Radical Pizza

[cowabunga14]

Michelangelo here about to scarf down a piece of pizza that's been dipped in chocolate. He was originally drawn on the last page of the TMNT coloring book School Daze, but I dunno who originally drew it. This might be a series like I did for the Mirage Turtles if it gets a reasonable amount of feedback. I know the shading on his face looks kinda funny and that happend on accident. :o


http://tn3-2.deviantart.com/fs11/300W/i/2006/219/2/c/Radical_Pizza_by_reivax.jpg

What do y'all think? Comments please.

Full view image which is highly recommended: http://www.deviantart.com/view/37586821/

[Draconic]

I think there are a few things that look odd about it that are, I think, pretty easy to fix.
The big problem is with his eyes, they're not looking at the pizza. They're not looking at.. anything, they look kind of spaced out and glazed over... Maybe he's looking at the ceiling?

The next thing is that his tongue looks like it's coming down from the roof of his mouth. Unless turtles are different from humans in that anatomy, you might need to change it.

Otherwise, nice pic. A little ridged looking, but not too bad.

[cowabunga14]

I get what you mean with the eyes; I'm not used to drawing 'em like that, so it was a challenge for me. I did the best I could with it. I'll remember what you said for future reference.