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09-16-2003, 11:57 PM
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The Iron Dinosaur
 
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Studio Snowlion HQ
Posts: 3,021
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Desperately Seeking Feedback!!!
I wrote a Gundam Wing fan-fiction recently that absolutely BOMBED! Not a single reply!
Anyway, could any Gundam fans here tell me what might be wrong with it? Just click here |
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09-17-2003, 07:10 AM
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Foot Elite
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Angel Land
Posts: 4,150
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wow.... thats was... um...
well, it fits duo's personality  .
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09-17-2003, 09:47 AM
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The Iron Dinosaur
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Studio Snowlion HQ
Posts: 3,021
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That's what I figured.
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09-17-2003, 10:20 AM
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follower of Jesus
Join Date: Feb 2003
Posts: 6,212
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it was ok, I liked it.
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Linear Mode
