Fanfic update-for anyone who wants to pimp their stories/art

[MsMarvelDuckie]

Don't worry, Leo, you're not alone. Most of my chapters are at LEAST 5-6 pages, often 15-20. It just takes focus and diligence- and now I'm feeling guilty, because I haven't cracked open any of mine in nearly a week.....

[ZariusTwo]

Spin That Wheel concludes

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10865378/5/Spin-That-Wheel

[MsMarvelDuckie]

Zarius, I finally got around to reading that one, and though it wasn't really my cup of tea, I will try to leave a review later. Interesting concept, though a little out in left field for my tastes. I did like that you included Irma, Vernon, and Burne, though.


While we're discussing tales- I just had a crazy (but kind of scary) plot bunny this morning of a Bishop/Rat King mash-up. It also involves Mikey's mind ending up in the body of a lab rat in Bishop's secret base (don't ask), while RK terrorizes the city with hordes of rats! (Sort of like in that Nick episode.) It also had Chaplin working for Bishop, and I might be really sadistic and throw Hun in for kicks. Now, since my LIS tale is getting close to wrapping up, but there are still plenty of tales I want to tell in that universe, I think this might end up being a sequel to that story, complete with some returning plot-threads from that one. Not sure what to call it yet, though my husband has suggested "Of Rats and Turtles". I'm leaning toward "Rat Finks" or maybe "Ninja Rat". Thoughts?

I also had a Raph/Mona Lisa plot bunny hit me yesterday, and though it's a one-shot, I can't wait to get this one out, too! It's a sweet little fluff piece about love, family, and the meaning of "home". It's called, aptly enough, "Every Heart Needs A Home". (This one just sort of named itself, LOL!)

[BubblyShell22]

Read and reviewed, Zar. Loved it.

Sounds like a good plan, Duckie. I think "Ninja Rat" sounds pretty good to me, so I say go for that one.

I also have a plot bunny for a Truth and Lies one shot about Robyn and how she becomes A. I'm going to call it "Always Watching."

[MsMarvelDuckie]

Originally Posted by BubblyShell22

Read and reviewed, Zar. Loved it.

Sounds like a good plan, Duckie. I think "Ninja Rat" sounds pretty good to me, so I say go for that one.

I also have a plot bunny for a Truth and Lies one shot about Robyn and how she becomes A. I'm going to call it "Always Watching."

Heh, he suggested that title as a play on the Vanilla Ice song "Ninja Rap". Thought it might be funny since Mikey can still (sort of) talk in the rat body.

[BubblyShell22]

Well it still sounds like a good title, so go for it.

[ZariusTwo]

Originally Posted by MsMarvelDuckie

Zarius, I finally got around to reading that one, and though it wasn't really my cup of tea, I will try to leave a review later. Interesting concept, though a little out in left field for my tastes. I did like that you included Irma, Vernon, and Burne, though)

I appreciate that you took the time to read it Duckie, I understand if you think it's a little too weird, it was a mad "crack fic" idea I had after watching one too many episodes of that particular show, and I'd been inspired by somebody doing a Doctor Who-take on it also. I look forward to your review. If you feel you want to be a bit critical, don't hold back, as it will further help to improve me. Bubbly does'nt hold back when pointing out my spelling errors for example, even if she loves the overall story, so if there's something I've done in the fic that you feel could have been handled a bit better, I'd love to hear it

[MsMarvelDuckie]

Originally Posted by ZariusTwo

I appreciate that you took the time to read it Duckie, I understand if you think it's a little too weird, it was a mad "crack fic" idea I had after watching one too many episodes of that particular show, and I'd been inspired by somebody doing a Doctor Who-take on it also. I look forward to your review. If you feel you want to be a bit critical, don't hold back, as it will further help to improve me. Bubbly does'nt hold back when pointing out my spelling errors for example, even if she loves the overall story, so if there's something I've done in the fic that you feel could have been handled a bit better, I'd love to hear it

Well, my biggest problem was mostly with Raphael in the first chapter. He just felt out of character, and because of it, I couldn't get any further. Everyone else was mostly okay, though it was jarring seeing Yoshi like that, but Raph was the biggest turn-off. And not being at all familiar with the show didn't help, I'd guess.

[ZariusTwo]

Originally Posted by MsMarvelDuckie

Well, my biggest problem was mostly with Raphael in the first chapter. He just felt out of character, and because of it, I couldn't get any further. Everyone else was mostly okay, though it was jarring seeing Yoshi like that, but Raph was the biggest turn-off.

(language warning)

Raph was pretty much this. I just figured since he's normally the Turtle with a temper he'd be the perfect "Malcom" for this parody fic

I probably would recommend watching the show (or the movie, In The Loop), first so you have a frame of reference.

[MsMarvelDuckie]

I FINALLY got the latest chapter of LIS finished, but didn't have time to post it yet. It will be up later tonight, though, so Yay!!

[ZariusTwo]

Originally Posted by MsMarvelDuckie

I FINALLY got the latest chapter of LIS finished, but didn't have time to post it yet. It will be up later tonight, though, so Yay!!

Congrats, I'll give it a read

[MsMarvelDuckie]

Well, I promised an update, so here it is! Kind of late, but I had to work late tonight, and then I was busy getting it ready to post. Also, this chapter is a bit- racy and contains some mature content. You have been warned..... (Or teased, depending on how you look at it, LOL!)


https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9377718/25/Love-Is-Shell

[ZariusTwo]

It's another Simpsons fic from me today. Based off real events.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11186918/1/Bart-s-Ban

[MsMarvelDuckie]

Here's a new one from me, it's a Leo fic this time! Warning: this one contains a few spoilers for LIS..... But they're mostly from the epilogue.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11194352/1/Second-Chances

[ZariusTwo]

I liked that one so much I Favorited it.

[MsMarvelDuckie]

Thanks! Did you leave a review? It says I have two reviews on it, but only one of them shows up. It's weird.

[ZariusTwo]

Originally Posted by MsMarvelDuckie

Thanks! Did you leave a review? It says I have two reviews on it, but only one of them shows up. It's weird.

I did leave a review and I can read it at the moment. Sometimes it takes a bit to update

[Ceres]

Oh what a great thread! Here i can advertise my little TMNT FF a bit i guess .

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1119566...crets-of-Krang

Its called Secrets of Krang and it plays in the 87`universe of the cartoon. Its getting pretty dark in later chapters but the first three chapters are only the beginning. It starts of a bit slow but it will be better later on, i promise :3

Chapter 3 just was finished and i am already writing on Chapter 4.

Give it a look, will you?

[ZariusTwo]

Just a heads up, I decided to delete "The Monocles" novella. I'm going to try my hand at writing "Cheap Seats" again.

Originally Posted by EmpressOfShadows

Oh what a great thread! Here i can advertise my little TMNT FF a bit i guess .

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1119566...crets-of-Krang

Its called Secrets of Krang and it plays in the 87`universe of the cartoon. Its getting pretty dark in later chapters but the first three chapters are only the beginning. It starts of a bit slow but it will be better later on, i promise :3

Chapter 3 just was finished and i am already writing on Chapter 4.

Give it a look, will you?

Read and reviewed. Good work,.

[Ceres]

Originally Posted by ZariusTwo

Just a heads up, I decided to delete "The Monocles" novella. I'm going to try my hand at writing "Cheap Seats" again.



Read and reviewed. Good work,.

Thank you very much. Have you read all the chapters, i would like to hear your opinion on them too . I also uploaded it on Wattpad but i think on FF.net it gets more viewer.