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Old 11-23-2006, 02:22 AM   #101
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"On this day...Pilgrims come upon a group of native americans and they had a peaceful meeting filled with love and food offerings from both sides. This is a day that will live in the minds of all the surviving native americans forever...why? because it's the day that the White man's reign of terror truly began."

Homicide stands in front of an American flag with Low-ki, Smokes, Stryker and Reyes and Romero standing around him. "Shortly after that Joyous occasion...the white man killed off all of the 'redskins' because they wanted everything for themselves, yeah...Native American Genocide masked with Turkey and Cranberries. Just like America...Horrible truths hidden by cutesy fronts."

"On this day I say...let the gates of hell open, knock down the borders and stand up. If this was the first day of white man's america....then this year it will be the first step towards a new nation...one not built on oppression, racism and explotation!" Homicide takes down the American flag and spits on it. "Our People and other races have suffered because of this empty symbol and I seek to do away with it once and for all." Stryker holds up a torch and Homicide laughs.

"We burn this flag at 8...I dare anybody to try and stop the revolution."

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Benvenuto punches a wall and throws his Pink Pussywillow bandana into the garbage. "Tonight I realized that I can't trust anybody but myself and blood family, Stryker...You son of a bitch, what have you done!? why are you alligning yourself with a low-down no-good thug like him? you know what he has done to me and my friends! why?!" Ben stops and breathes in deep.

"It's been a long time...too long but desperate times call for desperate measures and I'm calling that the 5 horsemen will ride again and we will not stop until each and every one of you bastards are DEAD!"

To Be Continued In Latino Nation
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Old 11-23-2006, 05:01 AM   #102
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Ooo...things are heating up now. We have got to stop Homicide from going on a flag burning streak or something. Then again, this doesn't really affect me much *shrugs* After all, I'm not American but on the other side of the world with upside down palm trees and hilerious comedians. But still, WE SHALL STOP THEM FROM DOING WHATEVER EVIL DEEDS THEY DO, INCLUDING FLAG BURNING, MOONING, AND POSSIBLY JAY WALKING!
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Old 11-23-2006, 08:44 PM   #103
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Well you're white right?

then Homicide hates you.
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Old 11-24-2006, 02:54 AM   #104
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Well, that figures

...wait, that's a bad thing... Meep...
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Old 11-24-2006, 03:07 PM   #105
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Truly, my people weep on Thanksgiving ....well, not MY people per se....the actual tribe that dealt with the Pilgrims were the wampanog....who barely exist anymore. My people just killed an ass load of Andrew Jackson's soldiers at the battle of Horseshoe Bend....which got us sent on the trail of tears. I weep everytime hey disturb old burial grounds to build another bridge or hotel no one will stay in.

Ha! but I win! My family moved back to Alabama a hundred years ago.....and were MORE successful than the white settlers...and had a bigger piece of land...*looks out on my people's native land* Chahta isht atia...I am Choctaw

Being successful against all stereotypes is the best revenge.

(I still eat pie on Thanksgiving. Pie is ok )
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Old 11-28-2006, 12:20 AM   #106
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Now that the other fic is in full swing, I gotta keep this place updated.

"Soundtrack" for Latino Nation:
  • The Star Spangled Banner (Homicide Mix)
  • The Truth - Beanie Seagel
  • Realest Killaz (Low-ki Mix) - Tupac ft. 50 Cent
  • Wake Me Up - Broken Yoke
  • I Against I - Mos Def
  • Bigger than Hip-hop - Dead Prez
  • Bulls On Parade - Rage against the machine
  • Push It - Rick Ross
  • Truth Killaz (Latino Revolution Mega-mix)

Annnnnnnnnnnnnnnnd.... With the anniversary of the Technodrome happening and whatnot, Chris Hero will be here to deliver a message next time.
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Old 12-03-2006, 10:31 PM   #107
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*recovering under her plushie mountian...with plushies galore*

I'm NOT coming out until this thing is over... *appears with her bandaged self*....or until I heal more... ....ow... *disappears into plushie*...anyone got anything for a headache?
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Old 01-05-2007, 04:41 PM   #108
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Alrighty, sorry to let this thing slip so far down.

Come later this year I will have been writing these stories for 2 years and a lot has happened in those two years, So after I finish Latino Nation...I will be posting a retrospective timeline that'll put everything together.

I promise I won't forget READ LATINO NATION.
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Old 01-09-2007, 11:25 AM   #109
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The Stryker Universe: A Retrospective of too much sugar.
This is only running down the Canon series.

Jack Stryker and the Legion of Doom
Character Debuts: Stryker, Ryona, Cowbell.

It was the short fic that started all of this junk, It was random...badly written and really didn't have a future until the character received such a good reaction. This introduces Stryker and puts him in the Trainee program for the legendary evil villiany super-group The Legion of doom.

Jack Stryker In: Diamonds Last a Really Long time.
Character Debuts: Morgan Stryker, The TMNT

The follow-up tells the story of Stryker trying to destroy canada using a rare diamond stolen from the museum of things that don't really matter to anyone except nerds, too bad he had to babysit his little cousin on the day his grand plan was going to take place.

Jack Stryker in: The Return of Shredder.
Character Debuts: Shredder, Mr. T

Probably the first glimpse of the series going towards a more serious tone. It didn't get too serious however when Mr. T came in to teach Stryker Heathly snack alternatives...Good fer da kids!

The Way We Was.
Character Debuts: Benvenuto, Machias Banshee.

A flashback story featuring little child versions of the characters...I really can't describe it here, It's pretty long and weird. Read it yourself you lazy bastard!

J.Stryker: The End.

No Character Debuts here, working with the regular cast. First truly serious fic of the series. It provided a dark subplot and a character story with Stryker. I know I caught flack for calling it 'The End' and continuing but this was meant to be the End of the first arc which is all about Stryker and his super villiany struggles....so theres your Explanation!

Rise Of The Embassy
Character Debuts: Cowbell (As Alex Shelley), Aries, Roddie Strong, Evanz, Prince Nana, Randi.

Lot of character debuts here and it figures because it's the first step into the new age of fics that feature a brand new cast. This fic deals with Cowbell forming a criminal group known as 'Generation Next' after rising towards the top of the underworld, Aries decides to kick Cowbell out of the group and take on the role of leader himself. Cowbell takes off his mask and becomes Alex Shelley to take revenge on the traitors.

The Embassy
Character Debuts: Abyss.

The fic is strictly a character piece and delves into the minds of each Embassy member and shows what makes them tick.

Gang Warfare: Gen-next Vs. The Embassy.
Character Debuts: Claudio Castagnoli.
The stories built in the last two fics come to a boiling point as Shelley's past explodes in the face of the Embassy, The two groups begin warring all over Manhatten until a swiss money maker decides to step in and finish this himself.

Sun Vs. Moon.
Character Debuts: Homicide, Julius Smokes, Low-ki.

Probably my most well-received fic and the final step into total darkness. The fic itself deals with Funny Vs. Serious as Ben is taken to the edge of insanity and back by the violent thug Homicide. The level of violence and gore in the fic is only outweighed by the following one.

Latino Nation.
Character Debuts: Ricky Reyes and Rocky Romero.

I've always wondered how most 'upper-class' people would react to the 'lower-class' rising up and trying to take them down with anger and political propaganda. This is the story of Aggression and Opression as Homicide decides to destroy America and it's backwards ideals from the inside and outside.

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Thats pretty much it, can't belive it's almost two years I've been doing this sh*t....I need a vacation.

And money, lots and lots of money. Oh! and a Hoverbike.
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Old 01-10-2007, 04:37 AM   #110
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We all need those things Styker Oh well. May as well make do with all of these fics of yours for now

It's a good thing you did a rundown of all of your fics (well, not all of them. Where is my one, damn it?! ). I really like how you made the transfer from comedy to something a lot more serious. All of your works just work on so many levels, on humor and drama. From Ryona discovering the wonderous world of celery sticks (I just love that one ) to the death of Ben *sobs*

I'm a waiting your next episode of stories, Styker. They really are some of the best works here on the Technodrome
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psssst, Ra.....

you're letting the secret out again
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Old 01-12-2007, 06:12 AM   #113
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psssst, Ra.....

you're letting the secret out again
I am? No I'm not! I'm talking about the Christmas Specials from last year! Or was is the year before? *scratches head* Gah, you know what I'm talking about
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Old 01-18-2007, 02:58 PM   #115
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Years Ago, Boston.

"Whats your name kid?" "Chris." "Good name, now you understand what's going on here right?" "Of course, we go in..get the stuff and get out without much fuss." "Heh, I wish it were that simple with the colombians." Chris laughs and sits back in the back seat of a beat up car. The lead man continues driving and then stops and picks up more men dressed in black.

"You guys got the guns?" The men that were just picked up nod slowly and the driver smiles. "Perfect." The car stops in a dark alley behind a colombian restaurant. Chris gets out of the car and then walks to a large metal door. The driver of the car knocks on the door and a slider opens and another man peeks out. "Word?" "Cast Down." The door opens slightly and Chris jumps in and hits the man with the butt of his gun. Chris then points his gun at the two women counting money at a table.

"Alright, Keep the **** still and nobody get's hurt alright?" The rest of the group walk in and start taking the money. The driver pushes over one of the women and grabs a large piece of jewelery, He smiles and puts it in his pocket as the knocked down woman pressed a button. An alarm sounds and the group start panicking. "What the hell did you do?" "Nothing...heh." A old woman busts into the back room with a shotgun and shoots at the group, She hits one of them in the chest. Chris ducks and pulls down the Driver. "What the hell happened here?!" "It's called improvisation Christopher." The driver stands up and shoots the old woman in the head before running out the door.

Chris looks back and forth in shock as the rest of the group leaves as well. Chris finally stands and runs out of the room as well, The old car is already driving but Chris runs up to the side and bangs on the door. The driver opens one of the windows and continues driving. "Sorry...We need someone to take one for the team here." one of the men in the back of the car shoots Chris in the neck and off of the Car.

Chris tumbles on the pavement and gets on all fours, He coughs violently and bleeds even more. He holds his open and bloody neck and stares at the speeding car before passing out from blood loss.

TBC.....
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Chris.............hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

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Uh oh...me smells another story in the works... *runs off to her local store to grab some drinks*
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"We've been able to piece his throat back together as best we can but he won't be talking for a very long time." "I see, and the police?" "He's going to be charged with the murder of those people...doesn't look good." "Parents?" "None that we can find, this kid's family tree is completely off the grid, it's like he popped up out of nowhere."

The doctors walk over to Chris who is laying in the hospital bed motionless. "I know you can hear us, don't worry though...even if you do get sentenced to Jail, you won't be going there for a long time." Chris stares at the doctors and then closes his eyes.

Months Later....

"He's just not responding, according to the scans he should be able to speak but he doesn't even try." Chris moves away from the doctors and stares out a window, He clenches his fist and then punches the glass shattering it and sending glass everywhere. Chris stands up and looks at the doctors before walking barefoot through the glass to another room.

County Prison.

"You've been sentenced to life boy, this is your new home...Get used to it." The warden hands Chris his uniform and Chris walks away. Chris walks down the row of jail cells and ignores the inmates. Chris finds his cell and sits down on the bottom bunk. "So, whatcha in for?" A guy looks down from the top bunk at Chris and smiles before offering his hand. "I'm Richard, most people just call me asshole." Chris grabs Richard's hand and then throws him onto the ground. Chris stomps on his face and then breaks his arm. Richard writhes on the floor in pain as Chris continues to rain down punches.

Eventually guards come and pull Chris away, Chris continues to try and attack Richard but he is tasered and pulled towards solitary. Chris is thrown into the dark room and the door is locked. Chris roars loudly and punches the metal door again and again without stopping.

Days later....

Chris scrapes his fingernails on the walls of the room when the door opens and a man wearing a red suit walks in slowly, He walks with a cane and has jet black long hair. Chris glares at him through his now long hair and then looks back at the wall. "Now now, is that any way to treat your new doctor? My name is James Mitchell and you must be the little demon that they have sent me here to tame."

TBC......
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Oooo...things are getting violent very quickly, and this new doctor seems a bit creepy. Agh! I don't know who to root for! *grabs Katie's popcorn and starts shoving it into her face like crazy*
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"How are you progressing with the kid?" "give me a few more weeks and he will be fully prepared for your little league." "Ha, good...I need to make money on this thing and I think your psycho protege could be just the thing to pull some people in." Mitchell smirks and then grabs his money from under the table.

"I won't fail you Mr. Corino." "Eh, don't worry about it...I got my hands in enough serial killer's minds to afford one miss or two." "Don't worry about this one...Trust me." Mitchell shakes hands with Corino and walks out of the dark room.

Prison.

Doctors place nodes on Chris' head and neck and strap him down to a table. "Now Chris, this is going to help you with your little violence problem...it may hurt but you have to feel pain to get to happiness." Chris stares at the doctor and then starts screaming in pain as he is electrocuted again and again. Mitchell walks into the room and looks down on him as he shakes violently from the pain. "All they want to do is torture you...inflict more pain on you. Face it boy...You're in hell and theres no way out. You are nothing more than a damn animal to them. A test subject to cut open and prod until you're dead." Mitchell smiles and steps back.

"You have the power to stop this...all you have to do is accept what you have become and throw it back in their faces." Chris closes his eyes and passes out from the pain as Mitchell shakes his head and leaves the room.

The Next Day.

Mitchell walks Chris down a long hallway in shackles. "Listen to me...when you got sentenced to life you lost every single one of your rights as a Human being." Mitchell opens a door and throws Chris inside. "Swear any soul you have left to me and I will set you free." Chris stumbles around in the dark room when suddenly the lights turn on and he is surrounded by a group of inmates.

Mitchell walks up to a small room and stands next to Corino. "So you promise these are the best you could round up?" "Scout's honor, that one guy down there killed an entire tour group in disney land." "How sweet, Get it started then." Corino rings a bell and the 4 'inmates walk towards Chris carrying weapons.

One inmate hits Chris in the face with a lead pipe and Chris falls down. Another man grabs Chris by his hair and throws him face-first into a metal door. "Prove you want to be free and kill them! Prove your loyalty!" Chris struggles to his feet and is hit with a hard punch to the stomach. Chris crawls away and is then hit across the back with a chain. Chris writhes on the ground and spits blood before trying to stand up again. "Come on Steve...this must be a joke." Chris is hit with a bat across the face and is knocked down again.

"Pain, Torture thats all people will give you...return the favor." Chris stands up and is about to be hit with the chain but he catches it and then pulls in the inmate carrying it. Chris punches the guy in the face violently until he hears his nose breaking. Chris takes his chain and then chokes him with it, Chris snaps the man's neck and then looks at the other 3 inmates with a souless look in his eyes.

"Hmph...He's good...violent." Corino crosses his arms and watches Chris massacre the other inmates. "But theres one thing Mitchell." "What?" "He's still rough around the edges...and a name like Chris isn't really gonna sell well." "I know I know, I have this covered as well, Just give him a spot in a few months and you won't be disappointed."

Months Later....

Mitchell opens a door to a dark room and nods slightly, He holds out a black mask and a hand reaches out of the darkness and grabs it. Mitchell looks at the thing in the darkness and begins to laugh before directing it towards a lit area at the end of a long hallway. "When those degenerates shot you and left you for dead...they cast you into a never ending hell. They cast you into darkness never to return."

A crowd cheers loudly as a small man covered in tattoos stands in a large pit carrying a weapon. The man stops and stares at the dark entrance as a hulking creature steps out wearing a black mask and a chain around his neck.

"They have cast you into the Abyss....."

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