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Tetsu Deinonychus
09-16-2003, 11:57 PM
I wrote a Gundam Wing fan-fiction recently that absolutely BOMBED! Not a single reply!

Anyway, could any Gundam fans here tell me what might be wrong with it?
Just click here (http://blissfulignorance.com/phpBB/viewtopic.php?t=3406)
Kid Icarus
09-17-2003, 07:10 AM
wow.... thats was... um...

well, it fits duo's personality :lol: .
Tetsu Deinonychus
09-17-2003, 09:47 AM
That's what I figured.
Raven
09-17-2003, 10:20 AM
it was ok, I liked it.