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~~Vegita-San~~ · 01-17-2007, 08:49 PM

Jacket back needs more work, so do the boots and hair.....Bust looks OK in the front shot, but too large in the profile shot.

*Buslady* · 01-17-2007, 08:54 PM

Um...i hope you're okay with a little constructive criticism...her torso should be a little longer (her legs look too long cause of the short torso) and her boobs are on her stomach...they should be up a little higher...if she had boobs that big, she'd have a heavy duty bra that would hold them up higher

*oldmanwinters* · 01-17-2007, 09:53 PM

Nice work, Vegita-San! Good to see those OScharacter sheets came in handy after all:
http://forums.thetechnodrome.com/showthread.php?t=16655

I definitly like what you've done so far with April. The hair has good detail and the boots are close to par. The mid section and torso do need some proportional work, but don't adjust the torso too much because the long legs were a part of the character design.

Are you going to try any other characters? What are you planing for these 3D designs? I once saw a fan's animated adaptation of the episode "The Big Ripp Off"; it was a well done clip.

*Masked Ninja* · 01-17-2007, 11:41 PM

I agree... move that bust up a bit; she's sagging like whoa. X)

But other than that, looking pretty good. Some not-quite-so-shiny shaders might be in order when you're finished, but I wouldn't worry about that yet. What are you planning on using this for, out of curiosity?

~~Vegita-San~~ · 01-18-2007, 07:28 AM

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Originally Posted by oldmanwinters

Nice work, Vegita-San! Good to see those OScharacter sheets came in handy after all:
http://forums.thetechnodrome.com/showthread.php?t=16655

I definitly like what you've done so far with April. The hair has good detail and the boots are close to par. The mid section and torso do need some proportional work, but don't adjust the torso too much because the long legs were a part of the character design.

Are you going to try any other characters? What are you planing for these 3D designs? I once saw a fan's animated adaptation of the episode "The Big Ripp Off"; it was a well done clip.

If it was a 2 minute clip, that would be mine

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I'm just doing some basic animations with them just to get the feel of it with this thing. And BusLady, yep, I did mention the bust needed resizing in the first post

. As for the waist line, I'm trying to go by what the character sheets look like without changing it too much, but yep, the stomach area is going to be lengthened a bit.

Draconic · 01-18-2007, 07:38 AM

Yea, the thing is that the model sheet you're modeling from doesn't have her standing up straight. I would recommend applying the sheet as a texture to a plane behind the modle, and rotating it as you go. Really nice work so far.

*oldmanwinters* · 01-18-2007, 05:57 PM

Vegita-San said: "If it was a 2 minute clip, that would be mine .
I'm just doing some basic animations with them just to get the feel of it with this thing."

Cool! Are you the same artist who was responsible for the models on ninjaturtlesnetwork? I really liked that clip, by the way. Is it up for download or viewing anywhere these days?

01-17-2007, 08:49 PM	#1
~~Vegita-San~~ Banned Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 6,089	For your viewing pleasure.. Jacket back needs more work, so do the boots and hair.....Bust looks OK in the front shot, but too large in the profile shot.

01-17-2007, 08:54 PM	#2
Buslady WingsOfDarkness! Perkele! Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: In 7803... Posts: 4,366	Um...i hope you're okay with a little constructive criticism...her torso should be a little longer (her legs look too long cause of the short torso) and her boobs are on her stomach...they should be up a little higher...if she had boobs that big, she'd have a heavy duty bra that would hold them up higher __________________

01-18-2007, 07:38 AM	#6
Draconic Hench Mutant Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Midwest Posts: 328	Yea, the thing is that the model sheet you're modeling from doesn't have her standing up straight. I would recommend applying the sheet as a texture to a plane behind the modle, and rotating it as you go. Really nice work so far. __________________ [CENTER]

01-17-2007, 09:53 PM	#3
oldmanwinters Overlord Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Between yesterday and tomorrow! Posts: 15,485	Nice work, Vegita-San! Good to see those OScharacter sheets came in handy after all: http://forums.thetechnodrome.com/showthread.php?t=16655 I definitly like what you've done so far with April. The hair has good detail and the boots are close to par. The mid section and torso do need some proportional work, but don't adjust the torso too much because the long legs were a part of the character design. Are you going to try any other characters? What are you planing for these 3D designs? I once saw a fan's animated adaptation of the episode "The Big Ripp Off"; it was a well done clip.

01-17-2007, 11:41 PM	#4
Masked Ninja Doodles TMNT for fun Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: sploshin' through some sewer... Posts: 2,137	I agree... move that bust up a bit; she's sagging like whoa. X) But other than that, looking pretty good. Some not-quite-so-shiny shaders might be in order when you're finished, but I wouldn't worry about that yet. What are you planning on using this for, out of curiosity?

01-18-2007, 05:57 PM	#7
oldmanwinters Overlord Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Between yesterday and tomorrow! Posts: 15,485	Vegita-San said: "If it was a 2 minute clip, that would be mine . I'm just doing some basic animations with them just to get the feel of it with this thing." Cool! Are you the same artist who was responsible for the models on ninjaturtlesnetwork? I really liked that clip, by the way. Is it up for download or viewing anywhere these days?