read and tell me what you think.

[The Angel Queen]

i was going through some of my old note books and found a bunch of poems that i wrote a couple years ago !!! and i foun this a couple raely good ones (in my opion any way) all the good ones i looked at made a few changes to make them better and on a couple i made a hole new version!! the poem that im going to put up is called Hope ! im going to post the original version first and then put up the second version later on ! :)


Hope

Dark and silent but still I sing,
I sing of joy and peace,
I sing of hope and freedom,
Yet there is none.
I wish and pray for the day,
I want the night to end,
I want to see the daylight again.

[Reznorite420]

I voted a 3...who voted the 1?????

[Nickokapo]

Wasn't me...i didn't voted since i know nothing about POETOLOGY!
But i'll give it a five, woot! :P

[Lanagirl]

:) Your poem is nice. Frankly speaking i write novels,books and poems. I have not a lot of but ... many fans here.:-) So i think you have a talent for writing the poems. I've won many contests, won prizes but dad said that university of art was not for me. So now i regret i didn't enter the university of arts. don't lose your talent. be brave. i think you'll do very well
wish you good luck
Lana

[Jephael]

I voted 4 on it. It's a nice poem, and I can easily relate to it

[Machias Banshee]

*falls on the floor laughing at Nicko's new sig pic* :lol: :rolling: :lol: :rolling: :lol:

[Tokka-B]

Reznorite420: The point of a poll is for people to say what they want in PRIVATE, when you ask people what they voted, it just takes the fun out of a poll. And for your information, I voted for the 1, am I not allowed to do that? I have opinions of my own too you know... :roll:

[The Angel Queen]

Reznorite420: The point of a poll is for people to say what they want in PRIVATE, when you ask people what they voted, it just makes you look stupid. And for your information, I voted for the 1, am I not allowed to do that? I have opinions of my own too you know... :roll:

i woould have picked the one to :P i dont mind me i think version 2 is better !!!!!

[The Angel Queen]

Hope version 2

Dark and silent , but still I sing
I sing of joy and peace,
I sing of hope and freedom,
Yet there is none.
I wish and pray for the day,
I want this hell to end,
I want to see freedom again.

[The Angel Queen]

:sleep:

[Storm Wolf]

you sure do sleep alot....BTW I got some more stuff for you to read queenie!

oh and good poem...I didn't know you wrote anything...much less poetry :roll:

[Kingkapong]

you all know it
that i'm no poet
but since you are alive
i'll give you a five.

[The Angel Queen]

i write lots but in the comfort of my own home wereno one can read it !!!

[Mouse]

angel queen: keep up the great work, your poems rock! :D

[The Angel Queen]

thanks !!!!! :D