02-07-2023, 10:39 AM | #1 |
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Movie script
Alright, so with all the threads on "What would your vision of TMNT be?", I've decided to write a TMNT movie script for fun. Here is one scene as a sample, first draft, I'll let you know if I ever finish it. The can sort of be thought of as "roughly faithful to the source material in a way that Paramount would never greenlight", I mean hey, it's not like it'll ever actually get produced so why even bother making it like a script that would be? Oh, and I've allowed comments.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Z4C...ew?usp=sharing Edit: First Update, https://drive.google.com/file/d/14_e...ew?usp=sharing
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02-07-2023, 11:03 AM | #2 |
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You’re really good! I like it so far!
Just one thing: unless your target audience is adults, I’d tone it down on the language. Lol
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02-12-2023, 02:08 AM | #3 |
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Alright, here's the first update. It is much longer now but far from complete and I still haven't gone through to redraft much, so if you spot any continuity errors or such, that's understandable.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/14_e...ew?usp=sharing
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Anyway, go on with the Utrom scene, but maybe elaborating a bit more on certain sets could be fun. |
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