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samxsteal 05-07-2014 03:28 PM
Script transcript
 
White draft - 4/23/13
CONTINUED

Raph:
Spoken like a true Boy scout

Leo:
You think I asked to be the Leader of this outfit. Raph? You think i wanted this? Splinter chose Me. I'm Just Doing My duty.

Mikey:
Ha. Doodie

Raph:
Some "duty" - Risking our necks every night for surface-dwellers who'd lock us up in a zoo, or worse, if they knew we existed. You saw how that chick looked at us......
{stepping INTO THE LIGHT}
...like we were freaks

The other turtle fallow raphael into the light. Leonardo shakes his head, disapointed in his brother. And is the first time we've really seen the turtles out of the shadows. They look like heroes, but i different kind of hero. They don't relish their victory. They're just teenagers, They're Freaking tired. And they want to unwind

Mikey:
Maybe if we save enough people, if we do enough good, we'll be accepted up there, Whaddya think.....?

Donnie:
Grow up Mikey....

Leo:
I think... That we must be doing this for a reason. I just dont know what that reason is...

The turtle shuffle into their lair. Leo keeps his armor and Swords strapped on, but the other start slowly tossing off their armor and their weapons

Splinter: The bonds of family are stronger than steek...

The turtles spin back..As SPLINTER step out of the dark. The humanoid version of the lab rat we met in OUR opening. Mutated and wizened, with brown hair, gray in places, scoliosis back, four feet tall, carrying a walking stick
EDITED

That all i got

Vicky82 05-07-2014 03:35 PM
Glad this got a new thread, Didn't want to reply in the other thread

You can't really base a script on how long into a movie.

Movie scripts are over 100 pages, which have to include discription of scenes and dialogue so you you have to cram a lot into a script and they are written spaced out so page 24 could be 15/20 minutes into the film. 30 minutes into the film (i'm just guessing) probably be page 40

Sewer Sirens Podcast 05-07-2014 03:38 PM
On average, one page of a script is one minute. That's at least what I learned in theatre, not sure if it applies to film.

MajorViolence 05-07-2014 03:44 PM
It's an industry standard. It's not a hard rule, but generally speaking scripts are expected to adhere to it within reason.

ninja-zero 05-07-2014 03:45 PM
Is there a script where April is introduced to the turtles?

Like how the autobots introduced themselves to Sam?

My guess:
April regains conscious as she finds out she's in the turtles lair. At first when they saw her awoke, she was scared of them until Splinter comes and offers her some tea.

Later on, he explains their origin to her; where they came from. She realizes that Splinter & the turtles were the same animals in the lab. Then Splinter introduces the turtles to April:

Splinter: My eldest son... Leonardo of the katana.
Leo: It's an honor to meet you. Call me Leo.
Splinter: His youngest brother, the smart one... Donatello of the bo staff.
Donnie: Who would've thought the first human would be so... I mean... call me Donnie.
Splinter: The arrogant yet strong of the bunch... Raphael of the sai.
Raph: 'Sup! You don't look so bad.
Mikey: Heeeyyyy!!!
Splinter: (giggling) You already met the last of the young brothers, Michelangelo.
Leo, Raph & Donnie: Call him Mikey!
Mikey: Sorry 'bout the scare earlier. Guess that first impression didn't go well.

April: So.... am I a prisoner here?
Leo: Not at all. Guess to us, you're the first human to ever understand our existence. Nobody does anyway.
Mikey: You're welcome here anytime, girlfriend!
Raph: Ignore Mikey, your life will be a lot easier.

sethmartin 05-07-2014 03:52 PM
Where did this come from?

samxsteal 05-07-2014 03:52 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by ninja-zero (Post 1259894)
Is there a script where April is introduced to the turtles?

Like how the autobots introduced themselves to Sam?
this is purely based on this video

Sewer Sirens Podcast 05-07-2014 03:54 PM
"Ha. Doodle." ... :ohwell:

It's a Mikey thing to say, but ... really?

ninja-zero 05-07-2014 03:56 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sethmartin (Post 1259899)
Where did this come from?

Its just a guess I had in mind.

Cure 05-07-2014 03:56 PM
"Script transcript" is redundant.

MajorViolence 05-07-2014 03:58 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Sewer Sirens Podcast (Post 1259902)
"Ha. Doodle." ... :ohwell:

It's a Mikey thing to say, but ... really?
Nice of them to throw in some jokes for viewers with a single-digit IQ.

sethmartin 05-07-2014 04:02 PM
So Splinter DOES start out as a lab rat in this! IDW anyone....

Vicky82 05-07-2014 04:07 PM
Hmm I didn't notice that about Splinter.

I'm getting that IDW story vibe, which I guessed weeks ago that the movie could be mix of Mirage,OT and IDW versions .

NinjaPug 05-07-2014 04:07 PM
Wait, what exactly is this?

samxsteal 05-07-2014 04:07 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Sewer Sirens Podcast (Post 1259902)
"Ha. Doodle." ... :ohwell:

It's a Mikey thing to say, but ... really?
Well to be honest Im pretty sure i have Heard this exact joke from mikey in the nick show or something similar as well as similar jokes in just about every version so yeah it childish but its mikey lol.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Cure (Post 1259905)
"Script transcript" is redundant.
I know sorry

Quote:
Originally Posted by sethmartin (Post 1259908)
So Splinter DOES start out as a lab rat in this! IDW anyone....
HAHA yup the concept art even looks like IDW splinter so that pretty cool

sethmartin 05-07-2014 04:11 PM
Also in the IDW storyline, Splinter remembers his former life but the Turtles do not. One of the lines - "I think... That we must be doing this for a reason. I just dont know what that reason is..." is another possible clue that it's IDW based.

electric_sheep 05-07-2014 04:24 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by tmntmikey23 (Post 1259920)
thats not funny using cancer like that what if a loved one of yours had it ??????? back to topic now i want this book but cant buy it owell
What did the boy with no arms and no legs get for Christmas?
Cancer...

Vicky82 05-07-2014 04:48 PM
So page 24 could mean on average 24 mins into the film, doesn't sound too bad for a possible 2 hour film. I expect the first 24 mins will consist of a flashback, Megan Fox, Subway fight then we see the turtles.

Sewer Sirens Podcast 05-07-2014 04:52 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Vicky82 (Post 1259951)
So page 24 could mean on average 24 mins into the film, doesn't sound too bad for a possible 2 hour film. I expect the first 24 mins will consist of a flashback, Megan Fox, Subway fight then we see the turtles.
That isn't that bad if you ask me.

SwiftNinjaFox 05-07-2014 04:57 PM
2 hours seemed long to me at first, longer than any previous turtle film, but then I realized that's become standard for just about any film lately.

Still 1/4th of the film without the turtles? Depends entirely on how they pull it off. Could work, though.

samxsteal 05-07-2014 04:57 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Vicky82 (Post 1259951)
So page 24 could mean on average 24 mins into the film, doesn't sound too bad for a possible 2 hour film. I expect the first 24 mins will consist of a flashback, Megan Fox, Subway fight then we see the turtles.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Sewer Sirens Podcast (Post 1259956)
That isn't that bad if you ask me.
Agree if that is the case which i dont think it will be but who knows But like i said in the other thread if we get sneaky sneaky turtle kick but from the shadows as well as fluffy plot build up, then 20-30 min doesn't seem bad to me. And there is obviously there is action leading up to that point and im betting there is even more than just the subway scene. Plus people saying the huge hulk turtle who are invulnerable obviously not.

graphic_content 05-07-2014 05:00 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sethmartin (Post 1259918)
Also in the IDW storyline, Splinter remembers his former life but the Turtles do not. One of the lines - "I think... That we must be doing this for a reason. I just dont know what that reason is..." is another possible clue that it's IDW based.
dude, stop, I LOVE the IDW books, and you're getting me hyped, lol. cant be hyped at work, i'll scare people.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Vicky82 (Post 1259951)
So page 24 could mean on average 24 mins into the film, doesn't sound too bad for a possible 2 hour film. I expect the first 24 mins will consist of a flashback, Megan Fox, Subway fight then we see the turtles.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Sewer Sirens Podcast (Post 1259956)
That isn't that bad if you ask me.
i thought at first that 25, possibly 30 mins into the film was bad, especially when compared to the original, where they made an appearance less than 10 minutes in...but if this is a retelling of their origins, then set-up is required. Everyone keeps comparing this film to the first Amazing Spiderman, and yes, we saw Peter Parker, but he didnt start out with his abilities, the story had to build. So I'm prepared to put my stop watch down so long as their backstory gets treated well.

RedRocBoy 05-07-2014 05:00 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by samxsteal (Post 1259877)
White draft - 4/23/13
CONTINUED

Raph:
Spoken like a true Boy scout

Leo:
You think I asked to be the Leader of this outfit. Raph? You think i wanted this? Splinter chose Me. I'm Just Doing My duty.

Mikey:
Ha. Doodie

Raph:
Some "duty" - Risking our necks every night for surface-dwellers who'd lock us up in a zoo, or worse, if they knew we existed. You saw how that chick looked at us......
{stepping INTO THE LIGHT}
...like we were freaks

The other turtle fallow raphael into the light. Leonardo shakes his head, disapointed in his brother. And is the first time we've really seen the turtles out of the shadows. They look like heroes, but i different kind of hero. They don't relish their victory. They're just teenagers, They're Freaking tired. And they want to unwind

Mikey:
Maybe if we save enough people, if we do enough good, we'll be accepted up there, Whaddya think.....?

Donnie:
Grow up Mikey....

Leo:
I think... That we must be doing this for a reason. I just dont know what that reason is...

The turtle shuffle into their lair. Leo keeps his armor and Swords strapped on, but the other start slowly tossing off their armor and their weapons

Splinter: The bonds of family are stronger than steek...

The turtles spin back..As SPLINTER step out of the dark. The humanoid version of the lab rat we met in OUR opening. Mutated and wizened, with brown hair, gray in places, scoliosis back, four feet tall, carrying a walking stick
EDITED

That all i got
Is there a way we can just skip June and July? Jesus Christ I'm so ready for this movie.:tcry::tcry::tcry::tcry::tcry:

Quote:
Originally Posted by samxsteal (Post 1259913)
Well to be honest Im pretty sure i have Heard this exact joke from mikey in the nick show or something similar as well as similar jokes in just about every version so yeah it childish but its mikey lol.
I know sorry



HAHA yup the concept art even looks like IDW splinter so that pretty cool
Man I swear. Why do people even comment ifvthere so beyond this movie. Go make your own fan film. Geez!!! :trolleye::trolleye::trolleye:

Vicky82 05-07-2014 05:04 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by RedRocBoy (Post 1259966)
Is there a way we can just skip June and July? Jesus Christ I'm so ready for this movie.:tcry::tcry::tcry::tcry::tcry:
At least you get to see this in August, I (and everyone else from UK) can't see it till October.

RedRocBoy 05-07-2014 05:04 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by SwiftNinjaFox (Post 1259962)
2 hours seemed long to me at first, longer than any previous turtle film, but then I realized that's become standard for just about any film lately.

Still 1/4th of the film without the turtles? Depends entirely on how they pull it off. Could work, though.
Yezzir :tgrin::tgrin::tgrin:

Quote:
Originally Posted by Vicky82 (Post 1259973)
At least you get to see this in August, I (and everyone else from UK) can't see it till October.
Holy crap. So sorry for the UK fans.:tcry::tcry::tcry::tcry:

Fjaj 05-07-2014 05:07 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by samxsteal (Post 1259877)
The turtle shuffle into their lair. Leo keeps his armor and Swords strapped on, but the other start slowly tossing off their armor and their weapons
Looks like we'll finally have the turtles take off their weapons/armor when their in their layer like in the comics.

GrapeSoda 05-07-2014 05:22 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by RedRocBoy (Post 1259972)
Man I swear. Why do people even comment ifvthere so beyond this movie. Go make your own fan film. Geez!!! :trolleye::trolleye::trolleye:
why do you insist on fanning the flames?

TigerClaw 05-07-2014 05:25 PM
What am I looking at here, bits from the rejected script or something that was leaked from a new script of the new movie?

electric_sheep 05-07-2014 05:27 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by TigerClaw (Post 1259992)
What am I looking at here, bits from the rejected script or something that was leaked from a new script of the new movie?
This is the actual script that they are using...

samxsteal 05-07-2014 05:27 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Fjaj (Post 1259976)
Looks like we'll finally have the turtles take off their weapons/armor when their in their layer like in the comics.
Agreed this is really cool addition

TurtleTitan97 05-07-2014 05:28 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by TigerClaw (Post 1259992)
What am I looking at here, bits from the rejected script or something that was leaked from a new script of the new movie?
It's the new script. That dialogue wasn't anywhere in the "Blue Door" script.

Also, "Doodie"? Seriously? :trolleye:

Fjaj 05-07-2014 05:28 PM
Someone did an early review of the ultimate visual history, which had a bit from the script, or at least an early draft. You can see more about it in "Official" thread, so this one is a bit redundant.

TigerClaw 05-07-2014 05:29 PM
I just watched the video review of that book, and it showed some images from the movie. There's an image with a truck and I think the Turtles are right on it.

electric_sheep 05-07-2014 05:29 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by TigerClaw (Post 1259997)
I just watched the video the video review of that book, and it showed some images from the movie. There's an image with a truck and I think the Turtles are right on it.
Same as in the leaked script, what a coinsedence?

graphic_content 05-07-2014 05:33 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by electric_sheep (Post 1260000)
Same as in the leaked script, what a coinsedence?
i read that sequence from the original script and it looked like the best part of the it - I honestly dont mind at all that they kept it in there.

I personally wonder what is meant by WHITE DRAFT?

Do colors indicate the state of rewrite it is in? can anyone shed light, SETHMARTIN? anyone who works in the industry?

TigerClaw 05-07-2014 05:35 PM
Here's the pic, I managed to screen capture it.



One of the Turtles on top of a big rig.

samxsteal 05-07-2014 05:42 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by GrapeSoda (Post 1259988)
why do you insist on fanning the flames?
sorry but he has a point doesn't matter how awesome something is some one comes in and kills it with something negative to say can we just have one day were its ok to be happy about something

Quote:
Originally Posted by TigerClaw (Post 1259992)
What am I looking at here, bits from the rejected script or something that was leaked from a new script of the new movie?
Its from the Tmnt ultimate visual history which someone reviewed and video i freeze frame the shoot and read what was written
Quote:
Originally Posted by electric_sheep (Post 1259993)
This is the actual script that they are using...
Yup
Quote:
Originally Posted by TurtleTitan97 (Post 1259995)
It's the new script. That dialogue wasn't anywhere in the "Blue Door" script.

Also, "Doodie"? Seriously? :trolleye:
i know juvenile but its totally Mikey something i have heard him say before even

Quote:
Originally Posted by Fjaj (Post 1259996)
Someone did an early review of the ultimate visual history, which had a bit from the script, or at least an early draft. You can see more about it in "Official" thread, so this one is a bit redundant.
That thread is supposed to be for photos only moved the discussion here as to not clutter the photos
Quote:
Originally Posted by TigerClaw (Post 1259997)
I just watched the video review of that book, and it showed some images from the movie. There's an image with a truck and I think the Turtles are right on it.
Yup as well as other concept photos and still of shredder and April.and a drawing of what looks like Eastman drew shredder


On my phone pleat forgive grammar this once please

TigerClaw 05-07-2014 05:42 PM
Why does this suddenly remind me of Doctor Claw. lol

http://i.imgur.com/lcjCnfK.jpg

electric_sheep 05-07-2014 05:44 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by TigerClaw (Post 1260021)
Why does this suddenly remind me of Doctor Claw. lol

http://i.imgur.com/lcjCnfK.jpg
Ahahhahaha, that's tottaly him...

Holly crap, i passed 1000 posts, how didn't i notice that?

TurtleTitan97 05-07-2014 05:53 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by samxsteal (Post 1260020)

Yup
i know juvenile but its totally Mikey something i have heard him say before even
Doesn't mean I have to like it. It's a lame joke that I'm sure only little kids or immature teens or above will like.


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