Vol. 1 #1 Remix! - Page 2

Toon · 03-31-2011, 11:24 PM

This is really frikkin' cool, gang!

*Samhain* · 04-01-2011, 02:59 AM

Glad to finally see this thing all wrapped up! Everyone did a great job!

Buffy · 04-01-2011, 05:28 AM

So cool! So many awesome pages, I don't know which ones I like the most. My favorite pages are 23, 24, 28 and 36.

*Master Splinter* · 04-01-2011, 06:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Buffy

So cool! So many awesome pages, I don't know which ones I like the most. My favorite pages are 23, 24, 28 and 36.

Any errors mentioned will be corrected this weekend. Thanks for pointing them out!

-ms

*Eiko* · 04-01-2011, 06:39 AM

Great work to all of you this is fantastic.

If we ever do this again i will def be having a go.

*Ecto Jedi* · 04-01-2011, 07:52 AM

Nice work, guys. This is pretty rad.

*MrPliggins* · 04-01-2011, 09:02 AM

This is awesome. Totally flew under my radar, or would've participated! (maybe next time) Page 28 was my favorite but there were many awesome pages!

*Powder* · 04-01-2011, 09:59 AM

All I can say is...

WOW! What an honor!

http://peterlairdstmntblog.blogspot....e-by-fans.html

Pat yourselves on the back, dudes!

*discordiatookie* · 04-01-2011, 10:26 AM

Wow, that's brilliant! I see what Peter laird means about numbered pages, in the PDF the double page spread on the rooftop is classed as one page, but in the credits its classed as two. A little confusing if you don't know its a doubler. Mayhap numbers in the corners? So neat he took time to read it, well chuffed! Oh, and if we did want our real names published also, I don't mind. Especially for those awesome artists out there who want the promotion..

Oh, and Master Splinter, just wanted to say that you did a neat job on lettering my page! Nothing was obscured and the sound effects matched really well with the action.

And thanks for the coupla folks who commented on my page also - it was the toy photograph one. Really meant a lot to me!

*Donnie* · 04-01-2011, 10:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Powder

All I can say is...

WOW! What an honor!

http://peterlairdstmntblog.blogspot....e-by-fans.html

Pat yourselves on the back, dudes!

Congratulations everyone! This is an extreme honor, to have PL do an official review/critique of your work! I hope he does the same for the voice-over, as I'll definitely be sending it his way...

I agree with some of his comments - in specific, the fact that Shredder's eye ball popping out was over the top, and that the names in the credits should have been actual names. I know we all know eachother by forum names, but hell, you guys have real names. Mine's Matthew. Hey.

*Ecto Jedi* · 04-01-2011, 10:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Powder

All I can say is...

WOW! What an honor!

http://peterlairdstmntblog.blogspot....e-by-fans.html

Pat yourselves on the back, dudes!

Oh, Peter. Still a bit of a prick, I see. (That eyeball popping out was the highlight of the book!)

*Donnie* · 04-01-2011, 11:00 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ecto Jedi

Oh, Peter. Still a bit of a prick, I see. (That eyeball popping out was the highlight of the book!)

I think that's a matter of opinion. I personally think the eyeball popping was way over the top.

Nelson · 04-01-2011, 11:06 AM

Thanks for the comment, Spengler! It means a lot to me that you said that (I did page 29- page 28 in the one with the evil flying eyeball of evil).

And the fact that Laird saw our work is amazing! I agree with some of his points: the fact that not all the pages are numbered, the lack of real-life names, and the fact that it looks and reads too similar to the real thing... maybe we had too many restrictions.

What I do NOT agree with is with his dislike of the flying eyeball. As Ecto Jedi said, it is one of the highlights of the book. AND also something new, that differs from the source material.

If there's going to be a new, corrected version, I propose to consider Laird suggestions. Specially the page numbering: because right now, by including the cover in the page count, as well as the occasional merging of two pages, the Acrobat Reader page counts ends up being different from the actual one used in the credits.

*Master Splinter* · 04-01-2011, 11:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nelson

Thanks for the comment, Spengler! It means a lot to me that you said that (I did page 29- page 28 in the one with the evil flying eyeball of evil).

And the fact that Laird saw our work is amazing! I agree with some of his points: the fact that not all the pages are numbered, the lack of real-life names, and the fact that it looks and reads too similar to the real thing... maybe we had too many restrictions.

What I do NOT agree with is with his dislike of the flying eyeball. As Ecto Jedi said, it is one of the highlights of the book. AND also something new, that differs from the source material.

If there's going to be a new, corrected version, I propose to consider Laird suggestions. Specially the page numbering: because right now, by including the cover in the page count, as well as the occasional merging of two pages, the Acrobat Reader page counts ends up being different from the actual one used in the credits.

I can add page numbers... I still have all of the files... I can even add our real names if ya'll want...

-ms

*Jephael* · 04-01-2011, 11:31 AM

That is cool that Peter Laird talked about it!

Koschei · 04-01-2011, 11:44 AM

Eyeball popping out is "over the top"?

*Master Splinter* · 04-01-2011, 11:46 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Koschei

Eyeball popping out is "over the top"?

Nah... This is over the top...

-ms

Nelson · 04-01-2011, 11:54 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Master Splinter

Nah... This is over the top...

-ms

Man, that movie was BAD....

The eyeball might be over the top, but it's not of place. I mean, this is a "remix" of issue one... which had the Shredder being blown up, and showed us his rests splattered on the street...

*DrSpengler* · 04-01-2011, 12:02 PM

In regards to the eyeball, I thought it was hilarious. I didn't interpret it as something done with the intention of being taken at face value as "OMG so kewl!" but a tongue in cheek piece of ultra violent meant to catch you by surprise and make you laugh.

And laugh I did.

*Master Splinter* · 04-01-2011, 12:05 PM

In case anyone is as lame as me and likes saving things... I took a screenshot of PL's blog mention the remix comic... Just incase it ever goes down I got proof PL reviewed our comic...

http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/4...omicscreen.jpg

-ms

04-01-2011, 05:28 AM	#23
Buffy Mad Scientist Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: where am I? Posts: 1,472	So cool! So many awesome pages, I don't know which ones I like the most. My favorite pages are 23, 24, 28 and 36. __________________ Forgiveness is divine, but never pay full price for late pizza.

04-01-2011, 06:39 AM	#25
Eiko Aussie and Proud Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Foot HQ Australia Posts: 1,816	Great work to all of you this is fantastic. If we ever do this again i will def be having a go. __________________

04-01-2011, 09:59 AM	#28
Powder So tired of this place Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Shell Ri La Posts: 26,809	All I can say is... WOW! What an honor! http://peterlairdstmntblog.blogspot....e-by-fans.html Pat yourselves on the back, dudes! __________________ I'm convinced that none of you have ever experienced joy

04-01-2011, 10:26 AM	#29
discordiatookie facehugger Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Aberdeen, Scotland Posts: 2,817	Wow, that's brilliant! I see what Peter laird means about numbered pages, in the PDF the double page spread on the rooftop is classed as one page, but in the credits its classed as two. A little confusing if you don't know its a doubler. Mayhap numbers in the corners? So neat he took time to read it, well chuffed! Oh, and if we did want our real names published also, I don't mind. Especially for those awesome artists out there who want the promotion.. Oh, and Master Splinter, just wanted to say that you did a neat job on lettering my page! Nothing was obscured and the sound effects matched really well with the action. And thanks for the coupla folks who commented on my page also - it was the toy photograph one. Really meant a lot to me! __________________ Oh Discordia! Charyou Tree! Come, Reap! Don't tell us to grow up and out of it I got my cloak and dagger in a bar room brawl You actually trying to read this tiny text? Damn, you're dedicated! This is all just for effect you know... original TMNT art collection

04-01-2011, 11:31 AM	#35
Jephael That whack job behind you Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Carlisle, Pennsylvania Posts: 8,088	That is cool that Peter Laird talked about it! __________________ "I like it. Simple, but effective!" Raphael; The Mean Machines - 1988 www.jephael.com

03-31-2011, 11:24 PM	#21
Toon Official TMNT Staff/Cast Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 81	This is really frikkin' cool, gang!

04-01-2011, 02:59 AM	#22
Samhain Dare To Be Stupid! Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 1313 Mockingbird Lane Posts: 4,752	Glad to finally see this thing all wrapped up! Everyone did a great job!

04-01-2011, 07:52 AM	#26
Ecto Jedi Denki Wo Kitte Kudasai Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 2,439	Nice work, guys. This is pretty rad.

04-01-2011, 09:02 AM	#27
MrPliggins Foot Elite Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 3,006	This is awesome. Totally flew under my radar, or would've participated! (maybe next time) Page 28 was my favorite but there were many awesome pages!

04-01-2011, 11:06 AM	#33
Nelson Stone Warrior Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 673	Thanks for the comment, Spengler! It means a lot to me that you said that (I did page 29- page 28 in the one with the evil flying eyeball of evil). And the fact that Laird saw our work is amazing! I agree with some of his points: the fact that not all the pages are numbered, the lack of real-life names, and the fact that it looks and reads too similar to the real thing... maybe we had too many restrictions. What I do NOT agree with is with his dislike of the flying eyeball. As Ecto Jedi said, it is one of the highlights of the book. AND also something new, that differs from the source material. If there's going to be a new, corrected version, I propose to consider Laird suggestions. Specially the page numbering: because right now, by including the cover in the page count, as well as the occasional merging of two pages, the Acrobat Reader page counts ends up being different from the actual one used in the credits.

04-01-2011, 11:44 AM	#36
Koschei Hench Mutant Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 373	Eyeball popping out is "over the top"? __________________ http://koscheithedeathless.deviantart.com/

04-01-2011, 12:02 PM	#39
DrSpengler Foot Elite Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 4,830	In regards to the eyeball, I thought it was hilarious. I didn't interpret it as something done with the intention of being taken at face value as "OMG so kewl!" but a tongue in cheek piece of ultra violent meant to catch you by surprise and make you laugh. And laugh I did.

04-01-2011, 12:05 PM	#40
Master Splinter 幸 - 愛 - 思う Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: St. Louis Posts: 2,824	In case anyone is as lame as me and likes saving things... I took a screenshot of PL's blog mention the remix comic... Just incase it ever goes down I got proof PL reviewed our comic... http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/4...omicscreen.jpg -ms __________________