Tarris Vaal
04-09-2015, 12:36 PM
Its a common complaint on the Criticism thread that one of the big bugbears is how so many of the plot points brought up by the Nicktoons show dont seem to go anywhere, peter out, or are just thrown away (be it due to lazy writing, budget constraints and/or time restrictions)
I was wondering just how many there were and thought I'd make this a specific topic to discuss. As I recall there are the following plots outstanding;
Major:
Shredder vs Splinter / Foot vs Hamato feud
Karai's mutation
Mind Control Serum
Minor:
Retromutagen
Character specific:
April/Donatello/Casey
Leo/Karai
Timothy
Tigerclaw's background
Xever's misgivings
Baxter Stockman
Bebop/Rocksteady
Rahzar / Xever
Casey's family
April's Mother
April's psychic abilities
Fate of Spyderbytez/ Snakeweed/ Newtralizer/ Squirrelanoids/ Parasitica wasps/ Chimera
Raph's Anger Issues
Resolved:
Kraang invasion
Kirby's mutation (twice no less)
Now I'm sure I've missed a few, but to just review whats on the list:
Shredder vs Splinter / Foot vs Hamato feud - Its the core conflict of the show, so I wouldn't expect it to resolve until literally the last few minutes of the series
Karai's mutation - Getting on for 20 episodes long now and its rarely been far away from mind (especially for Leo). Far from being forgotten, its become a major focus
Mind Control Serum - Just introduced, and pretty much as subtly as a sledgehammer to the face. I'd expect this to be the major arc for the rest of this season and most of next.
Retromutagen - A long running plot mcguffin, I dont think the speculation this will build into a major plot point is wrong. Obviously its already been vital in defeating the Kraang, but its still having some effect on the Karai arc and potentially will have repercussions later. This may be the plot point that 'proves the point' of whether the show is guilty of dropping potential plot arcs.
April/Donatello/Casey triangle - The Big one. I get the impression 1/3 of the posters here dont mind it or actually like it, another 1/3 used to like it or were ambivalent and have gotten fed up with it, and the last never liked it in the first place.
Regardless, it has never been forgotten by the writers and has developed steadily over the show's run. Like it or not, this plot arc presumably MUST be going somewhere (either heartbreak or a happy ending) because it has never gone away. Why keep bringing it up if it wasn't going to matter? Plus, this has been a crucial arc to Donatello who otherwise might be relegated to 'tech guy' or 'middle brother'. It has, at minimum, provided an element of emotional depth to him (good or bad).
Because of its length and focus, this is probably the make or break arc of the show. If its forgotten, glossed over or screwed up, then the show is truly neglecting its own plot points. However, its going SO slowly that its easy to see why people are getting fed up with it. This really needs to have a definitive sign of concluding soon or it risks becoming grossly mishandled.
Leo/Karai - The 'other' romantic arc. Whilst primarily season 1-2, recent events obviously put a major stop to this. I dont think that can be blamed on the writers so much as on logic. Besides which, I doubt we've seen the last of this arc.
Leo's leadership - This is probably the best developed arc of the show. Leo has gone from a slightly geeky, self conscious character to a strong leader. This arc is arguably still ongoing, and has been generally quite subtly presented and well handled.
Turtle's rivalry - General focused around leadership, this has also been a strong arc for the show, but it's not without flaws. While Raph and Leo's tensions seem to have eased, the argument between Donatello and Leo appears to have been quietly forgotten. Its now arguable whether they could bring it up now in a logical way after so much time. Definitely a missed opportunity.
Timothy(mutagen man) - The first of the really tragically forgotten arcs. This was another major focus for Donatello's emotional development and it seems to have been completely glossed over. This may yet appear again later down the line, but for now the failure to even show Donatello greeting Timothy at the newly reclaimed lair seems a sadly lost opportunity.
Tigerclaw's background - Tantalising mentions of a Kraang abduction and a rival have never since been brought up. To be fair, a bit of mystery to a character is NOT a bad thing, and the opportunity to develop this hasn't yet been missed. We shall see..
Xever's misgivings - The more I look at this, the more I wonder if this is really just fan speculation and not a real arc. It could easily just be grumbling because there hasn't been any real evidence to suggest he is actually at the point of turning against Shredder.
Baxter Stockman - For a relatively major villain, Stockman has certainly felt very underplayed. His weasely nature and tragic story have been all but overshadowed and forgotten when other arcs have taken precedence. Though definitely evidence against the show for under utilising a key villain, its not too late to do something more with him.
Bebop/Rocksteady - To Nicktoons credit, I actually really like the way these two started as guest human characters and developed into mutant henchmen. This bit of backstory and early connection to the characters goes a long way. What they do with them in the future is anyone's guess, but certainly for now I think they have have a great start.
Rahzar and Fishface - For such long term villains both of these guys have really fallen to the wayside. Their rivalry is still there and nice nods to their relationship still appear sporadically (though they are very rare in season 3). However there has been very little done with them. They have established personalities and characters and yet we almost never get to hear them talk, argue, reminisce or even appear! Definitely a criminally underused element. That said, its still not too late for them either. Its also arguable just how much more could have been done with them in the context of the stories shown in Season 2 and Season 3 especially.
Casey's family - Mentioned once and never again. Casey's apparent disregard for his family during the Farm arc has caused no end of annoyance. This seems a really simple way to add a distinct element to the character that other iterations havent really played with much. Again its not too late to dabble with it later, but the lack of concern shown during early Season 3 was a serious missed opportunity.
April's Mother - Vaguely implied during S1+2 but brought up again S3 with Buried Secrets. Its a little used plot element, but its obviously not been forgotten. That said, where it fails is how April seems to forget about it the episode after Secrets - when the opening of that emotional wound should have been quite traumatic. Definitely a mishandled plot arc, but still with potential.
April's psychic abilities - One of the better handled arcs - albeit resulting in deus ex machina plot rescues every so often. Her abilities are brought up fairly rarely, but often enough to show they are developing, that the characters are learning about them and that the reasons for them are being revealed gently. This is a good thing overall and could lead to more down the road.
Fate of Spyderbytez/ Snakeweed/ Newtralizer/ Squirrelanoids/ Parasitica wasps/ Chimera/ Cockroach Terminator - As much as I appreciate its a superhero trope to not completely kill off villains and keep them as 'guest stars', it gets annoying when an interesting villain (Newtralizer, Squirrelanoids for example) is completely forgotten for ages and ages. To the shows credit, Mikey's portrayed fear of the Squirrelanoids is a great way of showing they had impact on the characters, and the same with Raph (Terminator). Its frustrating but its hardly specific to Turtles or Nicktoons. This is just a superhero issue we have to live with.
Raph's Anger Issues - They come and go. They come back and are promptly forgotten again. Raph's 'mood swings' are a source of frustration for many. Oddly, I've noticed recently some people have started complaining because he's mellowed out enough in S3 to NOT be going into rages. Since the movies, this has been a steady part of Raph's character and I appreciate the show wants to depict this trait as always 'just below the surface'. That it seems to manifest one episode and vanishes the next is probably just plot convenience (lazy writing), and if the writers wanted to explain it as 'he's trying to hold that trait back and grow from it' then it would be good for them to show that! Show us some of his inner turmoil! We haven't had any since Spike!
As it is, this one does have to be chalked up to missed opportunity, but we may get some better stories involving it down the road.
Overall, I think the writers have got a lot going on at once, which isn't helpful, but they have a large cast of characters to get through and limited time to do it. For my own opinion at least, I think that complaining that they are wasting plot points and throwing away character development is unfair - AT THIS STAGE. They have a lot of stuff going on at once, and there is still time and opportunity to look into these things. That said, there are issues - not least with Don/April (this really does need to show significant signs of it coming to a conclusion - one way or another)
What do you guys think?
I was wondering just how many there were and thought I'd make this a specific topic to discuss. As I recall there are the following plots outstanding;
Major:
Shredder vs Splinter / Foot vs Hamato feud
Karai's mutation
Mind Control Serum
Minor:
Retromutagen
Character specific:
April/Donatello/Casey
Leo/Karai
Timothy
Tigerclaw's background
Xever's misgivings
Baxter Stockman
Bebop/Rocksteady
Rahzar / Xever
Casey's family
April's Mother
April's psychic abilities
Fate of Spyderbytez/ Snakeweed/ Newtralizer/ Squirrelanoids/ Parasitica wasps/ Chimera
Raph's Anger Issues
Resolved:
Kraang invasion
Kirby's mutation (twice no less)
Now I'm sure I've missed a few, but to just review whats on the list:
Shredder vs Splinter / Foot vs Hamato feud - Its the core conflict of the show, so I wouldn't expect it to resolve until literally the last few minutes of the series
Karai's mutation - Getting on for 20 episodes long now and its rarely been far away from mind (especially for Leo). Far from being forgotten, its become a major focus
Mind Control Serum - Just introduced, and pretty much as subtly as a sledgehammer to the face. I'd expect this to be the major arc for the rest of this season and most of next.
Retromutagen - A long running plot mcguffin, I dont think the speculation this will build into a major plot point is wrong. Obviously its already been vital in defeating the Kraang, but its still having some effect on the Karai arc and potentially will have repercussions later. This may be the plot point that 'proves the point' of whether the show is guilty of dropping potential plot arcs.
April/Donatello/Casey triangle - The Big one. I get the impression 1/3 of the posters here dont mind it or actually like it, another 1/3 used to like it or were ambivalent and have gotten fed up with it, and the last never liked it in the first place.
Regardless, it has never been forgotten by the writers and has developed steadily over the show's run. Like it or not, this plot arc presumably MUST be going somewhere (either heartbreak or a happy ending) because it has never gone away. Why keep bringing it up if it wasn't going to matter? Plus, this has been a crucial arc to Donatello who otherwise might be relegated to 'tech guy' or 'middle brother'. It has, at minimum, provided an element of emotional depth to him (good or bad).
Because of its length and focus, this is probably the make or break arc of the show. If its forgotten, glossed over or screwed up, then the show is truly neglecting its own plot points. However, its going SO slowly that its easy to see why people are getting fed up with it. This really needs to have a definitive sign of concluding soon or it risks becoming grossly mishandled.
Leo/Karai - The 'other' romantic arc. Whilst primarily season 1-2, recent events obviously put a major stop to this. I dont think that can be blamed on the writers so much as on logic. Besides which, I doubt we've seen the last of this arc.
Leo's leadership - This is probably the best developed arc of the show. Leo has gone from a slightly geeky, self conscious character to a strong leader. This arc is arguably still ongoing, and has been generally quite subtly presented and well handled.
Turtle's rivalry - General focused around leadership, this has also been a strong arc for the show, but it's not without flaws. While Raph and Leo's tensions seem to have eased, the argument between Donatello and Leo appears to have been quietly forgotten. Its now arguable whether they could bring it up now in a logical way after so much time. Definitely a missed opportunity.
Timothy(mutagen man) - The first of the really tragically forgotten arcs. This was another major focus for Donatello's emotional development and it seems to have been completely glossed over. This may yet appear again later down the line, but for now the failure to even show Donatello greeting Timothy at the newly reclaimed lair seems a sadly lost opportunity.
Tigerclaw's background - Tantalising mentions of a Kraang abduction and a rival have never since been brought up. To be fair, a bit of mystery to a character is NOT a bad thing, and the opportunity to develop this hasn't yet been missed. We shall see..
Xever's misgivings - The more I look at this, the more I wonder if this is really just fan speculation and not a real arc. It could easily just be grumbling because there hasn't been any real evidence to suggest he is actually at the point of turning against Shredder.
Baxter Stockman - For a relatively major villain, Stockman has certainly felt very underplayed. His weasely nature and tragic story have been all but overshadowed and forgotten when other arcs have taken precedence. Though definitely evidence against the show for under utilising a key villain, its not too late to do something more with him.
Bebop/Rocksteady - To Nicktoons credit, I actually really like the way these two started as guest human characters and developed into mutant henchmen. This bit of backstory and early connection to the characters goes a long way. What they do with them in the future is anyone's guess, but certainly for now I think they have have a great start.
Rahzar and Fishface - For such long term villains both of these guys have really fallen to the wayside. Their rivalry is still there and nice nods to their relationship still appear sporadically (though they are very rare in season 3). However there has been very little done with them. They have established personalities and characters and yet we almost never get to hear them talk, argue, reminisce or even appear! Definitely a criminally underused element. That said, its still not too late for them either. Its also arguable just how much more could have been done with them in the context of the stories shown in Season 2 and Season 3 especially.
Casey's family - Mentioned once and never again. Casey's apparent disregard for his family during the Farm arc has caused no end of annoyance. This seems a really simple way to add a distinct element to the character that other iterations havent really played with much. Again its not too late to dabble with it later, but the lack of concern shown during early Season 3 was a serious missed opportunity.
April's Mother - Vaguely implied during S1+2 but brought up again S3 with Buried Secrets. Its a little used plot element, but its obviously not been forgotten. That said, where it fails is how April seems to forget about it the episode after Secrets - when the opening of that emotional wound should have been quite traumatic. Definitely a mishandled plot arc, but still with potential.
April's psychic abilities - One of the better handled arcs - albeit resulting in deus ex machina plot rescues every so often. Her abilities are brought up fairly rarely, but often enough to show they are developing, that the characters are learning about them and that the reasons for them are being revealed gently. This is a good thing overall and could lead to more down the road.
Fate of Spyderbytez/ Snakeweed/ Newtralizer/ Squirrelanoids/ Parasitica wasps/ Chimera/ Cockroach Terminator - As much as I appreciate its a superhero trope to not completely kill off villains and keep them as 'guest stars', it gets annoying when an interesting villain (Newtralizer, Squirrelanoids for example) is completely forgotten for ages and ages. To the shows credit, Mikey's portrayed fear of the Squirrelanoids is a great way of showing they had impact on the characters, and the same with Raph (Terminator). Its frustrating but its hardly specific to Turtles or Nicktoons. This is just a superhero issue we have to live with.
Raph's Anger Issues - They come and go. They come back and are promptly forgotten again. Raph's 'mood swings' are a source of frustration for many. Oddly, I've noticed recently some people have started complaining because he's mellowed out enough in S3 to NOT be going into rages. Since the movies, this has been a steady part of Raph's character and I appreciate the show wants to depict this trait as always 'just below the surface'. That it seems to manifest one episode and vanishes the next is probably just plot convenience (lazy writing), and if the writers wanted to explain it as 'he's trying to hold that trait back and grow from it' then it would be good for them to show that! Show us some of his inner turmoil! We haven't had any since Spike!
As it is, this one does have to be chalked up to missed opportunity, but we may get some better stories involving it down the road.
Overall, I think the writers have got a lot going on at once, which isn't helpful, but they have a large cast of characters to get through and limited time to do it. For my own opinion at least, I think that complaining that they are wasting plot points and throwing away character development is unfair - AT THIS STAGE. They have a lot of stuff going on at once, and there is still time and opportunity to look into these things. That said, there are issues - not least with Don/April (this really does need to show significant signs of it coming to a conclusion - one way or another)
What do you guys think?