walked up to him. "Excuse me, but could you tell us if...." "AHHH! Bandits!" He cowarded before them. "Please, don't hurt me!" "Would you relax? We're not not bandits", said Raph. The goose looked up. "Oh yeah? Then what's with the masks and weapons?" "Look", said Leo,"We promise we won't harm you. We just want to know if there's town or city somewhere near here." The goose got on his feet. "The only town around here would be at the Valley of Peace. It's down the road", he said, geturing to where he was coming from. "Can I go?" Leo nodded, and the goose quickly left. "Anyone else find it werid how even though we're in China that dude spoke perfect English?", said Mikey. Leo looked down the road. "C'mon, let's go. Maybe we can find a place to rest for awhile until we can figure out our next move." As the turtles moved, Donnie was deep in thought. 'I can't believe we're in another universe! It's science fiction come true. April is SO going to be impressed when I tell her!', thought the mutant turtle. 'If I ever see her again that is...'
"Are we there yet?", said Mikey. The others groaned. "Mikey, for the last time, no, we aren't there yet", said Leo. Mikey's stomach growled. "Man, I could sure go for some pizza right now." Raph turned to him. "You said it. I wonder how Spike is doing. I hope Splinter didn't forget to feed him..." Donnie looked towards the distance. "Look guys, smoke!" Leo smiled. "We must be getting close." Mikey lit up. "Sweet! Race ya! Last one down to the valley is a tortise!", said as he ran. "You're on!", said the others joining. Briefly forgetting the situation they were in, the turtles raced it each other, laughing and smiling like they were back in NYC. It wasn't till they got close that their faces turned from happiness to shock. "Whoa, that's some fire!" Down below, they could see a village burning, and could hear the shouts of scared people. "For a place called the Valley of Peace, it sure doesn't look peaceful", said Donnie. "Looks like they could use some help", remarked Leo. "C'mon, turtles, let's go!" The others followed Leo as they raced towards the valley as fast as they could go.
END OF CHAPTER 3
BubblyShell22
11-27-2012, 08:50 AM
Awesome work on this. I really like where this is going. I hope the Turtles can help the villagers. Nicely done. I'll be eagerly awaiting an update.
TurtleTitan97
11-28-2012, 07:17 PM
As the turtles rushed forward towards the villiage, the screams continued to get louder and louder. When they finally reached it, it was shocking. Everywhere around them, rats were burning down everything, and attacking the villiagers. All the turtles could say to this was,"...Whoa." "Let him go!", said a voice. The turtles turned to the side and saw a father pig trying to get back his son from two rats. One of the rats were holding the child by his arm, while great fear was in his eyes while looking at the rats. "Oh yeah? Or else what, fatty?!", said one of the rats when he pushed the pig into the ground. "Father!" "Don't worry, son. I'll be alright.", said the pig. The rat who pushed him pulls out a knife. "You won't be for long, old man." Suddenly he's tapped on the shoulder, and the rat turns around. "Hey, do you mine? We're in the middle of...huh?!" It was then the rat was suckered punch, sending him into the wall, by none other than Raph. Donnie and Mikey rushed in, ambushing the other rat, and he let go, causing the piglet to fly through the air. Leo jumped and catched the child. When he let go, he ran to his father. "My son! Thank goodness you're safe! Thank you, my young friends. How can I ever repay you?" Leo smiled and said, "We're just doing our job, sir." "You know, we could actually use some...owww!", said Mikey before Raph slapped him from behind. Leo turned back to the pig. "So, who're these rat guys?" "They are invaders from outside of China", said the pig as he got up. "They came here to challenge the Furious Five and the Dragon Warrior." "Furious Five? Dragon Warrior? Who are they?", asked Mikey. The pig turned to the turtles with a puzzled look. "You've never hear of them? They're only one of the greatest groups of Kung Fu masters that ever lived! Espically the Dragon Warrior! They are our protectors.""Kung Fu masters? That's so cool!", said Mikey. Raph looked at the chaos around them. "Oh yeah...they're REALLY good protectors. If their so great, why aren't they here fighting off these guys?" "Last I heard, they were fighting off against a large group of rats in the center of town", said the pig, "But I think they may be in need of some assistence." Leo nodded. "Guys, I think we should go and help this Furious Five out. After all, we can't fight off these rats all by ourselves." The other turtles nodded in agreement. "C'mon. Let's take the rooftops. That way we won't have to fight our way through these guys." "Good luck, my friends. Come, my son. We must leave now", said the pig as he turned away. The piglet said "Thank you", and left with his father. The turtles soon climbed up a buliding, and headed to where the Furious Five were.
DonatelloNinja82
12-02-2012, 01:06 PM
This is really good so far! I'm really enjoying it and you have the characters down excellently!!
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