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Old 06-25-2013, 08:44 AM   #11
ZariusTwo
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Finally have some free time to continue the script, here's a short sample...with a touch of product placement.

Spoiler:
(the pursuit of Baxter continues)

LOUDSPEAKER:
Attention! Until further notice, this facility is in lockdown. We apologize for any inconvenience

RAPHAEL:
We need to slow him down, so you better think fast!

DONATELLO:
You're not yourself right now.

RAPHAEL:
Yeah well I'm hungry.

DONATELLO:
You want a snickers?

RAPHAEL:
Any better ideas?

DONATELLO:
I guess Mikey's birthday present's gotta come early

RAPHAEL:
What do you mean by that?

DONATELLO:
This.

(he produces something from his shell. Raph's face beamed. It is a grappling hook)

RAPHAEL:
Just the thing

(he aims at Baxter and fires the grappling hook, it wraps around Baxter's legs and sends him to the floor. Raphael presses a button on the compact device and the hook and it's quarry find themselves being dragged back to them)

DONATELLO:
Nice aim. Strong catch

RAPHAEL:
Thanks. Now hand it over.

DONATELLO:
Hand what over?

RAPHAEL:
The snickers doofus.

(Donatello sighs and reaches in to his shell. He pulls out the snickers)

DONATELLO:
Better?

RAPHAEL:
Better

(he takes a bite out of it)
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