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Donnie 09-15-2011 08:26 PM

Donatello: Dark Energy
 

Greetings, everyone!

I've received the green light from Krang to post this in the Comics section.

Here's the backstory...

Not too long ago I made a thread asking artists around the 'Drome if they would like to collaborate on comic style shorts based on the TMNT. I was delighted to see many talented members on the forum respond with interest! I found a kindred spirit in pl212 (Pedro) and we began work on our first short immediately. We decided to release the Shorts online and in PDF format.

So, introducing...

Lajud & Montelione's "BETWEEN THE LINES" - an ongoing fan made collection of short comics based on the TEENAGE MUTANT NINJA TURTLES, characters created by the great duo of Kevin Eastman & Peter Laird.

Story, Script: Matthew Montelione

Artwork, Inking, Layouts: Pedro Lajud

Our stories are set within Mirage continuity and in the original veins of Eastman & Laird. We have worked carefully to not conflict with what has transpired in the world of Mirage's TMNT - rather, we seek to offer glimpses of what might have went on "between the lines" of their universe. Concerning the artwork, Pedro is by far the best choice for such a task - his natural skills speak for themselves, and his originality in drawing the characters is, in my opinion, brilliant. We have worked incredibly hard to deliver an engaging TMNT product steeped in the original darkness of Mirage while adding some of our own unique spices. We hope that we have succeeded.

We are proud to introduce our first short...

DONATELLO: DARK ENERGY (PART I)

Behind "Dark Energy" (Part I):

"Dark Energy (Part I)" is the first of a series of shorts centered around Donatello. Part I of "Dark Energy" takes place during Mirage Volume 1, issue #2, during the "several weeks" that pass (pg. 7) - much before the TMNT first met and rescued April O'Neil.

"Dark Energy" will focus on Donatello's inner turmoil as he grows up knowing the vision that Splinter explained to him - and what he will ultimately attempt to do in light of an uncertain future. Spanning a series of shorts, "Dark Energy" will also briefly explore (amongst other character aspects) Donatello's burden of being the unofficial "second-in-command" to his brothers, his love of science over martial arts, and his relationships with individual family members. We have paid homage to other future Donatello stories in our own, and some of you might be able to point them out.

Here's a preview from page 1...

http://betweenthelines.mutantooze.or...nterlajud2.png

TO DOWNLOAD "DARK ENERGY (PART I)" VISIT OUR WEBSITE -

Lajud & Montelione's BETWEEN THE LINES (Fan Made TMNT Shorts)

Well, I think that's it. On behalf of Pedro & I, thanks for viewing our work and we really hope that you enjoy our first short...

Sincerely,
Matthew


- Special thanks to Master Splinter for hooking us up with a website.
- The legal disclaimer, etc. along with most of what you have just read is available to see on page 6 of "Dark Energy".


oldmanwinters 09-15-2011 08:45 PM

Hmm... interesting...

It's definitely short but...

Spoiler:
I like it!

Powder 09-15-2011 08:55 PM

Very cool. Though I expected it to be good it was better than I thought it would be. I like where y'all are going with it.
That said, I still wanna do one with ya, haha.

oldmanwinters 09-15-2011 09:01 PM

My favorite part is Donatello's sequence of facial expressions on Page 5. It struck me as perhaps a bit too over-the-top, almost anime-ish, but it was more than effective enough to convey the emotion of the moment.

pl212 has got some skillz with the pencil and the pen!

Donnie 09-15-2011 09:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Powder (Post 876224)
Very cool. Though I expected it to be good it was better than I thought it would be. I like where y'all are going with it.
That said, I still wanna do one with ya, haha.

Quote:

Originally Posted by oldmanwinters (Post 876226)
My favorite part is Donatello's sequence of facial expressions on Page 5. It struck me as perhaps a bit too over-the-top, almost anime-ish, but it was more than effective enough to convey the emotion of the moment.

pl212 has got some skillz with the pencil and the pen!

Thanks guys!

Yes, Pedro is the man! His art is breathtaking, in my opinion.

Powder, the invite is still there. ;)

Powder 09-15-2011 09:09 PM

Yes, I forgot to mention that. Pedro is a goddamn beast.
When I met up with him at NYCC I had him do a turtle bust in my sketchbook alongside Dooney & the rest, haha.
& my man, if you have something written I'd happily start on it this week.

Jester 09-15-2011 09:16 PM

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y13...PDVD_003-1.jpg

marcelangelo 09-16-2011 05:25 PM

great job done, compadres!keep on producing them and I keep on reading them...I especially liked the little moment splinter and his pupil have after he mentioned his affection for machines;)....sweet stopping of time there...
once again, it brought a smile on my face and that is a nice thing to accomplish..
wishin you the best!
marcel

oldmanwinters 09-16-2011 05:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by marcelangelo (Post 876396)
I especially liked the little moment splinter and his pupil have after he mentioned his affection for machines;)....sweet stopping of time there...

I liked that bit too. It was so subtle, I wondered if it was intentional. But seeing as how much attention Pedro seems to pay to facial expressions, I will assume that was indeed the intended effect.

LeoNerdo 09-16-2011 05:47 PM

Very cool dudes!

Nelson 09-16-2011 07:02 PM

WOW! Great work, guys! Both the writing and art are really cool! Sure it's short, but I'll be lying if I said that this story didn't catch my complete attention since the first page and left me wanting more!

The story has heart, and it was encapsulated in only five pages. IDW could use some tips from you, guys.

Donnie 09-16-2011 07:58 PM

Thank you all so much! Your warm comments are extremely appreciated.

I'm glad you want more, Nelson, and thanks again for those very mighty compliments! Our continuation of this series, "Dark Energy (Part II)", is now officially in the works.

Concerning that little moment between Donny & Splinter, that was indeed intentional, both in the writing and in the art. :D Glad you guys picked up on that!

Jester 09-16-2011 08:02 PM

I call for a rename to "Montelione & Lajud's" just because it invokes another comic duo of note...:P

pl212 09-16-2011 08:39 PM

Thank you all for the kind words :D

Glad you guys picked up on that panel, it was intentional.
There are smaller details in some panels that I havent seen anyone mention yet, I guess they arent as easy to spot.lol

oldmanwinters 09-19-2011 05:43 PM

You should let us know if Peter Laird ever gets back to you with his thoughts on the subject!

(I saw your comment on his blog.)

Donnie 09-19-2011 07:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by oldmanwinters (Post 877002)
You should let us know if Peter Laird ever gets back to you with his thoughts on the subject!

(I saw your comment on his blog.)

Will do - I really hope he checks it out!

pl212 09-19-2011 11:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by oldmanwinters (Post 877002)
You should let us know if Peter Laird ever gets back to you with his thoughts on the subject!

(I saw your comment on his blog.)

It would be awesome to hear some feedback from one of the creators :D

Luzmagica 09-20-2011 09:17 AM

Awesome!!!!

Spoiler:
....Last Don´s face is scary for me!!!!! :teek: ....

Donnie 09-27-2011 12:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Luzmagica (Post 877127)
Awesome!!!!

Spoiler:
....Last Don´s face is scary for me!!!!! :teek: ....

:lol:

Thanks Luz!

Andrew NDB 09-30-2011 10:52 PM

Brilliant. Less can be more. I found the piece to be quite effective, well done.

Donnie 10-01-2011 01:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Andrew NDB (Post 879249)
Brilliant. Less can be more. I found the piece to be quite effective, well done.

Wow, thank you very kindly Andrew! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Donnie 11-06-2011 11:22 PM

Hey everyone!

Pedro is hard at work penciling DE Part II. We can't wait to show you guys.

I don't want to give anything away, but Part II will feature another familiar face...

Donnie 11-23-2011 12:27 AM

Preview panel from "Dark Energy (Part II)" -

http://i41.tinypic.com/11txwus.jpg

Can you guess what time and/or issue this Short is placed within?

Andrew NDB 11-23-2011 12:49 AM

Michelangelo special? Return to New York?

Donnie 11-23-2011 12:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Andrew NDB (Post 889121)
Michelangelo special? Return to New York?

You're very close, Andrew. There's an early Volume 1 issue which briefly showcases Donatello in this garb.

pl212 11-23-2011 07:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Andrew NDB (Post 889121)
Michelangelo special? Return to New York?

nice guesses :D

Donnie 12-23-2011 12:51 AM

Pedro got bored and gave me two Christmas presents! These awesomely colored panels (the last panel) from "Dark Energy (Part I)" in both red and purple mask. :D


Vegeta 12-23-2011 01:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Donnie (Post 895842)
Pedro got bored and gave me two Christmas presents! These awesomely colored panels (the last panel) from "Dark Energy (Part I)" in both red and purple mask. :D


love the art, hope you guys get more shorts up soon.

Powder 12-23-2011 03:46 AM

Looks awesome, dude! Vegeta, spoiler that please.

Donnie 12-23-2011 09:56 AM

Thanks for the support guys! Pedro is quite the busy man but he's working as much as he can on Part II - I would expect it done sometime in January!

Oh, and the issue it takes place in still hasn't been guessed. Andrew was close... ;)

Hermano Dyvas 12-23-2011 11:23 AM

Great job guys, that's some awesome art too. Very fitting for Mirage.


Quote:

Originally Posted by Nelson (Post 876419)
The story has heart, and it was encapsulated in only five pages. IDW could use some tips from you, guys.

Not to play devil's advocate here but I remember reading you dropped the series after #1, have you read anything that came after it?

pl212 12-23-2011 11:06 PM

Thanks guys.
I'm almost done with the next short, it should be done sometime in jan.
Thanks for the support and spread the word! :D

Donnie 12-25-2011 12:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pl212 (Post 896077)
Thanks guys.
I'm almost done with the next short, it should be done sometime in jan.
Thanks for the support and spread the word! :D

It would be cool if Tom checked this thread out. Doubt it, but it would be cool...

Donnie 02-01-2012 12:23 AM

Just a quick update, Pedro is almost done with #2.

Time frame is during Vol.1 #11.

Donnie 02-16-2012 05:46 PM

What an honor - Peter Laird promoted our work on his blog. :D

Thanks so much, Peter!

http://peterlairdstmntblog.blogspot.com/

Samhain 02-16-2012 05:58 PM

Just checked it out. I enjoyed it. I especially like the forest setting where Donny's house is. It just seems so peaceful and so very Donny. Art was superb as well.

And it's really cool that Peter is giving you a shoutout Donnie. He really is a good dude and his love for the turtles definitely shows through his posts even though he '' burnt out''. Keep up the good work, can't wait to check out # 2.

oldmanwinters 02-16-2012 08:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Donnie (Post 913958)
What an honor - Peter Laird promoted our work on his blog. :D

Thanks so much, Peter!

http://peterlairdstmntblog.blogspot.com/

Say, I like the term "Fanga." I'm gonna start using it now!

ToTheNines 02-16-2012 09:32 PM

Excellent work fellas. The art was very good, I loved the shading. The story is interesting and you nailed Splinter's dialogue.

Keep 'em comin.

Donnie 02-16-2012 11:41 PM

Thanks for the compliments dudes. It's much appreciated, Pedro & I love hearing the opinions of fellow Dromers!

Donnie 03-06-2012 08:34 PM

DE 2 is officially done, Pedro just has to scan the sucker. Coming soon!


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