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Old 04-23-2013, 08:48 AM   #1
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Final Chapter Done

The Tender Trap is now complete, chapter 21 and chapter 22 which is the epilogue. Stop by and leave a review, I feel very proud of this story. I think it has some of my best writing yet...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9016809/21/The-Tender-Trap

I am thinking of a Part Two...if I get enough interest...
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Old 04-23-2013, 02:35 PM   #2
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Old 04-24-2013, 07:45 AM   #3
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Read your story, SS, and loved it. I definitely wouldn't mind a Part Two.

Han, your art is awesome. Good job.
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Old 04-24-2013, 04:21 PM   #4
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9226922/...-Demon-s-Grasp

It got the better of me and I started writing again, argh! I must be mad.
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Old 04-25-2013, 06:15 AM   #5
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New Story!

Okay, so I finished The Tender Trap and am planning a sequel, but in the meantime I'm working on a short story featuring a little romance for our guy in orange, titled Mikey's Girl.

It is set a year after the events of Tender Trap and everyone is still affected by what had happened including Donnie reactions to April getting engaged to Casey.

It isn't the official sequel but more like an interlude. Anyway, I'd sure like some reviews, lol!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9229354/1/Mikey-s-Girl
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Old 08-04-2013, 02:57 AM   #6
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Fluff. It's a bit stilted, but I've been out of the game for a long time. I'm paranoid that some fangirls are going to think I'm trying to ship Mikey and April and descend on me in screeching harpy mode, but I almost needed to write this.
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Old 08-04-2013, 07:37 AM   #7
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I'm paranoid that some fangirls are going to think I'm trying to ship Mikey and April.
Well you got my vote of confidence .

April/Mikey is one pair that needs more attention.

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Old 08-04-2013, 07:48 AM   #8
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Wow. That was awesome. I'd review, but I don't have a Tumblr account. Maybe you should post this up on FF.Net. I'm sure you'd get more reviews there, too. Nicely done on this.
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Old 08-04-2013, 09:27 AM   #9
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I really liked that!! Very well written!!
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Old 08-04-2013, 10:52 AM   #10
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Aw, thank you so much, guys! I'm so glad it isn't defenestrate-the-author-bad. Perhaps I can try something more ambitious next.
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Old 08-04-2013, 11:44 AM   #11
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Fluff. It's a bit stilted, but I've been out of the game for a long time. I'm paranoid that some fangirls are going to think I'm trying to ship Mikey and April and descend on me in screeching harpy mode, but I almost needed to write this.
Hiya Doom, I left you a question in your ask me anything about the story.

But I liked it. And as I stated there, don't ever be afraid to explore the corners of your imagination - that's what Fanfiction is all about. All those incredible what if's brought to life! I love it! Your story was sweet and the end was perfect. The discovery of perhaps having more than just friendly feelings towards Mikey was surprising and interesting. You really could even expand if you so chose. Heh heh, I'm always pushing people for expansion! It's part of my evil plans to make everyone write more TMNT fanfiction! Mwhahaha
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Old 08-04-2013, 12:04 PM   #12
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Hiya Doom, I left you a question in your ask me anything about the story.

But I liked it. And as I stated there, don't ever be afraid to explore the corners of your imagination - that's what Fanfiction is all about. All those incredible what if's brought to life! I love it! Your story was sweet and the end was perfect. The discovery of perhaps having more than just friendly feelings towards Mikey was surprising and interesting. You really could even expand if you so chose. Heh heh, I'm always pushing people for expansion! It's part of my evil plans to make everyone write more TMNT fanfiction! Mwhahaha
Thanks! I'm glad you liked the ending, as that's the part I always have the most trouble with.

I'm really not trying to ship anyone here - the lack of physical affection for Mikey bothers me as much as it does because when I was that age, boys and girls could be mildly physical affectionate without it meaning anything romantic. I just wanted to give him some of that, since April showed in "Monkey Brains" that she can be empathetic to people's needs. Also, the thought of Mikey sleeping peacefully in her lap gives me diabetes.

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Old 08-04-2013, 12:17 PM   #13
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I'm in agreement with everyone else. That was really sweet, DC. And you desribed him to a T!!
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Old 08-04-2013, 04:34 PM   #14
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New story I've been sitting on this one for a while, tweeking my first chapter. I am working on Chapter 10 of "The Lesser of Two Evils" and will be done with it soon, but I had to get this out there, too. It's called "Comic Relief" and takes place in season 7ish of the OT show...starring Mike. I am not used to writing him, so I decided to challenge myself. For the OT at least, Donatello and Leonardo come easier for me. First chapter is really short I hope it's ok...

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Old 08-10-2013, 11:57 AM   #15
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I gotta fic I want people to help with reviews and brainstorming ideas. Here is the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9550138/...s-The-New-Team

Basically it is short stories after an upcoming one I want to write where The Shredder's latest plan to defeat the Turtles is making his own team. They have a change of heart and save the day and end up continuing their training with Splinter. I got the Idea from Chochi's awesome Rule 63 fan art where you can find here. http://chochi.deviantart.com/
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Just so you guys know I haven't fallen off the planet, I'm a little behind on my updates right now because of several things going on here at home. The biggest of those being an impending move (only moving downstairs, but still have to pack an unpack all the small stuff and breakables) and now my hubby is in the hospital after having half his foot amputated (diabetic related- his foot got infected and it got into the bone.) .
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Just so you guys know I haven't fallen off the planet, I'm a little behind on my updates right now because of several things going on here at home. The biggest of those being an impending move (only moving downstairs, but still have to pack an unpack all the small stuff and breakables) and now my hubby is in the hospital after having half his foot amputated (diabetic related- his foot got infected and it got into the bone.) .
Oh no! I wish your hubby a speedy recovery. You guys are in my thoughts.
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DN, you know I'm a sucker for SAINW. I loved it.

MsMarvel, I'm so sorry to hear about your husband. My mom & little brother both have diabetes and . . . well, I just wish him the best and hopes he recovers comfortably. HUGS and Much Love being sent in your way. Good luck with the move and all the craziness that brings as well!

I just posted a new one-shot inspired by that teaser sneak peek for next season. I don't usually follow canon, as you guys know, but couldn't help diving into this, heheh....I present to you, Everything Changes...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9582712/1/
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Read and reviewed, SS. Good job as always. I just love your stuff.

Sorry to hear about your hubby, Duckie. My thoughts are with you. Take your time on your updates as family always comes first.
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