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Old 02-07-2023, 10:39 AM   #1
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Movie script

Alright, so with all the threads on "What would your vision of TMNT be?", I've decided to write a TMNT movie script for fun. Here is one scene as a sample, first draft, I'll let you know if I ever finish it. The can sort of be thought of as "roughly faithful to the source material in a way that Paramount would never greenlight", I mean hey, it's not like it'll ever actually get produced so why even bother making it like a script that would be? Oh, and I've allowed comments.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Z4C...ew?usp=sharing

Edit: First Update, https://drive.google.com/file/d/14_e...ew?usp=sharing
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Turtles is basically the red-headed stepchild of Nick.
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Old 02-07-2023, 11:03 AM   #2
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You’re really good! I like it so far!

Just one thing: unless your target audience is adults, I’d tone it down on the language. Lol
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Old 02-12-2023, 02:08 AM   #3
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Alright, here's the first update. It is much longer now but far from complete and I still haven't gone through to redraft much, so if you spot any continuity errors or such, that's understandable.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/14_e...ew?usp=sharing
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Old 10-09-2023, 05:02 PM   #4
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You’re really good! I like it so far!

Just one thing: unless your target audience is adults, I’d tone it down on the language. Lol
Given the Mouser’s introduction was even more gruesome than the mirage version, it’s safe to say that this probably is an adult-aimed script.

Anyway, go on with the Utrom scene, but maybe elaborating a bit more on certain sets could be fun.
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