Ooh, I really like it. Deep stuff. tsk, tsk tsk...You should have more faith in your writing, PepZ!
Since this is the "poems" thread, I guess I'll have to post one of my own. It's TMNT related, too! (well sorta)
You may not be Real (aka Ode to Raphael)
You may not be real, but you’re there in my dreams
And the feel of your body is all that I need
Sometimes this life is just too much
But unless you’re here there's not enough
to keep me going on
You may not be real, but there’s always hope
I’d die just to hold you and never let go
'Cause to feel you against me is all that I need
And I’d give up reality to live in your dreams
(Me, an obsessed fangirl?? Noooo...
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