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Vegita-San
01-17-2007, 08:49 PM
http://www.shreddersdojo.com/junk/AprilFinal.jpg
http://www.shreddersdojo.com/junk/AprilFinal1.jpg

Jacket back needs more work, so do the boots and hair.....Bust looks OK in the front shot, but too large in the profile shot.

Buslady
01-17-2007, 08:54 PM
Um...i hope you're okay with a little constructive criticism...her torso should be a little longer (her legs look too long cause of the short torso) and her boobs are on her stomach...they should be up a little higher...if she had boobs that big, she'd have a heavy duty bra that would hold them up higher

oldmanwinters
01-17-2007, 09:53 PM
Nice work, Vegita-San! Good to see those OScharacter sheets came in handy after all:
http://forums.thetechnodrome.com/showthread.php?t=16655

I definitly like what you've done so far with April. The hair has good detail and the boots are close to par. The mid section and torso do need some proportional work, but don't adjust the torso too much because the long legs were a part of the character design.

Are you going to try any other characters? What are you planing for these 3D designs? I once saw a fan's animated adaptation of the episode "The Big Ripp Off"; it was a well done clip.

Masked Ninja
01-17-2007, 11:41 PM
I agree... move that bust up a bit; she's sagging like whoa. X)

But other than that, looking pretty good. Some not-quite-so-shiny shaders might be in order when you're finished, but I wouldn't worry about that yet. What are you planning on using this for, out of curiosity?

Vegita-San
01-18-2007, 07:28 AM
Nice work, Vegita-San! Good to see those OScharacter sheets came in handy after all:
http://forums.thetechnodrome.com/showthread.php?t=16655

I definitly like what you've done so far with April. The hair has good detail and the boots are close to par. The mid section and torso do need some proportional work, but don't adjust the torso too much because the long legs were a part of the character design.

Are you going to try any other characters? What are you planing for these 3D designs? I once saw a fan's animated adaptation of the episode "The Big Ripp Off"; it was a well done clip.

If it was a 2 minute clip, that would be mine :).

I'm just doing some basic animations with them just to get the feel of it with this thing. And BusLady, yep, I did mention the bust needed resizing in the first post :). As for the waist line, I'm trying to go by what the character sheets look like without changing it too much, but yep, the stomach area is going to be lengthened a bit.

Draconic
01-18-2007, 07:38 AM
Yea, the thing is that the model sheet you're modeling from doesn't have her standing up straight. I would recommend applying the sheet as a texture to a plane behind the modle, and rotating it as you go. Really nice work so far. :)

oldmanwinters
01-18-2007, 05:57 PM
Vegita-San said: "If it was a 2 minute clip, that would be mine :).
I'm just doing some basic animations with them just to get the feel of it with this thing."

Cool! Are you the same artist who was responsible for the models on ninjaturtlesnetwork? I really liked that clip, by the way. Is it up for download or viewing anywhere these days?