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BubblyShell22
12-04-2012, 07:46 AM
Hey, I've decided to start my own thread that showcases any stories I post and also any plot bunnies I come up with just so I can get your reactions.
Right now, the plot bunny I have in my head is set in the Nick universe and is called "Mind Over Matter." The premise is that Shredder discovers he can attack the Turtles via meditation and decides to set his sights on Leo. When Leo is attacked mentally and isn't able to escape, he begins to question his self-worth and whether he can fight against Shredder on his own. Meanwhile, the others don't know what's going on and have a hard time believing that it's Shredder doing the damage to their brother. Splinter believes Leo and teaches him how to fight Shredder off.
That's the vague idea I have right now. It might change as I progress with it, but for now, that's the basic premise. So, what do you think? Does it sound good, or could I expand on it even more? I would like your feedback because I want to make sure that this sounds like a good idea. If it doesn't, then I won't write it. Thanks a million.
ZariusTwo
12-04-2012, 08:14 AM
Hey, I've decided to start my own thread that showcases any stories I post and also any plot bunnies I come up with just so I can get your reactions.
Right now, the plot bunny I have in my head is set in the Nick universe and is called "Mind Over Matter." The premise is that Shredder discovers he can attack the Turtles via meditation and decides to set his sights on Leo. When Leo is attacked mentally and isn't able to escape, he begins to question his self-worth and whether he can fight against Shredder on his own. Meanwhile, the others don't know what's going on and have a hard time believing that it's Shredder doing the damage to their brother. Splinter believes Leo and teaches him how to fight Shredder off.
This is a very complex, above-the-norm idea, I really like it, it'll be interesting to see just how you portray the psychic battlefield that Leo and Shredder will project in their heads. Go for it.
BubblyShell22
12-04-2012, 11:17 AM
Thanks. I'll do my best to see if I can do this, but I think I can. I wasn't sure if this idea was really going to work in this universe, but the episode "The Gauntlet" really showed me that this series can get dark when the situation calls for it. This fic will take place after "The Gauntlet" as well as I think that's a great lead in to this story. Thanks for the feedback.
Blossombrooks
12-04-2012, 05:40 PM
Cool idea Shell, i'm sure you'll do a good job with it. I think the Nick universe is the right place for it too with Leo acting younger than in previous incarnations and more believably teenage. I wonder, will he go to Splinter straight away with it though or try to deal with it himself first?
Can't wait to read it! :tgrin:
BubblyShell22
12-05-2012, 04:02 PM
Honestly, I'm not sure about that. I don't think going to Splinter straight away will be a good idea as it will make the story too short. I was thinking of a different idea, which I don't want to say here because I don't want to spoil anything.
In the meantime, here's another story based after "The Gauntlet" called "Stronger." Hope you like it:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8764676/1/Stronger
BubblyShell22
12-07-2012, 03:10 PM
Just posted the prologue of "Mind Over Matter" up. Here it is:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8772910/1/Mind-Over-Matter
Feel free to leave a review either at FF or here if you want.
BubblyShell22
12-08-2012, 07:46 AM
Hey, I wanted to share with you another plot bunny that I've been working on. It's called "My Leito (pronounced lay-ee-toe) and was an idea given to me by a reviewer after she called Leo that nickname. She told me that the term is a Spanish nickname of Leonardo's name, and I thought it sounded cool, so I decided to write a story about it. In the story, Teresa Garcia is mourning the loss of her son who was killed by the Purple Dragons. When Leo rescues her from an ambush by Bradford and Xever, she believes that Leo is her son in a reincarnated form. Leo is confused by this and doesn't know what to make of it. Eventually, the two form a bond, and Teresa becomes the mother figure to Leo and the Turtles. I don't want to say too much because I don't want to spoil it for you, but that's my latest bunny. I've already written chapter one and intend to post it soon.
So, what do you think? Is this a good idea? I really wanted to create an OC for the new Turtles universe, and I thought Teresa would be a good one. She originally is from Chile.
Blossombrooks
12-08-2012, 03:46 PM
Sounds intriguing, as the guys have no grown up April to mother them in the Nick series this could really work. Can't wait to read it! :D
ZariusTwo
12-09-2012, 06:15 AM
Sounds like another very promising and heavy story, I like it, look forward to how you put the idea forward in the easy-to-follow style of the Nick show.
BubblyShell22
12-09-2012, 07:20 AM
Thanks, you two. I'll do my best to deliver a good story.
DonatelloNinja82
12-09-2012, 05:13 PM
Just read both...great work! I'm too scared to post any of my fan fics :P
BubblyShell22
12-10-2012, 07:33 AM
Thanks. And don't be scared. Not everyone will be harsh with you. I'd be willing to read your stories and give them a shot.
I worked some more on "My Leito" and am making progress on the second chapter, which is a good thing.
BubblyShell22
12-14-2012, 07:38 AM
Have some more one-shot plot bunnies to share. Here they are:
Miss Independent: April wants to prove to the Turtles that she doesn't need help all the time and that she's capable of doing things on her own.
Longing: Splinter reflects on his life with Teng Shen and Miwa and how he misses them so much.
Temper: Splinter looks back on his mistake with Saki and how he's trying to make sure Raphael doesn't make the same mistake he did.
Because of You: April looks back on her time with her dad and how Splinter has filled that particular role.
A Shelltastic Christmas: April and her father spend Christmas with the Turtles. I might post this one up today or sometime next week. We'll see.
So, those are my bunnies for now. What do you think? I hope to have more up soon.
ZariusTwo
12-14-2012, 02:55 PM
I'd like to see more from "Because of You", always loved the bond April has with Splinter
Blossombrooks
12-15-2012, 10:40 AM
They all sound like good ideas Shell. 'Longing' sounds especially good. Which universes are they going to be in? :tgrin:
BubblyShell22
12-16-2012, 07:57 AM
The Nick universe of course. I'm getting so many ideas from that universe.
Ooh, and I just thought of a great idea for "Mind Over Matter" as well. I'm going to write about it today and see if I can get the second chapter finished based on what I thought of. All I'm going to say is that it'll bring back a character from my story "Hero" so if you haven't read that, I suggest you do so to get acquainted with the character even though she's minor at best.
I'm not sure when those one-shots will be up, but I so can't wait to get started on them as well as get "Mind Over Matter" up to speed.
BubblyShell22
12-19-2012, 07:41 AM
Just posted a Christmas story called "A Shelltastic Christmas." Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8808139/1/A-Shelltastic-Christmas
Happy holidays, everyone.
ZariusTwo
12-20-2012, 05:47 AM
Very good stuff Bubbly...felt very much like your typical Nick christmas special.
BubblyShell22
12-20-2012, 08:01 AM
Thanks for the kind words, Zarius, and for taking the time to read. Happy Holidays. See you all next year.
BubblyShell22
12-22-2012, 04:43 PM
Have another plot bunny. "How Does It Feel?" is a Don/April one-shot reflecting on how different the two of them are and how that affects their relationship. Can't wait to put it up.
DonatelloNinja82
12-22-2012, 05:09 PM
Just posted a Christmas story called "A Shelltastic Christmas." Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8808139/1/A-Shelltastic-Christmas
Happy holidays, everyone.
Loved it!!!
Have another plot bunny. "How Does It Feel?" is a Don/April one-shot reflecting on how different the two of them are and how that affects their relationship. Can't wait to put it up.
Donnie's crush on April is adorable! This is a cute idea!!
ZariusTwo
12-23-2012, 07:11 AM
Oh, please tackle the Don/April story Bubbly, I'm not a big fan of the pairing, but in your hands it could be interesting, and will certaingly have a lot of depth to it.
BubblyShell22
12-23-2012, 07:26 AM
I sure will after the holidays are over. I think it can be explored in a really good way.
And thanks for the review, Donatello Ninja. I'm glad you liked it.
BubblyShell22
12-27-2012, 08:23 AM
Have a few other plot bunnies I just thought of while listening to my latest Glee soundtrack. Here they are:
Homeward Bound/Home: Takes place after "The Gauntlet" and showcases the Turtles while coming back from their defeat and afterwards. It's going to be a one-shot with two parts.
The Scientist: Don/April fic. When April tells Don they can't be together, Don takes it hard and really reflects on who he is and why he can't be truly happy.
Give Your Heart A Break: Another Don/April fic. April needs some space to think about things when Don becomes a little too needy.
Holding Out For A Hero: An OC's perspective as Leo saves her from a mugging. Really have a good idea for this one.
So, those are my bunnies thus far. Can't wait to put them up. What do you think?
ZariusTwo
12-27-2012, 12:27 PM
I'm interested in the one with Don being all needy and April trying to catch a break from things, it sounds a bit more domestic, I'd like to see you play around with the relationship rather than abruptly bring it to a halt, I'd much rather wait for the show to give permission for that first, work within the framework of the show and try to make these stories feel like they can belong in the televised canon.
BubblyShell22
12-27-2012, 04:17 PM
Here's another story from me. Homeward Bound/Home. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8840261/1/Homeward-BoundHome
Oh, they aren't going to break up completely. It's more about April needing her space because she feels that Don is being a bit too clingy or something.
ZariusTwo
12-28-2012, 04:44 AM
Left a review. I think it's better if you just made it all the one story, as you didnt divide it into two proper chapters (which the site gives you the option to do) and it felt too short to be a two-parter in my book, but overall it was still very good
BubblyShell22
12-28-2012, 07:37 AM
Yeah, I could have divided it into two chapters, but I wanted to just get it out there, and when I had the idea to do a two parter that's what came to me, so that's what I went with. But I do agree it could have been better. I just didn't want to lose the idea as that happens to me sometimes and then I can't get it back. I promise the next one will be better.
ZariusTwo
12-29-2012, 06:09 AM
Yeah, I could have divided it into two chapters, but I wanted to just get it out there, and when I had the idea to do a two parter that's what came to me, so that's what I went with. But I do agree it could have been better. I just didn't want to lose the idea as that happens to me sometimes and then I can't get it back. I promise the next one will be better.
The story was fine Bubbly, I'm just saying you don't have to put it all down on one page if you think it needed two chapters, you can put the second part in another document, save that document, and then upload it as a seperate chapter to the site. I've seen plenty of two-shots that do that
BubblyShell22
12-29-2012, 08:26 AM
Yeah, I know I could've done that, but when I envisioned the story, that's what I thought I'd do as it looked like a good idea at the time keeping it as one story. But next time I have that idea, I'll definitely do it as two chapters. Or I could re-post it as a two shot if that would be better. I'd have to take the story down to do that, but I could always do it anyway to make it fit.
BubblyShell22
12-31-2012, 08:52 AM
Hey, thought of another plot bunny that bit me yesterday, so here's the premise of it:
Title: Truth and Lies
Universe: Nick Turtles
Plot: After spending time with the Turtles, April disappears and no one knows where she is. The Turtles are baffled and can't seem to find any leads as to why she's gone. Three years later, they receive mysterious text message from someone known as A. Is April back, or is someone playing a twisted game trying to lure them into a trap?
Basically, I like to think of this story as Pretty Little Liars: TMNT Style. I love the book series and the TV show, and I was thinking it would be cool to put my own spin on it with the Turtles. You don't have to a be a fan of the books or the show to read it though, but if you have questions, feel free to PM me if you get confused about it. I'm going to be working on it today and hopefully get a few chapters done. Can't wait to share it with you guys.
ZariusTwo
12-31-2012, 09:07 AM
Hmm, interesting premise, this should take you out of your comfort zone and challenge you on a dramatic level. I look forward to this.
BubblyShell22
12-31-2012, 03:54 PM
Yes, I agree that it'll challenge me, and I already have a basic idea of where I want it to go. It won't be exactly like the books or TV show, but certain elements of the PLL series will be in place such as the text messages themselves. I've got part of chapter one already written and will be working more on it tonight while watching wrestling.
DonatelloNinja82
12-31-2012, 06:24 PM
Hey, thought of another plot bunny that bit me yesterday, so here's the premise of it:
Title: Truth and Lies
Universe: Nick Turtles
Plot: After spending time with the Turtles, April disappears and no one knows where she is. The Turtles are baffled and can't seem to find any leads as to why she's gone. Three years later, they receive mysterious text message from someone known as A. Is April back, or is someone playing a twisted game trying to lure them into a trap?
Basically, I like to think of this story as Pretty Little Liars: TMNT Style. I love the book series and the TV show, and I was thinking it would be cool to put my own spin on it with the Turtles. You don't have to a be a fan of the books or the show to read it though, but if you have questions, feel free to PM me if you get confused about it. I'm going to be working on it today and hopefully get a few chapters done. Can't wait to share it with you guys.
ooooo thst sounds awesome....
BubblyShell22
01-01-2013, 08:10 AM
Thanks, DN. I can't wait to share it with you guys.
TurtleTitan97
01-01-2013, 09:57 AM
Hey, thought of another plot bunny that bit me yesterday, so here's the premise of it:
Title: Truth and Lies
Universe: Nick Turtles
Plot: After spending time with the Turtles, April disappears and no one knows where she is. The Turtles are baffled and can't seem to find any leads as to why she's gone. Three years later, they receive mysterious text message from someone known as A. Is April back, or is someone playing a twisted game trying to lure them into a trap?
Basically, I like to think of this story as Pretty Little Liars: TMNT Style. I love the book series and the TV show, and I was thinking it would be cool to put my own spin on it with the Turtles. You don't have to a be a fan of the books or the show to read it though, but if you have questions, feel free to PM me if you get confused about it. I'm going to be working on it today and hopefully get a few chapters done. Can't wait to share it with you guys.
Sounds pretty interesting. Can't wait to read it. :)
Blossombrooks
01-02-2013, 03:56 AM
Sounds really great Shell, I'm not familiar with the series but the premise certainly seems interesting and full of intrigue. Can't wait to read it! :tgrin:
BubblyShell22
01-03-2013, 03:58 PM
Thanks, Titan and BB. I can't wait to share it with you. Chapter one is already written, and I'm getting a good start on chapter two as well.
BubblyShell22
01-06-2013, 07:20 AM
I thought I'd give you a progression update on my story "Truth and Lies." Chapters one and two are fully written and chapter three is almost done.
BubblyShell22
01-08-2013, 03:37 PM
Posted the first chapter of Truth and Lies. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8889143/1/Truth-and-Lies
DonatelloNinja82
01-08-2013, 07:22 PM
Posted the first chapter of Truth and Lies. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8889143/1/Truth-and-Lies
oooo cannot wait for more!
BubblyShell22
01-09-2013, 07:39 AM
Thanks, DN. I can't wait to share it with you.
ZariusTwo
01-10-2013, 10:50 AM
Off to a good start Bubbly.
BubblyShell22
01-10-2013, 04:34 PM
Thanks. Glad you like it so far. I'm working on Leo's chapter now. I've got Mikey's, Don's, and Raph's already written. Thanks for taking the time to review as well, Zarius.
ZariusTwo
01-10-2013, 04:48 PM
Great. Looking forward to Dons'...that's bound to be wangsty:P
BubblyShell22
01-11-2013, 07:53 AM
Well, yes, it will be angsty for sure, but I won't give away too much more. You'll have to read it to find out what happens.
BubblyShell22
01-15-2013, 03:39 PM
Just posted a new story called Holding Out for a Hero. It features an OC named Madison who will appear in Truth and Lies also. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8911122/1/Holding-Out-for-a-Hero
Blossombrooks
01-15-2013, 04:19 PM
Read and reviewed, really like the connection. Can't wait to see the guy's individual chapters for Truth and Lies! :tgrin:
BubblyShell22
01-16-2013, 08:14 AM
Thanks for the review. I didn't reply to it yet, but I will. I also can't wait to give you those chapters. I'm excited for how this story's coming.
ZariusTwo
01-16-2013, 10:19 AM
Great story Bubbly. I like how you're connecting your fan continuity.
BubblyShell22
01-17-2013, 08:37 AM
Thanks, Zarius. Yeah, I really like how this is going, too. I'm going to do more one-shots like that as well with the other Turtles and how they coped right after April disappeared. I hope to have them up soon.
BubblyShell22
01-19-2013, 12:14 PM
Here's the second chapter of Truth and Lies. I was going to do more chapters today, but my hand became tired, so this is the only chapter I could get out. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8889143/2/
DonatelloNinja82
01-19-2013, 02:43 PM
Great new chapter! I love it! (I'm 1uvakindmom on ff.net). :tgrin:
ZariusTwo
01-19-2013, 02:44 PM
I loved that chapter. Great to see Mikey in high spirits even in light of this situation. I left a review.
BubblyShell22
01-19-2013, 03:05 PM
Great new chapter! I love it! (I'm 1uvakindmom on ff.net). :tgrin:
Ah, so you're the one who followed me and favorited me. Thanks a million. I favorited and am following you as well, though I haven't gotten to read your stories yet. I'll get to them though.
I loved that chapter. Great to see Mikey in high spirits even in light of this situation. I left a review.
Yep, I saw that and replied, Zarius. Thanks a million.
DonatelloNinja82
01-19-2013, 03:20 PM
Ah, so you're the one who followed me and favorited me. Thanks a million. I favorited and am following you as well, though I haven't gotten to read your stories yet. I'll get to them though.
Yep, I saw that and replied, Zarius. Thanks a million.
Yes I am the one lol, and no problem! Your stories are great! And take your time with mine...I dont think it's that great. I only have one TMNT story on there as of now, and its only two chapters so far. I'm a busy person and don't get as much time to write as I would like to :tcry:.
Blossombrooks
01-19-2013, 03:44 PM
It's great Shell, you're so talented! It's spot on for the nick-verse and I'm already hooked.
BubblyShell22
01-20-2013, 07:41 AM
Yes I am the one lol, and no problem! Your stories are great! And take your time with mine...I dont think it's that great. I only have one TMNT story on there as of now, and its only two chapters so far. I'm a busy person and don't get as much time to write as I would like to :tcry:.
Hey, no big deal. Just take your time with writing and update when you can. I love where your stories are going, especially the Turtles one. It's great. Keep up the good work.
It's great Shell, you're so talented! It's spot on for the nick-verse and I'm already hooked.
Thanks for the kind words, BB. I'm glad you're hooked, and I can't wait to give you guys more chapters. I'm having fun writing this story for sure. I may have to tweak some things though in light of Karai's debut. I'll have to watch the episode and see if I want to include her in this fic or not. In the meantime, thanks for the kind words. They mean so much to me.
BubblyShell22
01-25-2013, 07:33 AM
I figured I'd give you a progression update on Truth and Lies. Chapter seven is finished and chapter eight is almost completed. I swear, I'm getting ideas for this story faster than I can write it down. This is a first for me as most of the time I end up getting writer's block way too often, but it doesn't seem to be coming on that much, which is a good thing. Maybe it's because I already have an outline of how I want the story to go, whereas most of the time, I end up getting a story idea and then changing it up as I go.
ZariusTwo
01-25-2013, 10:51 AM
It's great that you've thought it out far enough to make it to novel-length form Bubbly
I know what it's like to sometimes write something, put it up, and suddenly change the story half-way through. That was a huge problem for my earlier JCA and Transformer fics on FF.net (before I took them down)
BubblyShell22
01-25-2013, 11:19 AM
Yeah, I feel the same way. Or to have a story idea and not really know where you're going to take it right away. I had that for a long time, but this fic seems to be progressing better. I would have posted chapter three today, but I have a killer headache due to the lake effect snow we're getting right now. Going to continue into tomorrow, too.
BubblyShell22
01-27-2013, 07:52 AM
Thought I'd share a plot bunny based off the latest episode. The story is called "Some Nights" and will deal with Leo having a nightmare about Splinter finishing him off while under Rat King's control. From there, Splinter talks to him about how everything will be fine, but Leo still has misgivings. I'm not sure if this will be a chapter fic or not. I'm thinking of just keeping it a one-shot. Also, I know I'm going to have plot bunnies for the Karai episode based on the previews I've seen. Can't wait to see what comes of those.
As for Truth and Lies, I'm still trying to get chapter nine finished. I hate sinus headaches.
ZariusTwo
01-27-2013, 07:58 AM
As for Truth and Lies, I'm still trying to get chapter nine finished. I hate sinus headaches.
Take your time and make sure you have a clear head when writing Bubbly, those things can be a real distraction, rest up before you keep at it.
BubblyShell22
01-27-2013, 02:49 PM
Yeah, I know. I took some medicine earlier, but we're supposed to get snow and ice tonight, so that's why I have it. I'll take some more medicine in a bit, even though I have a feeling it won't do anything. Ah, well, I'll just deal with it.
And trust me, I still have a clear head about writing. It's just getting the ideas out that I have trouble with.
And, now we're getting freezing rain. Oh joy.
BubblyShell22
02-02-2013, 08:04 AM
Well, after seeing the new Turtles ep, I have a few plot bunnies for sure. I was thinking of writing one called "Burden" where Leo and Raph discuss leadership as Raph questions how Leo does it. I also thought of a collective group of one-shots called "Roots Before Branches." We'll see how things go.
ZariusTwo
02-02-2013, 03:16 PM
Interested in the second bunny, I'm quite a sucker for anthology stories
Original TMNT Cartoon Fan
02-03-2013, 05:10 AM
I have a question, which I need for fanfiction.
What is it called when Donatello turn the Turtle Van into a hover-boat in some episodes of the 1987 show? (like 20 000 Leaks Under the City, Venice on the Half Shell)
BubblyShell22
02-03-2013, 07:39 AM
Interested in the second bunny, I'm quite a sucker for anthology stories
Well, it's going to be a series of one shots with different characters' perspectives. I was originally going to place it after "New Girl In Town," and I still might and go from there. I might include other episodes as the series progresses, but it was originally going to be about Leo, Raph, and Karai. I might add other characters, too, though. We'll see what I can come up with.
I have a question, which I need for fanfiction.
What is it called when Donatello turn the Turtle Van into a hover-boat in some episodes of the 1987 show? (like 20 000 Leaks Under the City, Venice on the Half Shell)
I have no idea as I don't remember those episodes. You'd have to ask someone with more knowledge of the original show. Sorry.
DonatelloNinja82
02-03-2013, 07:58 AM
Well, after seeing the new Turtles ep, I have a few plot bunnies for sure. I was thinking of writing one called "Burden" where Leo and Raph discuss leadership as Raph questions how Leo does it. I also thought of a collective group of one-shots called "Roots Before Branches." We'll see how things go.
Thats a good idea for a fic. I like this Raph, he's got the sarcasm and the attitude, but he's also humbled and shaped by experience. When he learns that Leo doesnt have it easy, he learns to respect his brother and even appologizes lol.
BubblyShell22
02-03-2013, 03:56 PM
Yes, and I think he's curious as to how Leo stays so calm under the pressure because Raph couldn't do that and froze up, so he's going to ask about that for sure.
BubblyShell22
02-04-2013, 07:42 AM
Just posted a new story called Teenage Mutant Budweiser Turtles. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8977832/1/
BubblyShell22
02-10-2013, 04:18 PM
Well, another plot bunny has bitten me. I was thinking of doing a story where Miwa is raised alongside Splinter and the Turtles and what that would be like. I'm thinking of calling it "Different Paths." I'm not sure when this will be up as I want to concentrate all of my attention on "Truth and Lies" right now, but I'll try and get it up as soon as I can.
Speaking of "Truth and Lies," I just finished writing chapter nine and am starting work on chapter ten. I hope to get more done tonight if I can manage it.
Blossombrooks
02-10-2013, 05:18 PM
Ooh good stuff Shell and I'm glad Truth and Lies is coming along for you, that's great news! (I can't wait to read more but i'll behave and be patient :D)
BubblyShell22
02-11-2013, 08:35 AM
Yeah, I know. I wanted to post something today, but I have a killer headache yet again due to the snow we're supposed to have.
And, yes, I want to get that bunny posted soon, too, as it won't get away from me.
ZariusTwo
02-11-2013, 08:53 AM
Rest up Bubbly, there's no rush. You're doing fine as it is. It's a marvel you have so many fics even in spite of a break here and there. I wish I was as much of a workhorse.
BubblyShell22
02-11-2013, 04:14 PM
Well, I'm feeling better now. Supposed to get a few flurries tonight though.
And that's what happens when you aren't employed. I figured I might as well get these fics out while I can. Most of my fics started when I was in college, and then I had limited time due to my workload, but I still ended up being able to churn them out.
BubblyShell22
02-19-2013, 07:45 AM
Just posted a new story called Episodic Aftermath. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9027258/1/
Original TMNT Cartoon Fan
02-19-2013, 07:49 AM
I prefer waiting and don't publish stories until the last chapter is written. After that, the entire story is published. I don't want to have bored readers waiting for new chapters.
BubblyShell22
02-19-2013, 08:10 AM
Well, that's you. I'm different than that and sometimes, I can't wait to post something when a chapter's done. We're all different in that sense.
ZariusTwo
02-19-2013, 08:22 AM
Great work there Bubbly, I like the idea of doing little things to bridge the gap between eps in the show.
BubblyShell22
02-19-2013, 08:31 AM
Thanks. I do have chapter two finished as well so expect that to come out either later today or tomorrow at the earliest. Yeah, I liked the idea myself which is why I wrote it down. Glad you like it.
Red-eyed Jaguar
02-19-2013, 10:12 AM
Great Story/Idea, I enjoyed reading it!
You characterized everyone very well, keep it up =3
BubblyShell22
02-19-2013, 12:51 PM
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it, Red-eyed Jaguar. Don't be shy to leave feedback on FF.Net as well if you want.
And here's chapter two:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9027258/2/Episodic-Aftermath
ZariusTwo
02-19-2013, 04:26 PM
That was another good one Bubbly. Leonardo's love of that Space Heroes show and his expectations for Raph are brilliantly merged into one.
Red-eyed Jaguar
02-19-2013, 06:02 PM
I did so now with Chapter two xD
Now, you could make such great Comic-Strips out of these Chapters =3
BubblyShell22
02-20-2013, 08:04 AM
That was another good one Bubbly. Leonardo's love of that Space Heroes show and his expectations for Raph are brilliantly merged into one.
Thanks, Zarius. I'm really glad you liked it.
I did so now with Chapter two xD
Now, you could make such great Comic-Strips out of these Chapters =3
Nah, I'll leave that to the talented artists here. I could never do that. Not good at drawing. I'll stick with writing instead. But if any of you want to do artwork based on my stories, you're free to do so.
Blossombrooks
02-20-2013, 02:24 PM
I love these little snippets Shell! :tgrin: Can't wait to see what comes next!
BubblyShell22
02-20-2013, 04:12 PM
Thanks, BB. I'm glad you like them. I enjoyed writing them.
I also have a bunny based on a wonderful pic by Blossombrooks of Leo clutching a mug that says, "I'd rather be watching Space Heroes." It got me to thinking about what would happen if he did stay up to watch Space Heroes and how it would affect his training. I haven't thought of a title for it yet though. Still working on thinking of that.
Original TMNT Cartoon Fan
02-21-2013, 03:53 PM
I need help with a story.
It's going to be set during "Vacation in Europe" of the 1987 show. All I know is that I'm planning a big car chase through the (West) German motorway system, from north to south (or the opposite direction).
BubblyShell22
02-21-2013, 04:27 PM
Okay, so why are you hijacking my thread for help? Why don't you start your own thread and ask for help there?
ZariusTwo
02-21-2013, 04:53 PM
Looking forward to the Lazy Leo story you have planned Bubbly, I like that Blossom's art is inspiring fresh ideas
BubblyShell22
02-22-2013, 04:15 PM
Yeah, it's amazing what can inspire me. I'm still working out the details for it, but I hope I can have it up soon. Just still trying to think of a title.
ZariusTwo
02-22-2013, 04:32 PM
Yeah, it's amazing what can inspire me. I'm still working out the details for it, but I hope I can have it up soon. Just still trying to think of a title.
Perhaps "Lazy Eye", I used that to describe Leo's expressio in the pic...
Blossombrooks
02-22-2013, 04:37 PM
How about 'Spaced Out'? :D hee hee i'm so looking forward to this.
BubblyShell22
02-23-2013, 08:37 AM
Oooh, Spaced Out sounds like a good one. Thanks, BB. I'll be sure to credit you for the title and the inspiration.
Another bunny I have: A Truth and Lies spinoff called Missing Links which introduces officer Gia Hernandez who is assigned to April's case and meets Raphael. I'll have to redo my chapter four of Truth and Lies because I originally used Casey in that, but I'm going to change it to have Gia in it instead. The reason is because I'd rather wait and see what the show does for Casey first before bringing him into anything.
So what do you think?
ZariusTwo
02-23-2013, 08:57 AM
Good idea, though don't get too far ahead of yourself, you've still to get Truth and Lies past chapter two
BubblyShell22
02-23-2013, 04:05 PM
Yeah, I know. I'm so slacking on that. Don't worry, I'll get there.
BubblyShell22
02-28-2013, 07:53 AM
Okay, I was doing some thinking and I've decided not to use Gia in my Truth and Lies series after all. Instead, I was thinking of using Lucindra from the Mirage comics as I think she'd be a good fit. I know a little about her such as that she befriends Raph who teaches her some self-defense, but that's pretty much all I know. I'm probably going to have to tweak her a bit to fit in my universe, but I can do that.
Thoughts? Suggestions?
ZariusTwo
02-28-2013, 08:05 AM
I like that idea, tweeking other Mirage characters to fit the Nick show's style can be an entertaining challenge.
BubblyShell22
02-28-2013, 03:42 PM
Thanks. Like I said, I'm a little familiar with her background, so I think I can manage to fit her into the story.
BubblyShell22
03-03-2013, 08:09 AM
Okay, I have another plot bunny based on a challenge made by Scribe of Turesa on Stealthy Stories. The challenge is to have a lab accident occur and for one of the Turtles to be injured because of it.
My bunny: While trying to reprogram Metalhead, Don is testing him out. Leo walks in to give Don some coffee, and the lasers hit the mug, ricochet off, and hit Leo in the eyes, causing him to go blind. Now, Leo must cope with his blindness and Don must cope with causing it. I'm going to call it "Standing in the Dark."
So, what do you think? I know I shouldn't be doing this, but I can't back down from the challenge now.
Original TMNT Cartoon Fan
03-03-2013, 08:17 AM
Okay, I have another plot bunny based on a challenge made by Scribe of Turesa on Stealthy Stories. The challenge is to have a lab accident occur and for one of the Turtles to be injured because of it.
My bunny: While trying to reprogram Metalhead, Don is testing him out. Leo walks in to give Don some coffee, and the lasers hit the mug, ricochet off, and hit Leo in the eyes, causing him to go blind. Now, Leo must cope with his blindness and Don must cope with causing it. I'm going to call it "Standing in the Dark."
So, what do you think? I know I shouldn't be doing this, but I can't back down from the challenge now.
Whuch universe?
ZariusTwo
03-03-2013, 09:43 AM
Pretty sure it's the Nick show. Bubbly loves playing in the present series more than that.
BubblyShell22
03-03-2013, 04:01 PM
Yep, it's the Nick show. I do love playing with that universe. So much fun. I can't wait to start on this, too. It's going to be fun.
BubblyShell22
03-10-2013, 04:02 PM
Have another plot bunny I just thought of that takes place in the new Nick universe:
Title: Harsh Reality
Summary: A serious look at what could happen if April were to get pregnant by one of the Turtles.
Made because I'm really getting sick of seeing these types of fics where the Turtles knock up some human and they have a perfect pregnancy and all that. I just think that they wouldn't be compatible for that type of thing, but if it DID happen, that it wouldn't go the way they'd think. So, that's why I'm going to write this.
Lycanth
03-15-2013, 10:48 PM
Been reading some of your work. Really entertaining and well done, hon!
ZariusTwo
03-16-2013, 04:35 AM
Have another plot bunny I just thought of that takes place in the new Nick universe:
Title: Harsh Reality
Summary: A serious look at what could happen if April were to get pregnant by one of the Turtles.
Made because I'm really getting sick of seeing these types of fics where the Turtles knock up some human and they have a perfect pregnancy and all that. I just think that they wouldn't be compatible for that type of thing, but if it DID happen, that it wouldn't go the way they'd think. So, that's why I'm going to write this.
It'll be interesting to see which Turtle it is, since, knowing it's the Nick show it'd be very easy to go with you-know-who...this is a very brave choice of story Bubbly, looking forward to how you deal with it
BubblyShell22
03-16-2013, 07:27 AM
Been reading some of your work. Really entertaining and well done, hon!
Thanks, Ly. Don't be shy to leave feedback if you feel the need to. It's not required, but if you want to tell me how I'm doing, go for it.
It'll be interesting to see which Turtle it is, since, knowing it's the Nick show it'd be very easy to go with you-know-who...this is a very brave choice of story Bubbly, looking forward to how you deal with it
Well, I am going with Donnie on this one because it's the obvious thing to do. But what I'm going to do regarding this fic is definitely something many people haven't thought of. I won't reveal it here though. You'll have to read the story to find out.
BubblyShell22
03-17-2013, 07:55 AM
Have yet another bunny I want to do based on the Nick series. I swear, I'm having fun with this universe.
Title: Now and Then
Summary: Sometimes lessons have to be learned repeatedly in order to learn from the mistake. A series of one shots featuring the Turtles learning lessons as toddlers and as adults.
BubblyShell22
03-19-2013, 04:00 PM
Just posted my first chapter of Now and Then. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9115305/1/Now-and-Then
ZariusTwo
03-19-2013, 04:42 PM
That was a nice chapter Bubbly, exactly the kind of interaction and message one might find in the show.
BubblyShell22
03-24-2013, 03:37 PM
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.
Just posted chapter three of Truth and Lies. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8889143/3/Truth-and-Lies
ZariusTwo
03-24-2013, 03:57 PM
That was another good one Bubbly, at least you're making the most out of Irma, and I love that Donny let his emotions get the better of him. Just what is with those texts? The mystery deepens. Glad you're feeling better too.
Blossombrooks
03-24-2013, 04:49 PM
Great chapter Shell! Loving this story :tgrin:
BubblyShell22
03-25-2013, 01:42 PM
Yep, the mystery continues to deepen with the texts, and I'm having so much fun with it, too. Expect a new chapter either tomorrow or next week. I also want to write a spinoff called Hole which will be Splinter's reflections on April's disappearance and how it has affected himself and his sons. I hope to have that up tomorrow, too, but we'll see.
BubblyShell22
03-28-2013, 09:43 AM
Just posted a Truth and Lies spin off called Hole. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9144064/1/
ZariusTwo
03-29-2013, 06:21 AM
Another good one Bubbly. Splinter really knows how to put himself in his sons indivudual shoes and try to understand their loss
BubblyShell22
03-29-2013, 03:59 PM
Yes, he does, and that's what makes him a good dad. Thanks for reading.
Here's an update to Truth and Lies:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8889143/4/Truth-and-Lies
ZariusTwo
03-29-2013, 04:12 PM
Reviewed the latest chapter and am impressed as always with your work.
BubblyShell22
03-30-2013, 07:40 AM
Thanks. Glad you liked it. I'll have an update next week. Taking a break this weekend due to the holiday.
BubblyShell22
04-14-2013, 08:03 AM
Yeah, it's been a little while since I visited this thread, but I have two other plot bunnies in the works. They'll be one-shots and based off the new Nick show (which shouldn't surprise anyone as I love that series).
Give and Take: A short look at how Xever met Oroku Saki and began to work with him told in Xever's point of view.
Back to the Start: After the fight with Karai, Leo is still dealing with the guilt of wanting to team up in the first place. With Splinter's help, he comes to terms with the loss of such a potential ally and prepares for what may happen next.
So, those are my bunnies thus far. And don't worry, I'll have more updates for Truth and Lies very soon. I had to delay them due to Internet issues, but things are fine now.
BubblyShell22
04-14-2013, 08:04 AM
Yeah, it's been a little while since I visited this thread, but I have two other plot bunnies in the works. They'll be one-shots and based off the new Nick show (which shouldn't surprise anyone as I love that series).
Give and Take: A short look at how Xever met Oroku Saki and began to work with him told in Xever's point of view.
Back to the Start: After the fight with Karai, Leo is still dealing with the guilt of wanting to team up in the first place. With Splinter's help, he comes to terms with the loss of such a potential ally and prepares for what may happen next.
So, those are my bunnies thus far. And don't worry, I'll have more updates for Truth and Lies very soon. I had to delay them due to Internet issues, but things are fine now.
BubblyShell22
04-14-2013, 04:10 PM
Just updated Truth and Lies. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8889143/5/
ZariusTwo
04-14-2013, 04:34 PM
Another good one Bubbly.
I'd be interested in the Leo bunny...Karai's always dwelling heavy on his head and it's always interesting to peer into his psyche when he's like that.
BubblyShell22
04-15-2013, 07:52 AM
Well, I might put that off to see where the whole feud goes. I'd rather wait until "Karai's Vendetta" airs just to see what happens. I might get bunnies from that episode, too. It sucks that we have to wait two weeks though to see it. Bummer.
BubblyShell22
04-21-2013, 12:06 PM
Just updated chapter 6 of Truth and Lies. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8889143/6/
Shark_Blade
04-22-2013, 02:21 AM
Nicely written Bubbly. I like a good mystery story. :D
ZariusTwo
04-22-2013, 04:16 AM
Great work Bubbly.
Everything's better with cake!
BubblyShell22
04-22-2013, 06:50 AM
Nicely written Bubbly. I like a good mystery story. :D
Yeah, I like a good mystery story, too. I'm having so much fun with this. Thanks for reading.
Great work Bubbly.
Everything's better with cake!
Yes, cake brings people together, or in this case, four Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles together. Thanks for reading.
BubblyShell22
04-26-2013, 08:47 AM
Here's chapter 7 of Truth and Lies:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8889143/7/
Also wanted to say that I'm almost finished writing chapter 12 of Truth and Lies, which is awesome for me. This story is rolling along faster than I thought it would.
ZariusTwo
04-26-2013, 02:09 PM
Another great one Bubbly...Donny's letter was very heartfelt, he must feel weird that "A"'s read it.
Blossombrooks
04-26-2013, 02:27 PM
It's a great story Shell, looking forward to reading more! I'm absolutely baffled now, lol. :tgrin:
BubblyShell22
04-26-2013, 02:44 PM
Another great one Bubbly...Donny's letter was very heartfelt, he must feel weird that "A"'s read it.
Oh, yeah, he feels weird and shocked that it was read and revealed to him. It'll be interesting to see if his brothers find out about it and what their reactions will be if they do. Thanks for reading.
It's a great story Shell, looking forward to reading more! I'm absolutely baffled now, lol. :tgrin:
Ah, I'm glad I've baffled you, Brooke. It's always fun when people get confused and what they think it going to happen isn't really what happens. Thanks for reading.
BubblyShell22
04-30-2013, 08:00 AM
I have another plot bunny that I just thought of today after talking about the pizza delivery boy. So, here's my idea:
Tales of a Pizza Delivery Boy
Summary: Antonio Jr. really enjoys being a delivery boy unless you count all the weird stuff that's happened to him lately. This is his story.
Basically it's different stories about what he's dealt with so far in the series. I might add more stuff that may not be in the series itself if inspiration hits. I'm not sure when this story will be out, but I hope to have it out soon. We'll see. What do you think?
BubblyShell22
05-10-2013, 07:15 AM
Another plot bunny that bit me while writing Truth and Lies based on the Nick universe as usual:
Title: Strange Occurrences
Plot: Alison always knew her brother was a fan of superheroes, but when he assumes the persona of The Pulverizer and tells her a story about meeting mutant Turtles, she begins to question his sanity. When she encounters them herself, she realizes that the world she thinks she lives in isn't all it's cracked up to be.
So, any thoughts on this?
Blossombrooks
05-10-2013, 12:14 PM
^^That sounds like a great idea Shell, plus a good opportunity to expand on The Pulveriser's backstory too.
Pizza delivery boy idea could be cool too, I could see a lot of humour in that. :tgrin:
BubblyShell22
05-10-2013, 04:17 PM
Thanks. I'm working on the idea with The Pulverizer's sister right now, so I'm taking a break from Truth and Lies for now. However, I'll still try and get up the chapters I've written for that story which are chapters eight-twelve. I would have posted today, but it was rainy, and my head was hurting. The pizza delivery story will be worked on when I get around to it and as ideas come to me.
DonatelloNinja82
05-11-2013, 10:29 AM
I like all of those ideas so far...you could even incorporate Timothy's disappearance into the story with his sister now...since that's what it will seem like to everyone who knew him.
BubblyShell22
05-11-2013, 11:07 AM
Yeah, but that'll be later down the line in the fic. It's sort of going to be its own story with Timothy and Alison encountering the Turtles before that and maybe having some adventures. I was originally going to name him Chet because he didn't have a name, but now I have to change it.
BubblyShell22
05-17-2013, 03:49 PM
Just posted two new chapters for Truth and Lies: Chapter eight and nine. Here's the link to chapter eight, and you can just go to chapter nine after that:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8889143/8/Truth-and-Lies
DonatelloNinja82
05-17-2013, 05:48 PM
Yeah, but that'll be later down the line in the fic. It's sort of going to be its own story with Timothy and Alison encountering the Turtles before that and maybe having some adventures. I was originally going to name him Chet because he didn't have a name, but now I have to change it.
Oh ok, cool!!
Just posted two new chapters for Truth and Lies: Chapter eight and nine. Here's the link to chapter eight, and you can just go to chapter nine after that:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8889143/8/Truth-and-Lies
Off to read!!
ZariusTwo
05-18-2013, 01:27 AM
Those were great chapters Bubbly, glad you've found time to write again.
BubblyShell22
05-18-2013, 01:28 PM
DN, awesome. Saw your review and replied to it.
Zarius, thanks for reading. I'm glad I could update it, too. Can't wait to bring you guys more, and I will.
BubblyShell22
05-20-2013, 04:13 PM
Just updated chapter ten of Truth and Lies. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8889143/10/
DonatelloNinja82
05-20-2013, 08:54 PM
Evil suspence is evil. ;)
Shark_Blade
05-20-2013, 09:49 PM
April dead? ;_; I demand to see the autopsy report! That can't be it.
Well done Bubbly. :D
BubblyShell22
05-21-2013, 07:40 AM
Evil suspence is evil. ;)
Yeah, I know I'm evil. But, hey, this is the way you get readers to keep reading. Suspense is a good thing. Thanks for reading.
April dead? ;_; I demand to see the autopsy report! That can't be it.
Well done Bubbly. :D
Sorry for that bombshell. But, yeah, April is definitely dead. Thanks for reading.
ZariusTwo
05-21-2013, 07:50 AM
Another good one Bubbly...A's getting pretty trollish with the guys now, and getting nastier with each text.
BubblyShell22
05-21-2013, 04:24 PM
Yep, but that's A's goal. He/she wants to really play with the guys' heads and really gain control over them. A wants them to know that it's not over yet and that there's more to come. Thanks for reading.
BubblyShell22
05-24-2013, 06:49 AM
Thought of another plot bunny to work on based on the Nick toon.
Title: Constricting Fear.
Plot: Leo has always had a fear of snakes since he was little, but now that he's the leader, he feels that he needs to get rid of that fear so that he can be more effective. But when he confronts a mutated snake in the sewers, he finds out it won't be easy to tackle his fear alone.
So, what do you think?
I was going to update Truth and Lies today, but I'm not feeling well this morning, so it'll have to wait until next week. Sorry.
ZariusTwo
05-24-2013, 08:18 AM
Get better soon Bubbly, we'll be paitent.
BubblyShell22
05-24-2013, 04:21 PM
Thanks. I know. I'll have it up soon though. I don't want to keep you waiting. Still working on chapter thirteen, and I hope to have it finished soon.
DonatelloNinja82
05-25-2013, 11:23 AM
Thought of another plot bunny to work on based on the Nick toon.
Title: Constricting Fear.
Plot: Leo has always had a fear of snakes since he was little, but now that he's the leader, he feels that he needs to get rid of that fear so that he can be more effective. But when he confronts a mutated snake in the sewers, he finds out it won't be easy to tackle his fear alone.
So, what do you think?
I was going to update Truth and Lies today, but I'm not feeling well this morning, so it'll have to wait until next week. Sorry.
Oooo taking an idea from OT and applying it to 2012??? Go for it! Cannot wait to read this one! And I hope you feel better soon.
BubblyShell22
05-26-2013, 07:04 AM
Yeah, I know. I wish they would do this in the Nick show, but even if they don't, I'll do it myself. I can't wait to put it up.
Chapter eleven of Truth and Lies is up. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8889143/11/
Shark_Blade
05-26-2013, 05:44 PM
Good to see you up and about Bubbly. I hope you're well now.
Good writing, keep up the good work! :)
BubblyShell22
05-27-2013, 03:38 PM
Well, I do have a headache today due to the rain and storms we're supposed to get (it's raining here now), but I'm hanging in there. Working on chapter 14 of Truth and Lies and starting work on Constricting Fear.
BubblyShell22
05-31-2013, 07:46 AM
Well, I WAS going to update today, but unfortunately, we're supposed to get severe weather, so it'll have to be delayed.
I also have a bunny that was born thanks to Foot Soldier Clang's theory about the opening sequence of the Nick cartoon theme song where it seems like Splinter mutates the Turtles on purpose. While I won't use this sequence itself, I do think that maybe Splinter thought about training them for revenge at first and then had a change of heart as he began to raise his sons.
Title: Change of Heart.
Plot: Splinter thinks about his original intention for his sons and how things have changed since raising them. It will take place after "The Gauntlet" since I think that's a good way for Splinter to think about this.
So, what do you think?
DonatelloNinja82
05-31-2013, 05:17 PM
Well, I WAS going to update today, but unfortunately, we're supposed to get severe weather, so it'll have to be delayed.
I also have a bunny that was born thanks to Foot Soldier Clang's theory about the opening sequence of the Nick cartoon theme song where it seems like Splinter mutates the Turtles on purpose. While I won't use this sequence itself, I do think that maybe Splinter thought about training them for revenge at first and then had a change of heart as he began to raise his sons.
Title: Change of Heart.
Plot: Splinter thinks about his original intention for his sons and how things have changed since raising them. It will take place after "The Gauntlet" since I think that's a good way for Splinter to think about this.
So, what do you think?
I think it has a lot of potential to be a very emotional and heartwarming story! Good idea!
BubblyShell22
06-01-2013, 07:29 AM
Thanks though it'll be a one-shot as I have too many other chapter stories to be working on.
DonatelloNinja82
06-01-2013, 07:32 AM
Thanks though it'll be a one-shot as I have too many other chapter stories to be working on.
You have a quick mind, I guess! Take your time :)
BubblyShell22
06-01-2013, 03:58 PM
Yes, I do. I will take my time though.
BubblyShell22
06-04-2013, 07:26 AM
Just wanted to update you on my progression with Truth and Lies. Chapter fourteen is written, and I'm working on chapter fifteen now. Got some work done on that yesterday and hope to do more today.
DonatelloNinja82
06-04-2013, 10:32 AM
Thanks for the update. Cannot wait :)
BubblyShell22
06-04-2013, 11:13 AM
Well, I have to post chapters 12, 13, and 14 first before I can post 15. But I'm happy that the story is progressing as fast as it is. I just hope I don't hit a lull.
ZariusTwo
06-04-2013, 11:26 AM
Great news on the story's progress Bubbly, I really am eager to see what happens next.
BubblyShell22
06-04-2013, 04:52 PM
I know, and I'm eager to share it with you, too. I'm having so much fun with this story.
DonatelloNinja82
06-04-2013, 07:13 PM
I know, and I'm eager to share it with you, too. I'm having so much fun with this story.
It is a great story!:D
raph27
06-04-2013, 07:49 PM
Hope 12 is soon. Still chucking about Mikey's rack comment.:o:lol:
BubblyShell22
06-05-2013, 07:46 AM
I'll try and have it up Friday, but if not, then it'll be up next week.
BubblyShell22
06-07-2013, 07:50 AM
Just update chapter 12 of Truth and Lies. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8889143/12/
DonatelloNinja82
06-07-2013, 10:58 PM
Just update chapter 12 of Truth and Lies. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8889143/12/
Great chapter! Read and reviewed!
BubblyShell22
06-08-2013, 07:21 AM
Thank you. Just replied to your review.
BubblyShell22
06-14-2013, 03:47 PM
Okay, I have two new plot bunnies that just came to me based on the new Nick series.
Title: The Real Ninja Turtles of New York City
Summary: Think you know the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles? Think again. Go inside the lives of the famous mutants and see what the cartoons don't portray.
Title: Blindsided (credit to DonatelloNinja82 for the suggestion)
Summary: When Shredder blinds Leo, he must adjust to not being able to see and doubts he can be a ninja with no sight. With the help of Murakami-san, will Leo gain the confidence to still be a warrior?
DonatelloNinja82
06-14-2013, 04:54 PM
Okay, I have two new plot bunnies that just came to me based on the new Nick series.
Title: The Real Ninja Turtles of New York City
Summary: Think you know the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles? Think again. Go inside the lives of the famous mutants and see what the cartoons don't portray.
Title: Untitled.
Summary: When Shredder blinds Leo, he must adjust to not being able to see and doubts he can be a ninja with no sight. With the help of Murakami-san, will Leo gain the confidence to still be a warrior?
Can't think of a title for this one. Any suggestions?
Both sound like great ideas!! Blindsided as a suggested title?
BubblyShell22
06-15-2013, 07:34 AM
Oooh, Blindsided sounds pretty good. I think I'll use that and credit you with the idea. Thanks, DN.
DonatelloNinja82
06-15-2013, 08:22 AM
Oooh, Blindsided sounds pretty good. I think I'll use that and credit you with the idea. Thanks, DN.
Oh I'm glad you like it! :) No problem :)
BubblyShell22
06-15-2013, 02:59 PM
Yes, I do like it. I can't wait to start writing it and post it.
ZariusTwo
06-16-2013, 04:40 AM
"Blindsided" sounds interesting Bubbly, I always dig stories about physical handicaps.
BubblyShell22
06-16-2013, 07:47 AM
Yeah, and I thought it would be an interesting idea since they know a blind man anyway, and I'm sure Murakami could really help Leo out. I so can't wait to start writing this one.
DonatelloNinja82
06-16-2013, 08:24 AM
Yeah, and I thought it would be an interesting idea since they know a blind man anyway, and I'm sure Murakami could really help Leo out. I so can't wait to start writing this one.
I can totally see Murakami helping Leo out. He seems like a very wise man. I'd love to see him and Master Splinter meet sometime. That would make for an interesting scene.
BubblyShell22
06-16-2013, 01:21 PM
You know, I might do that in the story. I was thinking about it, and I think it would be awesome to see.
DonatelloNinja82
06-16-2013, 01:48 PM
You know, I might do that in the story. I was thinking about it, and I think it would be awesome to see.
I think it would too...maybe even a chance for Splinter to leave the lair haha. I think Splinter has his own inner demons to contend with, and dont think he ever came to terms with his mutation...maybe why he never leaves the lair?
MsMarvelDuckie
06-16-2013, 08:52 PM
Hey, I've got a new story I'm working on. It should be up by tomorrow. I didn't realize it when I started it, but it is rather timely considering that today was Father's Day. Warning, though- it's a 3-tissue story. That's all I'm sayin'.....
DonatelloNinja82
06-16-2013, 09:37 PM
Hey, I've got a new story I'm working on. It should be up by tomorrow. I didn't realize it when I started it, but it is rather timely considering that today was Father's Day. Warning, though- it's a 3-tissue story. That's all I'm sayin'.....
Cool! Can't wait to read it...I'll have the tissues ready :)
BubblyShell22
06-17-2013, 07:01 AM
Awesome, Ms.MarvelDuckie. I can't wait to read it.
Just uploaded Blindsided. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9398854/1/
ZariusTwo
06-17-2013, 08:34 AM
Awesome, Ms.MarvelDuckie. I can't wait to read it.
Just uploaded Blindsided. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9398854/1/
Read and reviewed it Bubbly. Great job, and you wrote very good fight scenes, so don't beat yourself up about that.
BubblyShell22
06-18-2013, 07:41 AM
Okay, I'll try not to. Hope to have an update for Truth and Lies this week too, but we'll see how things go.
BubblyShell22
06-28-2013, 10:55 AM
Here's an update for Truth and Lies. Check it out:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8889143/13/
DonatelloNinja82
06-28-2013, 11:12 AM
Awesome job!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D
ZariusTwo
06-28-2013, 11:48 AM
Great job Bubbly, wonderful work as always, worth the wait
BubblyShell22
06-28-2013, 05:21 PM
Awesome job!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D
I'm glad you liked it. I had so much fun writing it. Thanks for reading.
Great job Bubbly, wonderful work as always, worth the wait
Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it and that it was worth the wait. I'll try not to keep you guys waiting so long again. Key word: try.
BubblyShell22
06-29-2013, 10:40 AM
Just uploaded a new story called Give and Take. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9439442/1/
DonatelloNinja82
06-29-2013, 02:04 PM
Great job :D
BubblyShell22
06-29-2013, 03:56 PM
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.
BubblyShell22
07-13-2013, 05:43 PM
Uploaded another one shot called Harsh Reality. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9488435/1/
BubblyShell22
07-15-2013, 06:48 AM
This isn't a TMNT fic, but I thought that I would write a fic in honor of Cory Monteith, so here it is:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9491365/1/
You don't have to review it if you aren't a Glee fan, but you can if you choose to.
ZariusTwo
07-15-2013, 01:34 PM
I read and reviewed it Bubbly. Great work, I'm sure you've helped a lot of fans go through the motions with this.
BubblyShell22
07-15-2013, 04:29 PM
Thanks for your support, Zar. It means a lot to me that even though you aren't a fan of the show itself, you're still willing to lend a critique to my story regardless of that. Many thanks for reading.
I'm hoping to get an update for Truth and Lies in this week. We'll see how things go.
DonatelloNinja82
07-21-2013, 10:09 PM
I've never watched Glee, but this was a very good one-shot. Very emotional. I can really feel the emotion here.
BubblyShell22
07-22-2013, 07:11 AM
Thanks. I was thinking of writing another fic dealing with how the characters feel about his cause of death, but I think I'll hold off on that since they're going to deal with his death in an upcoming episode of Glee itself, which is awesome to hear.
Progression update: Chapter nineteen of Truth and Lies is complete. One more chapter to go, and I'm finished with the whole story. So excited.
ZariusTwo
07-22-2013, 09:20 AM
Thanks. I was thinking of writing another fic dealing with how the characters feel about his cause of death, but I think I'll hold off on that since they're going to deal with his death in an upcoming episode of Glee itself, which is awesome to hear.
Progression update: Chapter nineteen of Truth and Lies is complete. One more chapter to go, and I'm finished with the whole story. So excited.
Awesome to hear Bubbly, looking forward to how it all ends.
BubblyShell22
07-22-2013, 04:35 PM
And I'm looking forward to sharing how it ends. I hope to finish chapter 20 tonight, but we'll see how things go.
BubblyShell22
08-01-2013, 01:07 PM
After a pretty big hiatus, here's an update on Truth and Lies:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8889143/14/
I'll try and be better about updating these things because I hate leaving you guys in the dust.
BubblyShell22
08-05-2013, 04:05 PM
Just uploaded a new story called Tales of a Pizza Delivery Boy. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9565601/1/
BubblyShell22
08-06-2013, 07:30 AM
Here's the second chapter of Tales of a Pizza Delivery Boy. I hope you like it:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9565601/2/
BubblyShell22
08-08-2013, 12:15 PM
Just uploaded three new chapters of Tales of a Pizza Delivery Boy. I'm only linking chapter three, but you can get to the others pretty easily from there. Here it is:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9565601/3/
BubblyShell22
08-10-2013, 08:11 AM
Just wanted to let you know I have two new plot bunnies based on the season finale:
Title: All We Have is Right Now.
Summary: A chilling look at what might have happened if Leo hadn't survived the Technodrome crash.
Title: Vertigo
Summary: After his fall from the TCRI building, Leo suddenly develops a fear of heights. Can his family help him to overcome this fear, or will he be consumed by it?
I'm not sure if Vertigo is going to be multi-chapter, but I have a feeling I will because there's just a lot of potential in that story. Might have to hold off on it a bit though. We'll see.
DonatelloNinja82
08-10-2013, 09:15 AM
Just wanted to let you know I have two new plot bunnies based on the season finale:
Title: All We Have is Right Now.
Summary: A chilling look at what might have happened if Leo hadn't survived the Technodrome crash.
Title: Vertigo
Summary: After his fall from the TCRI building, Leo suddenly develops a fear of heights. Can his family help him to overcome this fear, or will he be consumed by it?
I'm not sure if Vertigo is going to be multi-chapter, but I have a feeling I will because there's just a lot of potential in that story. Might have to hold off on it a bit though. We'll see.
Just the thought of all the emotional potential of those makes me want to cry...:( I look forward to those...good ideas!
ZariusTwo
08-10-2013, 11:30 AM
Vertigo sounds great Bubbly, looking forward to how you add your unique level of gravitas and weight to this scenario
BubblyShell22
08-10-2013, 02:52 PM
Thanks, you two. I can't wait to bring both stories to you, and I will very soon. I'll also be updating Tales of a Pizza Delivery Boy, too, so be on the lookout for that one as well.
BubblyShell22
08-16-2013, 11:19 AM
Just uploaded All We Have is Right Now. Check it out:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9601792/1/
BubblyShell22
08-18-2013, 04:59 PM
Just uploaded two chapters of Tales of a Pizza Delivery Boy. I'll link you to chapter six and you can get to chapter seven pretty easily from there. Here it is:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9565601/6/
BubblyShell22
08-20-2013, 01:12 PM
Just uploaded chapters eight and nine for Tales of a Pizza Delivery Boy. Here's the link to eight and you can follow nine from there:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9565601/8/Tales-of-a-Pizza-Delivery-Boy
BubblyShell22
08-23-2013, 03:32 PM
Posted chapters ten and eleven of TOAPDB. Here's the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9565601/10/
Shark_Blade
08-25-2013, 09:48 PM
Lovely writing Bubbly, well done. I'm curious about Gia. :D
BubblyShell22
08-26-2013, 07:19 AM
Yeah, I think all of my readers are curious about her. I'll try and have an update soon.
ZariusTwo
08-26-2013, 03:25 PM
Loved those chapters Bubbly, looks like Tony needs some discipline if he's going to deal with Gia
BubblyShell22
08-27-2013, 07:41 AM
Yep, and that was my intention. The key to creating a good OC is to give them flaws, and I feel that Tony has flaws with his temper and how to control it. So it should be interesting to see if he can harness that. I'm not sure when the next update will be, but I'll have it up as soon as I can.
BubblyShell22
08-27-2013, 03:24 PM
Here's that update I promised for TOAPDB:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9565601/12/
BubblyShell22
08-30-2013, 11:47 AM
It's been a little while, but here's an update for Truth and Lies:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8889143/15/
BubblyShell22
09-04-2013, 05:08 PM
Another update for Truth and Lies:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8889143/16/
BubblyShell22
09-06-2013, 11:40 AM
Chapters 17 and 18 of Truth and Lies have been posted. Here they are:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8889143/17/
BubblyShell22
09-12-2013, 05:30 AM
I have yet another plot bunny I'm working on. I know I shouldn't be, but this bunny came to me while I was writing the final chapter of Truth and Lies (which I STILL haven't finished yet) and I felt I couldn't ignore it.
Title: Forever Mine
Plot: This involves an OC of mine named Cynthia Donnelly who meets Hamato Yoshi when he moves into her apartment building and lives right next door to her. The two become friends as Cynthia helps Yoshi adapt to life in America and he helps her learn more about the Japanese culture. When Yoshi goes to the pet store, Cynthia accompanies him to help him pick out a pet. After they encounter the Kraang, both are mutated into rats, and Cynthia now must come to terms with her new life and how she must leave her old life behind as she goes into hiding with Splinter and the Turtles and becomes their mother.
I thought it would be cool to write a story about what if the Turtles had a mother figure, so that's how I came up with this plot. I'm still writing it, but it's coming along pretty nicely, and I can't wait to share it with you guys. What do you think?
Shark_Blade
09-12-2013, 06:03 AM
That's really interesting, I wonder how will they be if they have a mother figure.
Maybe Raph won't be so pissed off all the time - he could be suffering from insufficient motherly love since birth (yes I'm kidding, or was I?).
Look forward to your writing Bubbly. :D
BubblyShell22
09-12-2013, 08:48 AM
Yep, I'm excited for this story for sure. Going to work on it today and see how far I can take it. Eh, I think Raph will still have a temper despite having a mother in his life. That's just who he is.
BubblyShell22
09-22-2013, 07:24 AM
The wait is finally over. A is revealed in the next chapter of Truth and Lies. Here you go:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8889143/19/
Shark_Blade
09-22-2013, 08:30 AM
Poor April - she really got killed (wow!), Donnie (how she played with his heart. urgh.) and the gang. :cry: It's morbid, I love it.
I hope they catch that murderer Robyn! :x
And I adore this:
"She probably had to go to the bathroom," said Don. "She told me she was on her period."Don stated it so matter-of-factly without feeling anything. :lol: Raph's reaction was hilarious.
Well done Bubbly. :D
BubblyShell22
09-22-2013, 05:19 PM
Glad you liked it. As for what happens with Robyn, only time will tell. Thanks for reading though. More to come.
BubblyShell22
10-01-2013, 12:41 PM
Just uploaded chapter 20 of Truth and Lies. Here it is:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8889143/20/
BubblyShell22
10-03-2013, 07:49 AM
Progression update: The final chapter of Truth and Lies has been completed. I finished it last night. Whoo Hoo! Now all I have to do is post three more chapters up, and this story will be done.
ZariusTwo
10-03-2013, 01:21 PM
Congratulations Bubbly on finishing what has been, for my money, one of your best works
BubblyShell22
10-03-2013, 03:36 PM
Thanks. I can't wait to get it all posted. It's been one hell of a ride for me. Now to get started on the sequel.
ZariusTwo
10-04-2013, 05:10 AM
Thanks. I can't wait to get it all posted. It's been one hell of a ride for me. Now to get started on the sequel.
Awesome to hear there's a sequel...now I'm really interested in how this is going to "end"
Shark_Blade
10-04-2013, 05:39 AM
You really came through and finishing up what you started. I'm proud of you. :D
blindturtle02
10-04-2013, 06:05 AM
These are all very interesting ideas. I'll have to read some of your work this weekend. I really like the idea of a mother figure for the guys. If there's one thing I wish turtles boasted more of, it'd be strong female characters. Thanks for the multiquote tip as well. I'm not sure how my screenreader will interact with that but I'll have to test it out some time today.
BubblyShell22
10-04-2013, 07:14 AM
Awesome to hear there's a sequel...now I'm really interested in how this is going to "end"
Yep, there has to be a sequel as there's still the loose end of whether Robyn survived or not.
You really came through and finishing up what you started. I'm proud of you. :D
Well, it helps that I had this all planned out before writing it, too. Otherwise, it would have taken me even longer to write and finish up. Thanks for reading.
These are all very interesting ideas. I'll have to read some of your work this weekend. I really like the idea of a mother figure for the guys. If there's one thing I wish turtles boasted more of, it'd be strong female characters. Thanks for the multiquote tip as well. I'm not sure how my screenreader will interact with that but I'll have to test it out some time today.
No problem about the tip, and take your time with reading my stuff. I'm really excited to start the story about them having a mother figure as that plot's coming along nicely in my head.
BubblyShell22
10-06-2013, 07:29 AM
Just had another plot bunny I want to do.
Title: The Price of Sacrifice
Summary: Takes place after Showdown. Leo is taken captive by the Kraang and is subjected to torture. Now it's up to his brothers to rescue him and help him heal from the damage the Kraang have inflicted on him.
BubblyShell22
10-11-2013, 08:34 AM
Just posted the first chapter of The Price of Sacrifice. Here it is:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9755868/1/
blindturtle02
10-11-2013, 10:15 AM
Hey Bubblyshell. That is a very interesting plot and I really liked the first chapter. I was also wondering about Kraang Prime's gender but figured it was female. Are you thinking she is or do you think the writers are going to throw us for a loop later on? Ah, just read your note about Leo thinking KP is male. But yeah, I'd often wondered about all the nightmares LH must have had to endure and is probably going through yet again since his last appearance.
I really like your ability to delve into the personalities of these characters. You've got quite a talent there and I'm looking forward to more of this story. So was this a scouting mission the boys were on? Just curious. Are you going to reveal more of the mission via flashbacks from the other turtles EG how they managed to find the technodrome?
BubblyShell22
10-11-2013, 03:58 PM
No, Ciro revealed in an interview on Nick when they were showing sneak peeks of things with TMNT that Kraang Prime was male, but I figured Leo would think he was female based off of the voice. I think their original idea was to make KP female, but they changed it and made him male. Honestly, though, I think KP is female, but I'm going with what Ciro said that KP is male.
Well, it's based off of the finale and talks about Leo's sacrifice of staying behind and how he was captured because of it. Yes, the boys will go on a scouting mission and while the other chapters will be about the other Turtles, Leo will still tell the story and will explain more about how he knows these things in the next chapter. I want the odd numbered chapters to be about Leo and the even numbered chapters to be about the others until they rescue him. I hope I explained it okay, but if I didn't, feel free to let me know. Thanks for reading.
BubblyShell22
10-13-2013, 03:29 PM
Uploaded two chapters to The Price of Sacrifice. Here they are:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9755868/2/
ZariusTwo
10-14-2013, 05:36 AM
I'm liking your new story thus far Bubbly, I didnt mind the rushed rescue because I realize that clearly isnt the crux of the much larger story you've got going on, and I'm interested in where it's going next with Leo not sure of who to trust.
blindturtle02
10-14-2013, 05:59 AM
No, Ciro revealed in an interview on Nick when they were showing sneak peeks of things with TMNT that Kraang Prime was male, but I figured Leo would think he was female based off of the voice. I think their original idea was to make KP female, but they changed it and made him male. Honestly, though, I think KP is female, but I'm going with what Ciro said that KP is male.
Well, it's based off of the finale and talks about Leo's sacrifice of staying behind and how he was captured because of it. Yes, the boys will go on a scouting mission and while the other chapters will be about the other Turtles, Leo will still tell the story and will explain more about how he knows these things in the next chapter. I want the odd numbered chapters to be about Leo and the even numbered chapters to be about the others until they rescue him. I hope I explained it okay, but if I didn't, feel free to let me know. Thanks for reading.
Oh hey you explained it just fine. The even/odd idea sounds interesting. I see you've written more in this fic so will have to read it while on study breaks today. And had no idea about KP being male! I totally must have missed that bit online or wherever.
BubblyShell22
10-14-2013, 06:39 AM
I'm liking your new story thus far Bubbly, I didnt mind the rushed rescue because I realize that clearly isnt the crux of the much larger story you've got going on, and I'm interested in where it's going next with Leo not sure of who to trust.
Yes, that isn't the crux though I will focus one more chapter on how the Turtles got Leo out of there and then move on to the bigger picture of how Leo recovers from his ordeal. Thanks for reading.
Oh hey you explained it just fine. The even/odd idea sounds interesting. I see you've written more in this fic so will have to read it while on study breaks today. And had no idea about KP being male! I totally must have missed that bit online or wherever.
Yeah, but now that the Turtles have rescued him, I'm only going to have one more chapter about the Turtles and how they rescued Leo. I just have to work it out and see where it goes. Take your time in reading my stuff. I don't mind.
Also want to add that I might have an update for Tales of a Pizza Delivery Boy coming soon. I'm going to mirror it with season 2 and do my own spin on things as the season progresses. I doubt that Pizzaface will be Tony in the series, but even if he is, I can still work it into my overall story. I do have an idea for another chapter based on this latest episode, and I'm going to go with it and give you another chapter, so be sure to be on the lookout for it.
BubblyShell22
10-19-2013, 03:54 PM
Thought of a plot bunny that is a crossover of TMNT and Janet Evanovich's Stephanie Plum.
Title: Shell Out of Luck
Plot: When Stephanie and Lula go to catch a skip in New York, they encounter more than they bargained for with mutants and other weird stuff. Basically, they're trying to catch Sid from the PDs and encounter the Turtles along the way. I'm not sure when this story will be up but I'm already plotting it out and can't wait to start it. If you haven't read the Stephanie Plum series, I totally recommend it. It's so awesome.
Shark_Blade
10-20-2013, 09:44 AM
I like the Showdown piece, Bubbly. Good job. :)
I had to google Stephanie Plum, though. Turns out she's a "combination of Nancy Drew and Dirty Harry". Nice, I like a bit of detective and badass. :P
BubblyShell22
10-20-2013, 03:24 PM
Thanks, Sharky. I'm definitely going to update that one.
Yeah, Steph's hilarious. I love that series and thought it would be hilarious to cross her over with the Turtles. You really should check it out.
BubblyShell22
10-25-2013, 11:28 AM
Here's two updates to Tales of a Pizza Delivery Boy:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9565601/13/
BubblyShell22
11-08-2013, 11:41 AM
Another double update for Tales of a Pizza Delivery Boy:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9565601/15/
BubblyShell22
11-10-2013, 11:44 AM
And here's chapter seventeen for Tales of a Pizza Delivery Boy:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9565601/17/
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