TMNT - Comic

[Scumbug_Rob]

Five years ago or so i started off drawing 4 sequentials of a battle with Stockman, Raph, Casey, and Metalhead stepping in. Since that time i have sort of developed the story that takes place after the story boards. So now i will be continuing the story, in the hopes that it could reach a climax, as i develop my drawing skills.

















There will be some stylistic changes as well as changes to character design, which hopefully help me push my abilities. I would love to hear speculation of whats being said, and will take input of characters to use ect ect, though i have a rogue gallery where 2nd tier characters will be showcased.

[Scumbug_Rob]

[snake]

Nice comic, I like how you draw baxter.

[oldmanwinters]

A little brutal, but I'm always a fan of escalating conflicts. It was neat to see all the new characters constantly enter the fray... ala a Super Smash Bros. game promo or something.

[***First of Two Latin Kings***]

I actually think it works without dialogue VERY nicely...but I'm VERY confused as to what is going on in the panels with Splinter in them.

[Scumbug_Rob]

Originally Posted by oldmanwinters

A little brutal, but I'm always a fan of escalating conflicts. It was neat to see all the new characters constantly enter the fray... ala a Super Smash Bros. game promo or something.

Thanks, i think the characters piling in should continue, but i hope it is organic and not just 'cuz. I have a plan for each character how, why, and wehn.

Originally Posted by ***The One True Shredder***

I actually think it works without dialogue VERY nicely...but I'm VERY confused as to what is going on in the panels with Splinter in them.

I think the next page will clarify things for you. Also, as much as i like the no (or limited) dialogue bubbles, I am going to start writing for this as well.

I appreciate the compliments and critiques, stay tuned the next page should be up by Monday.

[snake]

Originally Posted by Scumbug_Rob

Thanks, i think the characters piling in should continue, but i hope it is organic and not just 'cuz. I have a plan for each character how, why, and wehn.



I think the next page will clarify things for you. Also, as much as i like the no (or limited) dialogue bubbles, I am going to start writing for this as well.

I appreciate the compliments and critiques, stay tuned the next page should be up by Monday.

Cool, I love your art.

[***First of Two Latin Kings***]

My guess is that Splinter was going to kill his fleas, and realized one of them was Raphael reincarnated?

[Scumbug_Rob]

[snake]

once again, good job, your good at drawing Baxter.

[Scumbug_Rob]

Originally Posted by snakeweed101

once again, good job, your good at drawing Baxter.

Baxter, to me, was the best part of the old toon. I loved his character and really the only thing i can remember of the old tune. That being said, i have alot of love for Baxter so he will be a major cog that turns this story. And i put a lot into trying to find a design for him.

[IcyKali]

I'm a cartoonist myself (well, kinda... I'm not paid to do it or anything), and I have to say, your art is beautiful. I wish I could see one of these pages inked and/or colored. The comments are right, your Baxter is probably the best part. I love his wings!

There's only one problem that I can see; your lettering is really difficult to read, and I think Baxter's dialogue had too many ellipses (meaning the "..." character, not the sentence structure). Otherwise, great job.

[***First of Two Latin Kings***]

Originally Posted by IcyKali

I'm a cartoonist myself (well, kinda... I'm not paid to do it or anything), and I have to say, your art is beautiful. I wish I could see one of these pages inked and/or colored. The comments are right, your Baxter is probably the best part. I love his wings!

There's only one problem that I can see; your lettering is really difficult to read, and I think Baxter's dialogue had too many ellipses (meaning the "..." character, not the sentence structure). Otherwise, great job.

I think that is done by design, the implication being that Baxter's mutation distorted his vocal cords. Or maybe it is meant to signify "buzzing" in between his words, like in the old cartoon.

[Scumbug_Rob]

Originally Posted by IcyKali

I'm a cartoonist myself (well, kinda... I'm not paid to do it or anything), and I have to say, your art is beautiful. I wish I could see one of these pages inked and/or colored. The comments are right, your Baxter is probably the best part. I love his wings!

There's only one problem that I can see; your lettering is really difficult to read, and I think Baxter's dialogue had too many ellipses (meaning the "..." character, not the sentence structure). Otherwise, great job.

Originally Posted by ***The One True Shredder***

I think that is done by design, the implication being that Baxter's mutation distorted his vocal cords. Or maybe it is meant to signify "buzzing" in between his words, like in the old cartoon.

Shredder is right, i was trying to show that even though he is incredibly intelligent, his mutated form has he struggling to speak.

[Ulisses31]

Great to see this going hope we can see it inked also and maybe colored.

[Blossombrooks]

I like your style and as much as I'm sure it'll look amazing if you ink it there's a really great quality to your pencil work. Keep posting!

[Scumbug_Rob]