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As some people here at the drome may know I rap. I started rapping about a year ago and started recording about half a year ago. When I record I use a free program called Audacity, and sometimes use Auto Tune and other plugins to make my voice sound a little more better. I do all my songs alone with no help from anybody, effects and all. Here are some of the songs I have made:

Understand

King Of Rap Music

Conglomerate Freestyle

Trix Are For Kids

Please take you time and listen to them.:D Also, here are the lyrics to the songs I have listed:

Understand-

Spoiler:

King Of Rap Music-

Spoiler:

Trix Are For Kids-

Spoiler:

I didn't post lyrics for the conglomerate freestyle because it was a freestyle and I didn't write it down. All the other ones I wrote down in about 45 minutes each. It take me about 1 hour to record and edit though, so in all i spend about 2 hours making a song. The lyrics are very sloppy written, but that's because when I write a song I rap fast and dont care about spelling because I'm trying to get it down before I lose the thought.:D

I know adults should always encourage the youth to do better, but seriously, give it up. I don't think it would even be fair to LIE to you about this, or jokingly act like you've actually got talent. I feel it would actually hurt you, as a human being, in the future. These delusions cannot continue. Please stop.

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Originally Posted by Peanut (Post 689462)

K look; I know where you're coming off of, but like I said I've only been rapping for a year. I'm going to get better than what I am now. And I'm not going to give it up. I have other things I'm good at such as art, computers, i could write stories (I dont do that a lot but a lot of teachers have told me im skilled at it:ohwell:), and sports. And a lot of people have told me im good at rap, but to me nobody else tells me how good i am. Im not aiming for a record deal. It dont matter what you think, i still feel proud of myself and will keep on going. I know im not great but in my mind im good.

Trix are for kids.....:lol:

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Originally Posted by jeff the cheff (Post 689488)

Trix are for kids.....:lol:

So what did you think of the songs....

I'd comment, but I'm already biased against rap music...

Rap is fa suckaz, yo. :evilgrin:

I plan to give 'em a listen eventually, but I'm not crazy about this genre either.

Where can I buy the CD yo?

I challenge you to a RAP BATTLE.

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Originally Posted by jeff the cheff (Post 689488)

Trix are for kids.....:lol:

:lol::lol::lol::lol: Good one! And I'm not talking about the song!!

You sound like you're speaking so softly b/c you don't want your parents hearing you in your room:lol:

I really don't understand how rap could be considered music...:sick: Music sure has gone through a downward spiral of crap these days. ROCK N' ROLL!!!!!!

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Originally Posted by thebrownranger (Post 689637)

You sound like you're speaking so softly b/c you don't want your parents hearing you in your room:lol:

I really don't understand how rap could be considered music...:sick: Music sure has gone through a downward spiral of crap these days. ROCK N' ROLL!!!!!!

The last part about rap not being considered music is ignorant bullsh*t, but the part about him speaking softly is exactly what I thought.

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Originally Posted by Peanut (Post 689462)

Frankly, I think you've over stepped your boundaries here, my friend. This young man may be pioneering a new frontier in rap. Personally, I would love to get more from you, Lil G. I'm with you: I have no idea how you do it.

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Originally Posted by Voltron (Post 689658)

Well, yeah I dont think Im the next big thing just yet. I have a couple more songs and freestyles to upload today, which I will do in about an hour. And the way I see it, I dont need to impress anyone. i need to impress myself. All my raps need to do is get by me. I dont give a horses ass about what anybody thinks of my raps. Im like an artist. First time artists start drawing to entertain theirselves. Then when somebody starts seeing their art, then people start liking it. Then they might make comic books, and they become famous. After they start regaining fans, they start making songs for the fans. And to me, Im an artist because of that. It goes by me and only me.

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Originally Posted by thebrownranger (Post 689637)

I didn't want them to hear me when I recorded these songs, I was in my room and I get embarassed when they hear me rap. But I record more when Im either home alone, or when everybodys sleeping. And Hannah, you serious????

Hannah's our queen of rap. You should hear her "4:20 after school" and "Down with the OGs" freestyles. They're awesome. You'll have trouble against her since she'll slam you back to the stone age.

In any case, you should maybe focus on another genre to make your art in. You're not as awful as CWC is, but you're pretty hopeless, I'm afraid.

No, I am not serious. You stutter and mumble. You messed up half of your own lyrics and didn't bother to go back and fix it.

TAKE ADVICE FROM THE TRUE RAP MASTER. You need to speak with emphasis.

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Originally Posted by Hannah (Post 689694)

No, I am not serious. You stutter and mumble. You messed up half of your own lyrics and didn't bother to go back and fix it.

TAKE ADVICE FROM THE TRUE RAP MASTER. You need to speak with emphasis.

Aight aight, but my lyrics? How were they?Im going to change my lyrics as I realized i act like im to full of myself.... but i got it.

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Originally Posted by Lil G (Post 689695)

Aight aight, but my lyrics? How were they? Im going to change my lyrics as I realized i act like im to full of myself.... but i got it

You sound like your so full of yourself because the music you listen to probably does the same thing and your trying to emulate it.

Wasn't impressed by the lyrics, but hearing a 12 year old in autotune rapping quietly so his parents don't hear him is hilarious, I'm sorry.

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Originally Posted by Jester (Post 689499)

I'd comment, but I'm already biased against rap music...

Big surprise.

I agree with Voltron's comments.

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Originally Posted by Lil G (Post 689695)

i act like im to full of myself....

At least you had that going for you. I mean, that's the essence of rap. You just need a lotta work on your diction, sucka.

F*CK ALL YA'LL TALKIN' SMACK ABOUT RAP! YOU AIN'T DOWN WITH THE OG'S *****'S!

MOTHA F*CKA'S! BITCH AIN'T KNOW WHAT HIT EM' WHEN IT DROPS IN! FOR REAL THOUGH! F*CKIN' C*CK SUCKAAAA! SHEEEEEEIT!

I've been playing 50 Cent: Blood on the Sand. :)

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Originally Posted by Peanut (Post 689779)

Haha, this boy I know was playing it and he was 4 year old! He walked out saying "I f****d all those p****s a***s muthuh f***a!" me and my friends started dying of laughter.:lol::lol:

Rap about it. It will be a HIT.

Team-up with Guitar_Raph. It'll awesome.

My head just exploded at the sheer thought of how awesome that would turn out to be. Rap ain't **** with out a semi-hollow body guitar.

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Originally Posted by Peanut (Post 689779)

Post of the week.

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Originally Posted by GK (Post 689801)

My head just exploded at the sheer thought of how awesome that would turn out to be. Rap ain't **** with out a semi-hollow body guitar.

Hey you could always join the Paul Reed Smith/Gibson/rock/guitar club GK ;)

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Originally Posted by TheCure (Post 689800)

Team-up with Guitar_Raph. It'll awesome.

I gotta admit that was a good one... but come on, give me a break. Im trying to get myself back up. Here are revised lyrics for Trix Are For Kids:

Yeah boy trix are for kids
And don't forget to close the cereal box lid
Yeah boy trix are for kids
So these silly rabbits need to stop hoppin
Im a 12 year old wit a heart murmur
But my mouths still going like tina turners
And im aiming to be mountain high
But im only down on the ground where i electrify
I aint tryna be the best but i can imagion
I rap for pleasure and this is my passion
The passion of the christ because i am the rap saviour
Rappin fast i got add watch my behaviour
But oh... I still go with the flo
Flames so hot red and yellow
Only two colors of the rainbow
But i aint eatin skittles
And if you wanna battle and we could spit like saliva
But you better take a step back cuz i dont wanna be a murderer
Fly like eagle and shoot it out like bullets
Have them crying on the chalk like putting out a bunch of tulips
That what i was taught me lil g
Following the jabs of mahhamd ali
Following the flo of jay z
Following the auto tune of mr kanye
I mean kanye west
I must have four legs following all these steps
But i dont give a crap i have dream to be the best
But im still fly like there's an s on my chest
Im not trying to be ghetto i dont really have to
I just have to make songs that'll make me kick it like tatu
I go by my head and my head tells me to rap
My gut tells me to rap and my heart tells me to rap
So i gotta go by me instincts
And if i dont then ill know that it sticks
But ill change it up not stay mad
And ill stay glad just like the trashbags
And i wont let it happen over and over
I got skills no luck im not a four leaf clover
Im just a four ace player
Stackin this solitaire layer by layer
Man im so crazy you could call me magic
Cuz i got so much magic like daniel radcliffe
Im just the pheniox rising from ashes
Hold on... I dont wanna keep on braggin
So let me stop l-l-let me stop this
I dont wanna sound phyco i aint andy milanokis...
But theres one thing common we both be on mtv
And both of us look like we're 13
And im spittin gallons like a water fountain
Blowin like a bomb and you know im countin
And i only got 4 minutes so im tockin it
I didnt blow yet and im still bombin it
Tock tock tock tick tick tick
Trix are for- trix are for- trix are for kids
(Explosion)

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Originally Posted by thebrownranger (Post 689825)

Hey you could always join the Paul Reed Smith/Gibson/rock/guitar club GK ;)

I play a Les Paul, so I'm there.

Why did you change your lyrics!?! Now I can't show you the cover I did!!

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Originally Posted by Hannah (Post 689834)

Why did you change your lyrics!?! Now I can't show you the cover I did!!

Wait, what??? Just show me, the original lyrics are on the first post.

Nope. Everything is ruined forever. Lil Hannah is over.

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Originally Posted by Hannah (Post 689836)

Nope. Everything is ruined forever. Lil Hannah is over.

Nah seriously, lemme hear it.

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Originally Posted by Hannah (Post 689836)

Nope. Everything is ruined forever. Lil Hannah is over.

You should come up with a cooler rap name, cuz Lil anything is lame. How about...Queen Jailbait?!

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Originally Posted by Hannah (Post 689836)

Nope. Everything is ruined forever. Lil Hannah is over.

But you said you guys were going to go on tour and everything.

WHAT ABOUT THE AUSTRALIAN TOUR?! YOU PROMISED. :'(

Full of yourself? Lil G, you need to act like everyone is full of you, especially the bitches. Rappers like us need to have supreme confidence in how good we really are. Take this rap I've been working on for example:

It's called "I Am God."

I'm God bitch!
I'm God bitch!
Had Joshua swallowed by the whale fish!

I rhyme for all time!
World without end!
I'm a brutal motha ****a
Imma fill yo ass in
wif bullets!
Bitch, whatchu gonna do?
You take my name in vain!
Dis Playa's gotta follow through!
I'll pop a cap in you ass
and send you straight to hell
then bring to back to life
and nail your wife in her bushy well
Well! Uh!

People see me drivin!
Up to the club!
I drive a Cloud, motha ****er!
**** yo' V-Dub!
My chrome is lightning!
Blastin bass that's thunder!
I find your mom and rip her ass asunder!
Cuz I'm God, bitch!
I colder than cold!
I killed my own Son
When He was 33 years old!
Name of the Father,
The Son,
You know that I'm the One
The Only
Holy Moley!
I pound mad 40's (Here my posse would shout "Amen")
My favorite food is frijoles!

So if you wanna step
If you wanna front!
Open up your ears, son
Cuz I'm gunna be blunt! (Dat's right!)
I'll blast your ass with fire,
and you'll be sleepin in the sod!
I'm tellin y'all to remember
Remember, bitch!
Remember I'm God!

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Originally Posted by Voltron (Post 690048)

Haha, that was pretty sick. Im still gonna rap like im full of myself, just not go too much in over my head.

Just, don't be full of yourself too loudly. Your parents might hear you. You could get grounded and stuff.

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Originally Posted by Voltron

BLASPHEMER!!!!

Ok...it was pretty funny. You know it was Jonah and the big fish, right?

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Originally Posted by Anarky (Post 690071)

Just, don't be full of yourself too loudly. Your parents might hear you. You could get grounded and stuff.

No, my mom doesn't care if i brag about myself too much. She just says, "Go head and brag about yourself, but one day you're gonna get beat up".:ohwell:

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Originally Posted by Lil G (Post 690096)

No, my mom doesn't care if i brag about myself too much. She just says, "Go head and brag about yourself, but one day you're gonna get beat up".:ohwell:

You should listen to your mother.