read and tell me what you think.

The Angel Queen · 12-18-2002, 03:58 PM

i was going through some of my old note books and found a bunch of poems that i wrote a couple years ago !!! and i foun this a couple raely good ones (in my opion any way) all the good ones i looked at made a few changes to make them better and on a couple i made a hole new version!! the poem that im going to put up is called Hope ! im going to post the original version first and then put up the second version later on !

Hope

Dark and silent but still I sing,
I sing of joy and peace,
I sing of hope and freedom,
Yet there is none.
I wish and pray for the day,
I want the night to end,
I want to see the daylight again.

~~Reznorite420~~ · 12-18-2002, 08:57 PM

I voted a 3...who voted the 1?????

*Nickokapo* · 12-19-2002, 03:36 AM

Wasn't me...i didn't voted since i know nothing about POETOLOGY!
But i'll give it a five, woot!

Lanagirl · 12-19-2002, 05:11 AM

Your poem is nice. Frankly speaking i write novels,books and poems. I have not a lot of but ... many fans here.

So i think you have a talent for writing the poems. I've won many contests, won prizes but dad said that university of art was not for me. So now i regret i didn't enter the university of arts. don't lose your talent. be brave. i think you'll do very well
wish you good luck
Lana

*Jephael* · 12-19-2002, 08:39 AM

I voted 4 on it. It's a nice poem, and I can easily relate to it

**Machias Banshee** · 12-19-2002, 11:18 AM

*falls on the floor laughing at Nicko's new sig pic*

~~Tokka-B~~ · 12-19-2002, 01:48 PM

Reznorite420: The point of a poll is for people to say what they want in PRIVATE, when you ask people what they voted, it just takes the fun out of a poll. And for your information, I voted for the 1, am I not allowed to do that? I have opinions of my own too you know...

The Angel Queen · 12-19-2002, 02:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tokka

Reznorite420: The point of a poll is for people to say what they want in PRIVATE, when you ask people what they voted, it just makes you look stupid. And for your information, I voted for the 1, am I not allowed to do that? I have opinions of my own too you know...

i woould have picked the one to

i dont mind me i think version 2 is better !!!!!

The Angel Queen · 12-19-2002, 02:13 PM

Hope version 2

Dark and silent , but still I sing
I sing of joy and peace,
I sing of hope and freedom,
Yet there is none.
I wish and pray for the day,
I want this hell to end,
I want to see freedom again.

The Angel Queen · 12-27-2002, 02:49 PM

*Storm Wolf* · 12-29-2002, 07:51 PM

you sure do sleep alot....BTW I got some more stuff for you to read queenie!

oh and good poem...I didn't know you wrote anything...much less poetry

Kingkapong · 12-30-2002, 07:33 AM

you all know it
that i'm no poet
but since you are alive
i'll give you a five.

The Angel Queen · 01-09-2003, 11:05 AM

i write lots but in the comfort of my own home wereno one can read it !!!

Mouse · 01-09-2003, 11:39 AM

angel queen: keep up the great work, your poems rock!

The Angel Queen · 01-09-2003, 02:55 PM

thanks !!!!!

View Poll Results: on a scale of 1 to 5, 5 being the best, how is my poem .
1	2	20.00%
2	0	0%
3	1	10.00%
4	3	30.00%
5	4	40.00%
Voters: 10. You may not vote on this poll

12-18-2002, 03:58 PM	#1
The Angel Queen Hench Mutant Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: WEIRSDALE Posts: 451	read and tell me what you think. i was going through some of my old note books and found a bunch of poems that i wrote a couple years ago !!! and i foun this a couple raely good ones (in my opion any way) all the good ones i looked at made a few changes to make them better and on a couple i made a hole new version!! the poem that im going to put up is called Hope ! im going to post the original version first and then put up the second version later on ! Hope Dark and silent but still I sing, I sing of joy and peace, I sing of hope and freedom, Yet there is none. I wish and pray for the day, I want the night to end, I want to see the daylight again. __________________ Michael

12-19-2002, 03:36 AM	#3
Nickokapo Emperor Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Argentina Posts: 5,800	Wasn't me...i didn't voted since i know nothing about POETOLOGY! But i'll give it a five, woot! __________________

12-19-2002, 05:11 AM	#4
Lanagirl Hench Mutant Join Date: May 2002 Location: Friends are not sent here Posts: 346	your poem is very beautiful Your poem is nice. Frankly speaking i write novels,books and poems. I have not a lot of but ... many fans here. So i think you have a talent for writing the poems. I've won many contests, won prizes but dad said that university of art was not for me. So now i regret i didn't enter the university of arts. don't lose your talent. be brave. i think you'll do very well wish you good luck Lana

12-19-2002, 08:39 AM	#5
Jephael That whack job behind you Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Carlisle, Pennsylvania Posts: 8,143	I voted 4 on it. It's a nice poem, and I can easily relate to it __________________ "I like it. Simple, but effective!" Raphael; The Mean Machines - 1988

12-18-2002, 08:57 PM	#2
~~Reznorite420~~ Banned Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 3,851	I voted a 3...who voted the 1?????

12-19-2002, 11:18 AM	#6
Machias Banshee Super Moderator Join Date: Dec 2001 Posts: 17,163	falls on the floor laughing at Nicko's new sig pic

12-19-2002, 01:48 PM	#7
~~Tokka-B~~ Banned Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: The Lost Sewer Posts: 1,829	Reznorite420: The point of a poll is for people to say what they want in PRIVATE, when you ask people what they voted, it just takes the fun out of a poll. And for your information, I voted for the 1, am I not allowed to do that? I have opinions of my own too you know...

12-19-2002, 02:13 PM	#9
The Angel Queen Hench Mutant Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: WEIRSDALE Posts: 451	Hope version 2 Dark and silent , but still I sing I sing of joy and peace, I sing of hope and freedom, Yet there is none. I wish and pray for the day, I want this hell to end, I want to see freedom again. __________________ Michael

12-27-2002, 02:49 PM	#10
The Angel Queen Hench Mutant Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: WEIRSDALE Posts: 451	__________________ Michael

12-30-2002, 07:33 AM	#12
Kingkapong Stone Warrior Join Date: May 2002 Location: T.O. Canada Posts: 548	you all know it that i'm no poet but since you are alive i'll give you a five. __________________ Go leafs go!

01-09-2003, 11:05 AM	#13
The Angel Queen Hench Mutant Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: WEIRSDALE Posts: 451	i write lots but in the comfort of my own home wereno one can read it !!! __________________ Michael

01-09-2003, 11:39 AM	#14
Mouse Foot Soldier Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Kansas Posts: 156	angel queen: keep up the great work, your poems rock!

01-09-2003, 02:55 PM	#15
The Angel Queen Hench Mutant Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: WEIRSDALE Posts: 451	thanks !!!!! __________________ Michael