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Old 10-17-2021, 03:51 PM   #41
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https://www.furaffinity.net/user/thebigbadwolf01/ got the next page done.



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Old 10-17-2021, 04:30 PM   #42
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Haha, looks like the comic is in the homestretch. It's been fun!
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Old 11-25-2021, 06:08 PM   #43
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Old 11-25-2021, 06:56 PM   #44
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Looking good but there's a big Grammatical error that I urge you to fix.

"Your welcome" should be "You're welcome"

Because "Your" means "It belongs to you, it's yours"
"You're" is short for "You are."
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Old 12-22-2021, 08:38 PM   #45
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https://www.furaffinity.net/user/thebigbadwolf01/ got the last page done and a little bonus...


i hope you all enjoyed it.
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Old 12-23-2021, 02:32 AM   #46
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Very cool but as I said in reaction to the last page "Your Welcome" is bad English, please change the grammar.
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Old 03-25-2022, 08:20 PM   #47
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really thinking about getting issue 2 started in a few months after the pageant if my artist is willing/available to do it.

I finally figured out how kendra will transform, since draxem most likely adds magic to his food, she starts eating it and begins to crave it and grows bigger as she devours his kitchen and most of sloppy joe. april contacts the turtles as kendra bursts through the roof, don's made his own bracelet for april which they charge with their weapons. now it's a giant kaiju battle through the streets with some smashed buildings with april winning in the end with some kind of grapple/body slam.
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Old 03-26-2022, 10:04 AM   #48
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really thinking about getting issue 2 started in a few months after the pageant if my artist is willing/available to do it.

I finally figured out how kendra will transform, since draxem most likely adds magic to his food, she starts eating it and begins to crave it and grows bigger as she devours his kitchen and most of sloppy joe. april contacts the turtles as kendra bursts through the roof, don's made his own bracelet for april which they charge with their weapons. now it's a giant kaiju battle through the streets with some smashed buildings with april winning in the end with some kind of grapple/body slam.
Go for it but please check your grammar.
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Old 05-27-2022, 06:07 PM   #49
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Just finished a rough draft. and please Saiyaman don't start on grammar.

Kaiju April 2
Kendra's wraith

outside shot of April's school
April is at her locker talking to Donatello on her phone.

a: So, no sign of that bracelet thingy of mine?

d: Sorry but no, although I am working on a

He's interrupted by the lunch bell.

a: Sorry Don, but lunch calls.

She's now in line looking at the food and smelling.
a: Drax, you may have made an awful villain but you make a great cook.

d: Thank you, It pleases me to nourish the welps of this abysmal upper world.

a: You're not putting magic in the food again are you?

d: No....
show his back with a little seasoning canister in his hand that say's "Yokai Seasonings add a little dash of magic to your food."

Show the Purple Dragons eating.
1: So have we finally come up with some kinda plan to get back at Donatello, Hello Kendra?

Kendra's wolfing her meal down.

2: Man, you've been weird every since you found that thing.

show the dragon bracelet on her arm.

K: Shut up, I'm just hungry and this slop actually tastes good today.

show the bracelet glow for a moment and Kendra slightly grows a few inches.

show the 2 male dragons looking at her
1: Ok, I heard of growth spurts but

k: Still hungry, gimme yours.

she grabs it and keeps eating.

2: Sis, I think you've had enough.

Kendra now has a larger mid section and a red glow in her eyes and sharp teeth.

K: More!

show her stomping up to the counter and sniffing the food and start eating it there while growing slightly bigger and scales starting to show.

Draxem steps up
d: Hey, it's one serving per kid!

Kendra shoves him through the kitchen doors and have him hit and get bonked by a bunch of pans dazing him.

k: I want more!
She then rips open the seasoning and downs it and grow's a tail and zilla spikes.

April is just looking in shock with her spoon full of food until a piece of the sneezeguard heads her way.

She ducks and gets on her phone.
A: I knew he was still serving magic food!

R: Yo, you've reached the Mad Dogz, we're out getting a slice of pie, so leave a message after the beep.

a: Guy's, get to my school now! Kendra's got my bracelet and she's growing huge already!

show a dazed blurry view from Draxums eyes, then focus to show Kendra fighting Sloppy Joe.

Show her licking her now reptilian lips and eating almost all of Joe.

k: Nom nom!

She then get's bonked in the head with a thrown piece of pie or food. April is in front of an open freezer door.

a: Hey Kendra, you look hangry!

Kendra charges, April dodges and Kendra's now trapped.

d: All my mystical food's in there!

a: Run!

Show them bursting out the doors as Kendra bursts through the roof and the turtles pull up.

l: Wow, talk about deja vue!

R: think's she a lot bigger than April was, I don't think we can hold her like we did with you.

d: Ah, but I may have a solution, I took scans last time and have been making my own with out the intense rage feature.
His bracelet is dragon shaped but it's got a Donnie shaped face and flashy bling on it.

R: So April and I can hold her while you guy's get the bracelet off. I like it.

Now show April doing a pose with the bracelet and shouting
A: It's morphin time!

The guy's put their weapons on her and she glow's and grows into her dragon form.

A center: Hey, I can think strait.
A right: Duh!
A left: I don't know about you girls but I'm hungry!
A center: Focus girls, lets wreak this witch!

April rushes at Kendra grabbing her waist with Kendra roaring

k: O'neil!

Kendra then jumps and body slam/ sit's on April dazing her for a moment. The turtles start to attack and whacks both Mikey and Leo away.

She then grabs a flying Donnie and we then see him in her fist in the foreground with her large face in the back ground.
d: She's gonna eat me and then the others! Oh my God!

A right: Get your fat butt off me!"

She and the left bite a leg while the middle breaths fire. Kenda looks pissed and we see flames start to burn in her mouth.

we then see Raph's giant red hand tap her on the shoulder.

r: Hey, tall, dark, and gruesome! Let my bro go!

He then punches her in the face and knocks out a tooth. She grimaces and hits him with all the force of her tail.

Kendra then starts to get bigger and starts to absorb vehicles making them into armor.

d: Guy's we better do something, she's evolving!

m: Cool, maybe we could train her to fight other monsters.

R: No, not cool Mikey, any bigger and I don't think the army can beat her.

l: So how can we?

r: I got an idea. April, breath as much fire as you can at her until her armor starts melting. Drax get you mojo ready to seal that bracelet. Guys it's time to play with water.

April starts breathing and Kendra's armor turns bright red and starts to melt. The turtles then stand at 4 corners with hydrants and break them open and start to aim and spray her causing the armor to seal her into a statue.

r: Now Draxum!

d: Right!

The bracelet is sealed and Kendra starts to shrink down.

Show Aprils heads all looking at Donnie.
A: So what about me?

D: Just take it off.

April then shrinks back to normal

a: I am so keeping this.

l: I really gotta wonder how the mayors office is going to explain this mess.

The mayor is at the podium.

m: Yes, it was a gas explosion that refracted off of Venus and any mention of giant turtles or massive lizards is clearly a case of mass hysteria.

Reporter: But what about that giant statue that they had to rescue the girl out of
?
m: Look people, this happened at a high school clearly it was a teenage prank. Now no further questions.

The turtles are watching the tv as it shows the massive metal work.

m: Who say's we're not artists?

Edit: looks like he's not up for it as t this time, I try again later in the year.

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